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** In the 1969 episode "Every Boy Does It Once", when Bobby wants to go to the movies with Marcia and Jan, they say, "Hi and bye, small fry", and "see ya later". Since he is wearing Greg's and Peter's hand-me-downs, they add, "Besides, we couldn't take you looking like ''that''", and "Of course not. Who'd look at the screen?".
'''You'd Expect:''' For Mr. and Mrs. Brady to tell Marcia and Jan that they couldn't go to the movies and/or make them apologize to Bobby.
'''Instead:''' Marcia and Jan receive no consequences at all.
** In the 1971 episode "The Winner", Bobby feels worthless because unlike everyone else in the household, he doesn't have a trophy. When Bobby's siblings beat him at games that they play with him, he gets angry about it. Greg and Marcia tell Mr. and Mrs. Brady that Bobby's been a real stinker, but Carol tells them she doesn't like that word. Greg and Marcia say that's what Bobby's been.
'''You'd Expect:''' For Mrs. Brady to tell them that the term "poor sport" is nicer and more mature, and make them say that's what Bobby's being.
'''Instead:''' She soon finds the word "stinker" amusing, and agrees (as does Mr. Brady).
'''You'd Expect:''' For Mr. and Mrs. Brady to tell Marcia and Jan that they couldn't go to the movies and/or make them apologize to Bobby.
'''Instead:''' Marcia and Jan receive no consequences at all.
** In the 1971 episode "The Winner", Bobby feels worthless because unlike everyone else in the household, he doesn't have a trophy. When Bobby's siblings beat him at games that they play with him, he gets angry about it. Greg and Marcia tell Mr. and Mrs. Brady that Bobby's been a real stinker, but Carol tells them she doesn't like that word. Greg and Marcia say that's what Bobby's been.
'''You'd Expect:''' For Mrs. Brady to tell them that the term "poor sport" is nicer and more mature, and make them say that's what Bobby's being.
'''Instead:''' She soon finds the word "stinker" amusing, and agrees (as does Mr. Brady).
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** In the 1973 episode "Never Too Young", from the fifth and final season, Bobby's classmate Millicent gives him a kiss for defending her from a school bully. Cindy notices this.\\
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** In the 1973 episode "Never Too Young", from the fifth and final season, Bobby's classmate Millicent gives him a kiss for defending her from a school bully. Cindy notices this.this, and she seems happy about it.\\
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**Faith [[spoiler:after her FaceHeelTurn has shot Angel and injected him with a slow-acitng deadly poison. As the Scoobies prepare for the Mayor's plan on graduation, they find out the only cure for Angel's condition is if he drinks "the blood of a slayer". Cue the MassOhCrap as they look at Buffy. She and Faith are the only two candidates]].\\
'''You'd Expect''': Someone would tell a raging Buffy that [[spoiler:donating her blood via a transfusion is the best option to save Angel. They're on awkward territory given the two broke up, but a transfusion is safer than forcing Angel to actually drink since the amount of blood isn't specified. We also know that Giles and Cordelia are the only combat medics that know how to do basic patchwork]].\\
'''Instead''': Realizing that Buffy means to [[spoiler:go after Faith, the Scoobies only warn Buffy that Angel doesn't drain people. She says Angel won't have a problem if Faith is dead]].\\
'''The Result''': All Buffy manages to do is [[spoiler:put Faith in a coma, and before that the latter manages to make her getaway. She has a knife with Faith's blood, but doesn't think to gather that in a vial and hope it heals Angel. Instead, she punches Angel in the face to make him vamp count and places her neck to his teeth. This nearly kills Buffy, and Angel needs to take her to the hospital to treat her for blood loss. He has to save her from a vengeful Mayor that tries smothering an unconscious Buffy. To top it all off, Angel goes WhatWereYouThinking towards Buffy and leaves quietly after they stop the Mayor's snake form]].
