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* A key element of ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/41647302/ Never Be Silent]]'' is Team Arrow confronting Team Flash about the methods they used to contain metahumans, as the Pipeline cells amount to psychological torture given the minimal facilities. While Oliver and his allies concede that Barry, Caitlin and Cisco were basically manipulated into taking such extreme measures by Thawne-as-Wells and conventional prisons had no means of containing such prisoners when Barry started out anyway, Barry and his allies are still ashamed to realise they went so far that they didn’t even tell a woman that her son was dead.

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* A key element of ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/41647302/ Never Be Silent]]'' ''Fanfic/NeverBeSilent'' is Team Arrow confronting Team Flash about the methods they used to contain metahumans, as the Pipeline cells amount to psychological torture given the minimal facilities. While Oliver and his allies concede that Barry, Caitlin and Cisco were basically manipulated into taking such extreme measures by Thawne-as-Wells and conventional prisons had no means of containing such prisoners when Barry started out anyway, Barry and his allies are still ashamed to realise they went so far that they didn’t even tell a woman that her son was dead.
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* In "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3666435/1/All-I-Really-Want All I Really Want]]", Shego explicitly calls Kim out on how she's twice been fine with basically using mind control on Shego. Kim protests that the use of mind control shampoo was just in the heat of battle and she didn't do anything more than tell Shego to go away and wait until it wore off, but her reaction to the Attitudinator turning Shego into Miss Go is more complex. While Kim didn't cause the incident, she also didn't do anything to turn Shego back to normal, and when Kim tries to point out that she seemed happier as Miss Go than as herself Shego asks if Kim thinks Ron was genuinely "happier" as Zorpox.
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*** Ned absolutely ''tears'' into Catelyn for her handling of the War of the Five Kings. It shows Ned can get '''terrifying''' when angry, and after Remembering the events that led to his own death and finding out the horrible things his beloved children suffered in the aftermath, he has every good reason to blow his lid.

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*** Ned absolutely ''tears'' into Catelyn for her handling of the War of the Five Kings.Kings and her own mistakes within their family. It shows Ned can get '''terrifying''' when angry, and after Remembering the events that led to his own death and finding out the horrible things his beloved children suffered in the aftermath, he has every good reason to blow his lid.



** [=McGonagall=] gives an especially [[UnstoppableRage vicious]] one to Snape for his petty JerkAss behavior, calling him out on his refusal to let go of his grudge against James Potter and taking it out on Harry, who had never done anything wrong to him personally, and for his unprofessional behavior as a teacher (particularly his blatant favoritism of the Slytherins).
** Right after calling out Snape, [=McGonagall=] then delivers a blistering call-out to Dumbledore over putting Harry in the Dursleys' care, as he had [[IWarnedYou ignored her warnings]] about them being "the worst kinds of Muggles" she'd seen but still left Harry with them out of the incredibly naive assumption that Lily's sister Petunia wouldn't do something as terrible as abuse her nephew and enable her husband and son's abuse of Harry, as well as turning a blind eye to the issues plaguing the school (Snape's unprofessional behavior and the bullying problems especially). She does it again after he reveals the prophecy to her, as well as Voldemort's past, to explain his actions with regards to Harry, pointing out that there was no way Harry would've realistically learned ThePowerOfLove in the abusive environment of the Dursleys' home and adds that they're ''very'' damn lucky they didn't end up with another Dark Lord in the making on their hands, since Harry's background very closely resembles that of Voldemort's.
** Dumbledore gets another from Harry himself. After learning just how ''badly'' Harry was abused by the Dursleys, Dumbledore is [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone heartbroken and horrified]] and goes to apologize to Harry... only for a furious Harry [[RejectedApology to throw it back in his face]], making it clear that he will never forgive or trust the Headmaster for what he was put through. Furthermore, Harry also calls out Dumbledore for being a hypocrite in apologizing for causing Harry's own abuse, yet still enabling the exact same environment to occur in Hogwarts with the bullies and corrupt staff never being held accountable for their actions.
* ''Fanfic/TheChoicesThatMakeUs'': When Mad-Eye Moody tries to convince Sirius not to go to the Department of Mysteries, Sirius tells him to shut up, saying that Mad Eye owes him this after he and the rest of the Order let him rot in Azkaban without even giving him a chance to deny the allegations against him.
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44950582/ Disrespecting Authority]]'' features Ginny, Sirius and Arthur all calling Dumbledore out over his decision to force Harry to learn Occlumency from Snape. Ginny is indignant when Dumbledore's attempt to conceal the truth from Umbridge involves a lie that forces Harry to attend another week's detention with Umbridge, Sirius (backed by Remus) points out that part of Occlumency training requires complete trust between teacher and student when he would ''never'' trust Snape with a secret and knows Harry wouldn't either, and Arthur affirms that Ginny is right to be concerned given her own experience of mental abuse after her time with the Diary.

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** [=McGonagall=] gives an especially [[UnstoppableRage vicious]] one TheReasonYouSuchSpeech variant to Snape for his petty JerkAss behavior, calling him out on his refusal to let go of taking his grudge against James Potter and taking it (which he still refuses to let go of over a decade after the man's death) out on Harry, who his innocent son Harry (who had never done anything wrong to him personally, personally), and for his unprofessional behavior as a teacher (particularly his blatant favoritism of the Slytherins).
** Right after calling out Snape, [=McGonagall=] then delivers a blistering call-out proceeds to thoroughly ''rip'' into Dumbledore over putting Harry in into the Dursleys' care, as he had [[IWarnedYou ignored her warnings]] about them being "the worst kinds of Muggles" she'd seen but still left Harry with them out of the incredibly naive assumption that Lily's sister Petunia wouldn't do something as terrible as abuse her nephew out of petty childish resentment and enable her husband and son's abuse of Harry, as well as turning well. She also gives him a blind eye to the tongue-lashing for letting several issues that have been plaguing the school (Snape's unprofessional behavior and the bullying problems especially). problems, just to name a few) get as bad as they have. She does it again [[RuleOfThree third time]] after he reveals the prophecy to her, as well as Voldemort's past, to explain his actions with regards regard to Harry, pointing out that there was no way Harry would've realistically learned ThePowerOfLove in the such an abusive environment of the Dursleys' home and adds that they're ''very'' damn lucky they didn't end up with another Dark Lord in the making on their hands, hands since Harry's background very closely resembles that of Voldemort's.
** Dumbledore gets another one from Harry himself. After learning just how ''badly'' Harry was abused by the Dursleys, Dumbledore is [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone heartbroken and horrified]] and goes to apologize to Harry... only for a furious Harry [[RejectedApology to throw it back in his face]], making it clear that he will never forgive or trust the Headmaster for what he was put through. Furthermore, Harry He also calls out further rebukes Dumbledore for being a hypocrite in apologizing for causing Harry's own abuse, yet still enabling the exact same environment to occur in Hogwarts with the bullies and corrupt staff never being held accountable for their abusive actions.
* ''Fanfic/TheChoicesThatMakeUs'': When Mad-Eye Moody tries to convince Sirius not to go to the Department of Mysteries, Sirius tells him to shut up, saying that Mad Eye Mad-Eye owes him this after he and the rest of the Order let him rot in Azkaban without even giving him a chance to deny the allegations against him.
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44950582/ Disrespecting Authority]]'' features Ginny, Sirius Sirius, and Arthur all calling Dumbledore out over his decision to force Harry to learn Occlumency from Snape. Ginny is indignant when Dumbledore's attempt to conceal the truth from Umbridge involves a lie that forces Harry to attend another week's detention with Umbridge, Sirius (backed by Remus) points out that part of Occlumency training requires complete trust between teacher and student when he would ''never'' trust Snape with a secret and knows Harry wouldn't either, and Arthur affirms that Ginny is right to be concerned given her own experience of mental abuse after her time with the Diary.
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*** While it isn't a face-to-face conversation, Vera Bexley is furious when she learns that Elyon has ordered the northern army to abandon the siege of Snowpoint (and thus Vera's [[YouKilledMyFather quest for revenge on the Mogriffs]]) and withdraw to the capital. Her commander, Bastian Bromwood, in return has some choice words for her when [[RevengeBeforeReason she suggests disobeying those orders]], pointing out that regardless of how they feel about it, they are still loyal to Elyon, and refuting her commands is treason.
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* In the fourth one-shot called ''Truth'' from the Darkfic ''Fanfic/HandsOmori'', When Sunny confessed to what [[AdaptationalVillainy Mari]] did to [[RapeAsDrama him]] and to killing her, [[{{Pun}} Hero]] at first tries to deny it, claiming that Sunny's only saying all of it because he's still delirous from the fight with Basil last night. This absolutely angers Aubrey and Kel (albeit to a lesser extent than her), while Sunny, horrified at Hero refusing to believe him, runs off to the hospital roof and [[DrivenToSuicide tries to end himself]].
-->“Sunny… Sunny’s still recovering from the fight with Basil,” Hero said, sparing a glance at the still unconscious boy. “He might have a concussion, or maybe he’s still delirious from whatever medication they put him on.” \\
“''Maybe''!?” Aubrey snapped. \\
Her yell made Sunny back up further away. She cast him a sad, apologetic look before turning back to Hero. “You think ''that’s'' fake?” She asked, in a milder tone.
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13167363/26/To-Undo-it-All To Undo it All]]'': After the twins [[nime/BleachFadeToBlack Homura and Shizuka]] take Rukia and erase everyone's memories of her, Ichigo goes on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge, killing both of them the moment he sees them. Rukia furiously calls him out on murdering a pair of innocent children who just wanted to have names, all because he was too angry to bother talking them down even though he could have. [[BothSidesHaveAPoint Ichigo admits she was right but their actions caused him to forget traveling back in time from the Bad Future and the two women he loved to forget him entirely, something Rukia admits sounds horrible]].

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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13167363/26/To-Undo-it-All To Undo it All]]'': After the twins [[nime/BleachFadeToBlack [[Anime/BleachFadeToBlack Homura and Shizuka]] take Rukia and erase everyone's memories of her, Ichigo goes on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge, killing both of them the moment he sees them. Rukia furiously calls him out on murdering a pair of innocent children who just wanted to have names, all because he was too angry to bother talking them down even though he could have. [[BothSidesHaveAPoint Ichigo admits she was right but their actions caused him to forget traveling back in time from the Bad Future and the two women he loved to forget him entirely, something Rukia admits sounds horrible]].
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* ''Fanfic/ASeriesOfFortunateEvents'': Saki Yoshida, while shopping for groceries with her daughter Hana, was shocked to meet her mother, who she had not seen since her mother threw her out of her house when her husband lied to her mother saying that Saki seduced him when he in fact molested and forced his daughter to sleep with him. To Saki's shock, her mother grabbed her and hugged her crying. Saki asked her mother why she was talking to her; Saki's mother told her daughter that her husband told her the truth, that while drunk, he accidentally revealed that he forced himself on Saki. Saki's mother begs for her daughter's forgiveness. While Saki does not feel anger or resentment towards her mother, she is still hurt by her mother's actions and cannot forgive her. Saki told her mother that she had to go and leave with her daughter. When Saki's mother said that she would've never kicked her out if she had no the truth earlier, Saki told her that while she was glad that her mother knew the truth, her mother still left her when she needed her the most; she can't talk to her mother now in front of her own daughter.
--->'''Saki Yoshida Mother''': "Saki, please! I wish I knew the truth earlier. I would've never kicked you out, dear."
--->'''Saki Yoshida''': Saki shook her head, holding back tears. "You... You left me when I needed you the most. I always came to you whenever I was sad. And... I trusted you. I'm glad that you know now, but... I can't. Not in front of Hana."
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*** Amelia calls out Vera for how her obsession with getting revenge on the Mogriffs is compromising her ability to be an effective leader in fighting them.

