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* AdvertisedExtra: Viva has far more advertising than [=BroZone=] despite the movie being about them. Really, she only becomes significant around the halfway point of the movie onward. In bigger advertising showing the cast, she's front and center alongside Poppy and Branch, and in smaller ones, it's is usually only Poppy and Viva with Branch showing up with the two of them sometimes.
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** When Branch and Poppy confront Velvet and Veneer to give the former's brothers back, the latter calls them out for stealing their talent because they're talentless, leading to this:
--> '''Poppy:''' [[spoiler:You're stealing BroZone's talent because you have none of your own, you big... Oh, you big... '''Phonies!''']]
--> '''Poppy:''' [[spoiler:You're stealing BroZone's talent because you have none of your own, you big... Oh, you big... '''Phonies!''']]
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** When Branch and Poppy confront Velvet and Veneer to [[spoiler:to give the former's brothers back, the latter calls them out for stealing their talent because they're talentless, talentless,]] leading to this:
--> '''Poppy:''' [[spoiler:You're stealingBroZone's Brozone's talent because you have none of your own, you big... Oh, you big... '''Phonies!''']]
--> '''Poppy:''' [[spoiler:You're stealing
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* WhamLine: When Poppy meets Viva, she's ecstatic at having a long-lost sister, especially since they think so much alike, have similar personalities, and have many of the same hobbies. However, when Poppy asks Viva to come along on the journey to Mount Rageous to rescue Branch's brother Floyd, Viva not only refuses, but:
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** When Poppy meets Viva, she's ecstatic at having a long-lost sister, especially since they think so much alike, have similar personalities, and have many of the same hobbies. However, when Poppy asks Viva to come along on the journey to Mount Rageous to rescue Branch's brother Floyd, Viva not only refuses, but:
** When Poppy meets Viva, she's ecstatic at having a long-lost sister, especially since they think so much alike, have similar personalities, and have many of the same hobbies. However, when Poppy asks Viva to come along on the journey to Mount Rageous to rescue Branch's brother Floyd, Viva not only refuses, but:
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** When Branch and Poppy confront Velvet and Veneer to give the former's brothers back, the latter calls them out for stealing their talent because they're talentless, leading to this:
--> '''Poppy:''' [[spoiler:You're stealing BroZone's talent because you have none of your own, you big... Oh, you big... '''Phonies!''']]
--> '''Poppy:''' [[spoiler:You're stealing BroZone's talent because you have none of your own, you big... Oh, you big... '''Phonies!''']]
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*StageParent: Stage-siblings to be more precise
**Velvet uses mental and emotional abuse to control her brother and changed him to be just like her in order to become famous and keep Veneer from betraying her.
**John Dory had his brothers act the way he wants them and to push them to perfection in order to achieve the Perfect Harmony. Problem was he had no idea how much he was hurting his brothers.
**Velvet uses mental and emotional abuse to control her brother and changed him to be just like her in order to become famous and keep Veneer from betraying her.
**John Dory had his brothers act the way he wants them and to push them to perfection in order to achieve the Perfect Harmony. Problem was he had no idea how much he was hurting his brothers.
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I thought this fitted better since it doesn’t take that long for the reveal to come after the setup.
* FiveSecondForeshadowing
** [[spoiler:The letter John Dory receives from "Floyd" becomes questionable when we find out Floyd is trapped in a diamond container with no way to mail a letter from there. Turns out it was Velvet who forged the letter to lure him and his brothers into a trap.]]
** Additionally, [[spoiler:the letter is signed "Floyd the Sensitive One". But when Floyd left in the prologue, he specifically said he was pursuing a solo career. So, why would he sign a letter using his former "Sensitive One" sobriquet that Brozone gave him, when he doesn't want to be a part of Brozone anymore? Because he ''didn't'' sign the letter or even write it; Velvet forged the letter, and she signed it using Floyd's Brozone stage name because that's what she's familiar with.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:the letter says that Floyd is being held against his will by "superstars Velvet and Veneer". But "superstars" sounds like a strangely complimentary nickname to give to people who are sucking the life out of Floyd...because Floyd didn't give them that nickname at all; Velvet forged the letter and called herself and her brother "superstars" to boost her own ego.]]
** [[spoiler:The letter John Dory receives from "Floyd" becomes questionable when we find out Floyd is trapped in a diamond container with no way to mail a letter from there. Turns out it was Velvet who forged the letter to lure him and his brothers into a trap.]]
** Additionally, [[spoiler:the letter is signed "Floyd the Sensitive One". But when Floyd left in the prologue, he specifically said he was pursuing a solo career. So, why would he sign a letter using his former "Sensitive One" sobriquet that Brozone gave him, when he doesn't want to be a part of Brozone anymore? Because he ''didn't'' sign the letter or even write it; Velvet forged the letter, and she signed it using Floyd's Brozone stage name because that's what she's familiar with.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:the letter says that Floyd is being held against his will by "superstars Velvet and Veneer". But "superstars" sounds like a strangely complimentary nickname to give to people who are sucking the life out of Floyd...because Floyd didn't give them that nickname at all; Velvet forged the letter and called herself and her brother "superstars" to boost her own ego.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** Even if you weren't spoiled by the trailers, King Peppy's suspicious behavior when questioned by Poppy about "secret family members" and his face when Poppy mentions if she had a sister really would've hinted at Viva's existence.
