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* LennonSpecs: Somehow anachronistically given the otherwise Victorian-likeness of the setting, Jack sports a pair.
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''[[http://visseria.net/ Visseria]]'' is a fantasy webcomic that follows four characters as they live and work on the continent of Tricorne. The main characters are Alchione, a guard who is a loose canon and prone to ultraviolence; Frieda, a village doctor with dark secrets; Jack, a no-goodnik with unknown motivations behind his crimes; and Treneth, a magic-wielding archer on a spiritual mission.
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* LennonSpecs: Someone anachronistically given the otherwise Victorian-likeness of the setting, Jack sports a pair.
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* LennonSpecs: Someone Somehow anachronistically given the otherwise Victorian-likeness of the setting, Jack sports a pair.
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* SpiderTank/MiniMecha: Marcelle's cyborg components make him one.
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* SpiderTank/MiniMecha: SpiderTank[=/=]MiniMecha: Marcelle's cyborg components make him one.
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The author also created the completed InteractiveComic ''Tales of Visseria: The White Depths'', most of which was unfortunately lost with the ''WebComic/MSPaintAdventures'' forum (the "mirror" only has the 90-or-so first pages, which now all bear a Website/PhotoBucket watermark).
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The author also created the completed InteractiveComic ''Tales of Visseria: The White Depths'', most of which was unfortunately lost with the ''WebComic/MSPaintAdventures'' forum (the "mirror" only has the 90-or-so first pages, which now as of August 2019 all bear a Website/PhotoBucket watermark).
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* WildMagic: Judging by what happens to [[spoiler: Treneth]] and Mulgot's subsequent reaction, certain mages are unable to control themselves.
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* WildMagic: Judging by what happens to [[spoiler: Treneth]] and Mulgot's subsequent reaction, certain mages are unable to control themselves.themselves.
!! The adventure provided examples of:
* CouldntFindAPen: a cleric blesses a weapon by writing runes on it, but has nothing handy but his own blood. It's just as well though, since [[BloodMagic one's blood is the best vector for a cleric to channel his magic]].
* HolyHandGrenade: The blessed ballista. A sufficiently advanced machine later upgrades it into a railgun, ''without disrupting the runes'', which means the railgun is still blessed and able to badly hurt the big bad.
* TimeCapsule: a literal example in the ship fridges, that actually stop time inside when closed. The meat is still fresh after eight millennia. [[spoiler:And so is the cook, shoved in there during a mutiny, who emerges alive and well when the fridge is open.]]
!! The adventure provided examples of:
* CouldntFindAPen: a cleric blesses a weapon by writing runes on it, but has nothing handy but his own blood. It's just as well though, since [[BloodMagic one's blood is the best vector for a cleric to channel his magic]].
* HolyHandGrenade: The blessed ballista. A sufficiently advanced machine later upgrades it into a railgun, ''without disrupting the runes'', which means the railgun is still blessed and able to badly hurt the big bad.
* TimeCapsule: a literal example in the ship fridges, that actually stop time inside when closed. The meat is still fresh after eight millennia. [[spoiler:And so is the cook, shoved in there during a mutiny, who emerges alive and well when the fridge is open.]]
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As of August 2019, the visseria.net website doesn't seem to exist anymore.
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The author also created the completed InteractiveComic ''Tales of Visseria: The White Depths'', most of which was unfortunately lost with the ''WebComic/MSPaintAdventures'' forum (the "mirror" only has the 90-or-so first pages, which now all bear a Website/PhotoBucket watermark).
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[[http://visseria.net/ Visseria]] is a fantasy webcomic that follows four characters as they live and work on the continent of Tricorne. The main characters are Alchione, a guard who is a loose canon and prone to ultraviolence; Frieda, a village doctor with dark secrets; Jack, a no-goodnik with unknown motivations behind his crimes; and Treneth, a magic-wielding archer on a spiritual mission.
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* DressingAsTheEnemy: Jack does this to sneak into the Bureau of Magical Concerns. For what reason is unknown as yet.
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* DressingAsTheEnemy: Jack does this to sneak into the Bureau of Magical Concerns. For what reason is unknown as yet.Concerns, and steal an artefact there.
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* FlashStep: The drug lord Alchione encounters is certainly fast enough to be seen. [[FacialHorror She does feel it, though]].
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* FlashStep: The drug lord Alchione encounters is certainly fast enough to not be seen. [[FacialHorror She does feel it, though]].
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* ArcherArchetype: Treneth, though he uses magic to spice up his arrows.
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* TrickArrow: Treneth uses his arrows as payloads for various magical spells, including flares and fire.
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* MadDoctor: The rest of the town doesn't seem too friendly towards Frieda. [[spoiler: For a good reason, it seems.]]
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* MadDoctor: The rest of the town doesn't seem isn't too friendly towards Frieda. [[spoiler: For a good reason, it seems.]]
