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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30584753/chapters/75445781 In the Rain]]'' has Alya furiously confront Marinette over not capitalizing on what she saw as the ''perfect'' opportunity for her to confess her feelings to Adrien. Marinette in turn calls Alya out on her SkewedPriorities and trying to [[ShipperWithAnAgenda force them together]] despite how she'd asked her to [[UnwantedAssistance stop]]. While this doesn't phase Alya, learning that [[spoiler:Ms. Mendeleiev witnessed the whole thing and heard her accidental confession]] ''[[OhCrap does]]''.
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14158315/34/Breaking-Providence Breaking Providence]]'', half-elf Princess Elsenthia learns from a pair of drunken nobles that the "Divine Justice" her prisoner, an orc woman, is to undergo is to be raped to death, which the church is using ''as a fundraiser'' by selling tickets to nobles interested in participating. When calling out her mother over how how barbaric such a fate is, her mother (who had previously accidentally admitted to having a rape fetish geared towards orcs) tries to insist Elsenthia would've suffered even worse at their hands. Elsenthia refuses to to hear it.
-->'''Elsenthia:''' So what, because of your sick and twisted fantasies of what orcs do to elves, the General deserves to be fucked to death?! We're supposed to be better than them, mother! Not stoop to their level at the slightest provocation! We're supposed to be the Righteous! The Just! This is not righteousness. This is not justice! This is WRONG! I don't care how you dress it up, mother. Divine Justice is WRONG!


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* In the eight season of ''WebAnimation/SonicForHire'', Tails furiously calls [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]] out for dropping his status as The Creator to solely ruin ''VideoGame/SonicMania'''s popularity.
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* ''Fanfic/InvasionOfFalls'': Dipper is horrified when he catches Dib about to dissect Jeff the Gnome, calling him out for his FantasticRacism towards nonhumans.
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* ''WebVideo/CanOneChangeFixAllOfRWBY'': Calxiyn says that during this universe's version of the Atlas arc, Robyn Hill of the Happy Huntresses would verbally rip into the heroes when she learns that they were helping the people of Mantle in order to cripple the villains' goals in the bigger picture, not because they specifically cared about the people of Mantle's impoverished and downtrodden plight.
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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44950582/ Disrespecting Authority]]'' features Ginny, Sirius, and Arthur all calling Dumbledore out over his decision to force Harry to learn Occlumency from Snape. Ginny is indignant when Dumbledore's attempt to conceal the truth from Umbridge involves a lie that forces Harry to attend another week's detention with Umbridge, Sirius (backed by Remus) points out that part of Occlumency training requires complete trust between teacher and student when he would ''never'' trust Snape with a secret and knows Harry wouldn't either, and Arthur affirms that Ginny is right to be concerned given her own experience of mental abuse after her time with the Diary.

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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44950582/ Disrespecting Disrespect Authority]]'' features Ginny, Sirius, and Arthur all calling Dumbledore out over his decision to force Harry to learn Occlumency from Snape. Ginny is indignant when Dumbledore's attempt to conceal the truth from Umbridge involves a lie that forces Harry to attend another week's detention with Umbridge, Sirius (backed by Remus) points out that part of Occlumency training requires complete trust between teacher and student when he would ''never'' trust Snape with a secret and knows Harry wouldn't either, and Arthur affirms that Ginny is right to be concerned given her own experience of mental abuse after her time with the Diary. When Dumbledore tries to argue that they are doing their best to keep Hogwarts safe, Ginny not only points out how often Hogwarts has been infiltrated in the last few years, but also takes the opportunity to call out Professor [=McGonagal=] on how she and the other teachers were apparently willing to let Ginny die just to get Lockhart out of the way by suggesting that ''he'' go after the "monster" in the Chamber of Secrets when they all had to have realised by then that Lockhart was useless
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** "Zombizou" has Marinette call out Mme. Bustier's blatant favoritism towards Chloé, with how she constantly [[KarmaHoudini refuses to punish her]] for any of her bullying while expecting the rest of the class to bend over backwards accomodating TheUnapologetic SpoiledBrat.

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** "Zombizou" has Marinette call out Mme. Bustier's blatant favoritism towards Chloé, with how she constantly [[KarmaHoudini refuses to punish her]] for any of her bullying while expecting the rest of the class to bend over backwards accomodating to accommodate TheUnapologetic SpoiledBrat.



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* ''Fanfic/MetalGearGreen''
** The refugees the MSF were helping attack and scream at the Heroes. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as 1: Many of them have been under warlord rule for their entire lives. 2: Many of them do not have a home to return to, and the ones that do know the warlords controlling it would kill them for running away. 3: The heroes didn't care about them since several war-torn villages where the residents live in perpetual poverty wouldn't be good hero marketing. And lastly: The MSF have been helping the refugees and the heroes attacked them out of the blue for no reason.
** Nowak chews out both the Russian President and the HPSC president for their refusal to do anything about the Showstoppers, reaching a point where both Russia and Poland were threatening to go to war with each other because Poland approached the MSF for help. If it wasn't for the MSF, his daughter would be dead or sold off to God knows what depraved individual.
** The UA staff call out Nezu for hiring the MSF without their permission or consent, with All Might pointing out that he could hire more heroes. Nezu shuts their arguments down by pointing out that virtually all the heroes are under HPSC control, and the ones that aren't are too few to protect UA.
** Ocelot and Recovery Girl both call out Aizawa for his pathetic teaching methods, with Recovery Girl pointing out Ocelot's training had resulted in a drop of injuries, and [[spoiler: Fudaki's death]] was his own damn fault because Aizawa never put in any effort in teaching. Recovery Girl points out that he is a better teacher than Aizawa is.
---> '''Aizawa''': Why do you even care?\\
'''Ocelot''': I don't! And that's the problem! I don't care because I barely know these kids! I'm the HPSC rep that pops in randomly, and yet I've given better advice to them in their first week than you've given to a class in years.
** Likewise, he calls out Bakugou, Kirishima and Todoroki for being genuine dumbasses and not only sabotaging Ocelot and All Might's efforts to control the situation, but actively endangered their class. Had it not been for All Might's intervention, Ocelot would've had all three of them barred from ever getting a license. However, that doesn't mean that the three were getting off, [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment punishing them by having them clean the entire campus for three months.]] And since the campus is very big, that means they have a lot of ground to cover.
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** After Laurel [[spoiler:gets Oliver to release Nyssa from the League]], Nyssa lets Laurel have it. Pointing out that that was Laurel's desire, not hers, and it has lead to her [[spoiler:losing the only life and home she has ever known]].