** When Faith wakes up from her coma, she realizes [[spoiler:the Mayor's plan failed, and he left a video, as well as a device for her. She doesn't know what this device does, only that it's supposed to give her a second chance. The Scoobies are debating if they should hunt down Faith or let her go; now that Buffy has broken up with Angel and moved on with Riley, she feels really guilty about her attempt to stab Faith and make Angel drink blood from her corpse]].\\
'''You'd Expect''': The Scoobies reasonably assume that Faith would have fled the moment she woke up from her coma and "gone to Mexico" in Buffy's words. That would be the most sensible course of action given she's a fugitive from the law and wanted for murdering the sheriff's deputy the previous season. The Watcher's Council also has painted a target on her back for breaking the rules and evading their initial capture of her. There is no reason to stay in Sunnydale at this juncture.\\
'''Instead''': She tries seeking revenge on Buffy for the aforementioned murder attempt by attacking her and later her mother. Yeah, she takes on the previous Slayer that nearly killed her in their last fight and attacks the one adult who has been consistently nice and polite to her even as she [[spoiler:betrayed the Scoobies and tried to usher in another apocalypse]]. Faith's legitimate point is that she and Buffy were fighting over a guy, albeit not in the traditional sense, but she is outmatched and outnumbered. That's not even counting what Tara and WIllow are able to do once they cut loose.\\
'''The Result''': While Faith successfully [[spoiler:uses the device to switch bodies with Buffy, she realizes her mistake in that Buffy's body influences her to be a better person and she sleeps with Riley, who has only learned about Faith's attack on Joyce but is gentle with "Buffy" and asks if she's okay. Willow and Tara figure out the switch, as does Giles when Buffy-in-Faith's body convinces him that she's Buffy due to knowing some embarrassing details about his life including that he slept with her mother and he hasn't kept a job since they blew up the school. They go with a vengeance to confront Faith, and all she can do is beat her body senseless. When they switch back, Buffy is full of murderous rage (again) that she was raped-by-proxy as was Riley, and tracks down Faith in Los Angeles where Faith seriously thought she could convince Angel to kill her when taking a bounty on him in Wolfram & Hart. Faith even acknowledges that what she did was stupid and is perfectly willing to let Buffy strike her down. It's only because of Angel's interference that Faith decides to turn herself in when the police come instead and go to jail to atone for her crimes. To top it all off, Faith's actions indirectly lead to Buffy and Angel no longer being AmicableExes because they have a nasty fight over the fact that Angel protected her]].
**Faith [[spoiler:after her FaceHeelTurn has shot Angel and injected him with a slow-acitng deadly poison. As the Scoobies prepare for the Mayor's plan on graduation, they find out the only cure for Angel's condition is if he drinks "the blood of a slayer". Cue the MassOhCrap as they look at Buffy. She and Faith are the only two candidates]].\\
'''You'd Expect''': Someone would tell a raging Buffy that [[spoiler:donating her blood via a transfusion is the best option to save Angel. They're on awkward territory given the two broke up, but a transfusion is safer than forcing Angel to actually drink since the amount of blood isn't specified. We also know that Giles and Cordelia are the only combat medics that know how to do basic patchwork]].\\
'''Instead''': Realizing that Buffy means to [[spoiler:go after Faith, the Scoobies only warn Buffy that Angel doesn't drain people. She says Angel won't have a problem if Faith is dead]].\\
'''The Result''': All Buffy manages to do is [[spoiler:put Faith in a coma, and before that the latter manages to make her getaway. She has a knife with Faith's blood, but doesn't think to gather that in a vial and hope it heals Angel. Instead, she punches Angel in the face to make him vamp count and places her neck to his teeth. This nearly kills Buffy, and Angel needs to take her to the hospital to treat her for blood loss. He has to save her from a vengeful Mayor that tries smothering an unconscious Buffy. To top it all off, Angel goes WhatWereYouThinking towards Buffy and leaves quietly after they stop the Mayor's snake form]].
