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* TrueArtIsAngsty: Tris spends a lot of time angsting over the deaths in his family.
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** The aforementioned Foor Arontala assists Jared with everything listed above, torturing members of the Sisterhood and also leading purges of his own race, the Vayash-Moru. In addition, Arontala enslaves the souls of his victims, [[AndIMustScream holding them in agony]], while regularly using the spirit of Tris's dead sister to [[MindRape torment him]]. Holding the trapped spirit of the evil mage the Obsidian King, Arontala feeds it the captive souls while intending to revive him at a certain time and become his new host, bringing a wave of death and destruction to the world, claiming that if the Obsidian King does annihilate everything, Arontala will simply rebuild it [[InTheirOwnImage in his own image]].
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** The aforementioned Foor Arontala assists Jared with everything listed above, torturing members of the Sisterhood and also leading purges of his own race, the Vayash-Moru. In addition, Arontala enslaves the souls of his victims, [[AndIMustScream holding them in agony]], while regularly using the spirit of Tris's dead sister to [[MindRape torment him]]. Holding the trapped spirit of the evil mage the Obsidian King, Arontala feeds it the captive souls while intending to revive him at a certain time and become his new host, bringing a wave of death and destruction to the world, claiming that if the Obsidian King does annihilate everything, Arontala will simply rebuild it [[InTheirOwnImage in his own image]].
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: At the end of book two, one of the male characters asks one of the female characters to come visit him at his manor. After she complains about not having anything to do when she's not busy healing people, especially him, the following conversation occurs.
-->[[spoiler: (Vahanian)]] '''Man''': I could suggest other pastimes.
-->[[spoiler: (Carina)]] '''Woman''': I'll have to bring my chaperone. '''[turns to her brother]'''
-->[[spoiler: (Cam)]] '''Woman's Brother''': I can be bribed.
-->[[spoiler: (Vahanian)]] '''Man''': I could suggest other pastimes.
-->[[spoiler: (Carina)]] '''Woman''': I'll have to bring my chaperone. '''[turns to her brother]'''
-->[[spoiler: (Cam)]] '''Woman's Brother''': I can be bribed.
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---->[[spoiler: (Vahanian)]] '''Man''': I could suggest other pastimes.
---->[[spoiler: (Carina)]] '''Woman''': I'll have to bring my chaperone. '''[turns to her brother]'''
---->[[spoiler: (Cam)]] '''Woman's Brother''': I can be bribed.
---->[[spoiler: (Carina)]] '''Woman''': I'll have to bring my chaperone. '''[turns to her brother]'''
---->[[spoiler: (Cam)]] '''Woman's Brother''': I can be bribed.
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** Jared Drayke, the evil elder [[CainAndAbel half-brother]] of hero Martris "Tris" Drayke, is [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] when Tris stops him from raping a servant. Later making a dark pact with the [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Vayash-Moru]] mage Foor Arontala, Jared [[TheUsurper launches a coup against his own family]], killing his father and destroying his soul, as well as Tris's mother and Jared's own younger half-sister. Becoming a vicious tyrant, Jared has his men slaughter entire villages for insufficient payment of taxes, while leading purges of magic users in the kingdom. Jared has members of the Sisterhood of mages slaughtered and tortured, while also butchering the other Vayash-Moru. Having others abducted, tortured and slowly {{impaled|WithExtremePrejudice}}, Jared also becomes a SerialRapist who abducts, tortures and rapes women regularly before murdering them. When he finally confronts Tris, Jared boasts that he will take Tris's beloved, Jared's former arranged fiancée, and rape her endlessly, [[OffingTheOffspring killing the first child she has]] to remove any issue with paternity.
** The aforementioned Foor Arontala assists Jared with everything listed above, torturing members of the Sisterhood and also leading purges of his own race, the Vayash-Moru. In addition, Arontala enslaves the souls of his victims, [[AndIMustScream holding them in agony]], while regularly using the spirit of Tris's dead sister to [[MindRape torment him]]. Holding the trapped spirit of the evil mage the Obsidian King, Arontala feeds it the captive souls while intending to revive him at a certain time and become his new host, bringing a wave of death and destruction to the world, claiming that if the Obsidian King does annihilate everything, Arontala will simply rebuild it [[InTheirOwnImage in his own image]].
**[[AxCrazy Malesh]] is a particularly [[{{Sadist}} vicious]] Vayash-Moru who savors the hunt. While at first he has to limit himself to vile criminals due to treaties and laws, Malesh is fond of tormenting them and draws out their fear at death. Deciding that it's time for vampires to reign over humans, Malesh brutally slaughters the population of multiple villages while attempting to provoke a battle with the goddess The Dark Lady's chosen Vahanian. Malesh attempts to turn his lover Carina and promises that if Vahanian delays in challenging Malesh--while knowing that to kill Malesh might doom Carina, as a Vayash-Moru fledgling's life is linked to its makers--then Malesh will continue butchering villages. Intending to spark a war between humanity and vampires and make oceans of blood flow, Malesh attempts to flee Vahanian by [[WouldHurtAChild using a child]] as a HumanShield, only to reveal he had already drained the child to the point of being impossible to save anyways. Even his own maker is horrified at Malesh's actions, at which point Malesh declares him a weakling before intending to create a slaughter so great that Malesh believes he will be raised to serve as the consort of the Dark Lady and reign over a new kingdom of undeath and destruction.
