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* PrecisionFStrike: A variant of one, Raffy angrily tells Alphys to "Shut the hell up!" when she tries to explain the circumstances. Needless to say, this, combined with Raffy's general arrogance, lands him in heavy trouble with Sans.
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* AffectionateNickname: Sans is repeatedly called "Sansy" by Corvsiva, who, at times, is partly annoyed with it.
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** Sans is repeatedly called "Sansy" by Corvsiva, who, at times, is partly annoyed withit.it.
** Before the climatic battle of Chapter 2, [[spoiler:Sans addresses Alphys with one; "A-love", as a call-back to their original romantic bond.]]
** Sans is repeatedly called "Sansy" by Corvsiva, who, at times, is partly annoyed with
** Before the climatic battle of Chapter 2, [[spoiler:Sans addresses Alphys with one; "A-love", as a call-back to their original romantic bond.]]
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** At the climax of Chapter 1, Alphys lets one out upon seeing Undyne die. Her wish to go back in time to fix things kickstarts this story's plot.
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* BigNo:
** Alphys, Raffy and Jade let one out once they hear the punishment Sans has in mind for them for not doing their jobs right; to cut their wages, either temporarily or ''permanently''.
** Sans lets an even bigger one out [[spoiler:once he discovers Papyrus's dead body. Corvsiva is trying desperately to hold back her tears, while this pushes Sans to his RageBreakingPoint.]]
** Alphys, Raffy and Jade let one out once they hear the punishment Sans has in mind for them for not doing their jobs right; to cut their wages, either temporarily or ''permanently''.
** Sans lets an even bigger one out [[spoiler:once he discovers Papyrus's dead body. Corvsiva is trying desperately to hold back her tears, while this pushes Sans to his RageBreakingPoint.]]
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: When Alphys is pressured early on in Chapter 1, she's willing to accept whatever punishment Sans has planned in his TranquilFury. However, she didn't expect ''that'' kind of {{Pun}}-ishment coming.
-->'''Sans:''' Perhaps you could HAND me some cups of kepCHIPS to help m'self UP.\\
'''Alphys:''' A-AGAIN?!\\
'''Sans:''' (walking off) See you soon in my off-ICE.\\
'''Alphys:''' [[SkywardScream GAH!]]
-->'''Sans:''' Perhaps you could HAND me some cups of kepCHIPS to help m'self UP.\\
'''Alphys:''' A-AGAIN?!\\
'''Sans:''' (walking off) See you soon in my off-ICE.\\
'''Alphys:''' [[SkywardScream GAH!]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Sans is repeatedly called "Sansy" by Corvsiva, who, at times, is partly annoyed with it.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: [[spoiler:Frisk lets one out during their fake apology, concerning an apparent CommonalityConnection they share. Sans, however, isn't easily fooled.]]
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* HurricaneOfPuns: Like in canon, Sans is prone to letting these out whenever he pleases. Early on in the story, Papyrus and Alphys both have to hear the worst of it much to their annoyance.
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* HurricaneOfPuns: Like in canon, Sans is prone to letting these out whenever he pleases. Early on in the story, Papyrus and Alphys both have to hear the worst of it much to their annoyance. [[spoiler:Even in the midst of his fight with Frisk, he still can't help but throw one out every now and then.]]
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Chapter 2 concludes with Sans dying, having failed to stop Frisk in their tracks. However, he finds Alphys in the afterlife, [[SequelHook meaning that they might get a chance to finally patch things up personally...]]]]
* TheHeroDies: [[spoiler:The ultimate fate of Sans at the end of the story's second chapter, getting killed not by Frisk, but by what appears to be Asriel.]]
* TheHeroDies: [[spoiler:The ultimate fate of Sans at the end of the story's second chapter, getting killed not by Frisk, but by what appears to be Asriel.]]
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* NoOSHACompliance: Surprisingly subverted this time, with the bridge separating Snowdin and the door to the Ruins now having iron bars to prevent people from potentially falling off.
