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** The widespread headcanon on the author's Tumblr blog that Tiamat in [=AbraxasVerse=] was the mate of Godzilla's missing brother who never completely got over losing him to Gigan, though not officially canonized in the [=AbraxasVerse=], became more morbid after Godzilla in canon killed Tiamat in brutal fashion in ''Film/GodzillaXKongTheNewEmpire''. The [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/746325000481636352/ author]] has since confirmed in an ask that the [=AbraxasVerse=] Tiamat is SparedByTheAdaptation.

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** The widespread headcanon on the author's Tumblr blog that Tiamat in [=AbraxasVerse=] was the mate of Godzilla's missing brother who never completely got over losing him to Gigan, though not officially canonized in the [=AbraxasVerse=], [=AbraxasVerse=] as of yet, became more morbid after Godzilla in canon killed Tiamat in brutal fashion in ''Film/GodzillaXKongTheNewEmpire''. The [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/746325000481636352/ author]] has since confirmed in an ask that the [=AbraxasVerse=] Tiamat is SparedByTheAdaptation.SparedByTheAdaptation.
** Though it's not (just yet) been officially canonized in the [=AbraxasVerse=], the widespread fan-take on [=AbraxasVerse=] Spacegodzilla and his situation on the author's Tumblr blog ended up being ''quite'' a dead ringer for Shimo's own situation in ''Godzilla x Kong: The New Empire'' a few years later: a powerful and once-noble Titan who's been tragically captured, enslaved and tortured by a malevolent intelligence since ancient times, and is still being {{forced into evil}} in the present day despite their inherently benevolent personality.


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** As noted [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/746430388045496320/ here]]; before ''Film/GodzillaXKongTheNewEmpire'' was released, there was a fan suggestion on the author's blog that the fic's fandom's widespread take on an [=AbraxasVerse=] version of Spacegodzilla[[note]]Wherein Spacegodzilla is Godzilla's elder brother called Ozymandias, having been infected by a sentient crystalline PuppeteerParasite by Gigan's servants after they abducted him eons ago, which [[ForcedIntoEvil forces him into evil]] and tortures him[[/note]] could take Shimo's place as half of a BigBadEnsemble in an [=AbraxasVerse=] version of the movie's events. Then the movie proper came out, and it turned out that Shimo's circumstances and morality in the movie are already ''very'' similar to that which was previously invented for Spacegodzilla in the ''Abraxas'' sub-fandom.
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** Did Ichi and Ni mean it when they told a vengeful Thor that he was {{not worth killing}} themselves after he failed to stand against Ghidorah with the rest of his kind, or were they just saying that to get under his skin given that they're [[{{Sadist}} Ichi and Ni]]? [[spoiler:This ''is'' occurring after Ichi and Ni have picked up the concept of lying, which explicitly was formerly [[CannotTellALie alien to Ghidorah's heads]]. Notably; Ichi, who Word of God notes is happy to use {{exact words}} to mislead, never denies that he'll hurt Thor anyway but just rhetorically and mockingly asks why they should bother with him. On the other hand, Ni, who Word of God notes much prefers {{brutal honesty}} and has none of Ichi's interest in deception, straight up tells Thor "YOU'RE NOT EVEN WORTH MOUNTING" and "WE'VE NOT THE TIME NOR INTEREST TO PLAY WITH YOU"]].


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** The widespread headcanon on the author's Tumblr blog that Tiamat in [=AbraxasVerse=] was the mate of Godzilla's missing brother who never completely got over losing him to Gigan, though not officially canonized in the [=AbraxasVerse=], became more morbid after Godzilla in canon killed Tiamat in brutal fashion in ''Film/GodzillaXKongTheNewEmpire''. The [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/746325000481636352/ author]] has since confirmed in an ask that the [=AbraxasVerse=] Tiamat is SparedByTheAdaptation.


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** The fic's first chapter was posted a couple years before, and its final chapter just nine days before; the release of the pilot for the indie web series ''WebAnimation/MurderDrones''. Both works see a main female character who originates in the muggle population, bonding with and reforming the childish, put-down-upon but capable, male TokenGoodTeammate of a brutal trio of yellow-themed, inhuman, genocidal monsters. Said monster trios in both works come from space, seek to wipe the aforementioned muggles off the planet, and the female protagonist is transforming into a monster analogous to them over the course of the story. Both works also start these events in a barren, subarctic land with an elaborate underground bunker. And like San in ''Abraxas'', N in ''Murder Drones'' is also despised and viciously put down by his original trio's leader for ostensibly being useless. [[spoiler:''Murder Drones'' also sees the leader of the trio come BackFromTheDead, and it ''also'' sees the not-quite-dead remains of one of the trio give rise to an even more formless and eldritch monstrosity which becomes TheAssimilator]].

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** Overlapping with HeartwarmingInHindsight, Vivienne Graham's personal story in this fic ended up baring similarities to that of Keiko Miura-Randa in the 2023 Franchise/MonsterVerse TV series ''Series/MonarchLegacyOfMonsters'': she's [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated declared dead]] for a significant length of time after seemingly being killed by a hostile Titan, and she survives due to science-fiction circumstances that were more fantastical than anything anyone InUniverse expected but she's cut off from civilization for months. Like how Vivienne only discovers months after it happened that the most important man in her life has died during her absence, so Keiko discovers that one of the two most important men in ''her'' life has died during her absence, and the other one dies within hours of her reuniting with him.


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** Overlapping with HarsherInHindsight, Vivienne Graham's personal story in this fic ended up baring similarities to that of Keiko Muira-Randa in the 2023 Franchise/MonsterVerse TV series ''Series/MonarchLegacyOfMonsters'': she's [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated declared dead]] for a significant length of time after seemingly being killed by a hostile Titan, but she survives due to science-fiction circumstances that were more fantastical than anything anyone InUniverse expected, albeit cut off from the civilized world before she makes it back to their attention; leading to a BigDamnReunion with her loved ones.


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** [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/740810976672317440/ Word of God]] reveals that the Queen MUTO (Barb) is melancholic and depressed, because she's currently the only one of her kind, and she knows she can't ever risk siring MUTO children without endangering the world and drawing Godzilla's wrath – it's to a point where human Titan-observers have noticed the signs of depression in how she behaves in the wild. She also implicitly gets some flack from other Titans for being a member of the MUTO species whom are described as parasites. All this because she had the misfortune of being born into a very dangerous species.
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** Esfir is evidently aware of [[spoiler:the Zmeyevich's not-quite-human nature]] when tending her baby bump, and she bemoans the death of [[spoiler:her three "husbands"]]. Is this behaviour due to her child having a kind of DemonicPossession effect on her psychically, or is it indicative that she's fallen into a kind of proxy StockholmSyndrome?

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** Esfir is evidently aware of [[spoiler:the Zmeyevich's not-quite-human nature]] when tending her baby bump, and she bemoans the death of [[spoiler:her three "husbands"]]. Is this behaviour due to her child having a kind of DemonicPossession effect on her psychically, or is it indicative that she's fallen into a kind of proxy StockholmSyndrome?UsefulNotes/StockholmSyndrome?
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: [[PosthumousCharacter Emma Russell]] briefly in Chapter 12; ''not'' in terms of how vile her methodology for trying to save the world was, but in terms of her inaction against Jonah after the latter threatened to have Madison's throat slit, which Madison brings up in the present in Chapter 12. Emma standing by and doing nothing is made out by Madison and Mark to be Emma endangering Madison via inaction, but anyone who's read the scene from the ''King of the Monsters'' novelization to which Madison is referring will know that Emma was doing nothing ''because'' Jonah made it clear to them that Emma's inaction was the only thing keeping his men from delivering on that threat.

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* UnintentionallySympathetic: [[PosthumousCharacter Emma Russell]] briefly in Chapter 12; ''not'' in terms of how vile her methodology for trying to save the world was, but in terms of her inaction against Jonah after the latter threatened to have Madison's throat slit, which Madison brings up in the present in Chapter 12. Emma standing by and doing nothing is made out by Madison and Mark to be Emma endangering Madison via inaction, but anyone who's read the scene from the ''King of the Monsters'' novelization to which Madison is referring will know that Emma was doing nothing ''because'' Jonah made it clear to them that Emma's inaction that was the only thing keeping way she could prevent his men from delivering on that threat.
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** Note how Madison expressing disgust at how the late Emma did nothing after Jonah threatened to have Madison's throat slit comes directly after Madison chided the fact Emma didn't grieve putting hundreds of civilians in danger when she awakened Rodan. Is it Emma not retaliating over Jonah's threat that Madison is pissed off at, or is it Emma's MoralMyopia in sacrificing hundreds of innocent families for her plan while thinking her own daughter's life mattered more than billions of others that enrages Madison?



* CreatorBreakdown: Hrodvitnon worked on the ''Abraxas: Empty Fullness'' one-shot "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/46831738/chapters/117962629 Sermones ad Mortuos]]" partly as a coping mechanism after the death of a family-member.



** This fic portrayed a pair of human-Titan PlatonicLifePartners being in a life-threatening situation at the climax[[spoiler:, where the Titan almost dies in front of the human (transhuman in Vivienne's case), who can only watch;]] about a year before the [=MonsterVerse=] canon did so with [[Film/GodzillaVsKong Kong and Jia]], then [[WesternAnimation/SkullIsland2023 Annie and Dog]].



** This fic portrayed a human (well, [[TranshumanAbomination transhuman]] here) and a Titan character having a direct, explicit, emotional and lifelong bond to each-other over a year before the Franchise/MonsterVerse first started portraying this phenomenon from ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' onward, with [[BadassAndChildDuo Kong and Jia]] and then with [[WesternAnimation/SkullIsland2023 Annie and Dog]] (Kong's more distant protection of the Iwis and temporary protectiveness of Weaver in ''Film/KongSkullIsland'' (2017) notwithstanding).



** The concept of reptilian humanoids (born from Ghidorah's flesh no less) walking amongst humanity in secret while remaining beneath suspicion, which was first seriously hinted at in Chapter 13, becomes a lot funnier following the release of ''Godzilla vs. Kong'', where a {{conspiracy theorist}} believes that the movie's human villains whom are harnessing Ghidorah's remains are connected to the ReptilianConspiracy.

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** The concept of reptilian humanoids (born from Ghidorah's flesh no less) walking amongst humanity in secret while remaining beneath suspicion, which was first seriously hinted at in Chapter 13, becomes a lot funnier following the release of ''Godzilla vs. Kong'', where a {{conspiracy theorist}} believes that the movie's human villains whom are harnessing Ghidorah's remains are connected to the ReptilianConspiracy. Lampshaded by the author in [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/708556863684362240/ these two]] [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/721293093764251648/ non-canon snippets]].


