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* OutdatedByCanon: The origin of Divine Ancestors. In canon, they were former Mother Earth Goddesses whose power and Authorities had been drained by the King of the End, either willingly or else upon defeat. However, because this explanation had not yet been written at the time of this fic's creation, Marcus Galen Sands instead invented the idea that their powers had been sealed by various Gods of Steel, who then took them to wife.
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Now a disambiguation.
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* BrokenBase: The author's CriticalResearchFailure in regards to Nasuverse mechanics have split readers into several groups.
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* BrokenBase: The author's CriticalResearchFailure errors in regards to Nasuverse mechanics have split readers into several groups.
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* OutdatedByCanon: The origin of Divine Ancestors. In canon, they were former Mother Earth Goddesses whose power and Authorities had been drained by the King of the End. However, because this explanation had not yet been written at the time of this fic's creation, Marcus Galen Sands instead went with the idea that their powers had been sealed by various Gods of Steel, who then took them to wife.
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* OutdatedByCanon: The origin of Divine Ancestors. In canon, they were former Mother Earth Goddesses whose power and Authorities had been drained by the King of the End. End, either willingly or else upon defeat. However, because this explanation had not yet been written at the time of this fic's creation, Marcus Galen Sands instead went with invented the idea that their powers had been sealed by various Gods of Steel, who then took them to wife.
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* OutdatedByCanon: The origin of Divine Ancestors. In canon, they were former Mother Earth Goddesses whose power and Authorities had been drained by the King of the End. However, because this explanation had not yet been written at the time of this fic's creation, Marcus Galen Sands instead went with the idea that their powers had been sealed by various Gods of Steel, who then took them to wife.
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* TheScrappy: A lot of reviewers dislike Godou Kusanagi and consider him useless, since he hardly does anything on his own and mostly just reacts to whatever is happening. And whenever he does accomplish something or gets a power-up, the reviewers complain that he is just stealing Shirou's awesome moments.
* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the Banquet of Kings. Just the fact that the guests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
** Actually part of a supposed Gambit, since the creatures managed to steal ''something'' from the Campiones, something that can supposedly defeat them.
** At the same time however [[spoiler:the banquet ended with positive relations for the Campiones, if there is more upcoming information about this situation it can possibly culminate into a '''[[CurbStompBattle fight]]''' between [[OhCrap all four Campiones]] and the mastermind.]]
* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the Banquet of Kings. Just the fact that the guests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
** Actually part of a supposed Gambit, since the creatures managed to steal ''something'' from the Campiones, something that can supposedly defeat them.
** At the same time however [[spoiler:the banquet ended with positive relations for the Campiones, if there is more upcoming information about this situation it can possibly culminate into a '''[[CurbStompBattle fight]]''' between [[OhCrap all four Campiones]] and the mastermind.]]
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* TheScrappy: A lot of reviewers dislike Godou Kusanagi and consider him useless, since he hardly does anything on his own and mostly just reacts to whatever is happening. And whenever he does accomplish something or gets a power-up, the reviewers complain that he is just stealing Shirou's awesome moments.
* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the Banquet of Kings. Just the fact that the guests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
** Actually part of a supposed Gambit, since the creatures managed to steal ''something'' from the Campiones, something that can supposedly defeat them.
** At the same time however [[spoiler:the banquet ended with positive relations for the Campiones, if there is more upcoming information about this situation it can possibly culminate into a '''[[CurbStompBattle fight]]''' between [[OhCrap all four Campiones]] and the mastermind.]]moments.
* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the Banquet of Kings. Just the fact that the guests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
** Actually part of a supposed Gambit, since the creatures managed to steal ''something'' from the Campiones, something that can supposedly defeat them.
** At the same time however [[spoiler:the banquet ended with positive relations for the Campiones, if there is more upcoming information about this situation it can possibly culminate into a '''[[CurbStompBattle fight]]''' between [[OhCrap all four Campiones]] and the mastermind.]]
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I personally like Godou, but I'm going off what several reviews say.