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\n** "Horrificator" has Alya, Adrien and Ivan all call Nino out for altering Alya's script to insert a kissing scene without informing anyone -- including Adrien and Mylène, who would've been the ones acting it out.
** During "Darkblade", [[BewareTheNiceOnes Rose]] gets ''incredibly pissed off'' at Chloé for ditching the rest of the class when the akuma attacked.
** "The Gamer" has Chat Noir call out Scarlet Lady for blatantly luring the akuma towards him and Marinette, as Scarlet Lady is actively trying to get Marinette ''killed'' as revenge for her [[DisproportionateRetribution spending time with Adrien]].
** Marinette calls out Scarlet Lady for standing by and not doing anything to help against Timebreaker, pointing out that she's ''recording'' her doing so.
** In "Syren", Master Fu furiously calls out Chat Noir for betraying his trust and bringing Marigold to his parlor, revealing his existence and location to her.
** PlayedForDrama in "Prime Queen", when Scarlet Lady casually dismisses the akuma threatening to drown Alya and declares DeathIsCheap due to her Miraculous Cure:
--->'''Scarlet Lady:''' So what.\\
'''Chat Noir:''' '''''Scar--!'''''\\
'''Scarlet Lady:''' '''''What?''''' I'll bring her back when we win, so what's the big deal?\\
'''Marigold:''' The '''''"big deal"''''' is that that's seriously messed up, '''''SCARLET!'''''
** "Zombizou" has Marinette call out Mme. Bustier's blatant favoritism towards Chloé, with how she constantly [[KarmaHoudini refuses to punish her]] for any of her bullying while expecting the rest of the class to bend over backwards accomodating TheUnapologetic SpoiledBrat.
*** Later in that same episode, Marinette calls out Scarlet Lady for her SkewedPriorities when she [[spoiler:tries to tie Marinette up and offer her to the horde]].
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* ''WebComic/ScarletLady'':
** "Origins Part 2" has a brief non-verbal one: When Stoneheart [[UnhandThemVillain throws Marinette into freefall]], Scarlet Lady [[RefuseToRescueTheDisliked doesn't react at all]]. Chat Noir and Mayor André both stare at her in shock for a moment.
** Tikki is ''not pleased'' with Chloé when her holder gets Alya suspended from school for a whole week on trumped-up charges. Chloé remains [[TheUnapologetic completely unrepentant]], insisting that Alya deserved ''worse'' for mistakenly believing that Marinette could be Scarlet Lady.

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* In the ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''Anime/SailorMoon'' crossover ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4167708/1/Chaos_Infinity Chaos Infinity]]'', the Sailor Scouts force Sonic and his friends to fight them after they accuse them of the mess going on in Tokyo. (It's Eggman's doing, obviously.) After the showdown, Sonic holds nothing back as he berates them -- just when he thought that they could look past animalistic looks. His words hit close to home:

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* In the ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''Anime/SailorMoon'' crossover ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4167708/1/Chaos_Infinity Chaos Infinity]]'', the Sailor Scouts force Sonic and his friends to fight them after they accuse them of the mess going on in Tokyo. (It's Eggman's doing, obviously.) After the showdown, Sonic holds nothing back as he berates them -- just when he thought that they could look past animalistic looks. His words hit close to home:



* In the second "season" of ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic'', [[StrawmanHasAPoint when Twilight expresses qualms about killing Starfleet's enemies]].
-->'''[[DesignatedHero Krysta]]''': Twilight, I like you, but... sometimes I think you really need to wake up and stop kidding yourself.



--->'''Twilight''': "How could you have let her be put in danger? Hasn't she been through enough already?"\\
'''Celestia''': "Twilight, we didn't know what would happen."\\
'''Twilight''': ''[[[BerserkButton becomes extremely angry]]]'' "Yes, you didn't know. Just like you didn't know about the bad behavior she was showing during the planning for the wedding! Just like you didn't know about the strange spells she was constantly casting on my brother, which obviously weren't headache healing spells! Just like you didn't know what [[WoundedGazelleGambit that display of crocodile tears at the rehearsal]] was meant to do! Just like you didn't know she was imprisoning ponies who were becoming obstacles in her plan in the caverns underneath the castle, like me! And just like you didn't know that she was the ''EVIL'' queen of an army of shapeshifting insect like monsters bent on devouring all the love in Equestria! Well, I know one place that they won't be able to find any real love!"\\
'''Shining Armor''': "Twily, I-"\\
'''Twilight''': "You know, King Jewelius was going to let her back into the kingdom. It would've been easy and nopony would've gotten hurt. But you all had to follow your own selfish instincts and mess everything up again! Well no more!"\\
''[Twilight imprisons her former loved ones in a magic dome]''\\
'''Applejack''': "Twilight, please don't do this!"\\
'''Fluttershy''': "We're your friends!"\\
'''Twilight''': "No you're not! You only hangout with me because my connections could help you. You never cared about me or anypony else! I can't believe I fell for it for so long."\\
'''Shining Armor''': "Twily-"\\
'''Twilight''': "And you can forget about me calling you my BBBFF anymore! In fact, [[IHaveNoSon I don't even have a brother]]. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go check on the princess."\\
'''Celestia''': "Twilight, I-"\\
'''Twilight''': "''[[IronicEcho You]]'' [[IronicEcho have a lot to think about.]]"

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--->'''Twilight''': "How How could you have let her be put in danger? Hasn't she been through enough already?"\\
already?\\
'''Celestia''': "Twilight, Twilight, we didn't know what would happen."\\
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'''Twilight''': ''[[[BerserkButton ''([[BerserkButton becomes extremely angry]]]'' "Yes, angry]])'' Yes, you didn't know. Just like you didn't know about the bad behavior she was showing during the planning for the wedding! Just like you didn't know about the strange spells she was constantly casting on my brother, which obviously weren't headache healing spells! Just like you didn't know what [[WoundedGazelleGambit that display of crocodile tears at the rehearsal]] was meant to do! Just like you didn't know she was imprisoning ponies who were becoming obstacles in her plan in the caverns underneath the castle, like me! And just like you didn't know that she was the ''EVIL'' queen of an army of shapeshifting insect like monsters bent on devouring all the love in Equestria! Well, I know one place that they won't be able to find any real love!"\\
love!\\
'''Shining Armor''': "Twily, I-"\\
Twily, I-\\
'''Twilight''': "You You know, King Jewelius was going to let her back into the kingdom. It would've been easy and nopony would've gotten hurt. But you all had to follow your own selfish instincts and mess everything up again! Well no more!"\\
''[Twilight
more!\\
''(Twilight
imprisons her former loved ones in a magic dome]''\\
dome)''\\
'''Applejack''': "Twilight, Twilight, please don't do this!"\\
this!\\
'''Fluttershy''': "We're We're your friends!"\\
friends!\\
'''Twilight''': "No No you're not! You only hangout with me because my connections could help you. You never cared about me or anypony else! I can't believe I fell for it for so long."\\
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'''Shining Armor''': "Twily-"\\
Twily-\\
'''Twilight''': "And And you can forget about me calling you my BBBFF anymore! In fact, [[IHaveNoSon I don't even have a brother]]. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go check on the princess."\\
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'''Celestia''': "Twilight, I-"\\
Twilight, I-\\
'''Twilight''': "''[[IronicEcho ''[[IronicEcho You]]'' [[IronicEcho have a lot to think about.]]"about]].



--->'''Lyra Heartstrings''': "And you five had the nerve to steal ''our'' positions as bridesmaids when we disappeared!"\\
'''Pinkie Pie''': "We didn't steal anything!"\\
'''Rarity''': "They were given to us by the bride!"\\
'''Minuette''': "You mean the ''fake'' bride! As if it was ''hers'' to give."\\
'''Twinkleshine''': "We went missing! Didn't anypony besides Twilight find that suspicious? Didn't anypony try to look for us? Why would none of you think to look into that?!"\\
'''Shining Armor''': "[[NotHelpingYourCase She said she fired you all because you were only interested in meeting Canterlot royalty.]]"\\
'''Twinkleshine''': "How could you believe that lie? I never did anything to anypony!" ''[starts sobbing while Shining Armor is glared and booed at]''\\
'''Shining Armor''': "I didn't mean to hurt her feelings!"\\
'''Twilight''': "But you did! Just like me."\\
''[Shining Armor lowers his head in shame]''

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--->'''Lyra Heartstrings''': "And And you five had the nerve to steal ''our'' positions as bridesmaids when we disappeared!"\\
disappeared!\\
'''Pinkie Pie''': "We We didn't steal anything!"\\
anything!\\
'''Rarity''': "They They were given to us by the bride!"\\
bride!\\
'''Minuette''': "You You mean the ''fake'' bride! As if it was ''hers'' to give."\\
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'''Twinkleshine''': "We We went missing! Didn't anypony besides Twilight find that suspicious? Didn't anypony try to look for us? Why would none of you think to look into that?!"\\
that?!\\
'''Shining Armor''': "[[NotHelpingYourCase [[NotHelpingYourCase She said she fired you all because you were only interested in meeting Canterlot royalty.]]"\\
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'''Twinkleshine''': "How How could you believe that lie? I never did anything to anypony!" ''[starts anypony! ''(starts sobbing while Shining Armor is glared and booed at]''\\
at)''\\
'''Shining Armor''': "I I didn't mean to hurt her feelings!"\\
feelings!\\
'''Twilight''': "But But you did! Just like me."\\
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Armor lowers his head in shame]''shame)''



-->'''Sunset''': "Twilight idolizes you. There’s nopony she respects and loves more than you, and ''this'' is what you’ve done to repay her?! Or did your machinations ''cause'' her to idolize you? Did you decide that I’d been too rebellious, so you would just make sure your next student was a bit more ''devoted'' to you?! I can’t believe this. The benign, just ruler of Equestria using Destiny magic to make sure her student remains loyal. And you think ''I'' would have been a tyrant?"
* In the second "season" of ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic'', [[StrawmanHasAPoint when Twilight expresses qualms about killing Starfleet's enemies]].
-->'''[[DesignatedHero Krysta]]''': "Twilight, I like you, but... sometimes I think you really need to wake up and stop kidding yourself."

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-->'''Sunset''': "Twilight Twilight idolizes you. There’s There's nopony she respects and loves more than you, and ''this'' is what you’ve done to repay her?! Or did your machinations ''cause'' her to idolize you? Did you decide that I’d I'd been too rebellious, so you would just make sure your next student was a bit more ''devoted'' to you?! I can’t can't believe this. The benign, just ruler of Equestria using Destiny magic to make sure her student remains loyal. And you think ''I'' would have been a tyrant?"
* In the second "season" of ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic'', [[StrawmanHasAPoint when Twilight expresses qualms about killing Starfleet's enemies]].
-->'''[[DesignatedHero Krysta]]''': "Twilight, I like you, but... sometimes I think you really need to wake up and stop kidding yourself."
tyrant?



--->'''TD''': "Thanks for the game of ‘head on a stick’ with me and the back of that chair. I always wanted to know how it feels to be a quadriplegic."\\
'''Luna''': "We... We are sorry for what We did to thee. Our reaction was disproportionate."\\
'''TD''': "You think? What's with you ponies and thinking Celestia needs protecting from me anyway? If whatever I do is unwarranted, then she can execute me herself."
* The ''Pony Psychology'' series has an entire chapter devoted to Celestia lecturing Luna on the true consequences of the environmental and ecological effects of an endless night (with frighteningly accurate scientific references and detail), mostly in an attempt to quell any doubt that Nightmare Moon might have been doing them a favor.
* In the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' AlternateUniverseFic, ''FanFic/RainboomsAndRoyalty'', in which Rainbow is Celestia's personal student [[ItMakesSenseInContext instead of Twilight]], Rainbow directs this towards Princess Celestia after she and the rest of the Mane Cast defeat Nightmare Moon. She is enraged to discover how Celestia manipulated her and her friends behind the scenes since their foalhood in her plan to redeem her sister. Interestingly, she's not upset about being used, she's upset that Celestia did not trust her enough to be forthright about her intentions, because she would have [[UndyingLoyalty gladly aided Celestia]]. She's also incensed that Celestia was willing to risk her and her friends to redeem Luna, rather than confronting Luna herself, and, if necessary, fighting her. She says that she still loves Celestia, but she cannot forgive her yet. Fortunately, after both the princess and Rainbow have a chance to talk with other ponies, they reconcile quickly.