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** After Laurel [[spoiler:gets Oliver to release Nyssa from the League]], Nyssa lets Laurel have it. Pointing out that that was Laurel's ''Laurel's'' desire, not hers, and it has lead to her [[spoiler:losing the only life and home she has ever known]].
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* ''Fanfic/DontLookBack'': Camila chews out Principal Hal when she sees video evidence of Clara bullying Luz and Marcy and tries to turn a blind eye to it because he believed Clara's a "[[AlphaBitch model student]]".
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* ''Fanfic/TheDevilFruitHero'': Spinner tries to call out Tiger for attacking Magne from behind during the summer camp battle, though it falls flat when Tiger retorts that in a life-or-death battle, honor is completely optional.
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* ''Fanfic/BitterTearsAnAnonAMissFic'':
** Twilight tears the Humane Five and the CMC a collective new one for how they treated Sunset, practically [[{{Angrish}} breaking down in the middle of it from sheer frustration and disgust]]. She also calls out Sunset for keeping her in the dark about what was really happening for two months, worrying her immensely to the point where she thought Sunset was dead.
** In the penultimate chapter, [[spoiler:Sunset finally chews out the Humane Five for abandoning her the second they thought she was Anon-A-Miss on flimsy evidence, and says that she can no longer trust any of them because of that]].
** Once Celestia and Luna learn about [[spoiler:[[PayEvilUntoEvil the physical assault and sheer extent of the bullying]] that the CMC had been through over the past two months]], the former tells off the entire school for their behavior and makes it clear how absolutely disgusted she is about it.
** Applejack is noticeably horrified at Rainbow Dash punching Scootaloo, and she (along with Pinkie) immediately leaps in to hold her back from beating her even more.
-->'''Applejack''': Dash! Have you lost yer cotton pickin’ mind?!

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* ''Fanfic/TheChaoticMasters'': When Raven makes some disparaging comments after Jade gets a palisman, Jade finally snaps and chews her out for the negative attitude she's treated Jade with since they met, stating how Jade [[BrokenPedestal looked up to her but now sees her as a huge]] JerkAss.

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When Raven makes some disparaging comments after Jade gets a palisman, Palisman from [[AuctionOfEvil Roulette's auction of magical artifacts]] in Chapter 15, Jade finally snaps and chews her out for the negative attitude she's treated Jade with since they met, stating how Jade [[BrokenPedestal looked up to her but now sees her as a huge]] JerkAss.JerkAss. Similarly, in the next chapter Big Hero 6, especially Gogo, aren't very happy with her being so hard on Jade either.
**Aqualad gets chewed out by the other heroes for how his recklessness in trying to steal Triton's trident from the auction triggered the fight that caused the whole thing to devolve into chaos.
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* ''Fanfic/TheChaoticMasters'': When Raven makes some disparaging comments after Jade gets a palisman, Jade finally snaps and chews her out for the negative attitude she's treated Jade with since they met, stating how Jade [[BrokenPedestal looked up to her but now sees her as a huge]] JerkAss.
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* ''Fanfic/MarvelFalls'': In Chapter 2, Kamala scolds the Pine Twins for ditching Grunkle Stan to go searching for the Gobblewonker, when he wanted to spend time with them. She then proceeds to lecture them about the importance of spending time with your loved ones. But she's interrupted by the Gobblewonker. When [=McGucket=] tells them about how his son never spends time with him and the Twins realize they've done the same with Grunkle Stan, Kamala gives them an 'I told you so'.
-->'''[=McGucket=]''': You just don't know the length us old-timers go through for a little quality time with our family.
-->'''Kamala''': [to the now remorseful Pine Twins] I guess you two understand?
-->'''Dipper''': Pretty much.
-->'''Soos''': Dude, I guess the real lake monster is you two. Sorry. That just like-boom-popped into my head there.

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* ''FanFic/BlackenedSkies'': In the wake of the first trial, Kaede faces [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome the natural consequences]] of the way she conducted herself during it. Namely the fact that she kept secrets and lied about what she knew, a good chunk of which got exposed over the course of the trial anyway. Tsumugi in particular calls her out:

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* ''FanFic/BlackenedSkies'': ''Fanfic/BlackenedSkies'': In the wake of the first trial, Kaede faces [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome the natural consequences]] of the way she conducted herself during it. Namely the fact that she kept secrets and lied about what she knew, a good chunk of which got exposed over the course of the trial anyway. Tsumugi in particular calls her out:Tsumugi's especially mad since Kaede's withholding information nearly led to ''her'' being convicted rather than the actual culprit:



* ''Fanfic/SwimmingInTerror'': Saionji, [[BitchInSheepsClothing of all people]], tells Hibiki; "Someone died, and all you care about is yourself!"

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* ''Fanfic/SwimmingInTerror'': Saionji, [[BitchInSheepsClothing of all people]], tells Hibiki; Hibiki that "Someone died, and all you care about is yourself!"



* In ''Fanfic/GhostsHowToTrainYourDragon'', Hiccup, instead of being awed and amazed by Valka's appearance, is upset and furious at Valka for abandoning him for 20 years and expecting to just waltz back into Hiccup's life.

