Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Spelling/grammar fix(es), Fixing indentation
Changed line(s) 21,22 (click to see context) from:
* BreakTheCutie: Mona might have a kind of gruff personality and some CreepyChild tendencies, but at the end of the day, she's a normal (if precocious) human ten year old who goes through some ''awful'' things. To an extent, they're played for humor, but it's made very clear that she doesn't come out without serious damage being done.
** the long term damage Mona suffered becomes very apparent in [[https://www.last-halloween.com/posts/135 this strip]] where three figures that are clearly an older version of Mona, her monster, and Ringley are watching Libby, Chips, and Malcom from the shadows and discussing whether or not to help them. Mona in particular acts very cold and pragmatic during the conversation without so much as a hint of the girl she used to be present.
** the long term damage Mona suffered becomes very apparent in [[https://www.last-halloween.com/posts/135 this strip]] where three figures that are clearly an older version of Mona, her monster, and Ringley are watching Libby, Chips, and Malcom from the shadows and discussing whether or not to help them. Mona in particular acts very cold and pragmatic during the conversation without so much as a hint of the girl she used to be present.
to:
* BreakTheCutie: Mona might have a kind of gruff personality and some CreepyChild tendencies, but at the end of the day, she's a normal (if precocious) human ten year old who goes through some ''awful'' things. To an extent, While they're played for humor, but it's made very clear that she doesn't come out without serious damage being done.
** thedone. The long term damage Mona suffered becomes very apparent in [[https://www.last-halloween.com/posts/135 this strip]] where three figures that are clearly an older version of Mona, her monster, and Ringley are watching Libby, Chips, and Malcom from the shadows and discussing whether or not to help them. Mona in particular acts very cold and pragmatic during the conversation without so much as a hint of the girl she used to be present.
** the
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** the long term damage Mona suffered becomes very apparent in [[https://www.last-halloween.com/posts/135 this strip]] where three figures that are clearly an older version of Mona, her monster, and Ringley are watching Libby, Chips, and Malcom from the shadows and discussing whether or not to help them. Mona in particular acts very cold and pragmatic during the conversation without so much as a hint of the girl she used to be present.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
The character sheet is, unfortunately, too plagued with ZCE's to keep. These examples were salvageable.
Changed line(s) 6 (click to see context) from:
* ActionSurvivor: Mona becomes one.
to:
* ActionSurvivor: Mona becomes one.survives the initial monster attack and later [[spoiler:has her arm amputated after falling out of Ringley's flying machine and facing down Baal.]]
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Despite his immortality, Robert is crushed to death by Baal, as immortals can kill other immortals.]]
Changed line(s) 68 (click to see context) from:
* [[LastOfHisKind Last of Her Kind]]: Shirley, the last ghoul in the world. All the others were [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome wiped out]] by a [[OneManArmy single man]].
to:
* [[LastOfHisKind Last of Her Kind]]: LastOfHisKind: Shirley, the last ghoul in the world. All the others were [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome wiped out]] by a [[OneManArmy single man]].
Added DiffLines:
* LivingToys: Robert is a living doll, cursed to life by Voodoo magic. [[spoiler:He's actually a monster who became immortal after killing his human.]]
* LivingWeapon: Mona's axe has a very real-looking eye and flies to her hand when called for. [[spoiler:Exhibits this trope even further when Robert's disembodied hand fuses with it, allowing it to kill immortal monsters.]]
* LivingWeapon: Mona's axe has a very real-looking eye and flies to her hand when called for. [[spoiler:Exhibits this trope even further when Robert's disembodied hand fuses with it, allowing it to kill immortal monsters.]]
Added DiffLines:
* PlotTriggeringDeath: Downplayed as it was nearly fatal, but the Phagocyte's incapacitation is what allows monsters to come out of hiding and attack humans.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
* DeadpanSnarker: Mona and Shirley are more snarky than deadpan, but Robert is far more deadpan thanks to his [[UncannyValley expressionless face.]]
to:
* DeadpanSnarker: Mona and Shirley are more snarky than deadpan, but Robert is far more deadpan thanks to his [[UncannyValley expressionless face.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Deleted line(s) 115 (click to see context) :
* RealityEnsues: Relatively speaking; it turns out that were-opossums are not exactly ferocious fighters.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ArtEvolution: It's subtle, but Howard eventually goes from drawing characters with four-fingered hands to five-fingered hands.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added a quote
Added DiffLines:
-->'''Fugue:''' Listen here, little girl. I'll have you know I am quite experienced in many unpleasant surgical procedures designed to calm patients down and I am not afraid to use them on you. So if you want to keep your prefrontal cortex attached to the rest of your brain, I suggest you stop this incessant howling at once.\\
'''Mona:''' (''screaming intensifies'')\\
'''Robert:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Good work, Fugue.]] You've discovered that she can, in fact, scream louder.
'''Mona:''' (''screaming intensifies'')\\
'''Robert:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Good work, Fugue.]] You've discovered that she can, in fact, scream louder.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
''[[http://last-halloween.com The Last Halloween]]'' is a comedy-horror webcomic by Creator/AbbyHoward of ''WebVideo/StripSearch'' fame. On Halloween, the world is being overrun by monsters, and it is, unfortunately, up to a reluctant young girl named Mona (and her undead "friends") to save the world. It's very funny and also very gory.
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
''[[http://last-halloween.com The Last Halloween]]'' is a comedy-horror webcomic by Abby Howard of ''WebVideo/StripSearch'' fame. On Halloween, the world is being overrun by monsters, and it is, unfortunately, up to a reluctant young girl named Mona (and her undead "friends") to save the world. It's very funny and also very gory.
to:
''[[http://last-halloween.com The Last Halloween]]'' is a comedy-horror webcomic by Abby Howard Creator/AbbyHoward of ''WebVideo/StripSearch'' fame. On Halloween, the world is being overrun by monsters, and it is, unfortunately, up to a reluctant young girl named Mona (and her undead "friends") to save the world. It's very funny and also very gory.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* BigNo: Mona when she realizes that she's pretty much stuck with [[TheLoad Ringley]] as a travelling companion.
* TheCameo: The main characters of ''WesternAnimation/CourageTheCowardlyDog'' appear in the background of one scene, with Eustace being messily killed by a monster as Muriel and Courage flee.
* GroundhogDayLoop: The Gods do a version of this to the doctor whom they recruit to care for [[spoiler: the Phagocyte as he very slowly recovers]]; unlike may examples, her memory does ''not'' carry over between loops.
* RealityEnsues: Relatively speaking; it turns out that were-opossums are not exactly ferocious fighters.
Changed line(s) 110 (click to see context) from:
* ShooOutTheClowns: Ringley is sent back to Dr. Fugue to get help. He immediately forgets this errand, but it does keep him out of harm's way while the rest of the group enters the shadow world.
to:
* ShooOutTheClowns: Ringley is sent back to Dr. Fugue to get help. He immediately forgets this errand, errand (exactly as the sender expected), but it does keep him out of harm's way while the rest of the group enters the shadow world.