** When Faith wakes up from her coma, she realizes [[spoiler:the Mayor's plan failed, and he left a video, as well as a device for her. She doesn't know what this device does, only that it's supposed to give her a second chance. The Scoobies are debating if they should hunt down Faith or let her go; now that Buffy has broken up with Angel and moved on with Riley, she feels really guilty about her attempt to stab Faith and make Angel drink blood from her corpse]].\\
'''You'd Expect''': The Scoobies reasonably assume that Faith would have fled the moment she woke up from her coma and "gone to Mexico" in Buffy's words. That would be the most sensible course of action given she's a fugitive from the law and wanted for murdering the sheriff's deputy the previous season. The Watcher's Council also has painted a target on her back for breaking the rules and evading their initial capture of her. There is no reason to stay in Sunnydale at this juncture.\\
'''Instead''': She tries seeking revenge on Buffy for the aforementioned murder attempt by attacking her and later her mother. Yeah, she takes on the previous Slayer that nearly killed her in their last fight and attacks the one adult who has been consistently nice and polite to her even as she [[spoiler:betrayed the Scoobies and tried to usher in another apocalypse]]. Faith's legitimate point is that she and Buffy were fighting over a guy, albeit not in the traditional sense, but she is outmatched and outnumbered. That's not even counting what Tara and WIllow are able to do once they cut loose.\\
'''The Result''': While Faith successfully [[spoiler:uses the device to switch bodies with Buffy, she realizes her mistake in that Buffy's body influences her to be a better person and she sleeps with Riley, who has only learned about Faith's attack on Joyce but is gentle with "Buffy" and asks if she's okay. Willow and Tara figure out the switch, as does Giles when Buffy-in-Faith's body convinces him that she's Buffy due to knowing some embarrassing details about his life including that he slept with her mother and he hasn't kept a job since they blew up the school. They go with a vengeance to confront Faith, and all she can do is beat her body senseless. When they switch back, Buffy is full of murderous rage (again) that she was raped-by-proxy as was Riley, and tracks down Faith in Los Angeles where Faith seriously thought she could convince Angel to kill her when taking a bounty on him in Wolfram & Hart. Faith even acknowledges that what she did was stupid and is perfectly willing to let Buffy strike her down. It's only because of Angel's interference that Faith decides to turn herself in when the police come instead and go to jail to atone for her crimes. To top it all off, Faith's actions indirectly lead to Buffy and Angel no longer being AmicableExes because they have a nasty fight over the fact that Angel protected her]].
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'''Instead''': They decline her offer, and even after Kel corrects Mr. Kensington, Kenan still tries to pass Kel off as the Swedish artist, slipping into stereotypical Swedish behavior such as yodeling. This doesn't fool Mr. Kensington one bit ("This is not Swede talk!"), and he thinks they're trying to scam him.\\
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'''Instead''': They decline Kel accepts her offer, but Kenan declines it, and even after Kel corrects Mr. Kensington, Kenan still tries to pass Kel off as the Swedish artist, slipping into stereotypical Swedish behavior such as yodeling. This doesn't fool Mr. Kensington one bit ("This is not Swede talk!"), and he thinks they're trying to scam him.\\
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** "Haven't Got Time For The Paint" has Kenan discovering Kel's talent in painting, and sells one of Kel's paintings ("Sunset Funset") at an auction. At Rigby's, the two then set up an auction of their own, in which Walter Kensington, the wealthy man who had purchased Kel's painting for $50K, is participating. Only problem--he's confused Kel with a similarly-named Swedish painter (Karlo Kimbell). Before the auction starts, a woman wants to buy one of Kel's paintings for $20K.\\
'''You'd Expect''': Both Kenan and Kel to accept the woman's offer, and later on, to be truthful and tell Mr. Kensington that Key is not the Swedish artist.\\
'''You'd Expect''': Both Kenan and Kel to accept the woman's offer, and later on, to be truthful and tell Mr. Kensington that Key is not the Swedish artist.\\
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** "Haven't Got Time For The Paint" has Kenan discovering Kel's talent in painting, and sells one of Kel's paintings ("Sunset Funset") getting sold at an auction. At Rigby's, the two then set up an auction of their own, in which Walter Kensington, the wealthy man who had purchased Kel's painting for $50K, is participating. Only problem--he's confused Kel with a similarly-named Swedish painter (Karlo Kimbell). Before the auction starts, a woman wants to buy one of Kel's paintings for $20K.\\
'''You'd Expect''': Both Kenan and Kel to accept the woman's offer, and later on, to be truthful and tell Mr. Kensington thatKey Kel is not the Swedish artist.\\
'''You'd Expect''': Both Kenan and Kel to accept the woman's offer, and later on, to be truthful and tell Mr. Kensington that
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** In "Attack of the Bug Men" Kenan's house gets robbed by fraudulent bug men after Kenan left the door open against his parents wishes and he goes to the place they're eating dinner after the cops get involved.\\
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'''Instead:''' He dumps the entire dish onto his family and makes Kel go alone to get his stuff. Knowing [[TheDitz Kel]] it's not hard to guess what happened.