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* In ''Fanfic/GhostsHowToTrainYourDragon'', ''Fanfic/{{Ghosts|HowToTrainYourDragon}}'', Hiccup, instead of being awed and amazed by Valka's appearance, is upset and furious at Valka for abandoning him for 20 years and expecting to just waltz back into Hiccup's life.



* In "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3666435/1/All-I-Really-Want All I Really Want]]", Shego explicitly calls Kim out on how she's twice been fine with basically using mind control on Shego. Kim protests that the use of the mind control shampoo was just in the heat of battle and she didn't do anything more than tell Shego to go away and wait until it wore off, but her reaction to the Attitudinator turning Shego into Miss Go is more complex; while Kim didn't cause the incident, she also didn't do anything to turn Shego back to normal, and when Kim tries to point out that she seemed happier as Miss Go than as herself, [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Shego asks if Kim thinks Ron was genuinely "happier" as Zorpox]].

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* In "[[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3666435/1/All-I-Really-Want All I Really Want]]", Want]]'', Shego explicitly calls Kim out on how she's twice been being fine with basically using mind control ''mind control'' on Shego.her twice. Kim protests that the use of the mind control shampoo was just in the heat of battle and she didn't do anything more than tell Shego to go away and wait until it wore off, but her reaction to the Attitudinator turning Shego into Miss Go is more complex; while Kim didn't cause the incident, she also didn't do anything to turn Shego back to normal, and when Kim tries to point out that she seemed happier as Miss Go than as herself, [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Shego asks if Kim thinks Ron was genuinely "happier" as Zorpox]].



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* The ''ComicBook/SpiderMan'' fic "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/49689625/ Jackpot]]" presents Peter and Mary Jane finding a genie in an alternate post-''ComicBook/OneMoreDay'' world where they didn't take Mephisto's deal and Aunt May died, leaving them both on the run from the pro-Registration forces. While there is no sign that Peter delivered this statement to Tony Stark directly, he's incredulous and disgusted to discover that Tony has moved Wilson Fisk into protective custody after Peter beat Fisk up for his role in May's death, as Tony failed to provide adequate security for May in the first place and is now protecting the man basically responsible for her death. Peter is further outraged when Tony confronts him in a new armor specifically designed to take down Spider-Man, using tech derived from the Spider-Slayers, outright asking how Tony can consider himself the good guy when he's resorted to these kind of methods.
* In "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11114325/1/The-Measure-of-a-Man The Measure of a Man]]", Peter Parker gets to deliver one to the rest of the Avengers and other heroes when he asks them how they couldn’t have realized Ock was in control of his body for the last few weeks.

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* The ''ComicBook/SpiderMan'' fic "[[https://archiveofourown.''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/49689625/ Jackpot]]" Jackpot]]'' presents Peter and Mary Jane finding a genie in an alternate post-''ComicBook/OneMoreDay'' world where they didn't take Mephisto's deal and Aunt May died, leaving them both on the run from the pro-Registration forces. While there is no sign that Peter delivered this statement to Tony Stark directly, he's incredulous and disgusted to discover that Tony has moved Wilson Fisk into protective custody after Peter beat Fisk up for his role in May's death, as Tony failed to provide adequate security for May in the first place and is now protecting the man basically responsible for her death. Peter is further outraged when Tony confronts him in a new armor specifically designed to take down Spider-Man, using tech derived from the Spider-Slayers, outright asking how Tony can consider himself the good guy when he's resorted to these kind of methods.
* In "[[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11114325/1/The-Measure-of-a-Man The Measure of a Man]]", Man]]'', Peter Parker gets to deliver one to the rest of the Avengers and other heroes when he asks them how they couldn’t have realized Ock was in control of his body for the last few weeks.



* In ''[[Fanfic/TheWolvesInTheWoodsMiraculousLadybug The Wolves in the Woods]]'', ''[[EveryoneHasStandards Lila]]'' calls out Adrien on his SkewedPriorities and naive belief that [[StatusQuoIsGod everything will go back to normal]] if she stops lying:

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** In "Queen Wasp", it's publicly revealed that Scarlet Lady [[spoiler:is Chloé, who had recently announced her intention to leave Paris with her mother]]. This completely ''shatters'' what was left of her BrokenPedestal as people realize that their {{Nominal Hero}}ine was perfectly fine with [[spoiler:leaving them to deal with Hawkmoth ''without'' her Miraculous Cure]], leading to her being ShamedByAMob.
* In ''[[Fanfic/TheWolvesInTheWoodsMiraculousLadybug The ''Fanfic/{{The Wolves in the Woods]]'', Woods|MiraculousLadybug}}'', ''[[EveryoneHasStandards Lila]]'' calls out Adrien on his SkewedPriorities and naive belief that [[StatusQuoIsGod everything will go back to normal]] if she stops lying:lying, even though Alya led most of the class in bullying Marinette until she transferred to another school:
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* ''Fanfic/WhereWeDontBelong'': Mio and Sena do this to [[spoiler:Cammuravi]] when they see he's joined Torna, who from they know at this point are just a bunch of terrorists, and is aiding Akhos on his attack on Garfont, since the man they knew from Aionios was far more "honorable" (though they don't mention Aionios specifically). He, since he lacks memories from Aionios, is rather confused by the personal call-out, getting particularly angry when [[spoiler:Sena mentions his "Warrior's Way"]], and answers that [[ShutupKirk the world isn't deserving of him to fight for it]].