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* JustHereForGodzilla: Many toxic reviews say Godou Kusanagi is boring and they don't care about him, wishing he would just go away and let the fic focus on Shirou Emiya, whom the reviews say is badass and the epitome of cool.
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* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the banquet of kings. Just the fact that the guests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
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* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the banquet Banquet of kings.Kings. Just the fact that the guests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
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Linking directly instead of through redirect.
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*** And that's not even getting into the author's gratuitous use of OriginalCharacters.
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*** And that's not even getting into the author's gratuitous use of OriginalCharacters.{{Original Character}}s.
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I don't share this view, but a majority of the reviews do.
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* TheScrappy: A lot of reviewers dislike Godou Kusanagi and consider him useless, since he hardly does anything on his own and mostly just reacts to whatever is happening.
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* TheScrappy: A lot of reviewers dislike Godou Kusanagi and consider him useless, since he hardly does anything on his own and mostly just reacts to whatever is happening. And whenever he does accomplish something or gets a power-up, the reviewers complain that he is just stealing Shirou's awesome moments.
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I like Godou, but I'm just reporting what all these reviews say.
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* TheScrappy: A lot of reviewers dislike Godou Kusanagi and consider him useless, since he hardly does anything on his own and mostly just reacts to whatever is happening.
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*** And that's not even getting into the author's gratuitous use of OriginalCharacters and CharacterDerailment.
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*** And that's not even getting into the author's gratuitous use of OriginalCharacters and CharacterDerailment.OriginalCharacters.
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** With the reveal that [[spoiler:there is a statue of Sakura Matou inside Unlimited Blade Works]], some call it a sweet romantic gesture, others call it a boring cliche.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Rhongomyniad started out as a barely mentioned Noble Phantasm that had its properties invented by the author as a way of showing the many different versions of the tale of King Arthur. Come 2015-2016 side material, it has been confirmed as a Noble Phantasm that's A++ to ''EX'' Rank! He basically gave a weapon stronger than even Excalibur to Guinevere!
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* HilariousInHindsight: HilariousInHindsight:
** In an early chapter, Hades attacks Shirou and says his wife Persephone had earlier been killed by a Campione, fueling his hatred of them. The author admitted to making that detail up for the story, then a later Campione! novel confirmed Persephone ''had'' been killed by a Campione.
** Rhongomyniad started out as a barely mentioned Noble Phantasm that had its properties invented by the author as a way of showing the many different versions of the tale of King Arthur. Come 2015-2016 side material, it has been confirmed as a Noble Phantasm that's A++ to ''EX'' Rank! He basically gave a weapon stronger than even Excalibur to Guinevere!
** In an early chapter, Hades attacks Shirou and says his wife Persephone had earlier been killed by a Campione, fueling his hatred of them. The author admitted to making that detail up for the story, then a later Campione! novel confirmed Persephone ''had'' been killed by a Campione.
** Rhongomyniad started out as a barely mentioned Noble Phantasm that had its properties invented by the author as a way of showing the many different versions of the tale of King Arthur. Come 2015-2016 side material, it has been confirmed as a Noble Phantasm that's A++ to ''EX'' Rank! He basically gave a weapon stronger than even Excalibur to Guinevere!
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* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the banquet of kings. Just the fact that the quests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
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* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the banquet of kings. Just the fact that the quests guests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: Rhongomyniad started out as an original Noble Phantasm for the story as a way of showing the many different versions of the tale of King Arthur. Come 2015-2016 side material, it has been confirmed as a canon Noble Phantasm that's A++ to ''EX'' Rank!
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* HilariousInHindsight: Rhongomyniad started out as an original a barely mentioned Noble Phantasm for that had its properties invented by the story author as a way of showing the many different versions of the tale of King Arthur. Come 2015-2016 side material, it has been confirmed as a canon Noble Phantasm that's A++ to ''EX'' Rank!Rank! He basically gave a weapon stronger than even Excalibur to Guinevere!