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'''Instead:''' He dumps the entire dish onto his family and makes Kel go alone to get his stuff. Knowing [[TheDitz Kel]] it's not hard to guess what happened.Kel knows which stuff is the Rockmores', but instead he takes furniture from the truck that he thinks looks so much cooler (for instance, a chair that resembles a giant hand; "I thought you guys might like it better!").
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** "Haven't Got Time For The Paint" has Kenan discovering Kel's talent in painting, and sells one of Kel's paintings at an auction. The two then set up an auction of their own at Rigby's, where the man who had purchased Kel's painting is participating in. Only problem - he's confused Kel with a similarly named Swedish artist.\\
'''You'd Expect''': Both Kenan and Kel to be truthful and tell the man that Kel is not the Swedish artist.\\
'''Instead''': Even after Kel corrects the man, Kenan still tries to pass Kel off as the Swedish artist, slipping into stereotypical Swedish behavior. This doesn't fool the man one bit, and he thinks they're trying to scam him.\\
'''The Result''': The man demands his money back, and the auction ends disastrously, with no one wanting to buy any of Kel's paintings. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Nice going, Kenan]] - you've just blown it for Kel!
'''You'd Expect''': Both Kenan and Kel to be truthful and tell the man that Kel is not the Swedish artist.\\
'''Instead''': Even after Kel corrects the man, Kenan still tries to pass Kel off as the Swedish artist, slipping into stereotypical Swedish behavior. This doesn't fool the man one bit, and he thinks they're trying to scam him.\\
'''The Result''': The man demands his money back, and the auction ends disastrously, with no one wanting to buy any of Kel's paintings. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Nice going, Kenan]] - you've just blown it for Kel!
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** "Haven't Got Time For The Paint" has Kenan discovering Kel's talent in painting, and sells one of Kel's paintings ("Sunset Funset") at an auction. The At Rigby's, the two then set up an auction of their own at Rigby's, where own, in which Walter Kensington, the wealthy man who had purchased Kel's painting for $50K, is participating in. participating. Only problem - he's problem--he's confused Kel with a similarly named similarly-named Swedish artist.painter (Karlo Kimbell). Before the auction starts, a woman wants to buy one of Kel's paintings for $20K.\\
'''You'd Expect''': Both Kenan and Kel to accept the woman's offer, and later on, to be truthful and tellthe man Mr. Kensington that Kel Key is not the Swedish artist.\\
'''Instead''':Even They decline her offer, and even after Kel corrects the man, Mr. Kensington, Kenan still tries to pass Kel off as the Swedish artist, slipping into stereotypical Swedish behavior. behavior such as yodeling. This doesn't fool the man Mr. Kensington one bit, bit ("This is not Swede talk!"), and he thinks they're trying to scam him.\\
'''The Result''':The man Mr. Kensington demands his money back, and the auction ends disastrously, with no one wanting to buy any of Kel's paintings. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Nice going, Kenan]] - you've Kenan]]--you've just blown it for Kel!
'''You'd Expect''': Both Kenan and Kel to accept the woman's offer, and later on, to be truthful and tell
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'''The Result''':
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* ''Series/MissionImpossible'': In “The Counterfeiter”, Raymond Halder owns a successful line of medical clinics, and a very lucrative operation that counterfeits drugs, such as insulin and various heart medicines, out of various ingredients such as milk powder and food coloring. He also makes sure his personal and legal businesses' taxes are properly paid to the penny.\\
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* ''Series/MissionImpossible'': In “The Counterfeiter”, Raymond Halder owns a successful line of medical clinics, and a very lucrative operation that counterfeits drugs, such as insulin and various heart medicines, out of various ingredients such as milk powder and food coloring. He also makes sure his personal and legal businesses' taxes are properly paid to the penny.\\
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* ''Series/MissionImpossible'': In “The Counterfeiter”, Raymond Halder owns a successful line of medical clinics, and a very lucrative operation that counterfeits drugs, such as insulin and various heart medicines, out of various ingredients such as milk powder and food coloring. He also makes sure his personal and legal businesses' taxes are properly paid to the penny.
'''You'd Expect''': He'd be at least as smart as the Joker and see that the income taxes from his illegal business are paid as well, and that he would keep the amount of fake drugs released into the system to levels only local enforcement will worry about.
'''Instead''': He doesn't pay taxes on his illegal income, is a SmugSnake that the laws of the time mean only a slap on the wrist when he gets caught counterfeiting drugs, and saturates the market with his fakes to the point the MI team is called in to stop him.
