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** Even after Dot escapes, [[spoiler:she encounters [[QuicksandSucks quicksand]], [[WhenTreesAttack hostile ''possessed'' trees]], [[LethalLavaLand active volcanoes and geyser fields]] [[FedToTheBeast then is recaptured and left at the mercy of an alien dinosaur]] [[NiceJobBreakingItHero after unintentionally revealing her location]]. Luckily, said monster spares her life.]]
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** Even after Dot escapes, [[spoiler:she encounters [[QuicksandSucks quicksand]], [[WhenTreesAttack hostile ''possessed'' trees]], [[LethalLavaLand active volcanoes and geyser fields]] [[FedToTheBeast then is nearly recaptured and left at the mercy of an alien dinosaur]] [[NiceJobBreakingItHero after unintentionally revealing her location]]. Luckily, said monster spares her life.]]
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*** To a lesser extent, the Roundy Sergeant crosses this [[spoiler: when [[DirtyCoward he attempts to sell out his own troops as well as Dot and The Party (a.k.a. Roley) to Papa Drop just to save his own skin]]]] if he didn't do so already with the aforementioned actions.
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