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--->'''TD''': "Thanks Thanks for the game of ‘head 'head on a stick’ stick' with me and the back of that chair. I always wanted to know how it feels to be a quadriplegic."\\
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'''Luna''': "We...We... We are sorry for what We did to thee. Our reaction was disproportionate."\\
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'''TD''': "You You think? What's with you ponies and thinking Celestia needs protecting from me anyway? If whatever I do is unwarranted, then she can execute me herself."
herself.
* In ''Fanfic/PartingWords'', Twilight demands more information before being sent to the Crystal Kingdom. Princess Celestia [[SayingTooMuch lets slip]] that she intended to use this as a SecretTest for her student. Twilight calls her out on her SkewedPriorities:
-->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' I don't ''care'' what it is you're 'testing' me for. Forget it, I don't care! The welfare of other ponies is supposed to come first for a ruler, no matter what. So either tell me ''everything'' I need to know, or find somepony else to do this, '''''because I'm not going to imperil hundreds or even thousands of innocent ponies trying to get a gold sticker from you on a TEST!'''''
* The ''Pony Psychology'' series ''Fanfic/PonyPsychologySeries'' has an entire chapter devoted to Celestia lecturing Luna on the true consequences of the environmental and ecological effects of an endless night (with frighteningly accurate scientific references and detail), mostly in an attempt to quell any doubt that Nightmare Moon might have been doing them a favor.
* In the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' AlternateUniverseFic, ''FanFic/RainboomsAndRoyalty'', ''Fanfic/RainboomsAndRoyalty'', in which Rainbow is Celestia's personal student [[ItMakesSenseInContext instead of Twilight]], Rainbow directs this towards Princess Celestia after she and the rest of the Mane Cast defeat Nightmare Moon. She is enraged to discover how Celestia manipulated her and her friends behind the scenes since their foalhood in her plan to redeem her sister. Interestingly, she's not upset about being used, she's upset that Celestia did not trust her enough to be forthright about her intentions, because she would have [[UndyingLoyalty gladly aided Celestia]]. She's also incensed that Celestia was willing to risk her and her friends to redeem Luna, rather than confronting Luna herself, and, if necessary, fighting her. She says that she still loves Celestia, but she cannot forgive her yet. Fortunately, after both the princess and Rainbow have a chance to talk with other ponies, they reconcile quickly.



* ''FanFic/{{Whispers}}'': Nightmare Moon tries this in the form of an ArmorPiercingQuestion when Celestia is about to seal her with the Elements of Harmony. [[ShutUpHannibal Celestia doesn't buy it.]]

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* ''FanFic/{{Whispers}}'': ''Fanfic/{{Whispers}}'': Nightmare Moon tries this in the form of an ArmorPiercingQuestion when Celestia is about to seal her with the Elements of Harmony. [[ShutUpHannibal Celestia doesn't buy it.]]



* In ''FanFic/AFathersWrath'', Orochimaru (Naruto's father in this fic) calls out Tsunade and Jiraiya when they meet again, asking them why they weren't around when Naruto was growing up and he needed someone to look after him and guide him.

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* In ''FanFic/AFathersWrath'', ''Fanfic/AFathersWrath'', Orochimaru (Naruto's father (who is [[RelatedInTheAdaptation Naruto's father]] in this fic) work) calls out Tsunade and Jiraiya when they meet again, asking them why they weren't around when Naruto was growing up and he needed someone to look after him and guide him.



-->'''Naruto:''' "From what I was able to learn, your honor...cities’ worth of people would have been put at risk with what Gaara was planning."\\
'''Judge Utatane:''' "And yet, by your actions on the night of the New Year's celebration in Kumo City, [[ArmorPiercingQuestion isn't that what ended up happening anyway--that cities were subjected to multiple homicides?]]"

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-->'''Naruto:''' "From From what I was able to learn, your honor...cities’ worth of people would have been put at risk with what Gaara was planning."\\
\\
'''Judge Utatane:''' "And And yet, by your actions on the night of the New Year's celebration in Kumo City, [[ArmorPiercingQuestion isn't that what ended up happening anyway--that cities were subjected to multiple homicides?]]"homicides]]?



* In ''FanFic/Team8'', Kurenai calls Hinata out on pushing herself as far as she did against Neji, which almost resulted in her death and upset Naruto to the point where he nearly forfeited his own match by being unwilling to leave her side, suggesting that she had no regard for her safety or her friends' feelings when she did so.

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* In ''FanFic/Team8'', ''Fanfic/Team8'', Kurenai calls Hinata out on pushing herself as far as she did against Neji, which almost resulted in her death and upset Naruto to the point where he nearly forfeited his own match by being unwilling to leave her side, suggesting that she had no regard for her safety or her friends' feelings when she did so.



--->'''Kaworu''': "Forgiveness? You dumped me in a fit of jealousy fanned by the flames of your own imagination. There never was anything to forgive."

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--->'''Kaworu''': "Forgiveness? Forgiveness? You dumped me in a fit of jealousy fanned by the flames of your own imagination. There never was anything to forgive."



--->'''Asuka''': "Nobody understands what I’m going through!"\\
'''Asuka''': "Do YOU understand?"\\
'''Asuka''': "?!"\\
'''Asuka''': "Do you see what you are doing? What you’ve been doing ever since you woke up? You wrap yourself up in this warm blanket of hate because it makes you feel powerful! It’s the only way you can feel powerful again without the help of others! But it’s only a drug. A quick chemical that hides your troubles! Meanwhile they’re still there GETTING WORSE. So, once again, the great Asuka Langley Sohryu is retreating from her troubles armed with a medicine cabinet of powerful looking narcotics! My, how self-reliant you are!"

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--->'''Asuka''': "Nobody Nobody understands what I’m going through!"\\
through!\\
'''Asuka''': "Do Do YOU understand?"\\
understand?\\
'''Asuka''': "?!"\\
?!\\
'''Asuka''': "Do Do you see what you are doing? What you’ve been doing ever since you woke up? You wrap yourself up in this warm blanket of hate because it makes you feel powerful! It’s the only way you can feel powerful again without the help of others! But it’s only a drug. A quick chemical that hides your troubles! Meanwhile they’re still there GETTING WORSE. So, once again, the great Asuka Langley Sohryu is retreating from her troubles armed with a medicine cabinet of powerful looking narcotics! My, how self-reliant you are!"are!



-->'''Gendo:''' "Yui...is it really you?"\\
'''Yui:''' "Gendo..."\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui? W-what is wrong, why are you angry?"\\
'''Yui:''' I think I haven't heard right! Gendo Ikari, I know what you did to our son! Not to speak what else I learned you did! How could you?!"\\
'''Gendo:''' "Y-you don't understand that I had to do it!"\\
'''Yui:'''Ohc no! I DON'T understand! You left him, a boy of three years, in the most hurtful way possible! And if that's not bad enough, you went out of your way to further hurt him in ways I wouldn't have thought possible! Oh yes, I remember that monstrosity of auto-pilot all too well! Shinji was traumatized by what YOU did!"\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui, I..."\\
'''Yui:''' "Oh no, don't even try to excuse yourself! What about the future?! You destroyed all we did work so hard for... And for what? You've been chasing an illusion the entire time."\\
'''Gendo:''' "W-what?"\\
'''Yui:''' "What happened to the man I married? I don't recognize you. Your cruelty is breaking my heart."\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui, please... I... I did it for you."\\
'''Yui:''' "For me? [=FOR ME=]? I'm ashamed that you did all those things to Shinji in my name! And not only him! Rei, the poor girl you treated so bad that you almost destroyed her very soul! Mana, who almost died because you wanted to prove a point! Everyone who had suffered under your disregard for those around you! I wanted to create a safer world with [=EVA=], not endanger it! You destroyed everything I fought for!\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui...I did it because I l..."\\
'''Yui:''' "No, don't say it! Because I won't believe you! That's not love, that's obesssion! If you really loved me, you would have given our son your love over all these years... Your heart has gone cold. What happened to you?! I'm to saddened and angry to speak with you anymore. Think about what you have done. The man who I love would never have done all these horrible things... I have nothing more to say to you until you redeem yourself."

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-->'''Gendo:''' "Yui...--->'''Gendo:''' Yui...is it really you?"\\
you?\\
'''Yui:''' "Gendo..."\\
Gendo...\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui? Yui? W-what is wrong, why are you angry?"\\
angry?\\
'''Yui:''' I think I haven't heard right! Gendo Ikari, I know what you did to our son! Not to speak what else I learned you did! How could you?!"\\
you?!\\
'''Gendo:''' "Y-you Y-you don't understand that I had to do it!"\\
'''Yui:'''Ohc
it!\\
'''Yui:'''Oh
no! I DON'T understand! You left him, a boy of three years, in the most hurtful way possible! And if that's not bad enough, you went out of your way to further hurt him in ways I wouldn't have thought possible! Oh yes, I remember that monstrosity of auto-pilot all too well! Shinji was traumatized by what YOU did!"\\
did!\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui, Yui, I..."\\
\\
'''Yui:''' "Oh Oh no, don't even try to excuse yourself! What about the future?! You destroyed all we did work so hard for... And for what? You've been chasing an illusion the entire time."\\
\\
'''Gendo:''' "W-what?"\\
W-what?\\
'''Yui:''' "What What happened to the man I married? I don't recognize you. Your cruelty is breaking my heart."\\
\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui, Yui, please... I... I did it for you."\\
\\
'''Yui:''' "For For me? [=FOR ME=]? I'm ashamed that you did all those things to Shinji in my name! And not only him! Rei, the poor girl you treated so bad that you almost destroyed her very soul! Mana, who almost died because you wanted to prove a point! Everyone who had suffered under your disregard for those around you! I wanted to create a safer world with [=EVA=], not endanger it! You destroyed everything I fought for!\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui...Yui...I did it because I l..."\\
\\
'''Yui:''' "No, No, don't say it! Because I won't believe you! That's not love, that's obesssion! If you really loved me, you would have given our son your love over all these years... Your heart has gone cold. What happened to you?! I'm to saddened and angry to speak with you anymore. Think about what you have done. The man who I love would never have done all these horrible things... I have nothing more to say to you until you redeem yourself."



-->'''Terry:''' "Shinji, what do you think you're doing?"\\
'''Shinji:''' "I'm moving back to Misato's."\\
'''Terry:''' "Why?"\\
'''Shinji:''' "I don't know if it matters to you but Asuka just tried to kill herself. Someone needs to be there to watch her, to make sure that she stays safe."\\
'''Terry:''' "Just wait until Misato hears about this."\\
'''Shinji:''' ''[hissing]'' "You will say absolutely nothing to Misato!"\\
'''Terry:''' "Are you insane, Ikari? She just tried to kill herself! What if an Angel was to attack tomorrow? Do you really want her in an Eva?"\\
'''Shinji:''' "You're unfit to pilot for exactly the same reason! You wouldn't have grabbed Asuka's hand if she hadn't been about to pull me over too. You would've let her die. If an Angel attacked right now, I would rather have her by my side than you, because I know that my life holds some value to her!"

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-->'''Terry:''' "Shinji, Shinji, what do you think you're doing?"\\
doing?\\
'''Shinji:''' "I'm I'm moving back to Misato's."\\
\\
'''Terry:''' "Why?"\\
Why?\\
'''Shinji:''' "I I don't know if it matters to you but Asuka just tried to kill herself. Someone needs to be there to watch her, to make sure that she stays safe."\\
\\
'''Terry:''' "Just Just wait until Misato hears about this."\\
\\
'''Shinji:''' ''[hissing]'' "You ''(hissing)'' You will say absolutely nothing to Misato!"\\
Misato!\\
'''Terry:''' "Are Are you insane, Ikari? She just tried to kill herself! What if an Angel was to attack tomorrow? Do you really want her in an Eva?"\\
Eva?\\
'''Shinji:''' "You're You're unfit to pilot for exactly the same reason! You wouldn't have grabbed Asuka's hand if she hadn't been about to pull me over too. You would've let her die. If an Angel attacked right now, I would rather have her by my side than you, because I know that my life holds some value to her!"her!



--->'''Gregson:''' "...Now what in bloody blazes d'you mean they've found a body?!"