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** In San's memories of encountering the ancient Bone Singer, when the past San is joining his brothers in insisting there's no hope for the Bone Singer and he's asking questions about the possibility the Bone Singer is wrong, is this the pre-Vivienne San just trying to indulge his sadistic pleasure by being a rhetorical HopeCrusher like his brothers are, or is he genuinely questioning the Bone Singer's statements out of curious inquiry whilst repeating the beliefs that his eons as part of Ghidorah have made him regard are fact? Considering San's pre-CharacterDevelopment personality, San-2/Youngest Brother's characterization, and the way ''King of the Monsters'' originally characterized San; maybe it's a bit of both?

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** In San's memories of encountering the ancient Bone Singer, when the past San is joining his brothers in insisting there's no hope for the Bone Singer and he's asking questions about the possibility the Bone Singer is wrong, is this the pre-Vivienne San just trying to indulge his sadistic pleasure by being a rhetorical HopeCrusher like his brothers are, or is he genuinely questioning the Bone Singer's statements out of curious inquiry whilst repeating the beliefs that his eons as part of Ghidorah have made him regard are as fact? Considering San's pre-CharacterDevelopment personality, San-2/Youngest Brother's characterization, and the way ''King of the Monsters'' originally characterized San; maybe it's a bit of both?


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** San too. Interestingly, even before his HeelRealization, he fails to quite qualify as a JerkassWoobie; since he genuinely doesn't understand why his actions make his new sister (who he's genuinely protective and nurturing towards) so upset, and literally everyone he kills inbetween the fic's beginning and his Heel Realization was not only an AssholeVictim but he only attacked them after they provoked him. (Although San-2/Youngest Brother's behavior demonstrates that San very much had the potential to be a Jerkass Woobie if the right circumstances had arisen before his CharacterDevelopment began.) Anyway, San and his brothers already share a CryForTheDevil origin story, and suffice to say that San didn't get treated well by his sociopathic brothers, especially since he was practically the TokenGoodTeammate of them; being utterly starved of affection and abused by Ichi and Ni whenever he got curious, for ''billions of years''. Then when San gets separated from his brothers and he fuses with a new, non-cruel sibling in the form of Vivienne, she at first is reluctant to trust let alone be affectionate with him to his dismay, and he shares in most if not all of her TraumaCongaLine over the story. [[spoiler:It doesn't stop for San after the fic's ending for San either: one of the first and closest mother figures he's had in his eons-long life dies just months after he started getting to know her, and the fact that he's unused to feeling grief after having been part of Ghidorah for eons until recently only makes the loss even ''harder'' for him]].

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** San too. Interestingly, even before his HeelRealization, he fails to quite qualify as a JerkassWoobie; since he genuinely doesn't understand why his actions make his new sister (who he's genuinely protective and nurturing towards) so upset, and literally everyone he kills inbetween the fic's beginning and his Heel Realization was not only an AssholeVictim but he only attacked them after they provoked him. (Although San-2/Youngest Brother's behavior demonstrates that San very much had the potential to be a Jerkass Woobie if the right circumstances had arisen before his CharacterDevelopment began.) Anyway, San and his brothers already share a CryForTheDevil origin story, and suffice to say that San didn't get treated well by his sociopathic brothers, especially since he was practically the TokenGoodTeammate of them; being utterly starved of affection and abused by Ichi and Ni whenever he got curious, for ''billions of years''. Then when San gets separated from his brothers and he fuses with a new, non-cruel sibling in the form of Vivienne, she at first is reluctant to trust let alone be affectionate with him to his dismay, and he shares in most if not all of her TraumaCongaLine over the story. [[spoiler:It doesn't stop for San after the fic's ending for San either: one of the first and closest mother figures he's had in his eons-long life dies just months after he started getting to know her, and the fact that he's unused to feeling grief after having been part of Ghidorah for eons until recently only makes the loss even ''harder'' for him]].

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** Somewhat. It's open to interpretation in the film whether Vivienne was instantly crushed when Ghidorah's jaws shut around her, was crushed to death with the ice a few seconds later or went down Ghidorah's oesophagus still alive. In this fic, it's confirmed by Vivienne's flashbacks it was the latter.
** The fic does this for Serizawa's HeroicSacrifice in the movie and [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it. It's suggested in [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13357907/11 Chapter 11]] that he was motivated not just by the necessity of reviving Godzilla, but also partly by the hope he'd be with Vivienne again in death. But she was actually being slowly brought back to life the entire time, so his sacrifice instead cut off their chances of ever seeing each-other again in the same life.

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** Somewhat. It's open to interpretation in the film whether Vivienne was instantly crushed when Ghidorah's jaws shut around her, was crushed to death with the ice a few seconds later or went down Ghidorah's oesophagus still alive. In this fic, it's confirmed by Vivienne's flashbacks it was the latter.
** The fic does this for Serizawa's HeroicSacrifice in the movie and [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it. It's suggested in [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13357907/11 Chapter 11]] that he was motivated not just by the necessity of reviving Godzilla, but also partly by the hope he'd [[TogetherInDeath be with Vivienne again in death. death]]. But she was actually being slowly brought back to life the entire time, so his sacrifice death by self-sacrifice instead cut off their chances of ever seeing each-other again in the same life.



** Hell, the [=MonsterVerse's=] entire [[spoiler:RunningGag of San losing his head]] becomes this in light of what happens to Monster X in Chapter 16.

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** Hell, the [=MonsterVerse's=] entire [[spoiler:RunningGag of San losing his head]] becomes this is a lot less funny in light of what happens to Monster X in Chapter 16.



** In a slightly twisted way, San's reaction to watching Ghidorah's middle head eat Vivienne in ''Film/GodzillaKingOfTheMonsters2019'' (San's head is leaning in close and chirping softly while Ichi eats her) becomes this. Whereas in the film it looks like San is being ObsessedWithFood and futilely asking for scraps from his brother before he turns his attention to making pickings out of the other humans; in this story's context, it seems more like the pre-CharacterDevelopment San is appeased that his favorite human is now with him and soon to become like him, and it's as if his chirps are him murmuring soothingly to her.

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** In a slightly twisted way, San's reaction to watching Ghidorah's middle head eat Vivienne in ''Film/GodzillaKingOfTheMonsters2019'' (San's ''Film/GodzillaKingOfTheMonsters2019''[[note]]San's head is leaning in close and chirping softly while Ichi eats her) becomes this. Whereas in her[[/note]]. In the film film, it looks like San is merely being ObsessedWithFood {{obsessed with food}} and futilely asking for scraps from his brother brother, before he turns his attention to making pickings out of the other humans; but in this story's fic's context, it seems more like on a rewatch of the film as if the pre-CharacterDevelopment San is appeased pleased that his favorite human is now with him and soon to become like him, and it's as if his chirps are him murmuring soothingly to her.



** The concept of reptilian humanoids (born from Ghidorah's flesh no less) walking amongst humanity in secret while remaining beneath suspicion, which was first seriously hinted at in Chapter 13, becomes a lot funnier following the release of ''Godzilla vs. Kong'', where a {{conspiracy theorist}} believes that the movie's human villains whom are harnessing Ghidorah's remains are connected to the ReptilianConspiracy.



** If Jonah doesn't cross it by using Viv and San as guinea pigs for testing ammunition due to their HealingFactor, then he definitely crosses it when it's revealed in Chapter 6 that he's been [[spoiler:using the mercenaries' refugee labor as unwilling test-subjects for experiments with Ghidorah's DNA which has essentially turned them into {{Artificial Zombie}}s]]. Vivienne certainly feels the latter is Jonah's absolute MEH InUniverse.
** With Ghidorah (San's brothers Ichi and Ni), it's definitely not a case of if but ''when'' they cross it. It's revealed in Chapter 8 that they destroyed numerous inhabited alien worlds before arriving on Earth (this could be considered an MEH for Ichi/Eldest Brother as the trio's leader); it's later revealed that [[spoiler:not only are San's regenerating brothers aware of the Many but they're actively ''exploiting'' the walking, spreading FateWorseThanDeath; probably the latest possible crossing is when Ghidorah gleefully allows [=MaNi=] to inflict ColdBloodedTorture on Viv and San]].
** The absolute latest possible MEH crossing for [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is just one chapter after he was introduced as an autonomous creature; when he [[spoiler:mercilessly and ferociously tortures Vivienne while using RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil psychology, and he attempts to murder San in front of her in the same way that Ichi originally killed Vivienne]].

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** If Jonah doesn't cross it by using Viv and San as guinea pigs for testing ammunition due to their HealingFactor, then he definitely crosses it when it's revealed in Chapter 6 that he's been [[spoiler:using the mercenaries' refugee labor as unwilling test-subjects for experiments with Ghidorah's DNA which has have essentially turned them into {{Artificial Zombie}}s]]. [[ArtificialZombie zombies]]]]. InUniverse, Vivienne [[ThisIsUnforgivable certainly feels feels]] that the latter is Jonah's absolute MEH InUniverse.
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** With Ghidorah (San's San's brothers Ichi and Ni), Ni, it's definitely not a case of if but ''when'' they cross it. It's revealed in Chapter 8 that they Ghidorah destroyed numerous inhabited alien worlds before arriving on Earth (this could be considered an MEH for Ichi/Eldest Brother as the trio's leader); it's leader). It's later revealed that [[spoiler:not only are San's regenerating brothers aware of the Many but they're actively ''exploiting'' the walking, spreading FateWorseThanDeath; probably FateWorseThanDeath for their own purposes. Probably the latest possible crossing is when Ghidorah gleefully allows [=MaNi=] to inflict ColdBloodedTorture on Viv and San]].
** The absolute latest possible MEH crossing for [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is just one chapter after he was introduced as an autonomous creature; when he [[spoiler:mercilessly and ferociously tortures Vivienne while using RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil psychology, and he attempts to murder San in front of her in the same way that Ichi originally killed Vivienne]].her]].



* TakeThatScrappy: Emma Russell posthumously remains unforgiven by Vivienne and her own daughter especially for her actions. In Chapter 12, Madison and Mark's criticisms of her actions subtly include things that audiences found made Emma UnintentionallyUnsympathetic or downright detestable in ''Film/GodzillaKingOfTheMonsters2019''.
* UnexpectedCharacter: The Skullcrawlers making an appearance was quite a surprise to a few readers.

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* TakeThatScrappy: Emma Russell posthumously remains unforgiven by Vivienne and her own daughter especially for her actions. In Chapter 12, Madison and Mark's criticisms of her actions subtly include things that audiences found made Emma UnintentionallyUnsympathetic {{unintentionally unsympathetic}} or downright detestable in ''Film/GodzillaKingOfTheMonsters2019''.
* UnexpectedCharacter: The Skullcrawlers making an appearance showing up was quite a surprise to a few readers.



