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DIAA now requires proof audiences were apathetic.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story is very long, and especially at the beginning, there is a distinct lack of {{Hope Spot}}s and other optimistic moments to mitigate all the depressing reveals. This is even lampshaded by Twilight in chapter 15.
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* TheWoobie: Pretty much everyone in Broad Hoof Psychiatric Hospital counts, considering the type of place it is.
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* FridgeHorror: Is the world Twilight wakes up in ''actually'' the real one? Or is it just a bad dream?
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** Is the world Twilight wakes up in ''actually'' the real one? Or is it just a bad dream?
** Is the world Twilight wakes up in ''actually'' the real one? Or is it just a bad dream?
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** TheReveal that [[spoiler: ''Trixie'']] is the teacher at the "hospital school" Twilight has to attend and the ongoing frustration that leads to.
*** Especially as she turns out to be an awesome teacher everyone, especially Pinkie, enjoys, but Twilight.
*** Especially as she turns out to be an awesome teacher everyone, especially Pinkie, enjoys, but Twilight.
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** TheReveal that [[spoiler: ''Trixie'']] is the teacher at the "hospital school" Twilight has to attend and the ongoing frustration that leads to.
***to. Especially as she turns out to be an awesome teacher everyone, especially Pinkie, enjoys, but Twilight.
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* NightmareFuel: I'm gonna go with yes...
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Correcting "Funny Moments" and "Heartwarming Moments" links by changing "Suger Wiki" to "Sugar Wiki"
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story is very long, and especially at the beginning, there is a distinct lack of {{Hope Spot}}s and other optimistic moments to mitigate all the depressing reveals. This is even LampShaded by Twilight in chapter 15.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash, Other Twilight,]] and Dr.Applejack.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash, Other Twilight,]] and Dr.Applejack.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story is very long, and especially at the beginning, there is a distinct lack of {{Hope Spot}}s and other optimistic moments to mitigate all the depressing reveals. This is even LampShaded lampshaded by Twilight in chapter 15.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash, Other Twilight,]] and Dr. Applejack.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash, Other Twilight,]] and Dr. Applejack.
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** As Rainbow Dash is about to call quits on Twilight's plan, Flutershy ''finally'' speaks, if only for a moment, to stop her in chapter twenty seven. Twilight is left so speechless, she can't bring herself to say another word to either of them, before they leave.
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** As Rainbow Dash is about to call quits on Twilight's plan, Flutershy Fluttershy ''finally'' speaks, if only for a moment, to stop her in chapter twenty seven. Twilight is left so speechless, she can't bring herself to say another word to either of them, before they leave.
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** As Rainbow Dash is about to call quits on Twilight's plan, Flutershy ''finale'' speaks, if only for a moment, to stop her in chapter twenty seven. Twilight is left so speechless, she can't bring herself to say another word to either of them, before they leave.
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** As Rainbow Dash is about to call quits on Twilight's plan, Flutershy ''finale'' ''finally'' speaks, if only for a moment, to stop her in chapter twenty seven. Twilight is left so speechless, she can't bring herself to say another word to either of them, before they leave.
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** As one person pointed out, even if Twilight does successfully escape to the "real world", she will likely always have lingering fears that it might not be real either way.
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* HeartWarmingMoment: Twilight, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie's first breakfast together after Twilight wakes up in the Asylum, is a surprisingly light hearted-mostly-and funny scene, compared to the rest of the story.
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** Twilight, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie's first breakfast together after Twilight wakes up in the Asylum, is a surprisingly light hearted-mostly-and funny scene, compared to the rest of thestory.story.
** As Rainbow Dash is about to call quits on Twilight's plan, Flutershy ''finale'' speaks, if only for a moment, to stop her in chapter twenty seven. Twilight is left so speechless, she can't bring herself to say another word to either of them, before they leave.
** Twilight, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie's first breakfast together after Twilight wakes up in the Asylum, is a surprisingly light hearted-mostly-and funny scene, compared to the rest of the
** As Rainbow Dash is about to call quits on Twilight's plan, Flutershy ''finale'' speaks, if only for a moment, to stop her in chapter twenty seven. Twilight is left so speechless, she can't bring herself to say another word to either of them, before they leave.
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** [[LovableAlphaBitch Silver Glows]] introduction and the reveal that she thinks this is a ''spa'' are also amusing.
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** [[LovableAlphaBitch Silver Glows]] Glow's]] introduction and the reveal that she thinks this is a ''spa'' are also amusing.