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--->'''Gregson:''' "...--->'''Gregson:''' ...Now what in bloody blazes d'you mean they've found a body?!"body?!



--->'''Lestrade:''' "You knew it was probable that Sherlock Holmes was dead, and you allowed them to hope by being uncertain? ''My God,'' man, have you no compassion?"

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--->'''Lestrade:''' "You You knew it was probable that Sherlock Holmes was dead, and you allowed them to hope by being uncertain? ''My God,'' man, have you no compassion?"
compassion?



* ''FanFic/BartSimpsonAttorneyAtLaw'':

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* ''FanFic/BartSimpsonAttorneyAtLaw'':''Fanfic/BartSimpsonAttorneyAtLaw'':



-->'''Jaime''': "You smell marginally less bad, you potentially have better table manners, and you're more likely to be mistaken for the hind end of an aurochs rather than a goat, but for the life of me I can't see how you're different from the Bloody Mummers. At least they only had the decency to take my hand, but you won't be satisfied with anything less than my soul. Haven't you thundering imbeciles worked out by now that there's nothing there to give? Kill the Kingslayer, very well. Then you'll be a hero. Will that make you immortal, or set to rights the wrongs you're supposedly avenging, or do anything besides make you just as much a murderer as me? I don't care what god you pray to or what high-and-mighty purpose you claim. You still think you're the only ones to lose something in this war, and that makes you at least as blind as my sweet sister. Drop those breeches, Pisscloak, grace us all with the delightful aroma of your shit."

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-->'''Jaime''': "You You smell marginally less bad, you potentially have better table manners, and you're more likely to be mistaken for the hind end of an aurochs rather than a goat, but for the life of me I can't see how you're different from the Bloody Mummers. At least they only had the decency to take my hand, but you won't be satisfied with anything less than my soul. Haven't you thundering imbeciles worked out by now that there's nothing there to give? Kill the Kingslayer, very well. Then you'll be a hero. Will that make you immortal, or set to rights the wrongs you're supposedly avenging, or do anything besides make you just as much a murderer as me? I don't care what god you pray to or what high-and-mighty purpose you claim. You still think you're the only ones to lose something in this war, and that makes you at least as blind as my sweet sister. Drop those breeches, Pisscloak, grace us all with the delightful aroma of your shit."
shit.



* ''Fanfic/NoOneBreaksMyHeartLikeYou'': As Peter moves into his new apartment, Mary Jane talks to him. Peter says goodbye and tells Mary Jane he wish things could have been better, to which a disappointed Mary Jane tells Peter that they can be better, but "You just didn't want to try". She leaves him alone after saying that.

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* ''Fanfic/NoOneBreaksMyHeartLikeYou'': As Peter moves into his new apartment, Mary Jane talks to him. Peter says goodbye and tells Mary Jane he wish things could have been better, to which a disappointed Mary Jane tells Peter that they can be better, but "You just didn't want to try". try." She leaves him alone after saying that.



* Two key examples in ''Fanfic/ItsAllInTheDetails'';

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* Two key examples in ''Fanfic/ItsAllInTheDetails''; ''Fanfic/ItsAllInTheDetails'':



* Beast Boy gets this a lot in the first two chapters of ''FanFic/TheEndOfEnds'', though his actions justify the calling out (they range from stalking one school girl to raiding Raven's room to downright beating up two school girls), though since it's one of ''those'' fanfics, they're portrayed as the Titans being mean to Beast Boy.

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* Beast Boy gets this a lot in the first two chapters of ''FanFic/TheEndOfEnds'', ''Fanfic/TheEndOfEnds'', though his actions justify the calling out (they range from stalking one school girl to raiding Raven's room to downright beating up two school girls), though since it's one of ''those'' fanfics, they're portrayed as the Titans being mean to Beast Boy.



* All the main characters in ''FanFic/{{Shatterheart}}'' gets one and at seperate occassions:
** [[spoiler: Real!]]Syaoran is called by Fai for keeping his [[FriendsWithBenefits relationship]] with Kurogane a secret from him and not telling Sakura the truth. In the Nihon Arc, Kurogane calls him out on his indecisiveness when he wanted Syaoran to make clear whether Syaoran would stay with him or Syaoran would continue to pursue Sakura.
** Sakura is called out for treating [[spoiler: Real!]]Syaoran like an non-entity and for shunning him for him not being his clone when Syaoran wanted to know her.
** Fai is called out for hating and shunning [[spoiler: Real!]]Syaoran and for emotionally blackmailing Syaoran to end his relationship with Kurogane, which at the time was his ''only'' positive relationship. Kurogane and Syaoran let him have it when they find at the end of the Infinity Arc [[spoiler: he was going to backstab them the entire time.]]

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* All the main characters in ''FanFic/{{Shatterheart}}'' ''Fanfic/{{Shatterheart}}'' gets one and at seperate occassions:
** [[spoiler: Real!]]Syaoran [[spoiler:Real!]]Syaoran is called by Fai for keeping his [[FriendsWithBenefits relationship]] with Kurogane a secret from him and not telling Sakura the truth. In the Nihon Arc, Kurogane calls him out on his indecisiveness when he wanted Syaoran to make clear whether Syaoran would stay with him or Syaoran would continue to pursue Sakura.
** Sakura is called out for treating [[spoiler: Real!]]Syaoran [[spoiler:Real!]]Syaoran like an non-entity and for shunning him for him not being his clone when Syaoran wanted to know her.
** Fai is called out for hating and shunning [[spoiler: Real!]]Syaoran [[spoiler:Real!]]Syaoran and for emotionally blackmailing Syaoran to end his relationship with Kurogane, which at the time was his ''only'' positive relationship. Kurogane and Syaoran let him have it when they find at the end of the Infinity Arc [[spoiler: he [[spoiler:he was going to backstab them the entire time.]]time]].



* Features heavily in "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10678828/1/Double-Trouble Double Trouble]]"- a spin-off of ''Fanfic/TheWolfInMe''- which sees alternate versions of Jade and Tori (referred to as Jadelyn and Victoria to distinguish them from the "local" versions) transferred into another reality where Jade and Tori are dating. At one point, after Victoria is rejected by Jadelyn, she and Tori get drunk enough that they decide to give Jade a TwinThreesomeFantasy, but later on Tori realises that Jade was sober enough that she agreed to this with the goal of basically throwing the relationship Jadelyn could have with Victoria in her counterpart's face. Tori is outraged that Jade did something like that to hurt another version of herself when Jadelyn has already been through a harsh life.

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* Features heavily in "[[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10678828/1/Double-Trouble Double Trouble]]"- Trouble]]''- a spin-off of ''Fanfic/TheWolfInMe''- which sees alternate versions of Jade and Tori (referred to as Jadelyn and Victoria to distinguish them from the "local" versions) transferred into another reality where Jade and Tori are dating. At one point, after Victoria is rejected by Jadelyn, she and Tori get drunk enough that they decide to give Jade a TwinThreesomeFantasy, but later on Tori realises that Jade was sober enough that she agreed to this with the goal of basically throwing the relationship Jadelyn could have with Victoria in her counterpart's face. Tori is outraged that Jade did something like that to hurt another version of herself when Jadelyn has already been through a harsh life.

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--->'''Firefly''': "Wake up, you moron! Didn’t you hear what they said?! They planned to kidnap little fillies! Those kinds of actions outright prove how evil they are! And yet, you still think they are ''not''?!"

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--->'''Firefly''': "Wake Wake up, you moron! Didn’t you hear what they said?! They planned to kidnap little fillies! Those kinds of actions outright prove how evil they are! And yet, you still think they are ''not''?!"''not''?!



--->'''Lightning Bolt''': "Firefly, we need to talk! How could you be so harsh toward Rainbow Dash? She’s going through personal hell! We should be helping her... but you only keep yelling at her and everypony else instead!"

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--->'''Lightning Bolt''': "Firefly, Firefly, we need to talk! How could you be so harsh toward Rainbow Dash? She’s going through personal hell! We should be helping her... but you only keep yelling at her and everypony else instead!"instead!



-->'''Sonic:''' "Ya know, when I first met these girls, the Sailor Scouts, I thought for sure that there were humans out there that weren't as vile and disgusting as Eggman... [[NotSoDifferentRemark but I guess I was wrong for once]]."

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-->'''Sonic:''' "Ya Ya know, when I first met these girls, the Sailor Scouts, I thought for sure that there were humans out there that weren't as vile and disgusting as Eggman... [[NotSoDifferentRemark but I guess I was wrong for once]]."



-->'''Asuka:''' "How could you do something like that? That's horrible, going around altering the genetics of babies! How could you do that to my parents?"

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-->'''Asuka:''' "How How could you do something like that? That's horrible, going around altering the genetics of babies! How could you do that to my parents?"parents?



-->'''Beth:''' "What. The. ''[[PrecisionFStrike Hell]]'', Sherlock. You... Who ''are'' you, [[TearJerker and what have you done with my Sherlock Holmes?]]"

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-->'''Beth:''' "What.What. The. ''[[PrecisionFStrike Hell]]'', Sherlock. You... Who ''are'' you, [[TearJerker and what have you done with my Sherlock Holmes?]]"Holmes?]]



-->'''Vaati:''' "[[SarcasmMode Oh, let's see! Maybe it's because of]] [[SuddenlyShouting YOU?!]] Maybe it's because the whole lot of you abandoned Twilight when she needed you most, [[CassandraTruth thinking she was a jealous liar when every word she spoke was the truth?!]] I saw her when I sent my Eye Sentry down there to watch over her while she made her way back here, and [[DespairEventHorizon she was a complete wreck.]] [[BreakTheCutie You completely shattered her faith in all of you!]] You might as well have [[SophisticatedAsHell defecated]] on the Elements themselves, because now that you weakened your bond of friendship with the one who holds all of you together, they are completely and totally worthless! No, [[PreAsskickingOneLiner we're going to get through this through the sweat of our brows, the strength of our backs, AND THE BLOOD OF OUR ENEMIES!]]"

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-->'''Vaati:''' "[[SarcasmMode [[SarcasmMode Oh, let's see! Maybe it's because of]] [[SuddenlyShouting YOU?!]] Maybe it's because the whole lot of you abandoned Twilight when she needed you most, [[CassandraTruth thinking she was a jealous liar when every word she spoke was the truth?!]] I saw her when I sent my Eye Sentry down there to watch over her while she made her way back here, and [[DespairEventHorizon she was a complete wreck.]] [[BreakTheCutie You completely shattered her faith in all of you!]] You might as well have [[SophisticatedAsHell defecated]] on the Elements themselves, because now that you weakened your bond of friendship with the one who holds all of you together, they are completely and totally worthless! No, [[PreAsskickingOneLiner we're going to get through this through the sweat of our brows, the strength of our backs, AND THE BLOOD OF OUR ENEMIES!]]"ENEMIES!]]



-->'''Tony''': "What happened to your son is a tragedy. But you do him no respect by wishing his fate upon those he loves. If you truly care for him you would understand that he loves his brother and would not want to see him hurt. But don't listen to me. Wallow in your hatred. Let it warm you at night. Tell yourself you are the victim and wrap yourself in that indignation like a shroud. But don't make Jon your target ever again. Don't blame him for something that is not his fault. He will be my ward the next time you lay eyes on him and I do not take kindly to people insulting those I have pledged to protect. Speak that way to him again..."\\
'''Catelyn''': "You have no right to speak to me like this. You enter my home-"\\
'''Tony''': "Which is only your home because you were willing to trade a dead Stark brother for a living one."\\
'''Catelyn''': "I am the Lady of Winterfell and my son... my precious son... is lying there and you DARE question how I treat that bastard? My son... my Bran-"\\
'''Tony''': "Loves his brother. And he would be ashamed to see you like this. Of course, what he considers love and what you consider it might be two different things."