** San too. Interestingly, even before his HeelRealization, he fails to quite qualify as a JerkassWoobie; since he genuinely doesn't understand why his actions make his new sister (who he's genuinely protective and nurturing towards) so upset, and literally everyone he kills inbetween the fic's beginning and his Heel Realization was not only an AssholeVictim but he only attacked them after they provoked him. (Although San-2/Youngest Brother's behavior demonstrates that San very much had the potential to be a Jerkass Woobie if the right circumstances had arisen before his CharacterDevelopment began.) Anyway, San and his brothers already share a CryForTheDevil origin story, and suffice to say that San didn't get treated well by his sociopathic brothers, especially since he was practically the TokenGoodTeammate of them; being utterly starved of affection and abused by Ichi and Ni whenever he got curious, for ''billions of years''. Then when San gets separated from his brothers and he fuses with a new, non-cruel sibling in the form of Vivienne, she at first is reluctant to trust let alone be affectionate with him to his dismay, and he shares in most if not all of her TraumaCongaLine over the story.

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** San too. Interestingly, even before his HeelRealization, he fails to quite qualify as a JerkassWoobie; since he genuinely doesn't understand why his actions make his new sister (who he's genuinely protective and nurturing towards) so upset, and literally everyone he kills inbetween the fic's beginning and his Heel Realization was not only an AssholeVictim but he only attacked them after they provoked him. (Although San-2/Youngest Brother's behavior demonstrates that San very much had the potential to be a Jerkass Woobie if the right circumstances had arisen before his CharacterDevelopment began.) Anyway, San and his brothers already share a CryForTheDevil origin story, and suffice to say that San didn't get treated well by his sociopathic brothers, especially since he was practically the TokenGoodTeammate of them; being utterly starved of affection and abused by Ichi and Ni whenever he got curious, for ''billions of years''. Then when San gets separated from his brothers and he fuses with a new, non-cruel sibling in the form of Vivienne, she at first is reluctant to trust let alone be affectionate with him to his dismay, and he shares in most if not all of her TraumaCongaLine over the story. [[spoiler:It doesn't stop for San after the fic's ending for San either: one of the first and closest mother figures he's had in his eons-long life dies just months after he started getting to know her, and the fact that he's unused to feeling grief after having been part of Ghidorah for eons until recently only makes the loss even ''harder'' for him]].
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* BetterThanCanon: Thanks to the characterization the Titans receive, the CharacterDevelopment undergone by Viv and San throughout the story, better-realized human characters, and well-executed action sequences (among other things), there are some readers who consider ''Abraxas'' to be superior to ''Film/GodzillaVsKong'' as a follow-up to ''Godzilla: King of the Monsters'', to the point that some wish ''Abraxas'' was canon to the Franchise/MonsterVerse itself.
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** In San's memories of encountering the ancient Bone Singer, when the past San is joining his brothers in insisting there's no hope for the Bone Singer and he's asking questions about the possibility the Bone Singer is wrong, is this the pre-Vivienne San just trying to indulge his sadistic pleasure by being a rhetorical HopeCrusher like his brothers are, or is he genuinely questioning the Bone Singer's statements out of curious inquiry whilst repeating the beliefs that his eons as part of Ghidorah have made him regard are fact? Considering San's pre-CharacterDevelopment personality, San-2/Youngest Brother's characterization, and the way ''King of the Monsters'' originally characterized San; maybe it's a bit of both?


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** As described [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/709985632633634816/ here]]; an alternative reading of Ni/Elder Brother needling Ichi/Eldest Brother in [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/709885319486554112/ this]] snippet over Ichi's [[YouRemindMeOfX reasons for hating Vivienne so discriminately]] is that Ni is bitter at Ichi [[spoiler:for failing to save the three brothers from the Makers all those eons ago]].
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* SalvagedStory:
** A lot of Franchise/MonsterVerse viewers were unimpressed at how the films squandered Creator/SallyHawkins[='=] role; portraying her as a pale SatelliteCharacter of Serizawa and regulating her characterization as anything beyond that strictly to the supplementary materials, before Vivienne was abruptly killed off in a less-than-reverent and plot-irrelevant manner in ''King of the Monsters''. This fic reveals at the beginning that Vivienne is alive and slowly being metamorphosed inside San's decapitated head, because Ghidorah actually had bigger plans for her than just a quick snack when it ate her; and she is one of the fic's two main protagonists.
** ''King of the Monsters'' was also criticized for killing off Serizawa, with many feeling it was too soon, that it squandered the character's potential, and that on top of the film killing off Vivienne as mentioned above it was like the film was cutting the [=MonsterVerse=] off from its roots in ''Film/Godzilla2014'' by killing off the humans from that film. While Serizawa is indeed dead in this fic [[spoiler:as the identity we knew]], he is a significant PosthumousCharacter throughout, [[spoiler:and it's [[MaybeMagicMaybeMundane heavily implied]] that Manda might be Serizawa's amnesiac {{reincarnation}}]].
** Some ''King of the Monsters'' viewers, the author included, found Mark Russell's {{jerkass}} attitude insufferable even if they understood where he was coming from, and the fact that Vivienne's above-discussed death in the film occurred partly because of his misfortune and her kindness in the downed Osprey probably didn't do him any favors among those detractors. In this fic, it's shown that after the movie's ending, Mark is haunted by his perceived accidental role in Vivienne's death and has SurvivorGuilt over it, which is compounded by a large portion of the Monarch staff who liked Vivienne [[YouShouldHaveDiedInstead silently resenting that he didn't die in her place]]. Mark's attitude problems and lingering character flaws also catch up to him in a couple other ways, with Mariko giving him a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech brutal dressing-down]] the moment he starts having another MisdirectedOutburst like in the film. Even Mark himself makes some self-disparaging remarks about his behavior during the movie early on in the fic.
** Emma Russell was probably the [=MonsterVerse's=] biggest Base-Breaking Character as well as it's most UnintentionallyUnsympathetic, widely reviled for her monstrous {{doublethink}} in "honoring" her late son's death in a Titan attack by knowingly engineering many more Titan attacks which will cause millions more children's deaths and grieving families, and for her MoralMyopia in sentencing any and everyone she cared about who wasn't Madison (including Vivienne and even Madison's father) to die. [[HatesTheirParent Madison]], Mark, [[EtTuBrute Vivienne]] and the other people whom Emma was once close friends and family with now at best think of her morosely or at worst they despise her after knowing what she did; calling her out on the above problems that the movie's viewers had with her, and at least some of them think (like the ''King of the Monsters'' audience did) that Emma's HeroicSacrifice doesn't clear her of all the atrocities she committed over the course of the film. The thought of being like her mother is enough to make Madison freeze up in fear for a moment.
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** A lot of Franchise/MonsterVerse viewers were unimpressed at how the films squandered Creator/SallyHawkins[='=] role; reserving most of Vivienne's characterization beyond her being a pale SatelliteCharacter of Serizawa strictly for the supplementary materials, before Vivienne was killed off in a less-than-reverent and plot-irrelevant manner in ''King of the Monsters''. This fic reveals at the beginning that Vivienne is alive and slowly being metamorphosed inside San's decapitated head, because Ghidorah actually had bigger plans for her when it ate her, and she's one of the two main protagonists.

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** A lot of Franchise/MonsterVerse viewers were unimpressed at how the films squandered Creator/SallyHawkins[='=] role; reserving most of Vivienne's characterization beyond portraying her being as a pale SatelliteCharacter of Serizawa and regulating her characterization as anything beyond that strictly for to the supplementary materials, before Vivienne was abruptly killed off in a less-than-reverent and plot-irrelevant manner in ''King of the Monsters''. This fic reveals at the beginning that Vivienne is alive and slowly being metamorphosed inside San's decapitated head, because Ghidorah actually had bigger plans for her than just a quick snack when it ate her, her; and she's she is one of the fic's two main protagonists.
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** The Russian military are portrayed as intelligent badasses whom are much more competent in a Kaiju battle than the U.S. military in [=MonsterVerse=] canon ever was. Fast-forward to the year after the fic's completion, and the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2022_Russian_invasion_of_Ukraine Russian war on Ukraine]] has shattered the Russian military's international image as one of the most effective militaries in the world as their many shortcomings and inadequacies came to light amidst the conflict. Maybe "Hilarious" isn't the most appropriate word to use whilst the war is ongoing, but it's certainly Ironic in Hindsight.

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** The Russian military are portrayed as intelligent badasses whom are much more competent in a Kaiju battle than the U.S. military in [=MonsterVerse=] canon ever was. Fast-forward to the year after the fic's completion, and the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2022_Russian_invasion_of_Ukraine Russian war on Ukraine]] has shattered the Russian military's international image as one of the most effective militaries in the world world, as their many shortcomings and inadequacies came to light amidst the conflict. Maybe "Hilarious" isn't the most appropriate word to use whilst the war is ongoing, but it's certainly Ironic in Hindsight.

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** The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' {{novelization}} upped the above, bearing some '''striking''' similarities to plot elements of ''Abraxas'' that were posted months before the novel came out. The novelization too opened up with criminals taking up residence in an abandoned complex in [[spoiler:Russian]] territory and looking to inhumanely take advantage of a captured Titan (and a former Monarch operative is among their number in both stories no less). The novel also happened to feature a Monarch operative who survived the destruction of not just any one of the seventeen-plus outposts during the Mass Awakening but ''Outpost 58'' specifically! One has to wonder if great ''Godzilla''-fan minds really think alike or if Greg Keyes[[note]]The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' novelization's author[[/note]] was reading ''Abraxas'' online while he worked on the novelization.

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** The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' {{novelization}} upped the above, bearing some '''striking''' similarities to plot elements of ''Abraxas'' that were posted months before the novel came out. The novelization too opened up with criminals taking up residence in an abandoned complex in [[spoiler:Russian]] territory and looking to inhumanely take advantage of a captured Titan (and a former Monarch operative is among their number in both stories no less). The novel also happened to feature a Monarch operative who survived the destruction of not just any one of the seventeen-plus outposts during the Mass Awakening but ''Outpost 58'' specifically! One has to wonder if great ''Godzilla''-fan minds really think alike or if Greg Keyes[[note]]The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' novelization's author[[/note]] was reading ''Abraxas'' online while he worked on the novelization. The author [[https://www.tumblr.com/hrodvitnon/703365355024859136/ said]] that she was just as surprised as we were by the parallels.


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** The Russian military are portrayed as intelligent badasses whom are much more competent in a Kaiju battle than the U.S. military in [=MonsterVerse=] canon ever was. Fast-forward to the year after the fic's completion, and the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2022_Russian_invasion_of_Ukraine Russian war on Ukraine]] has shattered the Russian military's international image as one of the most effective militaries in the world as their many shortcomings and inadequacies came to light amidst the conflict. Maybe "Hilarious" isn't the most appropriate word to use whilst the war is ongoing, but it's certainly Ironic in Hindsight.