'''You'd Expect''': He'd be at least as smart as the Joker and see that the income taxes from his illegal business are paid as well, and that he would keep the amount of fake drugs released into the system to levels only local enforcement will worry about.
'''Instead''': He doesn't pay taxes on his illegal income, is a SmugSnake that the laws of the time mean only a slap on the wrist when he gets caught counterfeiting drugs, and saturates the market with his fakes to the point the MI team is called in to stop him.
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'''Instead''': He doesn't pay taxes on his illegal income, is a SmugSnake that the laws of the time mean only a slap on the wrist when he gets caught counterfeiting drugs, and saturates the market with his fakes to the point the MI team is called in to stop him.\\
** '''You'd Expect''': He'd be at least as smart as the Joker and see that the income taxes from his illegal business are paid as well, and that he would keep the amount of fake drugs released into the system to levels only local enforcement will worry
'''Instead''': He doesn't pay taxes on his illegal income, is a SmugSnake that the laws of the time mean only a slap on the wrist when he gets caught counterfeiting drugs, and saturates the market with his fakes to the point the MI team is called in to stop him.\\
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* ''Series/MissionImpossible'': In “The Counterfeiter”, Raymond Halder owns a successful line of medical clinics, and a very lucrative operation that counterfeits drugs, such as insulin and various heart medicines, out of various ingredients such as milk powder and food coloring. He also makes sure his personal and legal businesses' taxes are properly paid to the penny.
'''You'd Expect''': He'd be at least as smart as the Joker and see that the income taxes from his illegal business are paid as well, and that he would keep the amount of fake drugs released into the system to levels only local enforcement will worry about.
'''Instead''': He doesn't pay taxes on his illegal income, is a SmugSnake that the laws of the time mean only a slap on the wrist when he gets caught counterfeiting drugs, and saturates the market with his fakes to the point the MI team is called in to stop him.
'''The Result''': The team gets him on tape admitting the fortune he's made selling fake drugs, and sends it off to the IRS.
'''You'd Expect''': He'd be at least as smart as the Joker and see that the income taxes from his illegal business are paid as well, and that he would keep the amount of fake drugs released into the system to levels only local enforcement will worry about.
'''Instead''': He doesn't pay taxes on his illegal income, is a SmugSnake that the laws of the time mean only a slap on the wrist when he gets caught counterfeiting drugs, and saturates the market with his fakes to the point the MI team is called in to stop him.
'''The Result''': The team gets him on tape admitting the fortune he's made selling fake drugs, and sends it off to the IRS.
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** While they're attending WizTech, Alex finds out that teacher Evilini is going to use a sports event to drain Justin of his magic since the winner goes to Volcano Land, where wizards can be drained. Justin at first thinks she's CryingWolf because she's spent most of their time playing pranks on him, but she proves it by bringing a Volcano Land employee to school. Alex tells Justin he needs to lose the Twelve Ball tournament.\\
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** While they're attending WizTech, [=WizTech=], Alex finds out that teacher Evilini is going to use a sports event to drain Justin of his magic since the winner goes to Volcano Land, where wizards can be drained. Justin at first thinks she's CryingWolf because she's spent most of their time playing pranks on him, but she proves it by bringing a Volcano Land employee to school. Alex tells Justin he needs to lose the Twelve Ball tournament.\\
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'''The Result''': Alex goes CorneredRattlesnake, remembers [[CheckhovsGun the truth-telling spell that Professor Crumb used on her]], and casts it on Evilini. Evilini starts EvilGloating aloud, goes OhCrap when everyone hears her, and gets arrested.
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'''The Result''': Alex goes CorneredRattlesnake, remembers [[CheckhovsGun [[ChekhovsGun the truth-telling spell that Professor Crumb used on her]], and casts it on Evilini. Evilini starts EvilGloating aloud, goes OhCrap when everyone hears her, and gets arrested.
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'''You'd Also Expect''': Telling the truth to Vanya would have the same effect; [[spoiler:if he shows her the notebook and reveals that Reginald lied to her and Allison Rumored her, saying that he noticed Klaus tossing away what looked like incriminating evidence. Vanya would also sympathize with Leonard's story, that he was humiliated by Reginald as a child]].
