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** It's hard to pin-point exactly when Cash crossed the line, but a good candidate is when he ordered the massacre of a whole town, [[spoiler: including driving the communication crystal operator to commit suicide and setting the school on fire, while exposing Calumn, to pin the blame on a Changling attack,]] all to cover his own escape.
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** It's hard to pin-point exactly when Cash crossed the line, but a good candidate is when he ordered the massacre of a whole town, [[spoiler: including driving the communication crystal operator to commit suicide and setting the school on fire, while exposing Calumn, to pin the blame on a Changling Changeling attack,]] all to cover his own escape.
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May HAVE, not may OF.
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** Is Charisma a [[TragicVillain tragic ]][[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds and pitiful character who]] would have been an innocent pony, if not for forces outside her control? A sadistic BloodKnight who may of been a [[UsedToBeASweetKid innocent child]], but grew up to be the monster she is on her own, regardless any outside forces? Or just flat out insane from the get go? Also, does she have enough self control to resist her blood thirsty urges, but gives in willingly, or was there no hope of her ever fighting them, and what little control she has, will inevitably falter?
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** Is Charisma a [[TragicVillain tragic ]][[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds and pitiful character who]] would have been an innocent pony, if not for forces outside her control? A sadistic BloodKnight who may of have been a [[UsedToBeASweetKid innocent child]], but grew up to be the monster she is on her own, regardless any outside forces? Or just flat out insane from the get go? Also, does she have enough self control to resist her blood thirsty urges, but gives in willingly, or was there no hope of her ever fighting them, and what little control she has, will inevitably falter?
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** Was Max Cash just a ruthless if eccentric crime lord before he got a hold of the elements, or was he never a normal pony to begin with? Is he even the same pony, as he was before he started using the Elements, or have they just turned him into a hallow shell of whoever he used to be? Not only do they all have evidence, but recent chapters have implied [[spoiler: he has some connection to Discord, if he isn't ''Discord himself'']]
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** Was Max Cash just a ruthless if eccentric crime lord before he got a hold of the elements, or was he never a normal pony to begin with? Is he even the same pony, as he was before he started using the Elements, or have they just turned him into a hallow hollow shell of whoever he used to be? Not only do they all have evidence, but recent chapters have implied [[spoiler: he has some connection to Discord, if he isn't ''Discord himself'']]
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* {{Woobie}}: Many.
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* {{Woobie}}: TheWoobie: Many.
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* CrazyAwesome: Trail Blazer is a [[PluckyGirl Plucky Guy]] with so many of Pinkie's mannerisms, readers have sworn he has to be her descendant from his introduction onwards.
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* CrazyAwesome: CrazyIsCool: Trail Blazer is a [[PluckyGirl Plucky Guy]] with so many of Pinkie's mannerisms, readers have sworn he has to be her descendant from his introduction onwards.
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DIAA now requires proof audiences were apathetic.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Some readers are starting to feel this way, due to ''very little'' being revealed about the central mystery, despite being on chapter thirty-four and over '''[[DoorStopper five hundred thousand words]]''', with no end in sight, and the villains-especially Max Cash-managing to turn around any victory the heroes do have, and coming out on top, anyway. No matter how hard the heroes have fought, it can occasionally feel like they have very little progress, while the villains seem to continuously gain progress with their mysterious plans, only slightly inconvenienced.
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** Was Max Cash just a ruthless if eccentric crime lord before he got a hold of the elements, or was he never a normal pony to began with? Is he even the same pony, as he was before he started using the Elements, or have they just turned him into a hallow shell used by something else? Not only do they all have evidence, but recent chapters have implied [[spoiler: he has some connection to Discord, if he isn't ''Discord himself'']]
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** Was Max Cash just a ruthless if eccentric crime lord before he got a hold of the elements, or was he never a normal pony to began begin with? Is he even the same pony, as he was before he started using the Elements, or have they just turned him into a hallow shell of whoever he used by something else? to be? Not only do they all have evidence, but recent chapters have implied [[spoiler: he has some connection to Discord, if he isn't ''Discord himself'']]