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** A lot of Franchise/MonsterVerse viewers were unimpressed at how the films squandered Creator/SallyHawkins[='=] role; reserving most of Vivienne's characterization beyond her being a pale SatelliteCharacter of Serizawa strictly for the supplementary materials, before Vivienne was killed off in a less-than-reverent and plot-irrelevant manner in ''King of the Monsters''. This fic reveals at the beginning that Vivienne is alive and slowly being metamorphosed inside San's decapitated head, because Ghidorah actually had bigger plans for her when it ate her, and she's one of the two main protagonists.
** ''King of the Monsters'' was also criticized for killing off Serizawa, with many feeling it was too soon, that it squandered the character's potential, and that on top of the film killing off Vivienne as mentioned above it was like the film was cutting the [=MonsterVerse=] off from its roots in ''Film/Godzilla2014'' by killing off the humans from that film. While Serizawa is indeed dead in this fic [[spoiler:as the identity we knew]], he is a significant PosthumousCharacter throughout, [[spoiler:and it's [[MaybeMagicMaybeMundane heavily implied]] that Manda might be Serizawa's amnesiac {{reincarnation}}]].
** Some ''King of the Monsters'' viewers, the author included, found Mark Russell's {{jerkass}} attitude insufferable even if they understood where he was coming from, and the fact that Vivienne's above-discussed death in the film occurred partly because of his misfortune and her kindness in the downed Osprey probably didn't do him any favors among those detractors. In this fic, it's shown that after the movie's ending, Mark is haunted by his perceived accidental role in Vivienne's death and has SurvivorGuilt over it, which is compounded by a large portion of the Monarch staff who liked Vivienne [[YouShouldHaveDiedInstead silently resenting that he didn't die in her place]]. Mark's attitude problems and lingering character flaws also catch up to him in a couple other ways, with Mariko giving him a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech brutal dressing-down]] the moment he starts having another MisdirectedOutburst like in the film. Even Mark himself makes some self-disparaging remarks about his behavior during the movie early on in the fic.
** Emma Russell was probably the [=MonsterVerse's=] biggest Base-Breaking Character as well as it's most UnintentionallyUnsympathetic, widely reviled for her monstrous {{doublethink}} in "honoring" her late son's death in a Titan attack by knowingly engineering many more Titan attacks which will cause millions more children's deaths and grieving families, and for her MoralMyopia in sentencing any and everyone she cared about who wasn't Madison (including Vivienne and even Madison's father) to die. [[HatesTheirParent Madison]], Mark, [[EtTuBrute Vivienne]] and the other people whom Emma was once close friends and family with now at best think of her morosely or at worst they despise her after knowing what she did; calling her out on the above problems that the movie's viewers had with her, and at least some of them think (like the ''King of the Monsters'' audience did) that Emma's HeroicSacrifice doesn't clear her of all the atrocities she committed over the course of the film. The thought of being like her mother is enough to make Madison freeze up in fear for a moment.
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** The [=MonsterVerse's=] canon has been criticized for [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter doing barely anything with Vivienne's character before she was killed off in an unceremonious manner]], plus her characterization was largely confined to the supplementary and spin-off materials. Here, as one of the story's two main {{protagonist}}s she is given much more development and brought BackFromTheDead.
** In the old Toho movies, Ghidorah being DemotedToDragon over the course of the films and becoming the mere tool of {{Human Alien}}s was part of the character's VillainDecay. In [=AbraxasVerse=], [[spoiler:Ghidorah was originally created by human-like aliens as a BioweaponBeast, but it turned on them and exterminated them all with implicit ease]].
** A criticism levied at ''Film/GodzillaVsKong'' was Mark's HotBlooded and less-than-reasonable reaction to Godzilla's rampage, which seemed to some viewers like AesopAmnesia after the events of ''King of the Monsters'' and did nothing to endear him to most of his pre-existing detractors. After the movie's release, Hrodvitnon subsequently showed Mark in ''Abraxas'' and the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline developing a more respectful relationship with his daughter due to his CharacterDevelopment during the story (even inserting an opening for him to become just like ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' Mark which Mark and [[spoiler:Dr. Brooks]] then derail), and she portrayed him acting as a much more PlayedStraight example of the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
** In ''Godzilla vs. Kong'', [[spoiler:Maia Simmons]] is also somewhat considered a case of TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter. In the [=AbraxasVerse=], [[spoiler:Maia]] is a more rounded character, and her redeeming qualities and relationship with her father get expansion in the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline.
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** A criticism levied at ''Film/GodzillaVsKong'' was Mark's HotBlooded and less-than-reasonable reaction to Godzilla's rampage, which seemed to some viewers like AesopAmnesia after the events of ''King of the Monsters'' and did nothing to endear him to most of his pre-existing detractors. After the movie's release, Hrodvitnon subsequently showed Mark in ''Abraxas'' and the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline developing a more respectful relationship with his daughter due to his CharacterDevelopment during the story (even inserting an opening for him to become just like ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' Mark which Mark and [[spoiler:Dr. Brooks]] then derail), and she portrayed himacting as a much more PlayedStraight example of the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.

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** A criticism levied at ''Film/GodzillaVsKong'' was Mark's HotBlooded and less-than-reasonable reaction to Godzilla's rampage, which seemed to some viewers like AesopAmnesia after the events of ''King of the Monsters'' and did nothing to endear him to most of his pre-existing detractors. After the movie's release, Hrodvitnon subsequently showed Mark in ''Abraxas'' and the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline developing a more respectful relationship with his daughter due to his CharacterDevelopment during the story (even inserting an opening for him to become just like ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' Mark which Mark and [[spoiler:Dr. Brooks]] then derail), and she portrayed himacting him acting as a much more PlayedStraight example of the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
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** Another criticism of ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' was Mark's HotBlooded and less-than-reasonable reaction to Godzilla's rampage, which seemed to some viewers like AesopAmnesia after the events of ''King of the Monsters'' and did nothing to endear him to most of his pre-existing detractors. After the movie's release, Hrodvitnon subsequently showed Mark in ''Abraxas'' and the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline developing a more respectful relationship with his daughter due to his CharacterDevelopment during the story (even inserting an opening for him to become just like ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' Mark which Mark and [[spoiler:Dr. Brooks]] then derail), and she portrayed himacting as a much more PlayedStraight example of the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
** In ''Film/GodzillaVsKong'', [[spoiler:Maia Simmons]] is also somewhat considered a case of TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter. In the [=AbraxasVerse=], [[spoiler:Maia]] is a more rounded character, and her redeeming qualities and relationship with her father get expansion in the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline.

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** Another A criticism of ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' levied at ''Film/GodzillaVsKong'' was Mark's HotBlooded and less-than-reasonable reaction to Godzilla's rampage, which seemed to some viewers like AesopAmnesia after the events of ''King of the Monsters'' and did nothing to endear him to most of his pre-existing detractors. After the movie's release, Hrodvitnon subsequently showed Mark in ''Abraxas'' and the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline developing a more respectful relationship with his daughter due to his CharacterDevelopment during the story (even inserting an opening for him to become just like ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' Mark which Mark and [[spoiler:Dr. Brooks]] then derail), and she portrayed himacting as a much more PlayedStraight example of the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
** In ''Film/GodzillaVsKong'', ''Godzilla vs. Kong'', [[spoiler:Maia Simmons]] is also somewhat considered a case of TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter. In the [=AbraxasVerse=], [[spoiler:Maia]] is a more rounded character, and her redeeming qualities and relationship with her father get expansion in the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline.
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** Does [[spoiler:Ni/Elder Brother]] genuinely have a narcissistic lust to rape Monster X and indulge in Vivienne's resulting rage, or is he just [[spoiler:taking advantage of torture methods that will psychologically agonize and traumatize humans, which he and his brothers have learned from the Many's HiveMind]]? What we do know is [[spoiler:Ghidorah intends to use Vivienne as an BabyFactory for monsters, and it wants to break her down until she's just another AxCrazy piece of the Golden Demise]].

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** Does [[spoiler:Ni/Elder Brother]] genuinely have a narcissistic lust to rape Monster X and indulge in Vivienne's resulting rage, or is he just [[spoiler:taking advantage of torture methods that will psychologically agonize and traumatize humans, which he and his brothers have learned from the Many's HiveMind]]? What we do know is [[spoiler:Ghidorah intends to use Vivienne as an a BabyFactory for monsters, and it wants to break her down until she's just another AxCrazy piece of the Golden Demise]].



** Another criticism of ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' was Mark's HotBlooded and less-than-reasonable reaction to Godzilla's rampage, which seemed to some viewers like AesopAmnesia after the events of ''King of the Monsters'' and did nothing to endear him to many of his detractors. After the movie's release, Hrodvitnon subsequently showed Mark in ''Abraxas'' and the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline developing a more respectful relationship with his daughter due to his CharacterDevelopment during the story (even inserting an opening for him to become just like ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' Mark which Mark and [[spoiler:Dr. Brooks]] then derail), and acting as a much more PlayedStraight example of a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.

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** Another criticism of ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' was Mark's HotBlooded and less-than-reasonable reaction to Godzilla's rampage, which seemed to some viewers like AesopAmnesia after the events of ''King of the Monsters'' and did nothing to endear him to many most of his pre-existing detractors. After the movie's release, Hrodvitnon subsequently showed Mark in ''Abraxas'' and the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline developing a more respectful relationship with his daughter due to his CharacterDevelopment during the story (even inserting an opening for him to become just like ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' Mark which Mark and [[spoiler:Dr. Brooks]] then derail), and acting she portrayed himacting as a much more PlayedStraight example of a the ReasonableAuthorityFigure.



** After what [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother did to Monster X in Chapter 16, [[spoiler:Monster X delivering a slow and merciless RasputinianDeath on him]] is ''immensely satisfying''. But watching [[spoiler:[=MaNi's=] [[SmallNameBigEgo big ego]] shatter and his formerly nigh-impenetrable mania collapsing into panic and despair when Monster X is doing to [=MaNi=] just what [=MaNi=] tried to do to San]] is by far the crux of the catharsis.

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** After what [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother did to Monster X in Chapter 16, [[spoiler:Monster X delivering a slow and merciless beatdown and possible RasputinianDeath on him]] is ''immensely satisfying''. But watching [[spoiler:[=MaNi's=] [[SmallNameBigEgo big ego]] shatter and his formerly nigh-impenetrable mania collapsing into panic and despair when Monster X is doing to [=MaNi=] just what [=MaNi=] tried to do to San]] is by far the crux of the catharsis.



** Somewhat. It's open to interpretation in the film whether Vivienne was instantly crushed when Ghidorah's jaws shut around her, was crushed to death with the ice a few seconds later, or went down Ghidorah's oesophagus still alive. In this fic, it's confirmed by Vivienne's flashbacks it was the latter.

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** Somewhat. It's open to interpretation in the film whether Vivienne was instantly crushed when Ghidorah's jaws shut around her, was crushed to death with the ice a few seconds later, later or went down Ghidorah's oesophagus still alive. In this fic, it's confirmed by Vivienne's flashbacks it was the latter.



** Once ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' came out, it turned out the filmmakers had the same idea as Hrodvitnon did in ''Abraxas''; about San's severed head essentially birthing a classic Toho Kaiju, which houses the head's consciousness and which possesses red-colored energy powers unique to the new incarnation's design.

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** Once ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' came out, it turned out the filmmakers had the same idea as Hrodvitnon did in ''Abraxas''; about San's severed head essentially birthing a classic Toho Kaiju, Kaiju which both houses the head's consciousness and which possesses red-colored energy powers that are unique to the new incarnation's design.