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* BetterAsFriends: Sans and Alphys once had a romantic bond with one another prior to this story, though they eventually broke up, with Alphys crushing on Undyne instead. [[spoiler:Though, even after all those years, Sans hasn't lost care for Alphys, no matter how many times they've argued in their job. It comes to a head when he gives out an AnguishedDeclarationOfLove to her before cutting all connection off between them and facing Frisk alone.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: While it is known that Gaster could be the father of Sans and Papyrus in canon, it's unknown whether or not they ever had a mother. [[spoiler:However, here, said mother, Corvsivas is one of the driving forces of the plot.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: While it is known that Gaster could be the father of Sans and Papyrus in canon, it's unknown whether or not they ever had a mother. [[spoiler:However, here, said mother, Corvsivas Corvsiva, is one of the driving forces of the plot.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: While it is known that Gaster could be the father of Sans and Papyrus in canon, it's unknown whether or not they ever had a mother. [[spoiler:However, here, said mother mother, Corvsiva is one of the driving forces of the plot.]]
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* HurricaneOfPuns: Like in canon, Sans is prone to letting these out whenever he pleases. Early on in the story, Papyrus and Alphys both have to hear the worst of it much to their annoyance.
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![[Administrivia/SpoilersOff This webcomic will assume that you already know a lot about Undertale, including its Genocide route, so any spoilers related to the game are unmarked here.]] Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned!
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* IronicEcho: Most of the plot is kickstarted after Alphys mentions that she wishes she could go back in time to put things right and save Undyne. [[spoiler:Later on, when she says the same thing after the Genocide run starts off for real, Sans is unable to respond, walking away in shame that what he did wasn't enough to save anybody.]]
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* PerpetualSmiler: Subverted this time for Sans and Papyrus, who are both capable of moving their mouths to express further emotions here.
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* PerpetualSmiler: Subverted this time for Sans and Papyrus, who are both capable of moving their mouths to express further emotions here.here.
* RageBreakingPoint: Sans is already demonstrated to have a pretty bad temper with things throughout the story. [[spoiler:However, once Frisk has slain Papyrus, he has gone absolutely livid, [[ItsPersonal even planning to forego his promise with Toriel just to kill them]].]]
* RageBreakingPoint: Sans is already demonstrated to have a pretty bad temper with things throughout the story. [[spoiler:However, once Frisk has slain Papyrus, he has gone absolutely livid, [[ItsPersonal even planning to forego his promise with Toriel just to kill them]].]]
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'''Timetale''' is an ongoing ''VideoGame/{{Undertale}}'' web comic by ''[=AllesiaTheHedge=]'', depicting a new chain of events within the Undertale universe.
Timetale takes place around the time Toriel just left Asgore, and with Gaster having just disappeared, it’s up to Sans to find a way to break the barrier. After an incident in the Lab that Sans was right in the middle of, flashbacks of their childhood memories are relived for unknown reasons. One thing is clear; before the incident, Frisk was on a Genocide run, but now Sans is back in time before this occurred. That is not the only thing that seems to have arisen from their past though, as it will begin to haunt him even when Frisk makes their appearance...
The story can be read [[https://www.deviantart.com/allesiathehedge/art/Timetale-Only-Time-Will-Tell-776481601 here]] and [[https://allesiathehedge.tumblr.com/post/134880739501/00-prologue-next-visit-us-on here]].
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!This story contains the following examples:
* PerpetualSmiler: Subverted this time for Sans and Papyrus, who are both capable of moving their mouths to express further emotions here.
Timetale takes place around the time Toriel just left Asgore, and with Gaster having just disappeared, it’s up to Sans to find a way to break the barrier. After an incident in the Lab that Sans was right in the middle of, flashbacks of their childhood memories are relived for unknown reasons. One thing is clear; before the incident, Frisk was on a Genocide run, but now Sans is back in time before this occurred. That is not the only thing that seems to have arisen from their past though, as it will begin to haunt him even when Frisk makes their appearance...
The story can be read [[https://www.deviantart.com/allesiathehedge/art/Timetale-Only-Time-Will-Tell-776481601 here]] and [[https://allesiathehedge.tumblr.com/post/134880739501/00-prologue-next-visit-us-on here]].
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!This story contains the following examples:
* PerpetualSmiler: Subverted this time for Sans and Papyrus, who are both capable of moving their mouths to express further emotions here.
