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* BrokenBase: King Omaha, for [[UsefulNotes/BarackObama obvious]] [[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment reasons]].
* LesYay: Mika & Rio.
* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirasagi, full stop.
* LesYay: Mika & Rio.
* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirasagi, full stop.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Is King Omaha being portrayed as an over-the-top patriotic president, or is the author doing one long subtle TakeThat against [[BarackObama who he is obviously based on]]?
* BrokenBase: King Omaha, for [[BarackObama obvious]] [[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment reasons]].
* BrokenBase: King Omaha, for [[BarackObama obvious]] [[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment reasons]].
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Is King Omaha being portrayed as an over-the-top patriotic president, or is the author doing one long subtle TakeThat against [[BarackObama [[UsefulNotes/BarackObama who he is obviously based on]]?
* BrokenBase: King Omaha, for[[BarackObama [[UsefulNotes/BarackObama obvious]] [[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment reasons]].
* BrokenBase: King Omaha, for
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* WhatAWasteOfPlot: We never did get a historical flashback of what happened between the Shirasagi Clan and the Shishidou Family that started a feud as early as back in the Sengoku-era Japan.
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* WhatAWasteOfPlot: TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: We never did get any insight, let alone a historical flashback of what happened between the Shirasagi Clan and the Shishidou Family that started a their personal feud as early as back in the Sengoku-era Japan.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Is King Omaha being portrayed as an over-the-top patriotic president, or is the author doing one long subtle TakeThat against [[BarackObama who he is obviously based on]]on]]?
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* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirasagi, full stop.
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* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirasagi, full stop.stop.
* WhatAWasteOfPlot: We never did get a historical flashback of what happened between the Shirasagi Clan and the Shishidou Family that started a feud as early as back in the Sengoku-era Japan.
* WhatAWasteOfPlot: We never did get a historical flashback of what happened between the Shirasagi Clan and the Shishidou Family that started a feud as early as back in the Sengoku-era Japan.
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* {{BadWriting}}: Many a fan's reaction to finding out the surprise guest to the Gamble Tournament is [[spoiler:[[BarackObama King Omaha]]]].
* JumpingTheShark: When [[spoiler:[[BarackObama King Omaha]]]] made an appearance, that seemed to pass the line of believability.
** Some feel that happened back during the Emily Dawn Arc with [[spoiler:'hiring Green Berets to play in a survival game against mid/high schoolers with authority to kill' or 'oh yeah superpowered 'tengu' man who had magical super serum tested on him beats the crap out of the Green Berets for them' or 'oh yeah rainbow hypnotist eye passed down my bloodline for hundreds of thousands of generations' were all equally shark jumpable points.]]
* JumpingTheShark: When [[spoiler:[[BarackObama King Omaha]]]] made an appearance, that seemed to pass the line of believability.
** Some feel that happened back during the Emily Dawn Arc with [[spoiler:'hiring Green Berets to play in a survival game against mid/high schoolers with authority to kill' or 'oh yeah superpowered 'tengu' man who had magical super serum tested on him beats the crap out of the Green Berets for them' or 'oh yeah rainbow hypnotist eye passed down my bloodline for hundreds of thousands of generations' were all equally shark jumpable points.]]
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* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirasagi, full stop.
* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match and even plans to use it all on one single bet. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending, constantly raising the debt ceiling, and taking numerous expensive vacations. It's kind of suggesting that Obama really is just blowing the American Tax Payer money away.
* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match and even plans to use it all on one single bet. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending, constantly raising the debt ceiling, and taking numerous expensive vacations. It's kind of suggesting that Obama really is just blowing the American Tax Payer money away.
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* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirasagi, full stop.
* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match and even plans to use it all on one single bet. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending, constantly raising the debt ceiling, and taking numerous expensive vacations. It's kind of suggesting that Obama really is just blowing the American Tax Payer money away.stop.
* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match and even plans to use it all on one single bet. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending, constantly raising the debt ceiling, and taking numerous expensive vacations. It's kind of suggesting that Obama really is just blowing the American Tax Payer money away.
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match and even plans to use it all on one single bet. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending and constantly raised the debt ceiling. It's kind of suggesting that Obama really is just blowing the American Tax Payer money away.
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match and even plans to use it all on one single bet. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending and spending, constantly raised raising the debt ceiling.ceiling, and taking numerous expensive vacations. It's kind of suggesting that Obama really is just blowing the American Tax Payer money away.
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match and even plans to use it all on one single bet. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending and constantly raised the debt ceiling.
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match and even plans to use it all on one single bet. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending and constantly raised the debt ceiling. It's kind of suggesting that Obama really is just blowing the American Tax Payer money away.
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending and constantly raised the debt ceiling.
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match.match and even plans to use it all on one single bet. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending and constantly raised the debt ceiling.