** [[spoiler:The letter John Dory receives from "Floyd" becomes questionable when we find out Floyd is trapped in a diamond container with no way to mail a letter from there. Turns out it was Velvet who forged the letter to lure him and his brothers into a trap.]]
** Additionally, [[spoiler:the letter is signed "Floyd the Sensitive One". But when Floyd left in the prologue, he specifically said he was pursuing a solo career. So, why would he sign a letter using his former "Sensitive One" sobriquet that Brozone gave him, when he doesn't want to be a part of Brozone anymore? Because he ''didn't'' sign the letter or even write it; Velvet forged the letter, and she signed it using Floyd's Brozone stage name because that's what she's familiar with.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:the letter says that Floyd is being held against his will by "superstars Velvet and Veneer". But "superstars" sounds like a strangely complimentary nickname to give to people who are sucking the life out of Floyd...because Floyd didn't give them that nickname at all; Velvet forged the letter and called herself and her brother "superstars" to boost her own ego.]]
** Even if you weren't spoiled by the trailers, King Peppy's suspicious behavior when questioned by Poppy about "secret family members" and his face when Poppy mentions if she had a sister really would've hinted at Viva's existence.
** [[spoiler:The letter John Dory receives from "Floyd" becomes questionable when we find out Floyd is trapped in a diamond container with no way to mail a letter from there. Turns out it was Velvet who forged the letter to lure him and his brothers into a trap.]]
** Additionally, [[spoiler:the letter is signed "Floyd the Sensitive One". But when Floyd left in the prologue, he specifically said he was pursuing a solo career. So, why would he sign a letter using his former "Sensitive One" sobriquet that Brozone gave him, when he doesn't want to be a part of Brozone anymore? Because he ''didn't'' sign the letter or even write it; Velvet forged the letter, and she signed it using Floyd's Brozone stage name because that's what she's familiar with.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:the letter says that Floyd is being held against his will by "superstars Velvet and Veneer". But "superstars" sounds like a strangely complimentary nickname to give to people who are sucking the life out of Floyd...because Floyd didn't give them that nickname at all; Velvet forged the letter and called herself and her brother "superstars" to boost her own ego.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}:
**{{Foreshadowing}}: Even if you weren't spoiled by the trailers, King Peppy's suspicious behavior when questioned by Poppy about "secret family members" and his face when Poppy mentions if she had a sister really would've hinted at Viva's existence.
** [[spoiler:The letter John Dory receives from "Floyd" becomes questionable when we find out Floyd is trapped in a diamond container with no way to mail a letter from there. Turns out it was Velvet who forged the letter to lure him and his brothers into a trap.]]
** Additionally, [[spoiler:the letter is signed "Floyd the Sensitive One". But when Floyd left in the prologue, he specifically said he was pursuing a solo career. So, why would he sign a letter using his former "Sensitive One" sobriquet that Brozone gave him, when he doesn't want to be a part of Brozone anymore? Because he ''didn't'' sign the letter or even write it; Velvet forged the letter, and she signed it using Floyd's Brozone stage name because that's what she's familiar with.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:the letter says that Floyd is being held against his will by "superstars Velvet and Veneer". But "superstars" sounds like a strangely complimentary nickname to give to people who are sucking the life out of Floyd...because Floyd didn't give them that nickname at all; Velvet forged the letter and called herself and her brother "superstars" to boost her own ego.]]existence.
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** [[spoiler:The letter John Dory receives from "Floyd" becomes questionable when we find out Floyd is trapped in a diamond container with no way to mail a letter from there. Turns out it was Velvet who forged the letter to lure him and his brothers into a trap.]]
** Additionally, [[spoiler:the letter is signed "Floyd the Sensitive One". But when Floyd left in the prologue, he specifically said he was pursuing a solo career. So, why would he sign a letter using his former "Sensitive One" sobriquet that Brozone gave him, when he doesn't want to be a part of Brozone anymore? Because he ''didn't'' sign the letter or even write it; Velvet forged the letter, and she signed it using Floyd's Brozone stage name because that's what she's familiar with.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:the letter says that Floyd is being held against his will by "superstars Velvet and Veneer". But "superstars" sounds like a strangely complimentary nickname to give to people who are sucking the life out of Floyd...because Floyd didn't give them that nickname at all; Velvet forged the letter and called herself and her brother "superstars" to boost her own ego.]]
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** If you weren't spoiled by the trailers, then King Peppy's suspicious behavior when questioned by Poppy about "secret family members" and his face when Poppy mentions if she had a sister really would've hinted at Viva's existence.
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** If Even if you weren't spoiled by the trailers, then King Peppy's suspicious behavior when questioned by Poppy about "secret family members" and his face when Poppy mentions if she had a sister really would've hinted at Viva's existence.