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-->'''Tony''': "What What happened to your son is a tragedy. But you do him no respect by wishing his fate upon those he loves. If you truly care for him you would understand that he loves his brother and would not want to see him hurt. But don't listen to me. Wallow in your hatred. Let it warm you at night. Tell yourself you are the victim and wrap yourself in that indignation like a shroud. But don't make Jon your target ever again. Don't blame him for something that is not his fault. He will be my ward the next time you lay eyes on him and I do not take kindly to people insulting those I have pledged to protect. Speak that way to him again..."\\
\\
'''Catelyn''': "You You have no right to speak to me like this. You enter my home-"\\
home-\\
'''Tony''': "Which Which is only your home because you were willing to trade a dead Stark brother for a living one."\\
\\
'''Catelyn''': "I I am the Lady of Winterfell and my son... my precious son... is lying there and you DARE question how I treat that bastard? My son... my Bran-"\\
Bran-\\
'''Tony''': "Loves Loves his brother. And he would be ashamed to see you like this. Of course, what he considers love and what you consider it might be two different things."



-->'''Cole [=MacGrath=]''': "What were you thinking? Were you really going to kill her, Kitty? You really got to watch that sense of distrust you have. That gun you pulled at her, it's not something you aim at a teammate. When are you finally going to grow up, Kitty?"

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-->'''Cole [=MacGrath=]''': "What What were you thinking? Were you really going to kill her, Kitty? You really got to watch that sense of distrust you have. That gun you pulled at her, it's not something you aim at a teammate. When are you finally going to grow up, Kitty?"Kitty?



* In ''FanFic/StargateEquestria'', O'Neill rips Rainbow Dash a new one for going off alone when he instructed her to take a partner.

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* In ''FanFic/StargateEquestria'', ''Fanfic/StargateEquestria'', O'Neill rips Rainbow Dash a new one for going off alone when he instructed her to take a partner.



* In "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33825400/ When Demon Hunters Meet the Arrow]]", [[Series/{{Supernatural}} Dean and Sam Winchester]] call out [[Series/{{Arrow}} Oliver, Diggle and Felicity]] for ignoring Laurel's accusations against Blood, pointing out that Officer Daily's actions ''only'' make sense if Blood is genuinely guilty and was set up to be the fall guy for that particular criminal.
* ''FanFic/WhenThereWasATomorrow'': Paragon-flavored [[Franchise/MassEffect Shepard]] delivers a particularly angry one to [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Dr. Halsey]] after learning [[spoiler:how Spartan-[=IIs=] were recruited]].

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* In "[[https://archiveofourown.''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33825400/ When Demon Hunters Meet the Arrow]]", Arrow]]'', [[Series/{{Supernatural}} Dean and Sam Winchester]] call out [[Series/{{Arrow}} Oliver, Diggle and Felicity]] for ignoring Laurel's accusations against Blood, pointing out that Officer Daily's actions ''only'' make sense if Blood is genuinely guilty and was set up to be the fall guy for that particular criminal.
* ''FanFic/WhenThereWasATomorrow'': ''Fanfic/WhenThereWasATomorrow'': Paragon-flavored [[Franchise/MassEffect Shepard]] delivers a particularly angry one to [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Dr. Halsey]] after learning [[spoiler:how Spartan-[=IIs=] were recruited]].



-->'''Taylor:''' "If you had moved in after she had gotten seriously hurt we would have a VERY different conversation right now."

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-->'''Taylor:''' "If If you had moved in after she had gotten seriously hurt hurt, we would have a VERY different conversation right now."
now.



* ''Fanfic/BlackbirdArrow'';

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* ''Fanfic/BlackbirdArrow'';''[[Fanfic/BlackbirdArrow Blackbird]]'';



* A key element of "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/41647302/ Never Be Silent]]" is Team Arrow confronting Team Flash about the methods they used to contain metahumans, as the Pipeline cells amount to psychological torture given the minimal facilities. While Oliver and his allies concede that Barry, Caitlin and Cisco were basically manipulated into taking such extreme measures by Thawne-as-Wells and conventional prisons had no means of containing such prisoners when Barry started out anyway, Barry and his allies are still ashamed to realise they went so far that they didn’t even tell a woman that her son was dead.

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* A key element of "[[https://archiveofourown.''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/41647302/ Never Be Silent]]" Silent]]'' is Team Arrow confronting Team Flash about the methods they used to contain metahumans, as the Pipeline cells amount to psychological torture given the minimal facilities. While Oliver and his allies concede that Barry, Caitlin and Cisco were basically manipulated into taking such extreme measures by Thawne-as-Wells and conventional prisons had no means of containing such prisoners when Barry started out anyway, Barry and his allies are still ashamed to realise they went so far that they didn’t even tell a woman that her son was dead.



--> '''Ichigo''': Shut the fuck up, Ishida. Your Quincy bullshit is what caused the trouble two days ago. Your fucking pride caused you to unleash a horde of Hollows on our town rather than listen to reason. Far as I’m concerned? Your “pride” can go die in a ditch. So get your head out of your ass and listen up!

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--> '''Ichigo''': Shut the fuck up, Ishida. Your Quincy bullshit is what caused the trouble two days ago. Your fucking pride caused you to unleash a horde of Hollows on our town rather than listen to reason. Far as I’m I'm concerned? Your “pride” "pride" can go die in a ditch. So get your head out of your ass and listen up!



* In ''Fanfic/ChildhoodsEndBloodborne'', after the main characters leave Oedon Tomb, Eileen takes Djura outside of the chapel to call him out on taking the girls back into Central Yharnam.
-->'''Eileen''': "You were safe at the tower! All you had to do was ''stay there until sunrise'', instead of – of dragging them out onto the streets – gods’ blood, Djura, what was so bloody difficult about that, that you couldn’t – you couldn’t just–''"\\
'''Djura''': "They were so frightened. I didn’t – I thought if we just [[spoiler:got the music box]], that–"\\
'''Eileen''': "[[ArmorPiercingQuestion That you’d prove yourself right?]] That you’d show all of us wicked hunters that you’d been right all along, that if you give the beasts a sweet lullaby they’ll be gentle as lambs?"

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* In ''Fanfic/ChildhoodsEndBloodborne'', ''[[Fanfic/ChildhoodsEndBloodborne Childhood's End]]'', after the main characters leave Oedon Tomb, Eileen takes Djura outside of the chapel to call him out on taking the girls back into Central Yharnam.
-->'''Eileen''': "You You were safe at the tower! All you had to do was ''stay there until sunrise'', instead of – of dragging them out onto the streets – gods’ blood, Djura, what was so bloody difficult about that, that you couldn’t – you couldn’t just–''"\\
just–''\\
'''Djura''': "They They were so frightened. I didn’t – I thought if we just [[spoiler:got the music box]], that–"\\
that–\\
'''Eileen''': "[[ArmorPiercingQuestion [[ArmorPiercingQuestion That you’d prove yourself right?]] That you’d show all of us wicked hunters that you’d been right all along, that if you give the beasts a sweet lullaby they’ll be gentle as lambs?"
lambs?



--->'''Xander''': "Yeah, it would have been nice if you'd thanked me for saving your life, Buff. But since none of the other cockteasers around here who I've helped save from 'gang members on PCP' have ever thanked me, either, it's really not that much of a surprise that you didn't. [[DisappointedInYou I always thought you were better than the rest of those tramps. But I guess I was wrong.]] Too bad."

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--->'''Xander''': "Yeah, Yeah, it would have been nice if you'd thanked me for saving your life, Buff. But since none of the other cockteasers around here who I've helped save from 'gang members on PCP' have ever thanked me, either, it's really not that much of a surprise that you didn't. [[DisappointedInYou I always thought you were better than the rest of those tramps. But I guess I was wrong.]] Too bad."



* ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'': After three seasons' worth of progressing from LovableCoward to DirtyCoward, [[spoiler:Hobbes ''finally'' gets called out on it by Calvin in [[SeasonFinale "Thunderstorm"]], thus making more of an effort in later seasons.]]

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* ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'': After three seasons' worth of progressing from LovableCoward to DirtyCoward, [[spoiler:Hobbes ''finally'' gets called out on it by Calvin in [[SeasonFinale "Thunderstorm"]], thus making more of an effort in later seasons.]]
seasons]].



-->'''Tsumugi:''' "...To be honest... I plainly don't think I can trust you anymore."\\
'''Kaede:''' "I understand--"\\
'''Tsumugi:''' "I don't think you really do. You didn't just lie to us, Kaede. You convinced everyone ''I'' was lying when I was telling the truth. Do you have any idea how horrible it is to have no one believe you when you're not doing anything wrong?"\\
'''Kaito:''' "Hey, that's not fair! Kaede helped me prove you innocent, remember?!"\\
'''Tsumugi:''' "But she's also why people suspected me in the first place. If you didn't remember that noise, she would've said I was the culprit. We all would have... [...] I'm just not comfortable with Kaede being in charge anymore. So... I don't think she should be."\\
'''Kaito:''' "Seriously?! Come on, Tsumugi! Everyone gets accused in the trials at some point! That's not Kaede's fault!"\\
'''Gundam:''' "While that is true, Luminary, we also cannot forget that many of our follies in that trial were born of the Siren's deceptions. Regardless of her reasons, had she simply confided the same trust in us she expected us to grant her, much of our debate would not have happened. [[spoiler:Hifumi]]'s killer could have been discovered with far less tribulation on us all."

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-->'''Tsumugi:''' "...-->'''Tsumugi:''' ...To be honest... I plainly don't think I can trust you anymore."\\
\\
'''Kaede:''' "I understand--"\\
I understand--\\
'''Tsumugi:''' "I I don't think you really do. You didn't just lie to us, Kaede. You convinced everyone ''I'' was lying when I was telling the truth. Do you have any idea how horrible it is to have no one believe you when you're not doing anything wrong?"\\
wrong?\\
'''Kaito:''' "Hey, Hey, that's not fair! Kaede helped me prove you innocent, remember?!"\\
remember?!\\
'''Tsumugi:''' "But But she's also why people suspected me in the first place. If you didn't remember that noise, she would've said I was the culprit. We all would have... [...] I'm just not comfortable with Kaede being in charge anymore. So... I don't think she should be."\\
\\
'''Kaito:''' "Seriously?! Seriously?! Come on, Tsumugi! Everyone gets accused in the trials at some point! That's not Kaede's fault!"\\
fault!\\
'''Gundam:''' "While While that is true, Luminary, we also cannot forget that many of our follies in that trial were born of the Siren's deceptions. Regardless of her reasons, had she simply confided the same trust in us she expected us to grant her, much of our debate would not have happened. [[spoiler:Hifumi]]'s killer could have been discovered with far less tribulation on us all."



* ''FanFic/SystemRestore'':

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* ''FanFic/SystemRestore'':''Fanfic/SystemRestore'':



-->'''Dolly:''' "But nae, ye hink th' rules - th' ''one rule'', dornt goddamn tell Wood abit th' goddamn secrit weapon - dornt apply tae ye. Ye hink yoo're abuv th' system."

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-->'''Dolly:''' "But But nae, ye hink th' rules - th' ''one rule'', dornt goddamn tell Wood abit th' goddamn secrit weapon - dornt apply tae ye. Ye hink yoo're abuv th' system."
system.



* The Lord Inquisitor delivers one to the Lady Inquisitor in ''[[Fanfic/TwiceUponAnAge All This Sh*t is Twice as Weird]]'' when she [[spoiler:conscripts the Grey Wardens instead of exiling them]]. This, coupled with her CrisisOfFaith, leads to a horrible OOCIsSeriousBusiness moment a bit later, making him wonder if he went too far.



* The Lord Inquisitor delivers one to the Lady Inquisitor in ''[[Fanfic/TwiceUponAnAge All This Sh*t is Twice as Weird]]'' when she [[spoiler:conscripts the Grey Wardens instead of exiling them]]. This, coupled with her CrisisOfFaith, leads to a horrible OOCIsSeriousBusiness moment a bit later, making him wonder if he went too far.

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* The Lord Inquisitor delivers one to the Lady Inquisitor in ''[[Fanfic/TwiceUponAnAge All This Sh*t is Twice as Weird]]'' when she [[spoiler:conscripts the Grey Wardens instead of exiling them]]. This, coupled with her CrisisOfFaith, leads to a horrible OOCIsSeriousBusiness moment a bit later, making him wonder if he went too far.