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* Mad Doctor: The rest of the town doesn't seem too friendly towards Frieda. [[spoiler: For a good reason, it seems.]]
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* Mad Doctor: MadDoctor: The rest of the town doesn't seem too friendly towards Frieda. [[spoiler: For a good reason, it seems.]]
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* PropagandaMachine: Highguard seems to have a lot of propaganda posters plastered around. As expected, they glorify the state and breed suspicion of outsiders.
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* FacelessGoons: The guards.
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* FacelessGoons: The guards.Highguard cops.
* FatBastard: Willard's father, again.
* FlashStep: The drug lord Alchione encounters is certainly fast enough to be seen. [[FacialHorror She does feel it, though]].
* FlavorText: A few odd pages have background lore entered in that aren't directly important to the story but related to the contents of that page.
* FrontierDoctor: Frieda was forced to become one after [[spoiler: having her work stolen and spending a year in prison.]]
* FlashStep: The drug lord Alchione encounters is certainly fast enough to be seen. [[FacialHorror She does feel it, though]].
* FlavorText: A few odd pages have background lore entered in that aren't directly important to the story but related to the contents of that page.
* FrontierDoctor: Frieda was forced to become one after [[spoiler: having her work stolen and spending a year in prison.]]
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* SceneryPorn: Very little detail is spared, if detail can be tacked in.
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Used for more extreme ones, such as whenever [[spoiler: Alchione takes someone's head off.]]
* LennonSpecs: Someone anachronistically given the otherwise Victorian-likeness of the setting, Jack sports a pair.
* Mad Doctor: The rest of the town doesn't seem too friendly towards Frieda. [[spoiler: For a good reason, it seems.]]
* MeleeATrois: Thusfar three nations have been introduced, and they all hate each others' guts.
* OffWithHisHead: [[spoiler: Alchione does this twice in one fight... Though the second one had some extra parts come along with it.]]
* PoliceBrutality: In addition to Alchione's abuses, a couple of nameless cops 'investigate' Frieda.
* SamusIsAGirl: When Alchione is first introduced, all that is shown is a huge armored person overpowering some two-bit criminal. It's only when a common citizen hears her voice that it's revealed that she's female.
* SceneryPorn:Very little detail [[http://visseria.net/?comic=00098-highguard-again Occasionally.]]
* ShieldsAreUseless: The very first time someone with any kind of strength faces Alchione, her shield does nothing.
* SpiderTank/MiniMecha: Marcelle's cyborg components make him one.
* SteamPunk: The smoke-belching cyborg isspared, if detail can be tacked in.a dead giveaway.
* SuperStrength: Alchione is easily able to break metal doors down and punch considerable dents in armor.
* SwordCane: The drug lord pulls one while facing Alchione. He's very good with it.
* WildMagic: Judging by what happens to [[spoiler: Treneth]] and Mulgot's subsequent reaction, certain mages are unable to control themselves.
* LennonSpecs: Someone anachronistically given the otherwise Victorian-likeness of the setting, Jack sports a pair.
* Mad Doctor: The rest of the town doesn't seem too friendly towards Frieda. [[spoiler: For a good reason, it seems.]]
* MeleeATrois: Thusfar three nations have been introduced, and they all hate each others' guts.
* OffWithHisHead: [[spoiler: Alchione does this twice in one fight... Though the second one had some extra parts come along with it.]]
* PoliceBrutality: In addition to Alchione's abuses, a couple of nameless cops 'investigate' Frieda.
* SamusIsAGirl: When Alchione is first introduced, all that is shown is a huge armored person overpowering some two-bit criminal. It's only when a common citizen hears her voice that it's revealed that she's female.
* SceneryPorn:
* ShieldsAreUseless: The very first time someone with any kind of strength faces Alchione, her shield does nothing.
* SpiderTank/MiniMecha: Marcelle's cyborg components make him one.
* SteamPunk: The smoke-belching cyborg is
* SuperStrength: Alchione is easily able to break metal doors down and punch considerable dents in armor.
* SwordCane: The drug lord pulls one while facing Alchione. He's very good with it.
* WildMagic: Judging by what happens to [[spoiler: Treneth]] and Mulgot's subsequent reaction, certain mages are unable to control themselves.
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* BackgroundMagicFieldArcherArchetype: Treneth, though he uses magic to spice up his arrows.
* BackgroundMagicField: Magic is stated by Treneth as being channeled by mages who tap into spiritual energy that wafts everywhere.
* BloodMagic: Treneth is shown writing magic diagrams using [[CouldntFindAPen his own blood]], because it works well for that purpose.
* BluffTheImpostor: Done to Jack by a random guard early on, making reference to a building that doesn't exist. [[spoiler: Jack quickly deals with him.]]
* BodyHorror: Marcelle has what appear to be ''pipes'' bolted through his head.
* BowAndSwordInAccord: Treneth keeps a knife in hand when drawing his bow, presumably in case something catches him by surprise.