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* HilariousInHindsight: Rhongomyniad started out as an original Noble Phantasm for the story as a way of showing the many different versions of the tale of King Arthur. Come 2015-2016 side material, it has been confirmed as a canon Noble Phantasm that's A++ to ''EX'' Rank!
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1. that\'s flame bait. 2. people can see qualities in others while not being able to see those qualities in themselves/as applying to them.
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* CharacterDerailment: Very minor one. One of Godou's defining character traits is that he's a CluelessChickMagnet (unless [[TheCasanova otherwise]]). So how in the hell does he come to the (COMPLETELY CORRECT) conclusion that Illya has a crush on Shirou when he can't even see that his own servants love him?
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*** And that's not even getting into the author's gratuitous use of OriginalCharacters and CharacterDerailment.
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*** And that's not even getting into the author's gratuitous use of OriginalCharacters and CharacterDerailment.
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* CharacterDerailment: Very minor one. One of Godou's defining character traits is that he's a CluelessChickMagnet (unless [[TheCasanova otherwise]]). So how in the hell does he come to the (COMPLETELY CORRECT) conclusion that Illya has a crush on Shirou when he can't even see that his own servants love him?
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** Actually part of a supposed Gambit, since the creatures managed to steal ''something'' from the Campiones, something that can supposedly defeat them.
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** Actually part of a supposed Gambit, since the creatures managed to steal ''something'' from the Campiones, something that can supposedly defeat them.them.
** At the same time however [[spoiler:the banquet ended with positive relations for the Campiones, if there is more upcoming information about this situation it can possibly culminate into a '''[[CurbStompBattle fight]]''' between [[OhCrap all four Campiones]] and the mastermind.]]
** At the same time however [[spoiler:the banquet ended with positive relations for the Campiones, if there is more upcoming information about this situation it can possibly culminate into a '''[[CurbStompBattle fight]]''' between [[OhCrap all four Campiones]] and the mastermind.]]
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* AnticlimaxBoss: [[spoiler:Apollo. He has all the makings of a KnightOfCerebus but due to his BondVillainStupidity he doesn't last as long against Godou as Mordred did when he faced Shirou.]]
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* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the banquet of kings. Just the fact that the quests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
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* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the banquet of kings. Just the fact that the quests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]]]
** Actually part of a supposed Gambit, since the creatures managed to steal ''something'' from the Campiones, something that can supposedly defeat them.
** Actually part of a supposed Gambit, since the creatures managed to steal ''something'' from the Campiones, something that can supposedly defeat them.
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* Broken Base: The author's CriticalResearchFailure in regards to Nasuverse mechanics have split readers into several groups.
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* Broken Base: BrokenBase: The author's CriticalResearchFailure in regards to Nasuverse mechanics have split readers into several groups.
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*** And that's not even getting into the author's gratuitous use of OriginalCharacters and CharacterDerailment.
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*** And that's not even getting into the author's gratuitous use of OriginalCharacters and CharacterDerailment.CharacterDerailment.
* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the banquet of kings. Just the fact that the quests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
* WhatAnIdiot: The mage who had [[SarcasmMode the wise idea]] to [[spoiler:invade the banquet of kings. Just the fact that the quests alone can [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the invading assassins, yeah.]]
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*Broken Base: The author's CriticalResearchFailure in regards to Nasuverse mechanics have split readers into several groups.
**There those who believe that the lack of research ruins the story.
**There are those who are a bit peeved, but decide that the mechanics themselves aren't really important to enjoy the story.
**And then there are those who are completely ignorant of how the Nasuverse works to begin with and just don't care.
***And that's not even getting into the author's gratuitous use of OriginalCharacters and CharacterDerailment.
**There those who believe that the lack of research ruins the story.
**There are those who are a bit peeved, but decide that the mechanics themselves aren't really important to enjoy the story.
**And then there are those who are completely ignorant of how the Nasuverse works to begin with and just don't care.
***And that's not even getting into the author's gratuitous use of OriginalCharacters and CharacterDerailment.
