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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Rae is alone, starving, and without money. People have ignored her or treated her with hostility. But when she gets to a food stand, asking for a job, she is handed a bowl of ramen without question. The owner who gave her food, Teuchi Ichiraku, one of Naruto's first friends, then offers her a job with a month's pay in advance. Rae is absolutely touched.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments:
** On her first day in Konoha, Rae is alone, starving, and without money. People have ignored her or treated her with hostility. But when she gets to a food stand, asking for a job, she is handed a bowl of ramen without question. The owner who gave her food, Teuchi Ichiraku, one of Naruto's first friends, then offers her a job with a month's pay inadvance. advance so she can get an apartment. Rae is absolutely touched.touched.
** Pretty much every interaction between Rae and Naruto. Especially their first meeting, when Rae runs into little Naruto after he's been thrown out of an orphanage. She puts her [[YouMustBeCold jacket around him]], hugs him and tells him "[[YouAreNotAlone Not everyone hates you]]". Then he [[SleepCute falls asleep in her arms]].
** On her first day in Konoha, Rae is alone, starving, and without money. People have ignored her or treated her with hostility. But when she gets to a food stand, asking for a job, she is handed a bowl of ramen without question. The owner who gave her food, Teuchi Ichiraku, one of Naruto's first friends, then offers her a job with a month's pay in
** Pretty much every interaction between Rae and Naruto. Especially their first meeting, when Rae runs into little Naruto after he's been thrown out of an orphanage. She puts her [[YouMustBeCold jacket around him]], hugs him and tells him "[[YouAreNotAlone Not everyone hates you]]". Then he [[SleepCute falls asleep in her arms]].
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* RealWomenDontWearDresses: Averted as Rae is beloved by reviewers for being a NonActionSnarker TeamMom.
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* AngstWhatAngst: While Rae mourns for home once in a while, she mostly put it out of her thoughts and immerses herself in her new life. Justified as she is also raising a child.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Rae is alone, starving, and without money. People have ignored her or treated her with hostility. But when she gets to a food stand, asking for a job, she is handed a bowl of ramen without question. The owner who gave her food, Teuchi Ichiraku, one of Naruto's first friends, then offers her a job with a month's pay in advance. Rae is absolutely touched.
* RealWomenDontWearDresses: Averted as Rae is beloved by reviewers for being a NonActionSnarker TeamMom.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Rae is alone, starving, and without money. People have ignored her or treated her with hostility. But when she gets to a food stand, asking for a job, she is handed a bowl of ramen without question. The owner who gave her food, Teuchi Ichiraku, one of Naruto's first friends, then offers her a job with a month's pay in advance. Rae is absolutely touched.
* RealWomenDontWearDresses: Averted as Rae is beloved by reviewers for being a NonActionSnarker TeamMom.
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