-->'''Meg''': ''(quietly)'' Hey.
-->'''Lois''': Meg, what did you honestly think you were trying to achieve? Do you have any idea how much stress you put me and your dad through?
-->'''Meg''': I just wanted a new Prada bag...
-->'''Lois''': A-and so what, you decided to go behind our backs and use your own baby brother to get it? After we explicitly told you it was too expensive.
-->'''Meg''': I-I just thought I'd be able to impress people by showing off a fancy new one.
-->'''Lois''': Well, I'm very disappointed in you, young lady, I thought we taught you better than that! I trusted you to look after Stewie. I thought it was nice that you two were spending so much time together, but now I find that my own daughter went behind me and your dad's backs, and that she used her own brother while lying and exploiting the goodwill and kindness of others. And because of that, Stewie got taken away by Child Services. Did you even think of how terrified me and your dad were, or the hell we had to go through to get Stewie back? Did you even care about Stewie's safety and what he was thinking? No you didn't, you put your own selfish needs before your own family!
-->'''Meg''': Mom, I'm really sorry.

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-->'''Meg''': ''(quietly)'' Hey.
-->'''Lois''':
Hey.\\
'''Lois''':
Meg, what did you honestly think you were trying to achieve? Do you have any idea how much stress you put me and your dad through?
-->'''Meg''':
through?\\
'''Meg''':
I just wanted a new Prada bag...
-->'''Lois''':
bag...\\
'''Lois''':
A-and so what, you decided to go behind our backs and use your own baby brother to get it? After we explicitly told you it was too expensive.
-->'''Meg''':
expensive.\\
'''Meg''':
I-I just thought I'd be able to impress people by showing off a fancy new one.
-->'''Lois''':
one.\\
'''Lois''':
Well, I'm very disappointed in you, young lady, I thought we taught you better than that! I trusted you to look after Stewie. I thought it was nice that you two were spending so much time together, but now I find that my own daughter went behind me and your dad's backs, and that she used her own brother while lying and exploiting the goodwill and kindness of others. And because of that, Stewie got taken away by Child Services. Did you even think of how terrified me and your dad were, or the hell we had to go through to get Stewie back? Did you even care about Stewie's safety and what he was thinking? No you didn't, you put your own selfish needs before your own family!
-->'''Meg''':
family!\\
'''Meg''':
Mom, I'm really sorry.



* In ''FanFic/TheFifthAct'': Cloud is called multiple times throughout the story for wanting and attempting to kill Sephiroth for the actions done by original timeline!Sephiroth when Sephiroth is no near the monster the other one became thanks to Cloud's actions. Cloud later gets called out for [[spoiler: attempting a murder-suicide with Sephiroth during the story's climax.]]

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* In ''FanFic/TheFifthAct'': ''Fanfic/TheFifthAct'': Cloud is called multiple times throughout the story for wanting and attempting to kill Sephiroth for the actions done by original timeline!Sephiroth when Sephiroth is no near the monster the other one became thanks to Cloud's actions. Cloud later gets called out for [[spoiler: attempting [[spoiler:attempting a murder-suicide with Sephiroth during the story's climax.]]climax]].



* In ''FanFic/BuildYourWingsOnTheWayDown,'' Hughes is angry at Roy for endangering an eleven-year old kid (Ed) on the train by having him fight terrorists, even though Ed is a talented alchemist, because Ed was strangled and hurt and could have been hurt worse since [[ForWantOfANail Ed was by himself]].
** Hughes is angry at Roy for allowing Ed [[spoiler:an attempt to save Nina if he believes with good reason that Ed will fail and kill Nina in the attempt]].

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* In ''FanFic/BuildYourWingsOnTheWayDown,'' ''Fanfic/BuildYourWingsOnTheWayDown,'' Hughes is angry at Roy for endangering an eleven-year old kid (Ed) on the train by having him fight terrorists, even though Ed is a talented alchemist, because Ed was strangled and hurt and could have been hurt worse since [[ForWantOfANail Ed was by himself]].
** Hughes is also gets angry at Roy for allowing Ed [[spoiler:an to attempt to [[spoiler:to save Nina if he Nina]], as Roy firmly believes with good reason that Ed will fail and kill Nina not only fail, but [[spoiler:''kill Nina'']] in the attempt]].
process. Roy expects this to [[BreakTheHaughty teach Ed some humility]], while Hughes is understandably pissed off by Roy trying to twist such horrible circumstances to his advantage.



* "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44950582/ Disrespecting Authority]]" features Ginny, Sirius and Arthur all calling Dumbledore out over his decision to force Harry to learn Occlumency from Snape. Ginny is indignant when Dumbledore's attempt to conceal the truth from Umbridge involves a lie that forces Harry to attend another week's detention with Umbridge, Sirius (backed by Remus) points out that part of Occlumency training requires complete trust between teacher and student when he would ''never'' trust Snape with a secret and knows Harry wouldn't either, and Arthur affirms that Ginny is right to be concerned given her own experience of mental abuse after her time with the Diary.

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* "[[https://archiveofourown.''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44950582/ Disrespecting Authority]]" Authority]]'' features Ginny, Sirius and Arthur all calling Dumbledore out over his decision to force Harry to learn Occlumency from Snape. Ginny is indignant when Dumbledore's attempt to conceal the truth from Umbridge involves a lie that forces Harry to attend another week's detention with Umbridge, Sirius (backed by Remus) points out that part of Occlumency training requires complete trust between teacher and student when he would ''never'' trust Snape with a secret and knows Harry wouldn't either, and Arthur affirms that Ginny is right to be concerned given her own experience of mental abuse after her time with the Diary.



-->''"May your greed be your doom, Thorin Oakenshield!"''

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-->''"May -->'''Kathryn:''' ''May your greed be your doom, Thorin Oakenshield!"''
Oakenshield!''



* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11114325/1/The-Measure-of-a-Man The Measure of a Man]]'', Peter gets to deliver one to the rest of the Avengers and other heroes when he asks them how they couldn’t have realized Ock was in control of his body for the last few weeks.



* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11114325/1/The-Measure-of-a-Man The Measure of a Man]]'', Peter gets to deliver one to the rest of the Avengers and other heroes when he asks them how they couldn’t have realized Ock was in control of his body for the last few weeks.



'''Marinette''': If you did the right thing, then why did you flee? Why did you vanish from my life without a single word? I waited for you every single night, hoping for a sign, anything, that would’ve let me know you were okay.\\
'''Adrien''': I wasn’t okay. My family was never anything more than a sick joke. Can you put yourself in my shoes for just a second? I lost everything that day.\\

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'''Marinette''': If you did the right thing, then why did you flee? Why did you vanish from my life without a single word? I waited for you every single night, hoping for a sign, anything, that would’ve would've let me know you were okay.\\
'''Adrien''': I wasn’t wasn't okay. My family was never anything more than a sick joke. Can you put yourself in my shoes for just a second? I lost everything that day.\\



'''Marinette''': I’ve spent five years ''mourning'' you, while you at least knew that I was ''alive''. How is that love, Adrien? How can you claim to love me, when you selfishly left me hurting for you these last five years? You had one word to say, one single word and you could’ve ended it all. The pain, the mourning, the missing chunk of my heart that you took away with you when you left me. One word, and yet you didn’t.\\

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'''Marinette''': I’ve I've spent five years ''mourning'' you, while you at least knew that I was ''alive''. How is that love, Adrien? How can you claim to love me, when you selfishly left me hurting for you these last five years? You had one word to say, one single word and you could’ve could've ended it all. The pain, the mourning, the missing chunk of my heart that you took away with you when you left me. One word, and yet you didn’t.didn't.\\



'''Marinette''': I thought something was keeping you from coming back. I thought that, maybe, you didn’t know that I was waiting for you. But all this time you ''knew'' that I was looking for you. You ''knew'' that I was heartbroken because of your absence, and yet you didn’t care! You saw me on the Ladyblog [[PunctuatedForEmphasis every. Single. Night. For. Five. Years]]. You knew ''where'' I was, you knew ''how'' to reach me. And yet you still ''chose'' to disappear from my life.\\
'''Adrien''': "I never—\\
'''Marinette''': Cut the crap!" ''(takes a step towards him and pokes him in the chest)'' For all I knew you could have been dead! You just abandoned me like I was nothing but a worthless piece of garbage to you that night! You were my best friend, and I loved you so, so much! And I thought you loved me too but I guess I wasn’t worth your trouble after all! ''(gets up and walks to the door)'' You know what hurts the most, Chat? I trusted you with my very life. Even when Hawkmoth was strangling me, even as I was losing consciousness, I wasn’t afraid. I knew — I ''thought'' — that you’d always come for me, or die trying. You, on the other hand, didn’t even have enough faith in me to believe I’d stay by your side when things got difficult. What kind of a crappy partner have I been to you if you honestly believed I’d jump the ship at the first bump?\\

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'''Marinette''': I thought something was keeping you from coming back. I thought that, maybe, you didn’t didn't know that I was waiting for you. But all this time you ''knew'' that I was looking for you. You ''knew'' that I was heartbroken because of your absence, and yet you didn’t care! You saw me on the Ladyblog [[PunctuatedForEmphasis every. Single. Night. For. Five. Years]]. You knew ''where'' I was, you knew ''how'' to reach me. And yet you still ''chose'' to disappear from my life.\\
'''Adrien''': "I I never—\\
'''Marinette''': Cut the crap!" crap! ''(takes a step towards him and pokes him in the chest)'' For all I knew you could have been dead! You just abandoned me like I was nothing but a worthless piece of garbage to you that night! You were my best friend, and I loved you so, so much! And I thought you loved me too but I guess I wasn’t wasn't worth your trouble after all! ''(gets up and walks to the door)'' You know what hurts the most, Chat? I trusted you with my very life. Even when Hawkmoth was strangling me, even as I was losing consciousness, I wasn’t wasn't afraid. I knew — I ''thought'' — that you’d you'd always come for me, or die trying. You, on the other hand, didn’t didn't even have enough faith in me to believe I’d I'd stay by your side when things got difficult. What kind of a crappy partner have I been to you if you honestly believed I’d I'd jump the ship at the first bump?\\



'''Marinette''': Don’t. I’ve already lost five years of my life waiting for you, I won’t lose another second. ''(walks out, slamming the door)''

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'''Marinette''': Don’t. I’ve Don't. I've already lost five years of my life waiting for you, I won’t lose another second. ''(walks out, slamming the door)''



'''Chat Noir:''' But why?! We were doing just fine. ''(folds arms)'' "Until you kept denying our love.\\

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'''Chat Noir:''' But why?! We were doing just fine. ''(folds arms)'' "Until Until you kept denying our love.\\



'''Alya:''' But if we're friends, [[InsaneTrollLogic you have to tell us everything anyway!]]\\

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'''Alya:''' But if we're friends, [[InsaneTrollLogic [[EntitledBitch you have to tell us everything anyway!]]\\anyway]]!\\



* In ''Fanfic/LeaveForMendeleiev'':

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* In ''Fanfic/LeaveForMendeleiev'':



** Later, Aurore is disgusted when Adrien tries to prevent her from intervening when [[AlphaBitch Chloe]] has cornered Marinette and is [[BreakingSpeech really laying into her]]. Why? Because he's more concerned about how Chloe might react to being stopped than the way she's hurting Marinette, claiming that Marinette can take being hurt better than Chloe can. After Aurore [[TranquilFury gets away from him]] and intervenes, he then attempts to blame ''her'' for the resulting akuma, only for Marinette to call him out on it:

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** Later, Aurore is disgusted when Adrien tries to prevent her from intervening when [[AlphaBitch Chloe]] has cornered Marinette and is [[BreakingSpeech really laying into her]]. Why? Because he's more concerned about how Chloe might react to being stopped than the way she's hurting Marinette, claiming that [[BecauseYouCanCope Marinette can take being hurt better than Chloe can.can]]. After Aurore [[TranquilFury gets away from him]] and intervenes, he then attempts to blame ''her'' for the resulting akuma, only for Marinette to call him out on it:



--->"So you’re telling me that you not only gave my student an extra quirk without informing me, but that this impossible miracle quirk has painted a target on her back a mile wide because it comes with a nemesis that runs the goddamn ''League of Villains!'' Oh, and considering that she disappeared into thin air, they’re probably the ones who took her, especially since you didn’t even give her any extra security after handing her a giant ''I Am Here'' sign. Am I missing anything, All Might?”