* JerksAreWorseThanVillains: Alan Jonah is a calm SmugSnake who basically orchestrates experiments that would probably make UsefulNotes/JosefMengele look forward to seeing him in Hell, and he previously caused millions of deaths around the world with his actions before the fic's start; Ghidorah is 2/3 a [[TheSociopath Sociopathic]] OmnicidalManiac which has literally wiped entire worlds clean of life before coming to Earth to do the same to us, nevermind its plans to break down and torture Vivienne ''horrendously''; and [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is a part-Ghidorah, part-Many monster whose lack of wits and gleeful propensity for inflicting only the most heinous forms of ColdBloodedTorture on Viv and San arguably makes him the single biggest HateSink in the entire story. But all three of these antagonists, '''even [=MaNi=]'''; even if they all have a bit of Hate Sink to them, their personalities and [=MaNi's=] design at least make them ''memorable'', unlike... Who was he again? Oh yeah, Guard B-04, who is accurately described by Vivienne as nothing more than a juvenile thug -- compared to the above three monsters, his only onscreen crimes amount to viciously and crudely heckling Vivienne for his own amusement whilst she's in no position to fight back, and ''mocking a little girl's grief at her HonoraryAunt[='s=] death''; basically he's that dickless prick who everyone in RealLife probably encountered at some point in high school. As such, it's difficult to feel much sympathy for B-04 when San finally puts a ''permanent'' end to the former's cruel antics.
* LoveToHate: San's two brothers (especially Ichi/Eldest Brother, the middle head) remain just as sociopathic and monstrously cruel here as the Golden Demise has ever been; but this fic also delves more into the three heads' independent personalities and abusive codependent relationships with each-other, and it provides a FreudianExcuse expansion of Ghidorah's backstory, giving Ghidorah a lot of new character depth. It probably also makes Ichi and Ni interesting and rewatchable (re-readable) villains that they display distinct personalities and speech patterns with their AnimalTalk translated, including in Ichi's case a sophisticated sense of FauxAffablyEvil. This is in addition to Ghidorah exhibiting EldritchAbomination levels of EvilIsCool throughout the story, including a BrownNote effect, MasterOfYourDomain and the creation of [[UndeadAbomination the Many]]. At the same time, reading Ichi and Ni relentlessly and horrifically pull out any stops to [[spoiler:try and push Vivienne down a StartOfDarkness, even if that means murdering their own Youngest Brother's 'shed skin' without remorse, and also reading their plot to torment as many of their foes as possible with the deaths or [[FateWorseThanDeath worse]] of their loved ones before putting said foes in the ground]], makes us root against Ichi and Ni and look forward to their downfall.

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* JerksAreWorseThanVillains: Alan Jonah is a calm SmugSnake who basically orchestrates experiments that would probably make UsefulNotes/JosefMengele look forward to seeing him in Hell, and he previously caused millions of deaths around the world with his actions before the fic's start; Ghidorah is 2/3 a [[TheSociopath Sociopathic]] OmnicidalManiac which has literally wiped entire worlds clean of life before coming to Earth to do the same to us, nevermind its plans to break down and torture Vivienne ''horrendously''; and [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is a part-Ghidorah, part-Many monster whose lack of wits and gleeful propensity for inflicting only the most heinous forms of ColdBloodedTorture on Viv and San arguably makes him the single biggest HateSink in the entire story. But all three of these antagonists, '''even [=MaNi=]'''; even if they all have a bit of Hate Sink to them, their personalities and [=MaNi's=] design at least make them ''memorable'', unlike... Who was he again? Oh yeah, Guard B-04, who is accurately described by Vivienne as nothing more than a juvenile thug -- compared to the above three monsters, his only onscreen crimes amount to viciously and crudely heckling Vivienne for his own amusement whilst she's in no position to fight back, and ''mocking a little girl's grief at her HonoraryAunt[='s=] death''; basically death''. Basically, he's that dickless prick who everyone in RealLife probably encountered at some point in high school. As such, it's difficult to feel much sympathy for B-04 when San finally puts a ''permanent'' end to the former's cruel antics.
* LoveToHate: San's two brothers (especially Ichi/Eldest Brother, the middle head) remain just as sociopathic and monstrously cruel here as the Golden Demise has ever been; been, but this fic also delves more into the three heads' independent personalities and abusive codependent relationships with each-other, and it provides a FreudianExcuse expansion of Ghidorah's backstory, giving Ghidorah a lot of new character depth. It probably also makes Ichi and Ni interesting and rewatchable (re-readable) villains that they display distinct personalities and speech patterns with their AnimalTalk translated, including in Ichi's case a sophisticated sense of FauxAffablyEvil. This is in addition to Ghidorah exhibiting EldritchAbomination levels of EvilIsCool throughout the story, including a BrownNote effect, MasterOfYourDomain and the creation of [[UndeadAbomination the Many]]. At the same time, reading Ichi and Ni relentlessly and horrifically pull out any stops to [[spoiler:try and push Vivienne down a StartOfDarkness, even if that means murdering their own Youngest Brother's 'shed skin' without remorse, and also reading their plot to torment as many of their foes as possible with the deaths or [[FateWorseThanDeath worse]] of their loved ones before putting said foes in the ground]], makes us root against Ichi and Ni and look forward to their downfall.



** Ghidorah [[spoiler:pre-mortem and post-resurrection]] has a lot of subtext in this category towards Vivienne, as described under DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything on the main page. What really makes it worse is when [[spoiler:Ghidorah intends to forcibly use Monster X as a monster-spawning BabyFactory]] just to make Vivienne scream. That Ghidorah's [[spoiler:heads]] all consider the transformed Vivienne their sister ''and'' their daughter while doing this, and that a "shed skin" version of Ichi and Ni's ''born and raised'' brother San is the other half of Monster X's body, [[VillainousIncest only adds to the horror]].

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** Ghidorah [[spoiler:pre-mortem and post-resurrection]] has a lot ton of subtext in this category towards Vivienne, as described under DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything on the main page. What really makes it worse is when [[spoiler:Ghidorah intends to forcibly use Monster X as a monster-spawning BabyFactory]] just to make Vivienne scream. That Ghidorah's [[spoiler:heads]] all consider the transformed Vivienne their sister ''and'' their daughter while doing this, and that a "shed skin" version of Ichi and Ni's ''born and raised'' brother San is the other half of Monster X's body, [[VillainousIncest only adds to the horror]].



* OneTrueThreesome: The author herself seems to have this. She's given both Godzilla/Mothra and Godzilla/Vivienne ShipTease in the story and on her Tumblr in regards to it (it's implied Titans are no stranger to open relationships or polyamory), in addition to the more prominent Rodan/Monster X Ship Tease. Both threesome-pairings respectively are showing quite a bit of traction if the number of [=AbraxasVerse=]-related Asks on the author's Tumblr referring to them is any indication.

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* OneTrueThreesome: The author herself seems to have this. She's given both Godzilla/Mothra and Godzilla/Vivienne ShipTease in the story and on her Tumblr in regards regard to it (it's implied Titans are no stranger to open relationships or polyamory), in addition to the more prominent Rodan/Monster X Ship Tease. Both threesome-pairings respectively are showing quite a bit of traction if the number of [=AbraxasVerse=]-related Asks on the author's Tumblr referring to them is any indication.



** San too. Interestingly, even before his HeelRealization, he fails to quite qualify as a JerkassWoobie; since he genuinely doesn't understand why his actions make his new sister (who he's genuinely protective and nurturing towards) so upset, and literally everyone he kills inbetween the fic's beginning and his Heel Realization was not only an AssholeVictim but he only attacked them after they provoked him. (Although San-2/Youngest Brother's behavior demonstrates that San very much had the potential to be a Jerkass Woobie if the right circumstances had arisen before his CharacterDevelopment began.) Anyway; San and his brothers already share a CryForTheDevil origin story, and suffice to say that San didn't get treated well by his sociopathic brothers, especially since he was practically the TokenGoodTeammate of them; being utterly starved of affection and abused by Ichi and Ni whenever he got curious, for ''billions of years''. Then when San gets separated from his brothers and he fuses with a new, non-cruel sibling in the form of Vivienne, she at first is reluctant to trust let alone be affectionate with him to his dismay, and he shares in most if not all of her TraumaCongaLine over the story.

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** San too. Interestingly, even before his HeelRealization, he fails to quite qualify as a JerkassWoobie; since he genuinely doesn't understand why his actions make his new sister (who he's genuinely protective and nurturing towards) so upset, and literally everyone he kills inbetween the fic's beginning and his Heel Realization was not only an AssholeVictim but he only attacked them after they provoked him. (Although San-2/Youngest Brother's behavior demonstrates that San very much had the potential to be a Jerkass Woobie if the right circumstances had arisen before his CharacterDevelopment began.) Anyway; Anyway, San and his brothers already share a CryForTheDevil origin story, and suffice to say that San didn't get treated well by his sociopathic brothers, especially since he was practically the TokenGoodTeammate of them; being utterly starved of affection and abused by Ichi and Ni whenever he got curious, for ''billions of years''. Then when San gets separated from his brothers and he fuses with a new, non-cruel sibling in the form of Vivienne, she at first is reluctant to trust let alone be affectionate with him to his dismay, and he shares in most if not all of her TraumaCongaLine over the story.



* WoobieSpecies: The [[spoiler:Skullcrawlers]]. Their entire purpose during the story is to run afoul of a monstrosity so bad that it sends even ''[[HorrifyingTheHorror them]]'' fleeing in the opposite direction (not that that does them much good), and spend the rest of the story as victims of said monstrosity's nightmarish FateWorseThanDeath enslaved to [[spoiler:the Many]]'s will. Not to mention getting round up and used as cannon fodder by Project Talos.

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* WoobieSpecies: The [[spoiler:Skullcrawlers]]. Their entire purpose during the story is to run afoul of a monstrosity so bad that it sends even ''[[HorrifyingTheHorror them]]'' fleeing in the opposite direction (not that that does them much good), and they spend the rest of the story as victims of said monstrosity's nightmarish FateWorseThanDeath enslaved to [[spoiler:the Many]]'s will. Not to mention getting round up and used as cannon fodder by Project Talos.

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** Was [[spoiler:Sergeant Travis' suicide]] a DyingAsYourself, or purely something his advanced SanitySlippage forced him to?
** Tejada aiding the torch-and-bury operation after being apprehended: how much is she doing it voluntarily out of the goodness of her heart and how much of it is her pragmatically gaining leverage for a plea deal and/or commuted sentence for her crimes? Likewise with Mariko's cooperation with Monarch.

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** Was [[spoiler:Sergeant Travis' suicide]] a DyingAsYourself, or purely something his advanced SanitySlippage forced him to?
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** Tejada aiding the torch-and-bury operation after being apprehended: how apprehended. How much is she doing it voluntarily out of the goodness of her heart and how much of it is her she pragmatically gaining leverage for a plea deal and/or commuted sentence for her crimes? Likewise with Mariko's cooperation with Monarch.


