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* MonochromeCasting: If Judgement City is supposed to be for people from the Western United States it has a notable lack of Black, Hispanic, Asian and Native American residents and recently deceased.
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* GeniusBonus: In addition to the humorous cameo of Shirley Maclaine, Daniel references General George Patton who was also not shy about expressing his belief in reincarnation and past lives.
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* MagnificentBastard: Bob Diamond and his rival prosecutor Lena Foster are a pair of "big brains" assigned to the case of Daniel Miller. Believing Daniel must overcome his fear to "cross on," the two subject him to an examination of his life where Bob tries to ensure that Daniel will defend himself as Lena always counters him. Upon Daniel falling in love with fellow spirit Julia, the two leave it open for Daniel to risk himself to try to be with her, with both pleased that Daniel overcomes their trials to show himself worthy of crossing over.
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* TechnologyMarchesOn: Daniel's birthday gift is a dashboard-mounted CD player.
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* SocietyMarchesOn: An elderly woman assumes Daniel died young because of AIDS. While the threat of AIDS still exists, 1990 was the height of the pandemic.
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* FridgeBrilliance: Daniel, in the end, was sentencing himself. Either he accepted the judgment and stayed on the bus, or he defied it and tried to reconnect with Julia. The judges, prosecutor, and defense [[SecretTestOfCharacter were all letting Daniel make the decision]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The male judge states that the scenes he will see will be in 3D, while Daniel is amazed by the scenes. Originally, the script called for the scenes to be played out as if in VR, but that was dropped and was just rendered as a television screen.
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* AwesomeMusic: The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nexYsPQvuUM Title Theme]] and the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5k1yDkq_gNs&t=6m4s Climax Theme]], which is an even mix of fantasy fanfare and cute romantic comedy goofiness.
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* AwesomeMusic: SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic: The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nexYsPQvuUM Title Theme]] and the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5k1yDkq_gNs&t=6m4s Climax Theme]], which is an even mix of fantasy fanfare and cute romantic comedy goofiness.
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** In-Universe, Julia's life was this. Within the story, the fact that Julia's life was so nice that [[spoiler:the prosecution barely trials her and instead watches highlights from her life to pass the time]].
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** In-Universe, Julia's life was this. Within the story, the fact that Julia's life was so nice that [[spoiler:the prosecution barely trials questions her and instead watches the highlights from of her life to pass the time]].
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* FridgeHorror: Going back means the ending of ''you'' and everything that makes you you save your soul. The only way ''you'' will be even remembered is at the Past Lives Pavilion where your next form(s) can get clips of what you were. So, when Daniel is told he's going back, it means goodbye Daniel, forever.
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** Even the other people in the AfterlifeExpress are applauding.
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---> '''Bob''': ''(to Lena)'' [[spoiler:Brave enough for you?]]
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** '''The''' '''''entire''''' '''climax''', where Daniel [[spoiler:risks [[CessationOfExistence ultimate destruction]] to see Julia one last time and confess their love for eachother]], each other]], which can be summed up in this exchange...
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* {{Tearjerker}}: The final act: first you're crying because it's Daniel's DarkestHour when [[spoiler:Lena pins Daniel for not facing his fear within Judgement City, making him lose the trial]], and then [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments tears of joy]] when [[spoiler:Daniel proves her wrong by facing his fear on the bus back to the life by running all the way to Julia's bus]].
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* {{Tearjerker}}: The final act: first you're crying because it's Daniel's DarkestHour when [[spoiler:Lena pins Daniel for not facing his fear within Judgement City, making him lose the trial]], and then [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments tears of joy]] when [[spoiler:Daniel proves her wrong by facing his fear on the bus back to the life by running all the way to Julia's bus]].bus]].
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* {{Tearjerker}}: The final act: first you're crying because it's Daniel's DarkestHour when [[spoiler:Lena pins Daniel for not facing his fear within Judgement City, making him lose the trial]], and then [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments tears of joy]] when [[spoiler:Daniel proves her wrong by facing his fear on the bus back to the afterlife]].life by running all the way to Julia's bus]].
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** In-Universe, Julia's life was this. Within the story, the fact that Julia's life was so nice that [[spoiler:the prosecution decides to take the time trialing barely trials her and instead watch watches highlights from her life to pass the time]].
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---> Bob: '''Bob''': [[spoiler:Brave enough for you?]]
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---> Bob: [[spoiler:Brave enough for you?]]
---> Judge: [[spoiler:... [[EarnYourHappyEnding Let him go]].]]
* {{Tearjerker}}: The final act: first you're crying because it's Daniel's DarkestHour when [[spoiler:Lena pins Daniel for not facing his fear within Judgement City, making him lose the trial]], and then [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments tears of joy]] when [[spoiler:Daniel proves her wrong by facing his fear on the bus back to the afterlife]].
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** In-Universe, Julia's life was this. Within the story, the fact that Julia's life was so nice that [[spoiler:the prosecution decides to take the time trialing her and instead watch highlights from her life to pass the time]].
** '''The''' '''''entire''''' '''climax''', which can be summed up in this exchange...
---> Bob: [[spoiler:Brave enough for you?]]
---> Judge: [[spoiler:... [[EarnYourHappyEnding Let him go]].]]
* {{Tearjerker}}: The final act: first you're crying because it's Daniel's DarkestHour when [[spoiler:Lena pins Daniel for not facing his fear within Judgement City, making him lose the trial]], and then [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments tears of joy]] when [[spoiler:Daniel proves her wrong by facing his fear on the bus back to the afterlife]].
