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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: The novel has a few, but probably one of the best is when Mario, Julia, Javier and Pascual [[spoiler:go from town to town looking for somebody who wants to marry Mario and Julia.]]
** On that arch, the funniest moment is when an iliterate old functionary points out that to solve the above spoilered problem they just could [[spoiler: forge Mario's birth certificate so he could appear as legally adult so no civil authority could place objection on him getting married]]. The description of how the four above realize that they couldn't think of such an obvious solution to their predicament despite being way more educated and allegedly smarter is priceless.
** On that arch, the funniest moment is when an iliterate old functionary points out that to solve the above spoilered problem they just could [[spoiler: forge Mario's birth certificate so he could appear as legally adult so no civil authority could place objection on him getting married]]. The description of how the four above realize that they couldn't think of such an obvious solution to their predicament despite being way more educated and allegedly smarter is priceless.
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** On that arch, the funniest moment is when a iliterate old functionary point that to solve the above spoilered problem they just could [[spoiler: forge Mario's birth certificate so he could appear as legally adult so no civil authority could place objection on him getting married]]. The description on how the four above realize that they could't think on such an obvious solution to their predicament despite being way more educated and allegedly smarter is priceless.
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** On that arch, the funniest moment is when a an iliterate old functionary point points out that to solve the above spoilered problem they just could [[spoiler: forge Mario's birth certificate so he could appear as legally adult so no civil authority could place objection on him getting married]]. The description on of how the four above realize that they could't couldn't think on of such an obvious solution to their predicament despite being way more educated and allegedly smarter is priceless.
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* ValuesDissonance: Mario’s mother is more preoccupied with the fact that aunt Julia is a divorcee than the fact she has 14 years more than he.
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* ValuesDissonance: Mario’s mother is more preoccupied with the fact that aunt Julia is a divorcee than the fact that she has is 14 years more older than he.him.
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** On that arch, the funniest moment is when a iliterate old functionary point that to solve the above spoilered problem they just could [[spoiler: forge Mario's birth certificate so he could appear as legally adult so no civil authority could place objection on him getting married]]. The description on how the four above realize that they could't think on such an obvious solution to their predicament despite being way more educated and allegedly smarter is priceless.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: A child being eaten alive by rats.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: NightmareFuel: A child being eaten alive by rats.
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* TrueArtIsForeign: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Camacho dismisses anything made in other places, stating he can do it better.
* TrueArtSticksItToTheMan
* TrueArtSticksItToTheMan
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* AcceptableNationalityTargets: For Camacho, the Argentineans. Later it’s revealed that he [[spoiler:has a promiscuous Argentinean wife that dumped him when he was in Bolivia.]]
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* NightmareFuel: A child being eaten alive by rats.
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* NightmareFuel: HighOctaneNightmareFuel: A child being eaten alive by rats.