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* ''Fanfic/EmeraldFurnacePathOfStorms'': All Might gives an off-screen one to the cops of the mountain town for shooting at Izuku after he took down a villain group. Because of their actions, not only has Izuku disappeared with someone else, but now Izuku is convinced he'll be hunted and persecuted no matter where he goes.
* ''Fanfic/EmeraldFurnacePathOfWaves'': Ryukyu calls Inko out for her method of handling Izuku's Quirk, as the boy constantly is in a negative feedback loop, which makes his control over his Quirk worsen over time. Ryukyu theorizes that had Izuku not been found by her, his meltdown at the mall would've been considered tame compared to a possible 'incinerates all of Tokyo and kills millions' incident.
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*''Fanfic/InterdimensionalCartoonDiscussionAndSupportGroup'': When Stan finds out that Hop Pop threatened to kick Anne out in episode 2A of ''Amphibia'', he drills into him, that even if he ultimately didn't mean it, he has a responsibility as her guardian to see to her care, even if they didn't get along at first. Which makes sense; considering he himself was kicked out by his parents at a young age and had to spend much of his adult life on his own with no one to guide him, of course Stan would probably have that as his BerserkButton.
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* ''Fanfic/ThePiratesSoldier'': In Chapter 30, the heroes discover that Mihoshi's brother Misao was involved in Kagato's plot to kidnap Heero. Mihoshi, who's usually [[NiceGirl a complete sweetheart with everyone]], gives Misao a hard slap and demands for an explanation. Misao tries to defend himself saying that he was trying to free her from the ArrangedMarriage, thinking that she had been forced into it. [[ArmorPiercingResponse Mihoshi replies that she had agreed to it willingly]], and tears down on Misao for selling Heero out to Kagato when he'd always been kind and patient with her since they met, and she was hoping to repay him for his kindness. This ends up leaving Misao completely speechless, and when Mihoshi threatens to never speak to him again, he promptly begins to spill the beans.
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* ''Fanfic/DiscordsNewBusiness'': A light version. Rainbow Dash and the Apple family aren't happy at all to see Applejack be a {{Workaholic}}, using her freebie transformation to make it easier for her to ''do more work''.
--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' AJ... I am disappoint...

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*''Fanfic/TarkinsFist'': Edward Galloway, Johnathan Harris's predecessor as President of the NAU, is disturbed by the erosion of civil liberties at home and appalled at the violence used to get unwilling individuals and countries to join up with the new Confederacy of Earth Nations. Harris's deputy Chief of Staff blatantly threatens Galloway's family if he refuses to toe the line. Galloway reluctantly remains silent.
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-->'''Plagg:''' You were better than this. It should never have come to this. If you want to be stupidly optimistic, that's your choice, but I can't afford to be that hopeful.\\
'''Adrien:''' Plagg...\\
'''Plagg:''' I'm not like Nooroo. I can't afford to be. I am the Kwami of Destruction and Misfortune. I can cause more damage than some costumed kooks being summoned by a self-righteous puppet master if my user goes bad.\\
'''Adrien:''' Don't--\\
'''Plagg:''' DAMMIT ADRIEN, you KNEW better! Just because some sociopath told you to--\\
'''Adrien:''' He's my father!\\
'''Plagg:''' So you just obey him?\\
'''Adrien:''' It would stop everything! Hawkmoth--he'll stop if he does this!\\
'''Plagg:''' ''Cats don't bow to butterflies! We'' '''eat''' ''them''.\\
''(following more debate)''\\
'''Adrien:''' If he does this, it'll be over! No more akumas! Everything can go back to normal!\\
'''Ladybug:''' ''(regarding him with [[DisappointedInYou quiet disappointment]])'' Not for the person sacrificed. Not for their loved ones. And not for us. It's not our job to decide who deserves to live or die, Adrien. We help everyone. I thought... I thought you believed that.

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* In the ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''Anime/SailorMoon'' crossover ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4167708/1/Chaos_Infinity Chaos Infinity]]'', the Sailor Scouts force Sonic and his friends to fight them after they accuse them of the mess going on in Tokyo. (It's Eggman's doing, obviously.) After the showdown, Sonic holds nothing back as he berates them -- just when he thought that they could look past animalistic looks. His words hit close to home:

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* In the ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''Anime/SailorMoon'' crossover ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4167708/1/Chaos_Infinity Chaos Infinity]]'', the Sailor Scouts force Sonic and his friends to fight them after they accuse them of the mess going on in Tokyo. (It's Eggman's doing, obviously.) After the showdown, Sonic holds nothing back as he berates them -- just when he thought that they could look past animalistic looks.looks, they attacked him. His words hit close to home:



* In ''FanFic/AnEntryWithABang!'', public opinion turns against the anti-mercenary protestors after they injure one of the child dependents of the Buron Cavalry.

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* ''Fanfic/MiraculousLadybugVsTheForcesOfEvil'' has Alya give this to Mari after she finds out [[spoiler:she's Ladybug]] and more importantly, that she doesn't seem to give any good reason why she never told her.

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* ''Fanfic/MiraculousLadybugVsTheForcesOfEvil'' has Alya give this to Mari confront Marinette after she finds out [[spoiler:she's Ladybug]] and more importantly, learning that [[spoiler:she was Ladybug all along]], believing that she doesn't seem to give didn't have any good reason why she never told her.reasons ''not'' to inform her best friend of [[spoiler:her SecretIdentity]].



* In ''FanFic/NoHoper'', [[EvenEvilHasStandards Neferet]] calls out the human scientists for experimenting on and killing children in their search for a vampyre cure.

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** Ruby’s reaction to [[spoiler:finding out Sunset was willing to doom Vale in order to give their team a slightly better chance at survival.]]
** Ironwood's reaction to [[spoiler:Rainbow revealing that she not only let Sunset destroy the train controls, but that she also kept it secret for months on end.]]

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** Ironwood's reaction to [[spoiler:Rainbow revealing Ironwood gets a similar moment when Rainbow Dash reveals that she not only let did she [[spoiler:let Sunset destroy the train controls, controls]], but kept that she also kept it secret for months on end.]]several months.