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--->"So you’re --->'''Aizawa:''' So you're telling me that you not only gave my student an extra quirk without informing me, but that this impossible miracle quirk has painted a target on her back a mile wide because it comes with a nemesis that runs the goddamn ''League of Villains!'' Oh, and considering that she disappeared into thin air, they’re they're probably the ones who took her, especially since you didn’t didn't even give her any extra security after handing her a giant ''I Am Here'' sign. Am I missing anything, All Might?”Might?



--->"This is your own damn fault, All Might. Seriously, what were you thinking? Cornering a young lady like that?! Honestly, I almost wish she’d done more than just blind you, because maybe then you would actually learn your lesson!"

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--->"This --->'''Recovery Girl:''' This is your own damn fault, All Might. Seriously, what were you thinking? Cornering a young lady like that?! Honestly, I almost wish she’d she'd done more than just blind you, because maybe then you would actually learn your lesson!"lesson!



-->'''Mikoto''': "Mai... What... happened here?"\\
'''Mai''': "Don't play dumb, Mikoto! You killed [[spoiler: Bachiko and Meiko]], don't you remember?"\\
'''Mikoto''': "I did? I don't remember. I saw you... in trouble... and the next thing I knew, [[spoiler:the two of them]] disappeared."\\
'''Mai''': ''[after a pause]'' "I'm sorry, Mikoto. I just... don't know what's happened to you. Obviously it's not the [[ParodySue SUEs]]' influence, but you... didn't seem yourself in that moment. You're a kind girl who makes friends with everyone, not some ruthless killer, even if it's my enemy you're fighting."

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-->'''Mikoto''': "Mai...Mai... What... happened here?"\\
here?\\
'''Mai''': "Don't Don't play dumb, Mikoto! You killed [[spoiler: Bachiko [[spoiler:Bachiko and Meiko]], don't you remember?"\\
remember?\\
'''Mikoto''': "I I did? I don't remember. I saw you... in trouble... and the next thing I knew, [[spoiler:the two of them]] disappeared."\\
\\
'''Mai''': ''[after ''(after a pause]'' "I'm pause)'' I'm sorry, Mikoto. I just... don't know what's happened to you. Obviously it's not the [[ParodySue SUEs]]' influence, but you... didn't seem yourself in that moment. You're a kind girl who makes friends with everyone, not some ruthless killer, even if it's my enemy you're fighting."
fighting.



-->'''Pinkie:''' "You’re a bad pony."\\
'''Twilight:''' "What?"\\
'''Pinkie:''' "You tricked me into doing something I didn’t want to. You stole something from Doctor Rose. And you hit me. You didn’t used to do that. Whatever Doctor Rose did to you made you all different and stuff, and now... now you’re a bad pony."\\
'''Twilight:''' "Now Pinkie Pie, you can’t really believe that, We’re best friends, remember? We’re fighting to save Equestria. We’re the good guys."\\
'''Pinkie:''' "I don’t like fighting this evil shadow. I liked it better when we were knights. That was more fun. When I was Lady Pinkie of the Order of Pie, and you were Princess Sparkle, the Wizard in the Tower, and we fought monsters and saved stallions in distress and had fun, You never got angry then. Can’t we go back to doing that?"\\
'''Twilight:''' "Pinkie. Have you believed anything I told you?"\\
'''Pinkie:''' "Of course I believe you! You’re my bestest friend, and bestest friends never lie! It’s just... we used to be knights, and scientists, and librarians. We had fun. But ever since this shadow thing turned up, everything has changed. Now you’re lying to the doctors, and sneaking into offices, and getting all meany-face, and it’s just not the same! I don’t think this shadow pony thing is changing your friends. I think it’s changing you, making you a bad pony. My Twilight wouldn’t yell or lie or steal or hit me! I want my Twilight back."

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-->'''Pinkie:''' "You’re You're a bad pony."\\
\\
'''Twilight:''' "What?"\\
What?\\
'''Pinkie:''' "You You tricked me into doing something I didn’t didn't want to. You stole something from Doctor Rose. And you hit me. You didn’t didn't used to do that. Whatever Doctor Rose did to you made you all different and stuff, and now... now you’re you're a bad pony."\\
\\
'''Twilight:''' "Now Now Pinkie Pie, you can’t can't really believe that, We’re that. We're best friends, remember? We’re We're fighting to save Equestria. We’re We're the good guys."\\
\\
'''Pinkie:''' "I don’t I don't like fighting this evil shadow. I liked it better when we were knights. That was more fun. When I was Lady Pinkie of the Order of Pie, and you were Princess Sparkle, the Wizard in the Tower, and we fought monsters and saved stallions in distress and had fun, fun. You never got angry then. Can’t Can't we go back to doing that?"\\
that?\\
'''Twilight:''' "Pinkie. Pinkie. Have you believed anything I told you?"\\
you?\\
'''Pinkie:''' "Of Of course I believe you! You’re You're my bestest friend, and bestest friends never lie! It’s It's just... we used to be knights, and scientists, and librarians. We had fun. But ever since this shadow thing turned up, everything has changed. Now you’re you're lying to the doctors, and sneaking into offices, and getting all meany-face, and it’s it's just not the same! I don’t don't think this shadow pony thing is changing your friends. I think it’s it's changing you, making you a bad pony. My Twilight wouldn’t wouldn't yell or lie or steal or hit me! I want my Twilight back."



* In ''Fanfic/JerichoMLP'', the eponymous main character, [[FirstPersonSmartass Jericho]], has this happen to him when he gets attacked by an angry townspony. In a [[CurbStompBattle blink-and-you'll-miss-it fight]], Jericho knocks the guy out, only to have the guy's wife and little daughter both rush to his aid. They yell at him, and then he has a WTHH moment on himself.
-->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Jericho]]:''' "Oh, you mean the side-neck chop? That’s just a martial arts move. I mean, yeah, if I’d done it wrong, it would have killed him via cardiac arrest, and so, in hindsight, that was highly irresponsible of me to do but... I’m not helping my case any, am I?"

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* In ''Fanfic/JerichoMLP'', ''[[Fanfic/JerichoMLP Jericho]]'', the eponymous main character, [[FirstPersonSmartass Jericho]], has this happen to him when he gets attacked by an angry townspony. In a [[CurbStompBattle blink-and-you'll-miss-it fight]], Jericho knocks the guy out, only to have the guy's wife and little daughter both rush to his aid. They yell at him, and then he has a WTHH moment on himself.
-->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Jericho]]:''' "Oh, Oh, you mean the side-neck chop? That’s That's just a martial arts move. I mean, yeah, if I’d I'd done it wrong, it would have killed him via cardiac arrest, and so, in hindsight, that was highly irresponsible of me to do but... I’m I'm not helping my case any, am I?"I?
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* ''Fanfic/PeterParkerNeedsAHug'': Batman ends up giving Spider-Man one of these when he learns that the teen is skipping meals to afford the supplies for his web fluid. He tears into him for not asking for help if his situation was that bad, and the lecture is apparantely enough to convince Peter to take Bruce Wayne's offer to move into Wayne Manor.

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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29579046/chapters/72699462 A Little Knowledge Is A Dangerous Thing]]'': All Might attacks Izuku so hard during their final exam that he accidentally breaks his spine, leaving him in a puddle of blood. Katsuki is so shaken by the sight that he sends up a distress flare, then calls his former idol out when All Might continues pressing the attack, having [[FailedASpotCheck failed to notice]] his successor lying broken beside them.



-->'''Rikido:''' "Hey, you know... We--we took out the villain team."\\
'''Katsuki:''' "Yeah, and you took out the surrounding city with them, dumbass! What's the point of winning a goddamned fight if you don't even fucking ''save'' anyone?"

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-->'''Rikido:''' "Hey, Hey, you know... We--we took out the villain team."\\
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'''Katsuki:''' "Yeah, Yeah, and you took out the surrounding city with them, dumbass! What's the point of winning a goddamned fight if you don't even fucking ''save'' anyone?"anyone?
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13167363/26/To-Undo-it-All To Undo it All]]'': After the twins [[nime/BleachFadeToBlack Homura and Shizuka]] take Rukia and erase everyone's memories of her, Ichigo goes on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge, killing both of them the moment he sees them. Rukia furiously calls him out on murdering a pair of innocent children who just wanted to have names, all because he was too angry to bother talking them down even though he could have. [[BothSidesHaveAPoint Ichigo admits she was right but their actions caused him to forget traveling back in time from the Bad Future and the two women he loved to forget him entirely, something Rukia admits sounds horrible]].
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* There are a lot of these to go around in the SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong PeggySue fic ''Fanfic/TheRavensPlan''.
** Two notable ones happen in Chapter 7.
*** Bloodraven angrily calls out Bran for casting the spell that turned back time and not stopping to consider the possibility that something could go wrong with it (in this case, the spell winds up working ''[[GoneHorriblyRight too]]'' [[GoneHorriblyRight well]], sending back the memories of ''way'' more people than originally planned). Bran [[IDidWhatIHadToDo argues back that he did what was necessary]] to undo the Others' NearVillainVictory by making sure Westeros can be better prepared with a do-over.
*** Ned absolutely ''tears'' into Catelyn for her handling of the War of the Five Kings. It shows Ned can get '''terrifying''' when angry, and after Remembering the events that led to his own death and finding out the horrible things his beloved children suffered in the aftermath, he has every good reason to blow his lid.
-->'''Ned:''' ''(in a [[TranquilFury low angry voice]])'' [[WhatWereYouThinking What were you]] ''[[WhatWereYouThinking thinking]]'', Cat?\\
'''Catelyn:''' ''(timidly)'' My lord?\\
'''Ned:''' What madness possessed you? You took Tyrion ''Lannister'' hostage! You forced me to act! You knew things were already precarious in King's Landing and yet you still did it! I had to act, otherwise, I would have weakened my position... such as it was. You took precious time away from me to deal with the Lannisters. You ''usurped'' my authority! And for ''what''?\\
'''Catelyn:''' I am sorry my lord... I couldn't allow him to escape free for what he did to Bran.\\
'''Ned:''' And for that, you doomed us to war? So you defied me and acted. Acted against ''me''?\\
''(a long tense moment passes)''\\
'''Catelyn:''' ''(stammering)'' Forgive me, my lord... I did not think.\\
'''Ned:''' No... no, you did not think. And it is a recurring issue with you. After all these years together I see that you are still a Southern Lady. You have not embraced the North as I once thought. From the Sept to the raising of our daughters and your treatment of Jon... you have not grasped the way of the North. And we all suffered for it.\\
'''Catelyn:''' ''(tearful)'' Ned... that is too far. I know I made some mistakes-\\
'''Ned:''' ({{suddenly shouting}}) ''Some'' mistakes?! You undermined our son with his own bannermen! In a time of war! In the North, men have been executed for less! What were you thinking releasing Jaime Lannister?! He should not have been released... not even for our daughters! Aye, Robb made a mistake with this Talisa, but you should never have promised him to Walder Frey in the first place. Nor Arya. I married ''you'' to secure the Riverlands, the ''entirety'' of the Riverlands, not a single House's loyalty. An ''entire'' kingdom. It was the right choice at the time. Robb ''and'' Arya? That promise you made with the Freys was not. By the god's Cat! You have to think more! Think of the consequences of your actions! If you had, could the ''Red Wedding'' have been avoided? Robb went from having ''three'' important Lannister hostages to ''two'' and then ''none''! That ''first'' action freed up Tywin's hand. He could afford to be utterly ruthless and treacherous! While Robb held Jaime, he was paralysed, unable to truly act against Robb! He would never have dared risk so much if Jaime's life still lay at a knife's edge!
** In Chapter 41, Jon calls out Bran for not warning him that [[spoiler:the Night King has been blocking his visions of the Others and might remember too]]. Bran counters that telling him wouldn't have made a difference.
** Benjen calls out Ned for keeping Jon's parentage and Lyanna and Rhaegar's true relationship a secret from him, especially considering the fact that as brothers, they should trust one another. Ned cannot find a good response to this.
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* Pinkie gives Twilight a long and painful one in ''FanFic/{{Asylum}}'', after the latter let her frustration with Pinkie's reluctance to help her get the best of her and struck her:

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* Pinkie gives Twilight a long and painful one in ''FanFic/{{Asylum}}'', ''Fanfic/AsylumDaemonOfDecay'', after the latter let her frustration with Pinkie's reluctance to help her get the best of her and struck her:
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44950582/ Disrespecting Authority]]" features Ginny, Sirius and Arthur all calling Dumbledore out over his decision to force Harry to learn Occlumency from Snape. Ginny is indignant when Dumbledore's attempt to conceal the truth from Umbridge involves a lie that forces Harry to attend another week's detention with Umbridge, Sirius (backed by Remus) points out that part of Occlumency training requires complete trust between teacher and student when he would ''never'' trust Snape with a secret and knows Harry wouldn't either, and Arthur affirms that Ginny is right to be concerned given her own experience of mental abuse after her time with the Diary.