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'''You'd Also Expect''': Telling the truth to Vanya would have the same effect; [[spoiler:if he shows her the notebook and reveals that Reginald lied to her and Allison Rumored her, saying that he noticed Klaus tossing away what looked like incriminating evidence. Vanya would also sympathize with Leonard's story, that he was humiliated by Reginald as a child]]. \\
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** In "Three's a Crowd", Richard's wife Della and best friend Alan are planing a party for Richard to tell him ([[spoiler: that they're going to be parents!]]) Sadly Richard thinks they're having an affair and this results in him snapping enough to kill them both.\\
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'''Instead''': They don't say anything, even when it's clear that he's going to kill him. Result? One of the saddest endings in the series.
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'''Instead''': They don't say anything, even when it's clear that he's going to kill him.them. Result? One of the saddest endings in the series.
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** Everyone is trying to raise money at the casino in Kissing Town to buy the magic mirror at the auction so that Virginia and her father Tony can go home to New York, and Wolf wins more than enough money.\\
** Everyone is trying to raise money at the casino in Kissing Town to buy the magic mirror at the auction so that Virginia and her father Tony can go home to New York, and Wolf wins more than enough money.\\
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'''The Result''': This makes the nurses even ''more'' hostile to Elliott, with Carla leading the vitriol. It gets to the point where maybe they laugh at her when she drops her lunch tray in the hospital cafeteria, if we believe J.D.'s ImgineSpot. Only then does Elliott shape up, apologizing by praising Carla in Dr. Kelso's presence. Then Turk convinces Carla to make up with her, and advising Elliott to keep her mouth shut.
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'''The Result''': This makes the nurses even ''more'' hostile to Elliott, with Carla leading the vitriol. It gets to the point where maybe they laugh at her when she drops her lunch tray in the hospital cafeteria, if we believe J.D.'s ImgineSpot.ImagineSpot. Only then does Elliott shape up, apologizing by praising Carla in Dr. Kelso's presence. Then Turk convinces Carla to make up with her, and advising Elliott to keep her mouth shut.
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'''As A Result:''' He starts overheating, but the suit prevents him from sweating and he dies of hyperthermia, just inches away from the water.
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'''As A Result:''' He starts overheating, but the suit prevents him his sweat from sweating cooling him and he dies of hyperthermia, just inches away from the water.
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* In an early episode of ''Series/NCISNewOrleans'', three girls are out driving when they watch a bus crash. As they pull over to see what happened, three unpleasant-looking guys in prison jumpsuits pull themselves out of the bus and begin walking towards the girls.\\
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** In an early
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* In ''Series/MyNameIsEarl'' the warden has been giving Earl certificates for time off his sentence in exchange for helping out with various prison problems. When the time finally comes that Earl has earned enough time off that he can leave, he panics, because he's too incompetent without Earl there.\\
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** The warden has been giving Earl certificates for time off his sentence in exchange for helping out with various prison problems. When the time finally comes that Earl has earned enough time off that he can leave, he panics, because he's too incompetent without Earl there.\\
** The warden has been giving Earl certificates for time off his sentence in exchange for helping out with various prison problems. When the time finally comes that Earl has earned enough time off that he can leave, he panics, because he's too incompetent without Earl there.\\
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* ''[[Series/BobcatGoldthwaitsMisfitsAndMonsters Bobcat Goldthwait's Misfits & Monsters]]''
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*** Lois feels Reese would be able to accomplish more if he had more confidence in himself so she puts him in charge of the garage sale to fix wall destroyed in the previous episode.\\
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*** Lois feels Reese would be able to accomplish more if he had more confidence in himself so she puts him in charge of the garage sale to fix the wall destroyed in the previous episode.\\
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*** Mr. Herkabe was apparently to graduate high school with the highest GPA but avoid taking gym class.\\
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*** Mr. Herkabe was apparently able to graduate high school with the highest GPA GPA, but avoid avoided taking gym class.\\
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*** Thanks to Hal accidentally leaving an old couch on a railroad track and it gets hit on impact, the whole town has to evacuate to a shelter thanks to the resulting fumes. Lois has grounded Malcolm for arriving late because he was doing homework at the library and wasn't able to call due to the lack of payphones and not many kids in the 2000s having mobiles. She then tries to enforce the punishment at the shelter, telling him he's not to leave his cot when he talks with his friends. Malcolm in a sense of OnlySaneMan tells his mother they could die and this is not the time for SkewedPriorities.\\