* In the end chapter of ''FanFic/ToKillAThief'', Light calls out Miyako about [[spoiler:why she refuses to believe Maron is Jeanne because of the resemblance, contrasting on how he immediately found out because of said resemblance.]]

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* In the end chapter of ''FanFic/ToKillAThief'', ''Fanfic/ToKillAThief'', Light calls out Miyako about [[spoiler:why she refuses to believe Maron is Jeanne because of the resemblance, contrasting on how he immediately found out because of said resemblance.]]resemblance]].



* Subverted in ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11281809/1/Phoenix-Wright-Ghosts-of-the-Past Phoenix Wright: Ghosts of the Past]]''. Phoenix is ''going'' to give one to Iris after [[spoiler:she punches Trucy in the face]] (it was an accident, but he didn't know that yet), but when he sees that she's already in full MyGodWhatHaveIDone mode he changes his mind and tries to help fix things instead.

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* Subverted {{Subverted|Trope}} in ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11281809/1/Phoenix-Wright-Ghosts-of-the-Past Phoenix Wright: Ghosts of the Past]]''. Phoenix is ''going'' to give one to Iris after [[spoiler:she punches Trucy in the face]] (it was an accident, but he didn't know that yet), but when he sees that she's already in full MyGodWhatHaveIDone mode he changes his mind and tries to help fix things instead.



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* ''[[Fanfic/CheshireMiraculousLadybug Cheshire]]'': Marinette chews out Fu for giving Miraculous to her bullies and not trying to retrieve Pollen. [[spoiler:She uses this as an opportunity to cut ties with them.]]

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* ''[[Fanfic/CheshireMiraculousLadybug Cheshire]]'': ''Fanfic/{{Cheshire|MiraculousLadybug}}'': Marinette chews out Fu for giving Miraculous being a HorribleJudgeOfCharacter who gave Miraculouses to her bullies and bullies, as well as not trying to retrieve Pollen.Pollen after the Bee Comb was stolen from her. [[spoiler:She uses this as an opportunity to cut ties with them.]]



* ''[[Fanfic/TheCosmosMiraculousLadybug The Cosmos]]'': After Marinette reactivates the titular BullyHunter group in order to deal with Lila, Adrien takes her aside and tries convincing her to stand aside and let the status quo continue, insisting that Lila 'isn't hurting anyone' despite how she's been bullying Marinette:

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* ''[[Fanfic/TheCosmosMiraculousLadybug The Cosmos]]'': ''Fanfic/{{The Cosmos|MiraculousLadybug}}'': After Marinette reactivates the titular BullyHunter group in order to deal with Lila, Adrien takes her aside and tries convincing her to stand aside and let the status quo continue, insisting that Lila 'isn't hurting anyone' despite how she's been bullying Marinette:



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** Aurore to Crimson in chapter 25 when he first learns about aromantic and [[OpenMouthInsertFoot comments that not having romantic feelings would be horrible]]. She tells him that kind of thinking is what led Alix to get akumatized in the first place from built-up frustration, and that she would hit him if she didn't know he only just learned about this orientation.

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** Aurore to Crimson in chapter 25 when he first learns about the concept of being aromantic and [[OpenMouthInsertFoot comments that not having romantic feelings would be horrible]]. She tells him that kind of thinking is what led Alix to get akumatized in the first place from built-up frustration, and that she would hit him if she didn't know he only just learned about this orientation.


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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14305553/16/Mr-Fixit Mr Fixit]]'': Sarah very angrily (and apparently ''violently'') calls out her sister Carol for not only basically forcing Amy to attend Endbringer battles despite never attending them herself, but for also telling her adoptive daughter to "get over it" after she has to deal with the aftermath of the Slaughterhouse Nine creating a town of {{Technically Living Zombie}}s and the PRT and Protectorate being forced to kill them. The final straw is Carol admitting that she sees Amy as a villain in the making like her father.
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* In ''Fanfic/{{Kage}}'', Jade is absolutely ''furious'' when she discovers that the Guardians [[FrameUp framed]] [[NobleDemon Raythor]] for a crime that he didn't commit and got him banished to [[EldritchLocation the Abyss of Shadows]], and later gives Will a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech over it.

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* In ''Fanfic/{{Kage}}'', ''Fanfic/{{Kage}}'': Jade is absolutely ''furious'' when she discovers that the Guardians [[FrameUp framed]] framed [[NobleDemon Raythor]] for a crime that he didn't commit and got him banished to [[EldritchLocation the Abyss of Shadows]], Shadows, and later gives Will a scathing TheReasonYouSuckSpeech over it.



*** Tynar calls out the Guardians and Elyon for their treatment of Kage and assuming she was an enemy when they first met her, which is what drove her to the Knights of Vengeance in the first place.

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*** Tynar calls out the Guardians and Elyon for their treatment of Kage Jade/Kage and assuming she was an enemy when they first met her, [[CreateYourOwnVillain which is what drove her to the Knights of Vengeance in the first place.place]].



*** Elyon is ''pissed'' when she finds the rebels and guards coming to blows over their rising tensions, especially at Caleb, whose denial about the truth about Jade/Kage and "the Mage" is only enflaming the problem.

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*** Elyon is ''pissed'' when she finds the rebels and guards [[WeAreStrugglingTogether coming to blows over their rising tensions, tensions]], especially at Caleb, whose [[IRejectYourReality denial about the truth about Jade/Kage and "the Mage" Mage"]] is only enflaming the problem.



