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* WhatMeasureIsANonBadass: Takiko is often used to bash her sort-of predecessor, Miaka. Without taking in account how both girls' lives are ''extremely'' different (Takiko is from UsefulNotes/ImperialJapan, Miaka from the Japan of TheNineties), or how without Miaka as TheProtagonist of the original... ''there would be no Takiko to start with''.
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* IronWoobie: [[spoiler: Lord Temudan]] turns out to be this, since he's been through enormous and horrible pain through all of his life andf yet is still determined to go on in one or another way.
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* IronWoobie: [[spoiler: Lord Temudan]] turns out to be this, since he's been through enormous and horrible pain through all of his life andf and yet is still determined to go on in one or another way.way.
* LesYay: In appearance and out-of-context with Uruki and Takiko, as a lot of their most romantic moments (such as but not limited to their [[spoiler: first kiss]] and Uruki hugging Takiko to comfort her during a storm) happen when Uruki is in [[SuperGenderBender his girl form.]]
* LesYay: In appearance and out-of-context with Uruki and Takiko, as a lot of their most romantic moments (such as but not limited to their [[spoiler: first kiss]] and Uruki hugging Takiko to comfort her during a storm) happen when Uruki is in [[SuperGenderBender his girl form.]]
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story is well-told and the characters believeable, though as death is a presence over the entire series (and according to [[WordOfGod Yuu Watase]], Life And Death is the theme of the manga), there are ''some'' scenes that can come across as being slapped together for drama but ultimately don't leave as much of an impact as they could. [[spoiler: Case in point, Hagus' death feels like a cop-out to age up Tegu]]
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: The story is well-told and the characters believeable, though as death is a presence over the entire series (and according to [[WordOfGod Yuu Watase]], Life And Death is the theme of the manga), there are ''some'' scenes that can come across as being slapped together for drama but ultimately don't leave as much of an impact as they could. [[spoiler: Case in point, Hagus' death feels like a cop-out to age up Tegu.]]
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* [[spoiler: GameBreaker]]: Urumiya.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonBadass: Takiko is often used to bash her sort-of predecessor, Miaka. Without taking in account how both girls' lives are ''extremely'' different (Takiko is from UsefulNotes/ImperialJapan, Miaka from the Japan of TheNineties), or how without Miaka as TheProtagonist of the original... ''there would be no Takiko to start with''.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonBadass: Takiko is often used to bash her sort-of predecessor, Miaka. Without taking in account how both girls' lives are ''extremely'' different (Takiko is from UsefulNotes/ImperialJapan, Miaka from the Japan of TheNineties), or how without Miaka as TheProtagonist of the original... ''there would be no Takiko to start with''.with''.
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* [[spoiler: IronWoobie]]: Lord Temudan
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* IronWoobie: [[spoiler: IronWoobie]]: Lord TemudanTemudan]] turns out to be this, since he's been through enormous and horrible pain through all of his life andf yet is still determined to go on in one or another way.
* NightmareFuel: [[spoiler: Takiko being subjected to TONS of BodyHorror, as she summons Genbu and is consumed by him.]] Hoooooly shit.
* NightmareFuel: [[spoiler: Takiko being subjected to TONS of BodyHorror, as she summons Genbu and is consumed by him.]] Hoooooly shit.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonBadass: Takiko is often used to bash her sort-of predecessor, Miaka. Without taking in account how both girls' lives are ''extremely'' different (Takiko is from ImperialJapan, Miaka from the Japan of TheNineties), or how without Miaka as TheProtagonist of the original... ''there would be no Takiko to start with''.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonBadass: Takiko is often used to bash her sort-of predecessor, Miaka. Without taking in account how both girls' lives are ''extremely'' different (Takiko is from ImperialJapan, UsefulNotes/ImperialJapan, Miaka from the Japan of TheNineties), or how without Miaka as TheProtagonist of the original... ''there would be no Takiko to start with''.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Ziyi. He plays a larger role as part of the Kutou army [[spoiler: and is the one who kills Tomite]], but what little of his past is revealed makes him all the more interesting. [[spoiler: Ziyi's hometown was attacked by bandits, his family killed and he was left to starve, going so far as to eat animal bones simply to survive. Eventually he's caught and is made an eunuch, with implications that he was raped before or after the procedure, before he was finally found by Lord Hakei and offered a position of authority and a good life.]]
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Ziyi.Shigi. He plays a larger role as part of the Kutou army [[spoiler: and is the one who kills Tomite]], but what little of his past is revealed makes him all the more interesting. [[spoiler: Ziyi's Shigi's hometown was attacked by bandits, his family killed and he was left to starve, going so far as to eat animal bones simply to survive. Eventually he's caught and is made an eunuch, with implications that he was raped before or after the procedure, before he was finally found by Lord Hakei and offered a position of authority and a good life.]]
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Ziyi. He plays a larger role as part of the Kutou army [[spoiler: and is the one who kills Tomite]], but what little of his past is revealed makes him all the more interesting. [[spoiler: Ziyi's hometown was attacked by bandits, his family killed and he was left to starve, going so far as to eat animal bones simply to survive. Eventually he's caught and is made an eunuch, with implications that he was raped before or after the procedure, before he was finally found by Lord Hakei and offered a position of authority and a good life.]]
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story is well-told and the characters believeable, though as death is a presence over the entire series (and according to [[WordOfGod Yuu Watase]], Life And Death is the theme of the manga), there are ''some'' scenes that can come across as being slapped together for drama but ultimately don't leave as much of an impact as they could. [[spoiler: Case in point, Hagus' death feels like a cop-out to age up Tegu]]
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* CompleteMonster: Emperor Tegiru.
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* CompleteMonster: Emperor Tegiru.
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* [[spoiler: IronWoobie]]: Lord Temudan
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* WhatMeasureIsANonBadass: Takiko is often used to bash her sort-of predecessor, Miaka. Without taking in account how both girls's lives are ''extremely'' different (Takiko is from ImperialJapan, Miaka from the Japan of TheNineties), or how without Miaka as TheProtagonist of the original... ''there would be no Takiko to start with''.
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* StrangledByTheRedString: [[spoiler: Firuka and Hagas.]]
* WhatMeasureIsANonBadass: Takiko is often used to bash her sort-of predecessor, Miaka. Without taking in account how bothgirls's girls' lives are ''extremely'' different (Takiko is from ImperialJapan, Miaka from the Japan of TheNineties), or how without Miaka as TheProtagonist of the original... ''there would be no Takiko to start with''.
* WhatMeasureIsANonBadass: Takiko is often used to bash her sort-of predecessor, Miaka. Without taking in account how both
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* OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow: [[spoiler: The Urumiya arc.]]
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* OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow: [[spoiler: The Urumiya arc.]]]]
* WhatMeasureIsANonBadass: Takiko is often used to bash her sort-of predecessor, Miaka. Without taking in account how both girls's lives are ''extremely'' different (Takiko is from ImperialJapan, Miaka from the Japan of TheNineties), or how without Miaka as TheProtagonist of the original... ''there would be no Takiko to start with''.
* WhatMeasureIsANonBadass: Takiko is often used to bash her sort-of predecessor, Miaka. Without taking in account how both girls's lives are ''extremely'' different (Takiko is from ImperialJapan, Miaka from the Japan of TheNineties), or how without Miaka as TheProtagonist of the original... ''there would be no Takiko to start with''.
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** [[spoiler: GameBreaker]]: Urumiya.
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** [[spoiler: GameBreaker]]: Urumiya.
* OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow: [[spoiler: The Urumiya arc.]]
* OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow: [[spoiler: The Urumiya arc.]]