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* FunnyMoment:
** TheReveal that [[spoiler: ''Trixie'']] is the teacher at the "hospital school" Twilight has to attend and the ongoing frustration that leads to.
*** Especially as she turns out to be an awesome teacher everyone, especially Pinkie, enjoys, but Twilight.
--> Twilight: Does she do magic tricks during ''every lesson''.
** [[LovableAlphaBitch Silver Glows]] introduction and the reveal that she thinks this is a ''spa'' are also amusing.
** TheReveal that [[spoiler: ''Trixie'']] is the teacher at the "hospital school" Twilight has to attend and the ongoing frustration that leads to.
*** Especially as she turns out to be an awesome teacher everyone, especially Pinkie, enjoys, but Twilight.
--> Twilight: Does she do magic tricks during ''every lesson''.
** [[LovableAlphaBitch Silver Glows]] introduction and the reveal that she thinks this is a ''spa'' are also amusing.
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* OneSceneWonder: Silver Glow, despite only appearing twice so far, her introduction was ''very'' memorable.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story is very long, and especially at the beginning, there is a distinct lack of {{Hope Spot}}s and other optimistic moments to mitigate all the depressing reveals.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story is very long, and especially at the beginning, there is a distinct lack of {{Hope Spot}}s and other optimistic moments to mitigate all the depressing reveals. This is even LampShaded by Twilight in chapter 15.
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* HeartWarmingMoment: Twilight, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie's first breakfast together after Twilight wakes up in the Asylum, is a surprisingly light hearted-mostly-and funny scene, compared to the rest of the story.
* NightmareFuel: I'm gonna go withyes...yes...
* TearJerker:
** Pretty much every backstory of ''any'' character is this.
** Twilight being told that [[spoiler: Spike was just a figment of her imagination in "The Asylum Verse".]] It definitely doesn't help that her friends are '''excited''' at her revelation, that [[spoiler: her trusted assistant/adopted little brother wasn't real.]] Not that they mean to upset her.
** The reveal that [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle was lobotomized and if Twilight's treatment fails, she will likely suffer the same fate.]]
* TheWoobie: Pretty much everyone in Broad Hoof Psychiatric Hospital counts, considering the type of place it is.
* NightmareFuel: I'm gonna go with
* TearJerker:
** Pretty much every backstory of ''any'' character is this.
** Twilight being told that [[spoiler: Spike was just a figment of her imagination in "The Asylum Verse".]] It definitely doesn't help that her friends are '''excited''' at her revelation, that [[spoiler: her trusted assistant/adopted little brother wasn't real.]] Not that they mean to upset her.
** The reveal that [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle was lobotomized and if Twilight's treatment fails, she will likely suffer the same fate.]]
* TheWoobie: Pretty much everyone in Broad Hoof Psychiatric Hospital counts, considering the type of place it is.
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* NightmareFuel: I'm gonna go with yes...
* OlderThanTheyLook: According to a comment of the author's, [[spoiler: Fluttershy is 43, although this was a joke by the author]].
* SlasherSmile: What [[spoiler: Other Twilight]] is portrayed with in fanart.
* OlderThanTheyLook: According to a comment of the author's, [[spoiler: Fluttershy is 43, although this was a joke by the author]].
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* NightmareFuel: I'm gonna go with yes...
* OlderThanTheyLook: According to a comment of the author's, [[spoiler: Fluttershy is 43, although this was a joke by the author]].
* SlasherSmile: What [[spoiler: Other Twilight]] is portrayed with in fanart.yes...
* OlderThanTheyLook: According to a comment of the author's, [[spoiler: Fluttershy is 43, although this was a joke by the author]].
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Is Twilight really stuck in a nightmare or is she delusional like everypony believes? Both interpretations have their clues.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The story is very long, and especially at the beginning, there is a distinct lack of {{Hope Spot}}s and other optimistic moments to mitigate all the depressing reveals.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash.]]Dash, Other Twilight,]] and Dr.Applejack.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash.]]
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* NightmareFuel: I'm gonna go with yes...
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* OlderThanTheyLook: According to a comment of the author's, [[spoiler: Fluttershy is 43, although this was a joke by the author]].
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FridgeHorror: Is the world Twilight wakes up in ''actually'' the real one? Or is it just a bad dream?
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* FridgeHorror: Is the world Twilight wakes up in ''actually'' the real one? Or is it just a bad dream?dream?
* SlasherSmile: What [[spoiler: Other Twilight]] is portrayed with in recent fanart.
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