** Jared Drayke, the evil elder [[CainAndAbel half-brother]] of hero Martris "Tris" Drayke, is [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduced]] when Tris stops him from raping a servant. Later making a dark pact with the [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Vayash-Moru]] mage Foor Arontala, Jared [[TheUsurper launches a coup against his own family]], killing his father and destroying his soul, as well as Tris's mother and Jared's own younger half-sister. Becoming a vicious tyrant, Jared has his men slaughter entire villages for insufficient payment of taxes, while leading purges of magic users in the kingdom. Jared has members of the Sisterhood of mages slaughtered and tortured, while also butchering the other Vayash-Moru. Having others abducted, tortured and slowly {{impaled|WithExtremePrejudice}}, Jared also becomes a SerialRapist who abducts, tortures and rapes women regularly before murdering them. When he finally confronts Tris, Jared boasts that he will take Tris's beloved, Jared's former arranged fiancée, and rape her endlessly, [[OffingTheOffspring killing the first child she has]] to remove any issue with paternity.
** The aforementioned Foor Arontala assists Jared with everything listed above, torturing members of the Sisterhood and also leading purges of his own race, the Vayash-Moru. In addition, Arontala enslaves the souls of his victims, [[AndIMustScream holding them in agony]], while regularly using the spirit of Tris's dead sister to [[MindRape torment him]]. Holding the trapped spirit of the evil mage the Obsidian King, Arontala feeds it the captive souls while intending to revive him at a certain time and become his new host, bringing a wave of death and destruction to the world, claiming that if the Obsidian King does annihilate everything, Arontala will simply rebuild it [[InTheirOwnImage in his own image]].
**[[AxCrazy Malesh]] is a particularly [[{{Sadist}} vicious]] Vayash-Moru who savors the hunt. While at first he has to limit himself to vile criminals due to treaties and laws, Malesh is fond of tormenting them and draws out their fear at death. Deciding that it's time for vampires to reign over humans, Malesh brutally slaughters the population of multiple villages while attempting to provoke a battle with the goddess The Dark Lady's chosen Vahanian. Malesh attempts to turn his lover Carina and promises that if Vahanian delays in challenging Malesh--while knowing that to kill Malesh might doom Carina, as a Vayash-Moru fledgling's life is linked to its makers--then Malesh will continue butchering villages. Intending to spark a war between humanity and vampires and make oceans of blood flow, Malesh attempts to flee Vahanian by [[WouldHurtAChild using a child]] as a HumanShield, only to reveal he had already drained the child to the point of being impossible to save anyways. Even his own maker is horrified at Malesh's actions, at which point Malesh declares him a weakling before intending to create a slaughter so great that Malesh believes he will be raised to serve as the consort of the Dark Lady and reign over a new kingdom of undeath and destruction.
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* RecycledScript: Most noticeable in book 2, which recycles chunks of dialogue and occasionally features the same conversations twice, with marginally different wording. There's also the tendency to remind readers [[ViewersAreMorons incessantly]] of each character's hair color.
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* {{Wangst}}: Tris spends a lot of time angsting over the deaths in his family.
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* CompleteMonster: Jared. Arontala is this too; his favored torture methods are made of {{Squick}}.
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* RecycledScript: Most noticeable in book 2, which recycles chunks of dialogue and occasionally even features the same conversations twice, with marginally different wording. There's also the tendency to remind readers [[ViewersAreMorons incessantly]] of each character's hair color.
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* RecycledScript: Most noticeable in book 2, which recycles chunks of dialogue and occasionally even features the same conversations twice, with marginally different wording. There's also the tendency to remind readers [[ViewersAreMorons incessantly]] of each character's hair color.
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* CompleteMonster: Jared. Arontala is this too; his favoured torture methods are made of {{Squick}}.
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* CompleteMonster: Jared. Arontala is this too; his favoured favored torture methods are made of {{Squick}}.
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* RecycledScript: Most noticeable in book 2, which recycles chunks of dialogue and occasionally even features the same conversations twice, with marginally different wording. There's also the tendency to remind readers [[ViewersAreMorons incessently]] of each character's hair colour.
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* RecycledScript: Most noticeable in book 2, which recycles chunks of dialogue and occasionally even features the same conversations twice, with marginally different wording. There's also the tendency to remind readers [[ViewersAreMorons incessently]] incessantly]] of each character's hair colour.color.
* HoYay: There's the occasional moment between Tris and Vahanian.
* HoYay: There's the occasional moment between Tris and Vahanian.
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* TrueArtIsAngsty: Tris spends a lot of time angsting over the deaths in his family. It's borderline {{Wangst}}, but YourMileageMayVary.
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* TrueArtIsAngsty: Tris spends a lot of time angsting over the deaths in his family. It's borderline {{Wangst}}, but YourMileageMayVary.
* {{Wangst}}: Tris spends a lot of time angsting over the deaths in his family.
* {{Wangst}}: Tris spends a lot of time angsting over the deaths in his family.