* BackgroundMagicField: Magic is stated by Treneth as being channeled by mages who tap into spiritual energy that wafts everywhere.
* BloodMagic: Treneth is shown writing magic diagrams using [[CouldntFindAPen his own blood]], because it works well for that purpose.
* BluffTheImpostor: Done to Jack by a random guard early on, making reference to a building that doesn't exist. [[spoiler: Jack quickly deals with him.]]
* BodyHorror: Marcelle has what appear to be ''pipes'' bolted through his head.
* BowAndSwordInAccord: Treneth keeps a knife in hand when drawing his bow, presumably in case something catches him by surprise.
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* CombatHandFan: Jack uses a seemingly innocuous fan to slit a throat.
* CowboyCop: Alchione doesn't seem to have a problem with roughing up a suspect for answers, or beating heads in at the slightest provocation.
* DaChief: ... And she gets this treatment from a visiting bureaucrat to her district headquarters.
* DeanBitterman: The one time we see Willard's father, dean of the medical university, he uses his authority to destroy a student.
* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Highguard, being Victorian-esque, seems to have cultural stigmas against women in men's careers, and [[FantasticRacism towards cavelings in general]].
* DressingAsTheEnemy: Jack does this to sneak into the Bureau of Magical Concerns. For what reason is unknown as yet.
* CowboyCop: Alchione doesn't seem to have a problem with roughing up a suspect for answers, or beating heads in at the slightest provocation.
* DaChief: ... And she gets this treatment from a visiting bureaucrat to her district headquarters.
* DeanBitterman: The one time we see Willard's father, dean of the medical university, he uses his authority to destroy a student.
* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Highguard, being Victorian-esque, seems to have cultural stigmas against women in men's careers, and [[FantasticRacism towards cavelings in general]].
* DressingAsTheEnemy: Jack does this to sneak into the Bureau of Magical Concerns. For what reason is unknown as yet.
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* GaslampFantasy: Factories, trains, vehicles, modern-esque buildings... even while magic using cavelings are a common part of life.
* GaslampFantasy: Factories, trains, vehicles, modern-esque buildings... even while magic using cavelings are a common part of life.
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* FacelessGoons
FacelessGoons: The guards.
* FantasticRacism: Cavelings appear to be a repressed minority. Frieda is ejected from medical school under pretenses that relate to her race, while their tribal nations appear to live in anything from fear to resentment of human encroachment.
* GaslampFantasy: Factories, trains,vehicles, modern-esque buildings...victorian-style clothing and architecture... even while magic using cavelings are a common part of life.
* FantasticRacism: Cavelings appear to be a repressed minority. Frieda is ejected from medical school under pretenses that relate to her race, while their tribal nations appear to live in anything from fear to resentment of human encroachment.
* GaslampFantasy: Factories, trains,
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[[http://visseria.net/ Visseria]] is a fantasy webcomic that follows four characters as they live and work on the continent of Tricorne. It offers action, adventure, police brutality, thievery, magic, cannibalism, and mad science.
It updates on Wednesday nights.
It updates on Wednesday nights.
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[[http://visseria.net/ Visseria]] is a fantasy webcomic that follows four characters as they live and work on the continent of Tricorne. It offers action, adventure, police brutality, thievery, magic, cannibalism, The main characters are Alchione, a guard who is a loose canon and mad science.prone to ultraviolence; Frieda, a village doctor with dark secrets; Jack, a no-goodnik with unknown motivations behind his crimes; and Treneth, a magic-wielding archer on a spiritual mission.
The comic offers action, adventure, police brutality, thievery, magic, cannibalism, and mad science. It updates on Wednesday nights.
The comic offers action, adventure, police brutality, thievery, magic, cannibalism, and mad science. It updates on Wednesday nights.
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* CheshireCatGrin: That [[http://visseria.net/?comic=00090-flare weird dog-looking lady]].
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* CheshireCatGrin: That [[http://visseria.net/?comic=00090-flare weird dog-looking lady]]. And also Jack.
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[[http://visseria.net/ Visseria]] is a fantasy webcomic that follows four characters as they live and work on the continent of Tricorne. It offers action, adventure, police brutality, thievery, magic, cannibalism, and mad science.
It updates on Wednesday nights.
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!! This webcomic provides examples of:
* ActionGirl: Mulgot.
* BackgroundMagicField
* CheshireCatGrin: That [[http://visseria.net/?comic=00090-flare weird dog-looking lady]].
* FacelessGoons
* GaslampFantasy
* SceneryPorn: Very little detail is spared, if detail can be tacked in.
It updates on Wednesday nights.
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!! This webcomic provides examples of:
* ActionGirl: Mulgot.
* BackgroundMagicField
* CheshireCatGrin: That [[http://visseria.net/?comic=00090-flare weird dog-looking lady]].
* FacelessGoons
* GaslampFantasy
* SceneryPorn: Very little detail is spared, if detail can be tacked in.