*** Amelia calls out Vera for how her obsession with getting revenge on the Mogriffs is compromising her ability to be an effective leader in fighting them.
*** While it isn't a face-to-face conversation, Vera Bexley is furious when she learns that Elyon has ordered the northern army to abandon the siege of Snowpoint (and thus Vera's [[YouKilledMyFather quest for revenge on the Mogriffs]]) and withdraw to the capital. Her commander, Bastian Bromwood, in return has some choice words for her when [[RevengeBeforeReason she suggests disobeying those orders]], pointing out that regardless of how they feel about it, they are still loyal to Elyon, and refuting her commands is treason.
*** When Jade finally confronts Vera face-to-face, she makes it clear she's disgusted with how the vengeful girl just [[spoiler:endangered her friends (one of whom was bleeding and in no condition to escape) just as they were surrendering before abandoning them for refusing to continue her singleminded quest for "justice"]].
*** When Vera's friends find out about her [[spoiler: lying to them to make them join her suicide mission]], they're all understandably horrified with her, with Amelia in particular chewing her out over it.
*** Vera is again on the receiving end of this during Chapter 31, not only from her ex-friends, but also Altaria and Maya when they learn that [[spoiler:she initiated the PrisonRiot just so she could assassinate Kage, without caring about initiating a war between the Shadow Realm and all of Meridian]].

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*** Amelia Emmony calls out her rival [[HeWhoFightsMonsters Vera Bexley]] for how her [[RevengeBeforeReason obsession with getting revenge on the Mogriffs Mogriffs]] is compromising her ability to be an effective leader in fighting them.
them. After Vera takes her noble friends on an [[spoiler:unsanctioned suicide mission to assassinate Metalbeak]], Amelia calls Vera out several times more as the haphazardly planned mission gets the group nearly killed several times.
*** While it isn't a face-to-face conversation, Vera Bexley is furious when she learns that Elyon has ordered the northern army to abandon the siege of Snowpoint (and thus Vera's [[YouKilledMyFather quest for revenge on the Mogriffs]]) and withdraw to the capital. Her commander, Bastian Bromwood, in return has some choice words for her when [[RevengeBeforeReason she suggests disobeying those orders]], orders, pointing out that regardless of how they feel about it, they are still loyal to Elyon, and refuting her commands is treason.
*** When Jade finally confronts Vera face-to-face, she makes it clear she's disgusted with how the vengeful girl just [[spoiler:endangered her friends (one of whom was bleeding and in no condition to escape) just as they were surrendering [[KnowWhenToFoldEm surrendering]] before abandoning them for refusing to continue her singleminded quest for "justice"]].
*** When Vera's friends find out about her [[spoiler: lying [[spoiler:lying to them to make them join her suicide mission]], they're all [[EtTuBrute understandably horrified with her, her]], with Amelia in particular chewing her out over it.
*** Vera is again on the receiving end of this during Chapter 31, not only from her ex-friends, but also Altaria and Maya when they learn that [[spoiler:she initiated the PrisonRiot just so she could assassinate Kage, without caring about initiating risking a war between the Shadow Realm and all of Meridian]].
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* In ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29961147/chapters/77216711#workskin Izuku Midoriya the Rabbit]]'', Izuku calls out Mirko for refusing to join the Yakuza Raid and rescue Eri simply because [[IWorkAlone "she doesn't do teamwork"]].

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* In ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29961147/chapters/77216711#workskin Izuku Midoriya the Rabbit]]'', ''Fanfic/IzukuMidoriyaTheRabbit'', Izuku calls out Mirko for refusing to join the Yakuza Raid and rescue Eri simply because [[IWorkAlone "she doesn't do teamwork"]].

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* It's common for All Might to be on the receiving end of this when others find out he told Izuku that he couldn't be a hero because he's Quirkless, especially in fics where Izuku [[ProtagonistJourneyToVillain becomes a villain]] or is DrivenToSuicide.



-->'''Izuku:''' Look! She's suffering and you can end that suffering but you're not! It doesn't matter that you don't like using that side of your Quirk! You want to be a hero, right! So uses all of your Quirk to help people.

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-->'''Izuku:''' Look! She's suffering and you can end that suffering but you're not! It doesn't matter that you don't like using that side of your Quirk! You want to be a hero, right! So uses use all of your Quirk to help people.



*** Sir Nighteye also gives one to All Might in the aftermath for being unmindful of his limits and for his unwillingness to look beyond Izuku's Quirklessness, finally getting through him by pointing out that, by his own actions, he is treating Izuku as if he were lesser than the others - precisely the kind of thing he's supposed to be against.

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*** Sir Nighteye also gives one to All Might in the aftermath for being unmindful of his limits and for his unwillingness to look beyond Izuku's Quirklessness, finally getting through to him by pointing out that, by his own actions, he is treating Izuku as if he were lesser than the others - precisely the kind of thing he's supposed to be against.



** The first is Ochako calling Izuku out, complete with one hell of a slap, for tricking her into using her quirk on him in order to try to pull an HeroicSacrifice to save All Might from Tomura and his Nomu. She understand why he did it, but reminds him that they're a team, and he promised her not to leave her behind and to face danger together.
** The second, much bigger one, is given to All Might from Aizawa when he finds out that far from curbing Izuku's tendency to recklessly putting himself in danger in his attempts to save others, All Might actually ''reinforced'' said behavior by praising and rewarding him when Izuku tried to save Bakugo from the Sludge Villain.

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** The first is Ochako calling Izuku out, complete with one hell of a slap, for tricking her into using her quirk on him in order to try to pull an a HeroicSacrifice to save All Might from Tomura and his Nomu. She understand understands why he did it, but reminds him that they're a team, and he promised her not to leave her behind and to face danger together.
** The second, much bigger one, is given to All Might from Aizawa when he finds out that far from curbing Izuku's tendency to recklessly putting put himself in danger in his attempts to save others, All Might actually ''reinforced'' said behavior by praising and rewarding him when Izuku tried to save Bakugo from the Sludge Villain.