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*** Thanks to Hal accidentally leaving an old couch on a railroad track and it gets hit on impact, getting hit, with the impact derailing the train, the whole town has to evacuate to a shelter thanks to the resulting fumes. Lois has grounded Malcolm for arriving late because he was doing homework at the library and wasn't able to call due to the lack of payphones and not many kids in the 2000s having mobiles. She then tries to enforce the punishment at the shelter, telling him he's not to leave his cot when he talks with his friends. Malcolm in a sense of OnlySaneMan tells his mother they could die and this is not the time for SkewedPriorities.\\
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** "Grandparents": Lois's parents come to visit. Despite their heckling and needling remarks, Lois and Hal need them to stay to watch the kids while they work double shifts to pay the bills on their new fridge. It's revealed that Lois's dad was a war veteran in their home country and still has a grenade.\\
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** "Grandparents": "Grandparents":
*** Lois's parents come to visit. Despite their heckling and needling remarks, Lois and Hal need them to stay to watch the kids while they work double shifts to pay the bills on their new fridge. It's revealed that Lois's dad was a war veteran in their home country and still has a grenade.\\
*** Lois's parents come to visit. Despite their heckling and needling remarks, Lois and Hal need them to stay to watch the kids while they work double shifts to pay the bills on their new fridge. It's revealed that Lois's dad was a war veteran in their home country and still has a grenade.\\
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** "Evacuation": Thanks to Hal accidentally leaving an old couch on a railroad track and it gets hit on impact, the whole town has to evacuate to a shelter thanks to the resulting fumes. Lois has grounded Malcolm for arriving late because he was doing homework at the library and wasn't able to call due to the lack of payphones and not many kids in the 2000s having mobiles. She then tries to enforce the punishment at the shelter, telling him he's not to leave his cot when he talks with his friends. Malcolm in a sense of OnlySaneMan tells his mother they could die and this is not the time for SkewedPriorities.\\
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** "Evacuation": "Evacuation":
*** Thanks to Hal accidentally leaving an old couch on a railroad track and it gets hit on impact, the whole town has to evacuate to a shelter thanks to the resulting fumes. Lois has grounded Malcolm for arriving late because he was doing homework at the library and wasn't able to call due to the lack of payphones and not many kids in the 2000s having mobiles. She then tries to enforce the punishment at the shelter, telling him he's not to leave his cot when he talks with his friends. Malcolm in a sense of OnlySaneMan tells his mother they could die and this is not the time for SkewedPriorities.\\
*** Thanks to Hal accidentally leaving an old couch on a railroad track and it gets hit on impact, the whole town has to evacuate to a shelter thanks to the resulting fumes. Lois has grounded Malcolm for arriving late because he was doing homework at the library and wasn't able to call due to the lack of payphones and not many kids in the 2000s having mobiles. She then tries to enforce the punishment at the shelter, telling him he's not to leave his cot when he talks with his friends. Malcolm in a sense of OnlySaneMan tells his mother they could die and this is not the time for SkewedPriorities.\\
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** "Garage Sale": Lois feels Reese would be able to accomplish more if he had more confidence in himself so she puts him in charge of the garage sale to fix wall destroyed in the previous episode.\\
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** "Garage Sale": Sale":
*** Lois feels Reese would be able to accomplish more if he had more confidence in himself so she puts him in charge of the garage sale to fix wall destroyed in the previous episode.\\
*** Lois feels Reese would be able to accomplish more if he had more confidence in himself so she puts him in charge of the garage sale to fix wall destroyed in the previous episode.\\
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** "Malcolm Defends Reese": Mr. Herkabe was apparently to graduate high school with the highest GPA but avoid taking gym class.\\
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** "Malcolm Defends Reese": Reese":
*** Mr. Herkabe was apparently to graduate high school with the highest GPA but avoid taking gym class.\\
*** Mr. Herkabe was apparently to graduate high school with the highest GPA but avoid taking gym class.\\
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** "Smunday": The inciting incident of the episode is that the boys have been grounded for ages due to them giving away Dewey's bike to Francis's friends in exchange for seeing one of them eat dog food. It's revealed that this happened at the time that Francis was home, and Francis told a suspicious Lois because she bribed him that if he busted his brothers, then he could come home on summer vacation.\\