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 80 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending and constantly raised the debt ceiling.
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* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 80 800 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending and constantly raised the debt ceiling.
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* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirasagi, full stop.
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* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirasagi, full stop.stop.
* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 80 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending and constantly raised the debt ceiling.
* UnfortunateImplications: In "Wall", Omaha states that the Government gave him 80 Billion dollars just to casually blow on this gambling match. All the while one of the major problems the Obama Administration is dealing with is the fact that Obama has wasted billions on government spending and constantly raised the debt ceiling.
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* JumpingTheShark: When [[spoiler:BarackObama]] made an appearance, that seemed to pass the line of believability.
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* {{BadWriting}}: Many a fan's reaction to finding out the surprise guest to the Gamble Tournament is [[spoiler:[[BarackObama King Omaha]]]].
* JumpingTheShark: When[[spoiler:BarackObama]] [[spoiler:[[BarackObama King Omaha]]]] made an appearance, that seemed to pass the line of believability.
* JumpingTheShark: When
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* LesYay: Mika & Rio
* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirisagi, full stop.
* {{Bad Writing}}: Many a fan's reaction to finding out the surprise guest to the Gamble Tournament is [[spoiler: BarackObama]].
* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirisagi, full stop.
* {{Bad Writing}}: Many a fan's reaction to finding out the surprise guest to the Gamble Tournament is [[spoiler: BarackObama]].
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* LesYay: Mika & Rio
Rio.
* MagnificentBastard: TomuShirisagi, Shirasagi, full stop.
* {{Bad Writing}}: Many a fan's reaction to finding out the surprise guest to the Gamble Tournament is [[spoiler: BarackObama]].stop.
* MagnificentBastard: Tomu
* {{Bad Writing}}: Many a fan's reaction to finding out the surprise guest to the Gamble Tournament is [[spoiler: BarackObama]].
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** Some feel that happened back during [[spoiler:'hiring Green Berets to play in a survival game against mid/high schoolers with authority to kill' or 'oh yeah superpowered 'tengu' man who had magical super serum tested on him beats the crap out of the Green Berets for them' or 'oh yeah rainbow hypnotist eye passed down my bloodline for hundreds of thousands of generations' were all equally shark jumpable points.]]
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** Some feel that happened back during the Emily Dawn Arc with [[spoiler:'hiring Green Berets to play in a survival game against mid/high schoolers with authority to kill' or 'oh yeah superpowered 'tengu' man who had magical super serum tested on him beats the crap out of the Green Berets for them' or 'oh yeah rainbow hypnotist eye passed down my bloodline for hundreds of thousands of generations' were all equally shark jumpable points.]]
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** Some feel that happened back during 'hiring Green Berets to play in a survival game against mid/high schoolers with authority to kill' or 'oh yeah superpowered 'tengu' man who had magical super serum tested on him beats the crap out of the Green Berets for them' or 'oh yeah rainbow hypnotist eye passed down my bloodline for hundreds of thousands of generations' were all equally shark jumpable points.
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** Some feel that happened back during 'hiring [[spoiler:'hiring Green Berets to play in a survival game against mid/high schoolers with authority to kill' or 'oh yeah superpowered 'tengu' man who had magical super serum tested on him beats the crap out of the Green Berets for them' or 'oh yeah rainbow hypnotist eye passed down my bloodline for hundreds of thousands of generations' were all equally shark jumpable points.]]
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** Some feel that happened back during 'hiring Green Berets to play in a survival game against mid/high schoolers with authority to kill' or 'oh yeah superpowered 'tengu' man who had magical super serum tested on him beats the crap out of the Green Berets for them' or 'oh yeah rainbow hypnotist eye passed down my bloodline for hundreds of thousands of generations' were all equally shark jumpable points.
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Wrong trope. Who writes this crap HAS to be lampshaded to qualify. Also cleaned up the grammar.
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* WhoWritesThisCrap: Many fans reaction to finding out the surprised guest to the Gamble Tournament is [[spoiler: BarackObama]].
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* WhoWritesThisCrap: {{Bad Writing}}: Many fans a fan's reaction to finding out the surprised surprise guest to the Gamble Tournament is [[spoiler: BarackObama]].
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* JumpingTheShark: When [[spoiler:BarackObama]] made an appearance, that seemed to pass the line of believability.
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* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirisagi, full stop.
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* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirisagi, full stop.stop.
* WhoWritesThisCrap: Many fans reaction to finding out the surprised guest to the Gamble Tournament is [[spoiler: BarackObama]].
* WhoWritesThisCrap: Many fans reaction to finding out the surprised guest to the Gamble Tournament is [[spoiler: BarackObama]].
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* LesYay: Mika & Rio
* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirisagi, full stop.
* MagnificentBastard: Tomu Shirisagi, full stop.