** {{Downplayed}}; after an [[DidntThinkThisThrough ill-thought-out]] kidnapping attempt, Y/N has a pointed question for Vlad King as to why he decided to use her as a target for Class 1-B's information gathering and planning skills, and didn't inform her beforehand.
** When Y/N hears that [[ShrinkingViolet Midoriya]] and [[JerkJock Bakugou]] will be teamed up against All Might for their final exam purely because they don't get along (thus making the exam an attempt to [[FireForgedFriends teach them teamwork]]) and [[{{Seers}} gets a vision about how it will play out]] (with Bakugou refusing to listen to Midoriya and even punching him in the face), she chews out both Yagi for almost breaking Midoriya's back and Aizawa for even suggesting the pairing in the first place, as Midoriya is already fully willing to team up with Bakugou and thus would get nothing out of the exam, effectively making the exam a test for Bakugou and a ''punishment'' for Midoriya, and affirms that the one-sided animosity between them is too toxic for a single test to fix. Nedzu and the other staff take this to heart, and agree to follow her suggestion of putting them on different teams.

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** {{Downplayed}}; after an [[DidntThinkThisThrough ill-thought-out]] kidnapping attempt, Y/N has a pointed question for Vlad King as to why he decided to use her as a target for Class 1-B's information gathering and planning skills, and skills but didn't inform her beforehand.
** When Y/N hears that [[ShrinkingViolet Midoriya]] and [[JerkJock Bakugou]] will be teamed up against All Might for their final exam purely because they don't get along (thus making the exam an attempt to [[FireForgedFriends teach them teamwork]]) and [[{{Seers}} gets a vision about how it will play out]] (with Bakugou refusing to listen to Midoriya and even punching him in the face), she chews out both Yagi for almost breaking Midoriya's back and Aizawa for even suggesting the pairing in the first place, as Midoriya is already fully willing to team up with Bakugou and thus would get nothing out of the exam, effectively making the exam a test for Bakugou and a ''punishment'' for Midoriya, and affirms that the one-sided animosity between them is too toxic for a single test to fix. Nedzu and the other staff take this to heart, heart and agree to follow her suggestion of putting them on different teams.



** Izuku tells his classmates that real heroes make people feel safe, and since his classmates do the exact opposite to him, none of them deserves to be heroes.

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** Izuku tells his classmates that real heroes make people feel safe, and since his classmates do the exact opposite to him, none of them deserves deserve to be heroes.



* Pinkie gives Twilight a long and painful one in ''Fanfic/AsylumDaemonOfDecay'', after the latter let her frustration with Pinkie's reluctance to help her get the best of her and struck her:

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* Pinkie gives Twilight a long and painful one in ''Fanfic/AsylumDaemonOfDecay'', ''Fanfic/AsylumDaemonOfDecay'' after the latter let her frustration with Pinkie's reluctance to help her get the best of her and struck her:



'''Twilight''': ''([[BerserkButton becomes extremely angry]])'' Yes, you didn't know. Just like you didn't know about the bad behavior she was showing during the planning for the wedding! Just like you didn't know about the strange spells she was constantly casting on my brother, which obviously weren't headache healing spells! Just like you didn't know what [[WoundedGazelleGambit that display of crocodile tears at the rehearsal]] was meant to do! Just like you didn't know she was imprisoning ponies who were becoming obstacles in her plan in the caverns underneath the castle, like me! And just like you didn't know that she was the ''EVIL'' queen of an army of shapeshifting insect like monsters bent on devouring all the love in Equestria! Well, I know one place that they won't be able to find any real love!\\

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'''Twilight''': ''([[BerserkButton becomes extremely angry]])'' Yes, you didn't know. Just like you didn't know about the bad behavior she was showing during the planning for the wedding! Just like you didn't know about the strange spells she was constantly casting on my brother, which obviously weren't headache healing headache-healing spells! Just like you didn't know what [[WoundedGazelleGambit that display of crocodile tears at the rehearsal]] was meant to do! Just like you didn't know she was imprisoning ponies who were becoming obstacles in her plan in the caverns underneath the castle, like me! And just like you didn't know that she was the ''EVIL'' queen of an army of shapeshifting insect like insect-like monsters bent on devouring all the love in Equestria! Well, I know one place that they won't be able to find any real love!\\



'''Twilight''': No you're not! You only hangout with me because my connections could help you. You never cared about me or anypony else! I can't believe I fell for it for so long.\\

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'''Twilight''': No you're not! You only hangout hang out with me because my connections could help you. You never cared about me or anypony else! I can't believe I fell for it for so long.\\



** In the 12th chapter, the disgraced heroes are [[ShamedByAMob reproached by Canterlot's angry citizens]] who are captivated by [[VillainWithGoodPublicity Jewelius']] half-truths and feel themselves betrayed by their [[BrokenPedestal former idols]]. The original bridesmaids Lyra Heartstrings, Minuette and Twinkleshine -- who were hypnotized to keep Cadance and Twilight contained in the caverns -- are also along to voice their disbelief over the fact that only Twilight cared about their disappearance and that everypony else just took Chrysalis' word for it.

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** In the 12th chapter, the disgraced heroes are [[ShamedByAMob reproached by Canterlot's angry citizens]] who are captivated by [[VillainWithGoodPublicity Jewelius']] half-truths and feel themselves betrayed by their [[BrokenPedestal former idols]]. The original bridesmaids Lyra Heartstrings, Minuette Minuette, and Twinkleshine -- who were hypnotized to keep Cadance and Twilight contained in the caverns -- are also along to voice their disbelief over the fact that only Twilight cared about their disappearance and that everypony else just took Chrysalis' word for it.



* In ''Fanfic/TheVinylScratchTapes'', Vinyl gets one from Princess Luna when Vinyl not only insults Prince Blueblood (who may be a jerk, but by that point Vinyl's campaign to get back at him was so successful he's turned to drinking to help deal with the fact that ponies send death threats to him on a regular basis) in front of her, but also reveals she's the one who humiliated Princess Celestia by guilt-tripping her for banishing Luna during her Nightmare Moon phase, causing Vinyl to enter a HeroicBSOD. Later, Luna is forced to apologize for the latter (but refuses for the former). However, Trixie then busts out of a trash can (ItMakesSenseInContext) and accuses all the assembled ponies who gathered to make Vinyl feel better that they are all hypocrites for treating Blueblood like a pariah for being a jerk, but pretending Vinyl's own jackassery is charming (especially since this jackassery involves hiring a known criminal and a slaver and bringing him into the heart of Canterlot).