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** Another criticism of ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' was Mark's HotBlooded and less-than-reasonable reaction to Godzilla's rampage, which seemed to some viewers like AesopAmnesia after the events of ''King of the Monsters'' and did nothing to endear him to many of his detractors. After the movie's release, Hrodvitnon subsequently showed Mark in ''Abraxas'' and the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline developing a more respectful relationship with his daughter due to his CharacterDevelopment during the story (even inserting an opening for him to become just like ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' Mark which Mark and [[spoiler:Dr. Brooks]] then derail), and acting as a much more PlayedStraight example of a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
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* HoYay: Anyone who FoeYay ships Ghidorah and Rodan based on ''King of the Monsters'' will likely enjoy reading San and Rodan's mutual displays of animosity towards each-other in this fic which can be easily interpreted as having the potential to veer into BelligerentSexualTension.

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* HoYay: Anyone who FoeYay ships Ghidorah and Rodan based on ''King of the Monsters'' will likely enjoy reading San and Rodan's mutual displays of animosity towards each-other in this fic which can be easily interpreted as having the potential to veer into BelligerentSexualTension.
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** The fic does this for Serizawa's HeroicSacrifice in the movie and [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it. It's suggested in [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13357907/11 Chapter 11]] that he was motivated not just by the necessity of reviving Godzilla, but also partly by the hope he'd be with Vivienne again in death. But she was actually being slowly brought back to life the entire time, so his sacrifice instead cut off their chances of seeing each-other again.

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** The fic does this for Serizawa's HeroicSacrifice in the movie and [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it. It's suggested in [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13357907/11 Chapter 11]] that he was motivated not just by the necessity of reviving Godzilla, but also partly by the hope he'd be with Vivienne again in death. But she was actually being slowly brought back to life the entire time, so his sacrifice instead cut off their chances of ever seeing each-other again.again in the same life.



** It's amusing, and uplifting for the pro-Titan crowd; when you realize that Vivienne, a woman who reveres the Titans as {{Physical God}}s, was thought by the world to have been eaten by one of the very monsters she worshipped (although Ghidorah was the only Titan she truly feared, even while it was frozen), but the world will likely at some point find out that what they thought was her death was actually her essentially being elevated to godhood.
** Jonah stating "Long live the king" in response to King Ghidorah taking over the Titans in ''King of the Monsters'' becomes this due to his fate in this story. His line in the film was somewhat sarcastic, but in ''Abraxas'' he gets [[spoiler:turned into a Ghidorah-worshipping fanatic]].
** In Franchise/MonsterVerse canon, Admiral Stenz is the only one of the three returning human characters from the [[Film/Godzilla2014 2014 film]] who isn't explicitly killed off in ''Film/GodzillaKingOfTheMonsters2019'' (although he has an UncertainDoom in the film's novelization, and a death scene that was shot for the movie but wasn't used). In ''Abraxas''' AlternateContinuity, if Serizawa is indeed [[spoiler:reincarnated as Manda]], then Stenz is the only one of the three who's KilledOffForReal (the author confirmed [[https://archiveofourown.org/comments/327211573 here]] that he's staying dead).

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** It's amusing, and uplifting for the pro-Titan crowd; when you realize that Vivienne, a woman who reveres the Titans as {{Physical God}}s, was thought by the world to have been eaten by one of the very monsters she worshipped (although Ghidorah was the only Titan she truly feared, feared even while it was frozen), but the world will likely at some point find out that what they thought was her death was actually her essentially being elevated to godhood.
** Jonah stating "Long live the king" in response to King Ghidorah taking over the Titans in ''King of the Monsters'' becomes this due to his fate in this story. His line in the film was somewhat sarcastic, but in ''Abraxas'' he gets [[spoiler:turned [[spoiler:fully turned into a Ghidorah-worshipping fanatic]].
** In Franchise/MonsterVerse canon, Admiral Stenz is the only one of the three returning human characters from the [[Film/Godzilla2014 2014 film]] who isn't explicitly killed off in ''Film/GodzillaKingOfTheMonsters2019'' (although he has an UncertainDoom in the film's novelization, and a death scene that was shot for the movie but wasn't used). In ''Abraxas''' AlternateContinuity, if Serizawa is indeed [[spoiler:reincarnated as Manda]], then Stenz is the only one of the three who's KilledOffForReal (the author confirmed [[https://archiveofourown.org/comments/327211573 here]] that he's staying dead).



** In this story, Ghidorah [[spoiler:being subjugated by asshole human(oid)s only for GoneHorriblyRight and GoneHorriblyWrong to ensue for said humanoids when Ghidorah pulls a TurnedAgainstTheirMasters and makes its jailers its first victims]], is Ghidorah's past. In [=MonsterVerse=] canon, it's instead more or less Ghidorah's future in ''Godzilla vs. Kong''.
** Watching Godzilla and Scylla team up in [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13357907/15/ Chapter 15]] is this, following the release of the [=MonsterVerse=] graphic novel ''Godzilla Dominion'' where Godzilla and Scylla's post-''King of the Monsters'' interactions are... friskier. The team-up gets even more hilarious in light of this when one considers [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/648764829724819456/ the author's suggestion]] that Kraken probably didn't answer Godzilla's summons out of simple lack of enthusiasm, and what that suggests about what terms Scylla is on with Godzilla in Abraxas-verse.
** Once ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' came out, it turned out the filmmakers had the same idea as Hrodvitnon did in ''Abraxas''; about San's severed head essentially birthing a classic Toho Kaiju which houses the head's consciousness and which furthermore possesses red-colored energy powers unique to the new incarnation.
** The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' {{novelization}} upped the above, bearing some '''striking''' similarities to plot elements of ''Abraxas'' that were posted months before the novel came out. The novelization too opened up with criminals taking up residence in an abandoned complex in [[spoiler:Russian]] territory and looking to inhumanely take advantage of a captured Titan (and a former Monarch operative is among their number in both stories no less). The novel also happened to feature a Monarch operative who survived the destruction of not just any one of the seventeen-plus outposts during the Mass Awakening but ''Outpost 58'' specifically! One has to wonder if great ''Godzilla''-fan minds really think alike or if Greg Keyes[[note]]The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' novelization's author[[/note]] has been reading ''Abraxas'' online.
*** Ren feeling jealous of Vivienne in [=AbraxasVerse=] becomes a bit more hilarious in light of the novelization's account of the Franchise/MonsterVerse-canon Ren's villainous motivations. In ''Abraxas'', Vivienne gets forcibly transformed from a human into a new Titan by San's severed head, with her mind and personality fully intact, and she has a few StagesOfMonsterGrief about this. In the ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' novelization, the [=MonsterVerse=] version of Ren is a GodhoodSeeker who actively ''wants'' to use San's head to wield a Titan's power through Mechagodzilla, but he only gets to do it briefly before the head in question kills him (or, in his novelization DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation, it seemingly grants Ren's wish by incorporating him into Mechagodzilla's consciousness at the price of digesting away Ren's identity).

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** In this story, Ghidorah [[spoiler:being subjugated by asshole human(oid)s only for GoneHorriblyRight and GoneHorriblyWrong to ensue for said humanoids when Ghidorah pulls a TurnedAgainstTheirMasters and makes its jailers its first victims]], is Ghidorah's past. In [=MonsterVerse=] canon, it's instead more or less Ghidorah's future in ''Godzilla vs. Kong''.
** Watching Godzilla and Scylla team up in [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13357907/15/ Chapter 15]] is this, following the release of the [=MonsterVerse=] graphic novel ''Godzilla Dominion'' (just two months following the chapter's release) where Godzilla and Scylla's post-''King of the Monsters'' interactions are... friskier. The team-up gets even more hilarious in light of this when one considers [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/648764829724819456/ the author's suggestion]] that Kraken probably didn't answer Godzilla's summons out of simple lack of enthusiasm, and what that suggests about what terms Scylla is on with Godzilla in Abraxas-verse.
** Once ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' came out, it turned out the filmmakers had the same idea as Hrodvitnon did in ''Abraxas''; about San's severed head essentially birthing a classic Toho Kaiju Kaiju, which houses the head's consciousness and which furthermore possesses red-colored energy powers unique to the new incarnation.
incarnation's design.
** The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' {{novelization}} upped the above, bearing some '''striking''' similarities to plot elements of ''Abraxas'' that were posted months before the novel came out. The novelization too opened up with criminals taking up residence in an abandoned complex in [[spoiler:Russian]] territory and looking to inhumanely take advantage of a captured Titan (and a former Monarch operative is among their number in both stories no less). The novel also happened to feature a Monarch operative who survived the destruction of not just any one of the seventeen-plus outposts during the Mass Awakening but ''Outpost 58'' specifically! One has to wonder if great ''Godzilla''-fan minds really think alike or if Greg Keyes[[note]]The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' novelization's author[[/note]] has been was reading ''Abraxas'' online.
online while he worked on the novelization.
*** Ren feeling jealous of Vivienne in [=AbraxasVerse=] becomes a bit more hilarious in light of the novelization's account of the Franchise/MonsterVerse-canon Ren's villainous motivations. In ''Abraxas'', Vivienne gets forcibly transformed from a human into a new Titan by San's severed head, with her mind and personality fully intact, and she has a few StagesOfMonsterGrief about this. In the ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' novelization, the [=MonsterVerse=] version of Ren is a GodhoodSeeker who actively ''wants'' to use San's head to wield a Titan's power through Mechagodzilla, but he only gets to do it briefly before the head in question kills him (or, in his novelization DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation, it seemingly grants Ren's wish by incorporating him into Mechagodzilla's consciousness at the price of digesting away Ren's identity).causing Ren a MindReformatDeath).



** Mechagodzilla's introductory scene in ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' becomes this in light of the FinalBattle in ''Abraxas''. [[spoiler:Ghidorah's last surviving head]] is killed by Monster X the same way the Mecha killed Skullcrawler Number 10 and was going to kill Godzilla, but here Ghidorah's severed head is [[spoiler:on the ''receiving'' end instead of being the one inflicting it]].
** In ''King of the Monsters'', Rick was at one point seen drinking from a mug labeled 'Not yours' (no prize for guessing what he had in the mug). In Chapter 17, after everything that just happened, he freely offers Foster a swig from his personal flask.

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** Mechagodzilla's introductory scene in ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' becomes this in light of the FinalBattle in ''Abraxas''. [[spoiler:Ghidorah's last surviving head]] is killed by Monster X the same way the Mecha killed Skullcrawler Number 10 and was going to kill Godzilla, but here Ghidorah's severed head is [[spoiler:on the ''receiving'' end instead of being the one inflicting it]].
executioner]].
** In ''King of the Monsters'', Rick was at one point seen drinking from a mug labeled 'Not yours' (no prize for guessing what he had in the mug). In Chapter 17, after everything that just happened, he freely offers Foster a swig from his personal flask.flask after everything that's happened.