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** "Smunday": "Smunday":
*** The inciting incident of the episode is that the boys have been grounded for ages due to them giving away Dewey's bike to Francis's friends in exchange for seeing one of them eat dog food. It's revealed that this happened at the time that Francis was home, and Francis told a suspicious Lois because she bribed him that if he busted his brothers, then he could come home on summer vacation.\\
*** The inciting incident of the episode is that the boys have been grounded for ages due to them giving away Dewey's bike to Francis's friends in exchange for seeing one of them eat dog food. It's revealed that this happened at the time that Francis was home, and Francis told a suspicious Lois because she bribed him that if he busted his brothers, then he could come home on summer vacation.\\
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** "Home Alone 4:"
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** "Home Alone 4:"4":
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** "Shame": A tall seven-year old named Kevin has just transferred to Malcolm's school. He's also established as a bully, who mocks the twelve-year old Malcolm by repeating everything he says. Malcolm tends to respond by snarking back, though he's annoyed when Kevin cuts in front of him on school pizza day and takes the last two slices.\\
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** "Shame": "Shame":
*** A tall seven-year old named Kevin has just transferred to Malcolm's school. He's also established as a bully, who mocks the twelve-year old Malcolm by repeating everything he says. Malcolm tends to respond by snarking back, though he's annoyed when Kevin cuts in front of him on school pizza day and takes the last two slices.\\
*** A tall seven-year old named Kevin has just transferred to Malcolm's school. He's also established as a bully, who mocks the twelve-year old Malcolm by repeating everything he says. Malcolm tends to respond by snarking back, though he's annoyed when Kevin cuts in front of him on school pizza day and takes the last two slices.\\
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** "Home Alone 4: Malcolm overhears that his parents may let Francis come home permanently from military school if Francis takes care of his brothers well for one weekend, while the parents attend a wedding. He happily tells Reese and Dewey, but they fear that contrarian Francis will refuse to behave because he hates authority, especially their mother's word.\\
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** "Home Alone 4: 4:"
*** Malcolm overhears that his parents may let Francis come home permanently from military school if Francis takes care of his brothers well for one weekend, while the parents attend a wedding. He happily tells Reese and Dewey, but they fear that contrarian Francis will refuse to behave because he hates authority, especially their mother's word.\\
*** Malcolm overhears that his parents may let Francis come home permanently from military school if Francis takes care of his brothers well for one weekend, while the parents attend a wedding. He happily tells Reese and Dewey, but they fear that contrarian Francis will refuse to behave because he hates authority, especially their mother's word.\\
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** In ''TwoHeadsAreBetterThanNone'', Kenan encounters the Headless Knight in the woods, and runs back to camp to warn his family. Naturally, they don't find the knight, and tell him he's just imagining things. Fair enough, but when they go to the Believe it or Else museum, they encounter an exhibit of the Headless Knight, whom Kenan instantly recognizes from that night, and whom people have reported seeing in a town called Rockville.\\
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** In ''TwoHeadsAreBetterThanNone'', ''[[Recap/KenanAndKelS04Ep13TwoHeadsAreBetterThanNone Two Heads Are Better Than None]]'', Kenan encounters the Headless Knight in the woods, and runs back to camp to warn his family. Naturally, they don't find the knight, and tell him he's just imagining things. Fair enough, but when they go to the Believe it or Else museum, they encounter an exhibit of the Headless Knight, whom Kenan instantly recognizes from that night, and whom people have reported seeing in a town called Rockville.\\
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'''So''': He does place a massive armed guard including [[NoKillLikeOverkill one with an MG42]] to kill anyone even thinking about approaching where the prisoners are held, after Hogan and his men very nearly smuggle them out. So, Hogan hits on another plan... [[RefugeInAudacity hijacking a nearby radio station and having Kinchloe make a fake announcement that the war is over]]. Apparently in WorldWarTwo according to ''Hogan's Heroes'', the rules state that all prisoners must be freed immediately on the end of the war.\\
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'''So''': He does place a massive armed guard including [[NoKillLikeOverkill one with an MG42]] to kill anyone even thinking about approaching where the prisoners are held, after Hogan and his men very nearly smuggle them out. So, Hogan hits on another plan... [[RefugeInAudacity hijacking a nearby radio station and having Kinchloe make a fake announcement that the war is over]]. Apparently in WorldWarTwo UsefulNotes/WorldWarII according to ''Hogan's Heroes'', the rules state that all prisoners must be freed immediately on the end of the war.\\