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* In ''Fanfic/TheVinylScratchTapes'', Vinyl gets one from Princess Luna when Vinyl not only insults Prince Blueblood (who may be a jerk, but by that point Vinyl's campaign to get back at him was so successful he's turned to drinking to help deal with the fact that ponies send death threats to him on a regular basis) in front of her, her but also reveals she's the one who humiliated Princess Celestia by guilt-tripping her for banishing Luna during her Nightmare Moon phase, causing Vinyl to enter a HeroicBSOD. Later, Luna is forced to apologize for the latter (but refuses for the former). However, Trixie then busts out of a trash can (ItMakesSenseInContext) and accuses all the assembled ponies who gathered to make Vinyl feel better that they are all hypocrites for treating Blueblood like a pariah for being a jerk, but pretending Vinyl's own jackassery is charming (especially since this jackassery involves hiring a known criminal and a slaver and bringing him into the heart of Canterlot).



** Sasuke of all people calls out a pair of Konoha ninja for trying to kill each other over one having an affair with the others wife while all of them are currently on break from searching for survivors in the aftermath of the ''worst attack on Konoha since the Kyuubi''. The other shinobi around admit he was right and that they would've stood back and let it happen.
** Asuma once raged at Ino for throwing live steel around the training grounds instead of the foam tipped practice ones she's supposed to as she could easily injure or kill someone if she misses her target. He likewise chewed out Shikamaru for using his shadow technique to throw off her aim because he was sick of Ino's boasting. As punishment, Asuma threw kunai around the training grounds and each one they failed to catch meant they had to run a lap around the entire village.

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** Sasuke of all people calls out a pair of Konoha ninja for trying to kill each other over one having an affair with the others other's wife while all of them are currently on break from searching for survivors in the aftermath of the ''worst attack on Konoha since the Kyuubi''. The other shinobi around admit he was right and that they would've stood back and let it happen.
** Asuma once raged at Ino for throwing live steel around the training grounds instead of the foam tipped foam-tipped practice ones she's supposed to as she could easily injure or kill someone if she misses her target. He likewise chewed out Shikamaru for using his shadow technique to throw off her aim because he was sick of Ino's boasting. As punishment, Asuma threw kunai around the training grounds and each one they failed to catch meant they had to run a lap around the entire village.



* In ''Fanfic/KitsuneNoKenFistOfTheFox'', Naruto gets called out a total of four times throughout the story. The first three times (coming separately from Ino, Neji and Shikamaru) concern an incident where he almost killed an attacker and was willing to ignore his friends' urging to spare the person's life, then proceeded to avoid his friends after the fact. The fourth occasion is during his tribunal for being a member of the [[TheDreaded Kyuushingai]] who contributed to a year's worth of chaos across the country, where both Judge Utatane and prosecutor Yugao chew him out for his subsequent "IDidWhatIHadToDo" attitude regarding that period, even when he explains that he did all he did in an effort to stop [[EvilCounterpart Gaara's]] plot to take over the government.

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* In ''Fanfic/KitsuneNoKenFistOfTheFox'', Naruto gets called out a total of four times throughout the story. The first three times (coming separately from Ino, Neji Neji, and Shikamaru) concern an incident where he almost killed an attacker and was willing to ignore his friends' urging to spare the person's life, then proceeded to avoid his friends after the fact. The fourth occasion is during his tribunal for being a member of the [[TheDreaded Kyuushingai]] who contributed to a year's worth of chaos across the country, where both Judge Utatane and prosecutor Yugao chew him out for his subsequent "IDidWhatIHadToDo" attitude regarding that period, even when he explains that he did all he did in an effort to stop [[EvilCounterpart Gaara's]] plot to take over the government.



** A minor, humorous example when Shinji complains Asuka has gotten heavier, she replies it is Teri’s fault and he asks whether she is seriously blaming their unborn daughter who can’t speak in her behalf.

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** A minor, humorous example when Shinji complains Asuka has gotten heavier, she replies it is Teri’s fault and he asks whether she is seriously blaming their unborn daughter who can’t speak in on her behalf.



'''Asuka''': Do you see what you are doing? What you’ve been doing ever since you woke up? You wrap yourself up in this warm blanket of hate because it makes you feel powerful! It’s the only way you can feel powerful again without the help of others! But it’s only a drug. A quick chemical that hides your troubles! Meanwhile they’re still there GETTING WORSE. So, once again, the great Asuka Langley Sohryu is retreating from her troubles armed with a medicine cabinet of powerful looking narcotics! My, how self-reliant you are!
** In chapter 15 Asuka and Mari were supposed to take part in a training session. However they started [[OldSchoolDogFight dog-fighting]]. Misato chewed them out, stating that she had no use for pilots that still have to prove that they can do their jobs.

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'''Asuka''': Do you see what you are doing? What you’ve been doing ever since you woke up? You wrap yourself up in this warm blanket of hate because it makes you feel powerful! It’s the only way you can feel powerful again without the help of others! But it’s only a drug. A quick chemical that hides your troubles! Meanwhile they’re still there GETTING WORSE. So, once again, the great Asuka Langley Sohryu is retreating from her troubles armed with a medicine cabinet of powerful looking powerful-looking narcotics! My, how self-reliant you are!
** In chapter 15 Asuka and Mari were supposed to take part in a training session. However However, they started [[OldSchoolDogFight dog-fighting]]. Misato chewed them out, stating that she had no use for pilots that who still have to prove that they can do their jobs.

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