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* When Kakashi tries to capture Kurama for abducting Naruto in ''Fanfic/BlackkatsReverse'', a furious Kurama answers Kakashi has no right to pretend caring for Naruto, as he refused to raise the kid or doing anything to stop Konoha from treating him as an outcast.

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* When Kakashi tries to capture Kurama for abducting Naruto in ''Fanfic/BlackkatsReverse'', a furious Kurama answers declares that Kakashi has no right to pretend caring he cares for Naruto, as he refused to raise the kid or doing anything to stop Konoha from treating him as an outcast.outcast.
* ''Fanfic/AndrogyninjasADropOfPoison'':
** In the Forest of Death, Sakura rips Naruto a new one for recklessly dragging them into a fight with an opponent who clearly outclasses them, angrily reminding him that they are dealing with people who can and ''will'' kill them if the opportunity arises.
** Following the preliminaries, Kakashi takes Naruto aside and takes him to task for the above incident, as well as how he refused to let Sakura opt out of her match, overriding her wishes because ''[[ItsAllAboutMe he]]'' didn't want her to quit.
** After the Konoha Crush, Kakashi and Sakura both confront Sasuke over being a GloryHound who ignored orders to chase after the retreating Gaara. Kakashi does so calmly; Sakura [[TalkToTheFist busts his nose]] and combines it with a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
** Naruto ''attempts'' this after [[InternalReveal learning about how Sakura has killed several enemies]], only for Sakura to turn it back around on him and call him out for being naive.



* In ''FanFic/KitsuneNoKenFistOfTheFox'', Naruto gets called out a total of four times throughout the story. The first three times (coming separately from Ino, Neji and Shikamaru) concern an incident where he almost killed an attacker and was willing to ignore his friends' urging to spare the person's life, then proceeded to avoid his friends after the fact. The fourth occasion is during his tribunal for being a member of the [[TheDreaded Kyuushingai]] who contributed to a year's worth of chaos across the country, where both Judge Utatane and prosecutor Yugao chew him out for his subsequent "IDidWhatIHadToDo" attitude regarding that period, even when he explains that he did all he did in an effort to stop [[EvilCounterpart Gaara's]] plot to take over the government.

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* In ''FanFic/KitsuneNoKenFistOfTheFox'', ''Fanfic/KitsuneNoKenFistOfTheFox'', Naruto gets called out a total of four times throughout the story. The first three times (coming separately from Ino, Neji and Shikamaru) concern an incident where he almost killed an attacker and was willing to ignore his friends' urging to spare the person's life, then proceeded to avoid his friends after the fact. The fourth occasion is during his tribunal for being a member of the [[TheDreaded Kyuushingai]] who contributed to a year's worth of chaos across the country, where both Judge Utatane and prosecutor Yugao chew him out for his subsequent "IDidWhatIHadToDo" attitude regarding that period, even when he explains that he did all he did in an effort to stop [[EvilCounterpart Gaara's]] plot to take over the government.



'''Judge Utatane:''' "And yet, by your actions on the night of the New Year’s celebration in Kumo City, [[ArmorPiercingQuestion isn't that what ended up happening anyway--that cities were subjected to multiple homicides?]]"

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'''Judge Utatane:''' "And yet, by your actions on the night of the New Year’s Year's celebration in Kumo City, [[ArmorPiercingQuestion isn't that what ended up happening anyway--that cities were subjected to multiple homicides?]]"
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'''Chat Noir:''' ''([[DeathGlare glaring at him]])'' "''[[GreenEyedMonster Stay]]'' [[GreenEyedMonster out of this]], ''[[GreenEyedMonster snake]]''.\\

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'''Chat Noir:''' ''([[DeathGlare glaring at him]])'' "''[[GreenEyedMonster ''[[GreenEyedMonster Stay]]'' [[GreenEyedMonster out of this]], ''[[GreenEyedMonster snake]]''.\\
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*** Elyon blows up on Caleb when he declares his intent to kill Jade/Kage, literally seconds after Elyon has stated she's trying to make peace with her.
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* In ''{{Fanfic/Everqueen}}'', that's Isha's reaction once she sees what kind of FlawedPrototype the Thunder Warriors are. She actually snaps at the Emperor before catching herself.
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* ''Fanfic/TheJudgementOfTheWorld5Ds'':
** Jack gets called out by Yusei for trying to keep the latter out of the loop regarding [[spoiler:Rua fainting getting a concussion during a duel]].
** Martha leaves multiple messages scolding Jack and Crow after realizing they lied to her earlier about visiting a nearby town to buy D-Wheel parts and that the two instead likely went on a dangerous mission that they've purposely kept Rua and Ruka in the dark about.
** While his reaction is somewhat muted, Yusei is clearly unhappy that Aki tricked him into agreeing to be her partner in a tag team duel at her school without telling him it was a ''lovers'' tag duel until the last minute, as it effectively announces to the school that they're a couple when they aren't even officially in a relationship. He gets over it rather quickly, however, as Aki explains she only did this to help Asuka get Judai's attention (the two formed the opposing tag team) and simply didn't know how to tell Yusei that. Moreover, despite his discomfort with the whole thing, Yusei is nevertheless relieved that Aki didn't ask anyone else to be her partner and reasons that being her teammate in a lovers tag duel would at least keep other guys away from her.
** Ryo gives this to Honest for lying to him and his friends and manipulating their memories regarding Yusuke for years.
** Many characters have this reaction after learning that Judai is responsible for Yubel's rampage due to sending the latter into space, though some do concede that they can't exactly blame him when they didn't even know Duel Spirits existed until fairly recently. Yusei and Aki, at least, take it back after learning Judai's actions was due to misunderstandings caused by his young age and naivety at the time.
** Yusei accuses [[spoiler:Yugi Muto]] of treating the former's timeline as an ExpendableAlternateUniverse and only grows more incensed when the latter confirms it with a casual shrug. [[spoiler:Yugi]] responds by pointing out that most don't understand what it's like [[GodsHandsAreTied to be a god and have to respect free will, even when it results in tragic consequences]].

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* In ''Fanfic/FamilyGuyFanon'''s rewrite of "Love Thy Trophy/[[AdaptationTitleChange Love Your Trophy]]" has Lois scolds Meg for using Stewie for tips and getting him taken away by Child Services.
-->'''Meg''': ''(quietly)'' Hey.
-->'''Lois''': Meg, what did you honestly think you were trying to achieve? Do you have any idea how much stress you put me and your dad through?
-->'''Meg''': I just wanted a new Prada bag...
-->'''Lois''': A-and so what, you decided to go behind our backs and use your own baby brother to get it? After we explicitly told you it was too expensive.
-->'''Meg''': I-I just thought I'd be able to impress people by showing off a fancy new one.
-->'''Lois''': Well, I'm very disappointed in you, young lady, I thought we taught you better than that! I trusted you to look after Stewie. I thought it was nice that you two were spending so much time together, but now I find that my own daughter went behind me and your dad's backs, and that she used her own brother while lying and exploiting the goodwill and kindness of others. And because of that, Stewie got taken away by Child Services. Did you even think of how terrified me and your dad were, or the hell we had to go through to get Stewie back? Did you even care about Stewie's safety and what he was thinking? No you didn't, you put your own selfish needs before your own family!
-->'''Meg''': Mom, I'm really sorry.
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** Elyon is ''pissed'' when she finds the rebels and guards coming to blows over their rising tensions, especially at Caleb, whose denial about the truth about Jade/Kage and "the Mage" is only enflaming the problem.
** The above-mentioned coming to blows is a result of the guards angrily attacking Caleb for his abandoning of them during the Shadowkhan attack, which got Granik killed.

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** *** The above-mentioned coming to blows is a result of the guards angrily attacking Caleb for his abandoning of them during the Shadowkhan attack, which got Granik killed.

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*** When Caleb realizes the Shadowkhan have reached Elyon's bedchamber during [[AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs the assault on the castle]], he orders all the troops back to the castle to protect her, even when Granik objects that abandoning their defenses will only aid the enemy's attack. He even willingly leaves all the Guards who stay with Granik to face possible death. Elyon herself calls out Caleb on his impulsive decision and callous attitude over the Guards' lives when she learns about them.

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*** When Caleb realizes the Shadowkhan have reached Elyon's bedchamber during [[AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs the assault on the castle]], he orders all the troops back to the castle to protect her, even when Granik objects that abandoning their defenses will only aid the enemy's attack. He even willingly leaves all the Guards who stay with Granik to face possible death. Elyon herself calls out Caleb on his impulsive decision and callous attitude over the Guards' lives when she learns about them.them, later chewing him out and reassigning him away from the castle as punishment.


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'''Gendo:''' "Yui, please... I... I did it for you."//

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* ''Fanfic/GoingAnotherWay'' sees Gendo Ikari get called out twice over for being a ManipulativeBastard.
** First, after the Bardiel incident leaves Shinji in a HeroicBSOD from what the Dummy Plug almost did to Maya, Rei slaps him when they're alone in an elevator.
** Second, when the aftermath of the Zeruel battle leaves Yui able to communicate with NERV through computer screens, she verbally tears Gendo a new butthole for everything he did to the pilots.
-->'''Gendo:''' "Yui...is it really you?"\\
'''Yui:''' "Gendo..."\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui? W-what is wrong, why are you angry?"\\
'''Yui:''' I think I haven't heard right! Gendo Ikari, I know what you did to our son! Not to speak what else I learned you did! How could you?!"\\
'''Gendo:''' "Y-you don't understand that I had to do it!"\\
'''Yui:'''Ohc no! I DON'T understand! You left him, a boy of three years, in the most hurtful way possible! And if that's not bad enough, you went out of your way to further hurt him in ways I wouldn't have thought possible! Oh yes, I remember that monstrosity of auto-pilot all too well! Shinji was traumatized by what YOU did!"\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui, I..."\\
'''Yui:''' "Oh no, don't even try to excuse yourself! What about the future?! You destroyed all we did work so hard for... And for what? You've been chasing an illusion the entire time."\\
'''Gendo:''' "W-what?"\\
'''Yui:''' "What happened to the man I married? I don't recognize you. Your cruelty is breaking my heart."\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui, please... I... I did it for you."//
'''Yui:''' "For me? [=FOR ME=]? I'm ashamed that you did all those things to Shinji in my name! And not only him! Rei, the poor girl you treated so bad that you almost destroyed her very soul! Mana, who almost died because you wanted to prove a point! Everyone who had suffered under your disregard for those around you! I wanted to create a safer world with [=EVA=], not endanger it! You destroyed everything I fought for!\\
'''Gendo:''' "Yui...I did it because I l..."\\
'''Yui:''' "No, don't say it! Because I won't believe you! That's not love, that's obesssion! If you really loved me, you would have given our son your love over all these years... Your heart has gone cold. What happened to you?! I'm to saddened and angry to speak with you anymore. Think about what you have done. The man who I love would never have done all these horrible things... I have nothing more to say to you until you redeem yourself."

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