* JerksAreWorseThanVillains: Alan Jonah is a calm SmugSnake who basically orchestrates experiments that would probably make UsefulNotes/JosefMengele look forward to seeing him in Hell, and he previously caused millions of deaths around the world with his actions before the fic's start; Ghidorah is 2/3 a [[TheSociopath Sociopathic]] OmnicidalManiac which has literally wiped entire worlds clean of life before coming to Earth to do the same to us, nevermind its plans to break down and torture Vivienne ''horrendously''; and [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is a part-Ghidorah, part-Many monster whose lack of wits and gleeful propensity for inflicting only the most heinous forms of ColdBloodedTorture on Viv and San arguably makes him the single biggest HateSink in the entire story. But all three of these antagonists, '''even [=MaNi=]'''; even if they all have a bit of Hate Sink to them, their personalities and [=MaNi's=] design at least make them ''memorable'', unlike... Who was he again? Oh yeah, Guard B-04, who is accurately described by Vivienne as nothing more than a juvenile thug -- compared to the above three monsters, his only onscreen crimes amount to viciously and crudely heckling Vivienne for his own amusement whilst she's in no position to fight back, and ''mocking a little girl's grief at her HonoraryAunt[='s=] death''; basically he's that dickless prick who everyone in RealLife probably encountered at some point in high school. As such, it's difficult to feel much sympathy for B-04 when San finally puts a 'permanent' end to the former's cruel antics.

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* JerksAreWorseThanVillains: Alan Jonah is a calm SmugSnake who basically orchestrates experiments that would probably make UsefulNotes/JosefMengele look forward to seeing him in Hell, and he previously caused millions of deaths around the world with his actions before the fic's start; Ghidorah is 2/3 a [[TheSociopath Sociopathic]] OmnicidalManiac which has literally wiped entire worlds clean of life before coming to Earth to do the same to us, nevermind its plans to break down and torture Vivienne ''horrendously''; and [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is a part-Ghidorah, part-Many monster whose lack of wits and gleeful propensity for inflicting only the most heinous forms of ColdBloodedTorture on Viv and San arguably makes him the single biggest HateSink in the entire story. But all three of these antagonists, '''even [=MaNi=]'''; even if they all have a bit of Hate Sink to them, their personalities and [=MaNi's=] design at least make them ''memorable'', unlike... Who was he again? Oh yeah, Guard B-04, who is accurately described by Vivienne as nothing more than a juvenile thug -- compared to the above three monsters, his only onscreen crimes amount to viciously and crudely heckling Vivienne for his own amusement whilst she's in no position to fight back, and ''mocking a little girl's grief at her HonoraryAunt[='s=] death''; basically he's that dickless prick who everyone in RealLife probably encountered at some point in high school. As such, it's difficult to feel much sympathy for B-04 when San finally puts a 'permanent' ''permanent'' end to the former's cruel antics.



* WoobieSpecies: The [[spoiler:Skullcrawlers]] are a mild case. Their entire purpose during the story is to run afoul of a monstrosity so bad that it sends even ''[[HorrifyingTheHorror them]]'' fleeing in the opposite direction (not that that does them much good), and spend the rest of the story as victims of said monstrosity's nightmarish FateWorseThanDeath enslaved to [[spoiler:the Many]]'s will. Not to mention getting round up and used as cannon fodder by Project Talos.

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* WoobieSpecies: The [[spoiler:Skullcrawlers]] are a mild case.[[spoiler:Skullcrawlers]]. Their entire purpose during the story is to run afoul of a monstrosity so bad that it sends even ''[[HorrifyingTheHorror them]]'' fleeing in the opposite direction (not that that does them much good), and spend the rest of the story as victims of said monstrosity's nightmarish FateWorseThanDeath enslaved to [[spoiler:the Many]]'s will. Not to mention getting round up and used as cannon fodder by Project Talos.
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** Ghidorah [[spoiler:pre-mortem and post-resurrection]] has a lot of subtext in this category towards Vivienne, as described under DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything on the main page. What really makes it worse is when [[spoiler:Ghidorah intends to forcibly use Monster X as a monster-spawning BabyFactor]] just to make Vivienne scream. That Ghidorah's [[spoiler:heads]] all consider the transformed Vivienne their sister ''and'' their daughter while doing this, and that a "shed skin" version of Ichi and Ni's ''born and raised'' brother San is the other half of Monster X's body, [[VillainousIncest only add new dimensions of horror]].

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** Ghidorah [[spoiler:pre-mortem and post-resurrection]] has a lot of subtext in this category towards Vivienne, as described under DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything on the main page. What really makes it worse is when [[spoiler:Ghidorah intends to forcibly use Monster X as a monster-spawning BabyFactor]] BabyFactory]] just to make Vivienne scream. That Ghidorah's [[spoiler:heads]] all consider the transformed Vivienne their sister ''and'' their daughter while doing this, and that a "shed skin" version of Ichi and Ni's ''born and raised'' brother San is the other half of Monster X's body, [[VillainousIncest only add new dimensions of adds to the horror]].



* WoobieSpecies: The [[spoiler:Skullcrawlers]] are a mild case. Their entire purpose during the story is to run afoul of a monstrosity so bad that it sends even ''[[HorrifyingTheHorror them]]'' fleeing in the opposite direction (not that that does them much good), and spend the rest of the story as victims of said monstrosity's nightmarish FateWorseThanDeath enslaved to [[spoiler:the Many]]'s will.

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* WoobieSpecies: The [[spoiler:Skullcrawlers]] are a mild case. Their entire purpose during the story is to run afoul of a monstrosity so bad that it sends even ''[[HorrifyingTheHorror them]]'' fleeing in the opposite direction (not that that does them much good), and spend the rest of the story as victims of said monstrosity's nightmarish FateWorseThanDeath enslaved to [[spoiler:the Many]]'s will. Not to mention getting round up and used as cannon fodder by Project Talos.
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* TakeThat: Bits of Jonah's vicious rant at Vivienne in Chapter 5 seem like the author subtly calling out the [=MonsterVerse=] writers for [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter wasting Sally]] [[WeHardlyKnewYe Hawkins' character]], and for the way the characters in ''King of the Monsters'' seem to quickly forget about Vivienne after the writers DroppedABridgeOnHer (in contrast to their reactions to Serizawa's sacrifice)[[note]]This isn’t counted as a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "Reason You Suck" Speech]], because it's shown during the fic that Monarch and the Russells really do miss Vivienne and regard her highly[[/note]].
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** In ''Film/GodzillaVsKong'', [[spoiler:Maia Simmons]] is also somewhat considered a case of TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter. In the [=AbraxasVerse=], [[spoiler:Maia]] is a more rounded character, and her redeeming qualities and relationship with her father get expansion in the [=AbraxasVerse=] Timeline.
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* JerksAreWorseThanVillains: Alan Jonah is a calm SmugSnake who basically orchestrates experiments that would probably make UsefulNotes/JosefMengele look forward to seeing him in Hell, and he previously caused millions of deaths around the world with his actions before the fic's start; Ghidorah is 2/3 a [[TheSociopath Sociopathic]] OmnicidalManiac which has literally wiped entire worlds clean of life before coming to Earth to do the same to us, nevermind its plans to break down and torture Vivienne ''horrendously''; and [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is a part-Ghidorah, part-Many monster whose lack of wits and gleeful propensity for inflicting only the most heinous forms of ColdBloodedTorture on Viv and San arguably makes him the single biggest HateSink in the entire story. But all three of these antagonists, '''even [=MaNi=]'''; even if they all have a bit of Hate Sink to them, their personalities and [=MaNi's=] design at least make them ''memorable'', unlike... Who was he again? Oh yeah, Guard B-04, who is accurately described by Vivienne as nothing more than a juvenile thug -- compared to the above three monsters, his only onscreen crimes amount to viciously and crudely heckling Vivienne for his own amusement whilst she's in no position to fight back, and ''mocking a little girl's grief at her HonoraryAunt[='s=] death''; basically he's that dickless prick who everyone in RealLife probably encountered at some point in high school.
* LoveToHate: San's two brothers (especially Ichi/Eldest Brother, the middle head) remain just as sociopathic and monstrously cruel here as the Golden Demise has ever been; but this fic also delves more into the three heads' independent personalities and abusive codependent relationships with each-other, and it provides a FreudianExcuse expansion of Ghidorah's backstory, giving Ghidorah a lot of new character depth. It probably also makes Ichi and Ni interesting and rewatchable (re-readable) villains that they display distinct personalities and speech patterns with their AnimalTalk translated, including in Ichi's case a sophisticated sense of FauxAffablyEvil. This is in addition to Ghidorah exhibiting EldritchAbomination levels of EvilIsCool throughout the story, including a BrownNote effect, MasterOfYourDomain and the creation of [[UndeadAbomination the Many]]. At the same time, reading Ichi and Ni relentlessly and horrifically pull out any stops to [[spoiler:try and push Vivienne down a StartOfDarkness, even if that means murdering their own Youngest Brother's shed skin without remorse, and also reading them plot to torment as many of their foes as possible with the deaths or [[FateWorseThanDeath worse]] of their loved ones before putting said foes in the ground]], makes us root against Ichi and Ni and look forward to their downfall.

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* JerksAreWorseThanVillains: Alan Jonah is a calm SmugSnake who basically orchestrates experiments that would probably make UsefulNotes/JosefMengele look forward to seeing him in Hell, and he previously caused millions of deaths around the world with his actions before the fic's start; Ghidorah is 2/3 a [[TheSociopath Sociopathic]] OmnicidalManiac which has literally wiped entire worlds clean of life before coming to Earth to do the same to us, nevermind its plans to break down and torture Vivienne ''horrendously''; and [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is a part-Ghidorah, part-Many monster whose lack of wits and gleeful propensity for inflicting only the most heinous forms of ColdBloodedTorture on Viv and San arguably makes him the single biggest HateSink in the entire story. But all three of these antagonists, '''even [=MaNi=]'''; even if they all have a bit of Hate Sink to them, their personalities and [=MaNi's=] design at least make them ''memorable'', unlike... Who was he again? Oh yeah, Guard B-04, who is accurately described by Vivienne as nothing more than a juvenile thug -- compared to the above three monsters, his only onscreen crimes amount to viciously and crudely heckling Vivienne for his own amusement whilst she's in no position to fight back, and ''mocking a little girl's grief at her HonoraryAunt[='s=] death''; basically he's that dickless prick who everyone in RealLife probably encountered at some point in high school.
school. As such, it's difficult to feel much sympathy for B-04 when San finally puts a 'permanent' end to the former's cruel antics.
* LoveToHate: San's two brothers (especially Ichi/Eldest Brother, the middle head) remain just as sociopathic and monstrously cruel here as the Golden Demise has ever been; but this fic also delves more into the three heads' independent personalities and abusive codependent relationships with each-other, and it provides a FreudianExcuse expansion of Ghidorah's backstory, giving Ghidorah a lot of new character depth. It probably also makes Ichi and Ni interesting and rewatchable (re-readable) villains that they display distinct personalities and speech patterns with their AnimalTalk translated, including in Ichi's case a sophisticated sense of FauxAffablyEvil. This is in addition to Ghidorah exhibiting EldritchAbomination levels of EvilIsCool throughout the story, including a BrownNote effect, MasterOfYourDomain and the creation of [[UndeadAbomination the Many]]. At the same time, reading Ichi and Ni relentlessly and horrifically pull out any stops to [[spoiler:try and push Vivienne down a StartOfDarkness, even if that means murdering their own Youngest Brother's shed skin 'shed skin' without remorse, and also reading them their plot to torment as many of their foes as possible with the deaths or [[FateWorseThanDeath worse]] of their loved ones before putting said foes in the ground]], makes us root against Ichi and Ni and look forward to their downfall.
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* JerksAreWorseThanVillains: Alan Jonah is a calm SmugSnake who basically orchestrates experiments that would probably make [[Sandbox/MengeleUsefulNotes Mengele]] look forward to seeing him in Hell, and he previously caused millions of deaths around the world with his actions before the fic's start; Ghidorah is 2/3 a [[TheSociopath Sociopathic]] OmnicidalManiac which has literally wiped entire worlds clean of life before coming to Earth to do the same to us, nevermind its plans to break down and torture Vivienne ''horrendously''; and [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is a part-Ghidorah, part-Many monster whose lack of wits and gleeful propensity for inflicting only the most heinous forms of ColdBloodedTorture on Viv and San arguably makes him the single biggest HateSink in the entire story. But all three of these antagonists, '''even [=MaNi=]'''; even if they all have a bit of Hate Sink to them, their personalities and [=MaNi's=] design at least make them ''memorable'', unlike... Who was he again? Oh yeah, Guard B-04, who is accurately described by Vivienne as nothing more than a juvenile thug -- compared to the above three monsters, his only onscreen crimes amount to viciously and crudely heckling Vivienne for his own amusement whilst she's in no position to fight back, and ''mocking a little girl's grief at her HonoraryAunt[='s=] death''; basically he's that dickless prick who everyone in RealLife probably encountered at some point in high school.

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* JerksAreWorseThanVillains: Alan Jonah is a calm SmugSnake who basically orchestrates experiments that would probably make [[Sandbox/MengeleUsefulNotes Mengele]] UsefulNotes/JosefMengele look forward to seeing him in Hell, and he previously caused millions of deaths around the world with his actions before the fic's start; Ghidorah is 2/3 a [[TheSociopath Sociopathic]] OmnicidalManiac which has literally wiped entire worlds clean of life before coming to Earth to do the same to us, nevermind its plans to break down and torture Vivienne ''horrendously''; and [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is a part-Ghidorah, part-Many monster whose lack of wits and gleeful propensity for inflicting only the most heinous forms of ColdBloodedTorture on Viv and San arguably makes him the single biggest HateSink in the entire story. But all three of these antagonists, '''even [=MaNi=]'''; even if they all have a bit of Hate Sink to them, their personalities and [=MaNi's=] design at least make them ''memorable'', unlike... Who was he again? Oh yeah, Guard B-04, who is accurately described by Vivienne as nothing more than a juvenile thug -- compared to the above three monsters, his only onscreen crimes amount to viciously and crudely heckling Vivienne for his own amusement whilst she's in no position to fight back, and ''mocking a little girl's grief at her HonoraryAunt[='s=] death''; basically he's that dickless prick who everyone in RealLife probably encountered at some point in high school.

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* AngelDevilShipping: One of the milder cases of this trope in that the devil in this equation is an AntiHero; but as described under OneTrueThreesome, multiple readers and the author herself have found themselves shipping Monster X (half of whom is [[NiceGirl Vivienne]]) with Rodan.



* BetterThanCanon: Thanks to the characterization the Titans receive, the CharacterDevelopment undergone by Viv and San throughout the story, better-realized human characters, and well-executed action sequences (among other things), there are some readers who consider ''Abraxes'' to be superior to ''Film/GodzillaVsKong'' as a follow-up to ''Godzilla: King of the Monsters'', to the point that some wish ''Abraxes'' was canon to the Franchise/MonsterVerse itself.

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* BetterThanCanon: Thanks to the characterization the Titans receive, the CharacterDevelopment undergone by Viv and San throughout the story, better-realized human characters, and well-executed action sequences (among other things), there are some readers who consider ''Abraxes'' ''Abraxas'' to be superior to ''Film/GodzillaVsKong'' as a follow-up to ''Godzilla: King of the Monsters'', to the point that some wish ''Abraxes'' ''Abraxas'' was canon to the Franchise/MonsterVerse itself.



* GeniusBonus: The more intricate the reader's knowledge of the [=MonsterVerse=]'s comics, novelizations and other supplementary materials, the more {{Easter Egg}}s they're likely to find peppered through the story.

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* GeniusBonus: The more intricate the reader's knowledge EvilIsCool: Besides Ghidorah's points from ''[[YMMV/GodzillaKingOfTheMonsters2019 Godzilla: King of the [=MonsterVerse=]'s comics, novelizations Monsters (2019)]]'' [[spoiler:which return in full force once it regains a body]], its Cthulhu-like BrownNote effect via San's old head after the latter's consciousness has left and other supplementary materials, the more {{Easter Egg}}s they're likely to find peppered through the story.its PsychicPowers are pretty awesome and terrifying.



* GeniusBonus: The more intricate the reader's knowledge of the [=MonsterVerse=]'s comics, novelizations and other supplementary materials, the more {{Easter Egg}}s they're likely to find peppered through the story.



** Hell, the [=MonsterVerse's=] entire [[spoiler:RunningGag of San losing his head]] becomes this in light of what happens to Monster X in Chapter 16.



** Once ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' came out, it turned out the filmmakers had the same idea as Hrodvitnon did in ''Abraxas''; about San's severed head essentially birthing another classic Toho Kaiju which houses the head's consciousness and which furthermore possesses red-colored energy powers.
** The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' {{novelization}} upped the above, bearing some '''striking''' similarities to plot elements of ''Abraxas'' that were posted months earlier. The novelization too opened up with criminals taking up residence in an abandoned complex in [[spoiler:Russian]] territory (and a former Monarch operative being among their number), and the novel also happened to feature a Monarch operative who survived the destruction of not just any one of the seventeen-plus outposts during the Mass Awakening but ''Outpost 58'' specifically! One has to wonder if great ''Godzilla''-fan minds really think alike or if Greg Keyes[[note]]The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' novelization's author[[/note]] has been reading ''Abraxas'' online.

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** Once ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' came out, it turned out the filmmakers had the same idea as Hrodvitnon did in ''Abraxas''; about San's severed head essentially birthing another a classic Toho Kaiju which houses the head's consciousness and which furthermore possesses red-colored energy powers.
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** The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' {{novelization}} upped the above, bearing some '''striking''' similarities to plot elements of ''Abraxas'' that were posted months earlier. before the novel came out. The novelization too opened up with criminals taking up residence in an abandoned complex in [[spoiler:Russian]] territory and looking to inhumanely take advantage of a captured Titan (and a former Monarch operative being is among their number), and the number in both stories no less). The novel also happened to feature a Monarch operative who survived the destruction of not just any one of the seventeen-plus outposts during the Mass Awakening but ''Outpost 58'' specifically! One has to wonder if great ''Godzilla''-fan minds really think alike or if Greg Keyes[[note]]The ''Godzilla vs. Kong'' novelization's author[[/note]] has been reading ''Abraxas'' online.



* LoveToHate: San's two brothers (especially Ichi/Eldest Brother, the middle head) remain just as sociopathic and monstrously cruel here as the Golden Demise has ever been; but this fic also delves more into the three heads' independent personalities and abusive codependent relationships with each-other, and it provides a WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds expansion of Ghidorah's backstory, giving Ghidorah a lot of new character depth. It probably also makes Ichi and Ni interesting and rewatchable (re-readable) villains that they display distinct personalities and speech patterns with their AnimalTalk translated, including in Ichi's case a sophisticated sense of FauxAffablyEvil. This is in addition to Ghidorah exhibiting EldritchAbomination levels of EvilIsCool throughout the story, including a BrownNote effect, MasterOfYourDomain and the creation of [[UndeadAbomination the Many]]. At the same time, reading Ichi and Ni relentlessly and horrifically pull out any stops to [[spoiler:try and push Vivienne down a StartOfDarkness, even if that means murdering their own Youngest Brother's shed skin without remorse, and also reading them plot to torment as many of their foes as possible with the deaths or [[FateWorseThanDeath worse]] of their loved ones before putting said foes out of their misery]], makes us root against Ichi and Ni and look forward to their downfall.

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* LoveToHate: San's two brothers (especially Ichi/Eldest Brother, the middle head) remain just as sociopathic and monstrously cruel here as the Golden Demise has ever been; but this fic also delves more into the three heads' independent personalities and abusive codependent relationships with each-other, and it provides a WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds FreudianExcuse expansion of Ghidorah's backstory, giving Ghidorah a lot of new character depth. It probably also makes Ichi and Ni interesting and rewatchable (re-readable) villains that they display distinct personalities and speech patterns with their AnimalTalk translated, including in Ichi's case a sophisticated sense of FauxAffablyEvil. This is in addition to Ghidorah exhibiting EldritchAbomination levels of EvilIsCool throughout the story, including a BrownNote effect, MasterOfYourDomain and the creation of [[UndeadAbomination the Many]]. At the same time, reading Ichi and Ni relentlessly and horrifically pull out any stops to [[spoiler:try and push Vivienne down a StartOfDarkness, even if that means murdering their own Youngest Brother's shed skin without remorse, and also reading them plot to torment as many of their foes as possible with the deaths or [[FateWorseThanDeath worse]] of their loved ones before putting said foes out of their misery]], in the ground]], makes us root against Ichi and Ni and look forward to their downfall.



** [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is a straight-up EldritchAbomination, [[spoiler:HateSink pervo-rapist toward Monster X]], and multiple readers found [[spoiler:him impaling Monster X with his claw in an extremely rape-reminiscent manner]] so lifelike that [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/648508725162803200/ the author]] actually had to specify [=MaNi=] was committing a strongly metaphorical act rather than a ''literal'' sexual rape in that instance. [=MaNi=] even [[spoiler:treats the idea of having Monster X all to itself like a twisted elopement]].

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** [=MaNi=]/Elder Brother is a straight-up EldritchAbomination, [[spoiler:HateSink pervo-rapist toward Monster X]], and multiple readers found [[spoiler:him impaling Monster X with his claw in an extremely rape-reminiscent manner]] so lifelike that [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/648508725162803200/ the author]] actually had to specify [=MaNi=] was committing a strongly strictly metaphorical act rather than a ''literal'' sexual rape in that instance. [=MaNi=] even [[spoiler:treats the idea of having Monster X all to itself himself like a twisted elopement]].

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