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* AccidentalMisnaming: Poor Mr. Boogle; the neighbor kids can't ever seem to get his name right.
* AdultsAreUseless: Oh, Uncle Shigo. [[UnwantedAssistance He tries, though.]]
* [[AnimalsHateHim Animals Hate Them]]: The current party is often attacked by various animals. This includes [[CreepyCrows ravens]], [[RhinoRampage a rhino]], [[CatsAreMean kitties]], [[MessyPig pigs]], [[WoodlandCreatures deer]], and an [[VideoGame/EarthBoundBeginnings attack snail]].
* AdultsAreUseless: Oh, Uncle Shigo. [[UnwantedAssistance He tries, though.]]
* [[AnimalsHateHim Animals Hate Them]]: The current party is often attacked by various animals. This includes [[CreepyCrows ravens]], [[RhinoRampage a rhino]], [[CatsAreMean kitties]], [[MessyPig pigs]], [[WoodlandCreatures deer]], and an [[VideoGame/EarthBoundBeginnings attack snail]].
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* BadassBoast:
--> '''Cazula''': And what do '''you''' know 'bout the Dark Dragon?\\
--> '''Cazula''': And what do '''you''' know 'bout the Dark Dragon?\\
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* BonusMaterial:
%%** Gekko and Meedee put bonus incentives up with each update.
** There are informational cards on some of the characters, locations, items, and enemies, as well as newspaper clippings on each town replicating the effect of the ''VideoGame/{{EarthBound|1994}}'' guide.
** Incentives can also be references to other series. They already did Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, WesternAnimation/{{Rugrats}}, etc.
%%** Gekko and Meedee put bonus incentives up with each update.
** There are informational cards on some of the characters, locations, items, and enemies, as well as newspaper clippings on each town replicating the effect of the ''VideoGame/{{EarthBound|1994}}'' guide.
** Incentives can also be references to other series. They already did Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, WesternAnimation/{{Rugrats}}, etc.
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* BoundAndGagged: Matty after being kidnapped by Cazula.
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* FirstNameBasis: It's just Lucas not Mr. Lucas.
** The same goes for [[spoiler: Fuel]].
** The same goes for [[spoiler: Fuel]].
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Matty's Basic Monopod.
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The comic acts somewhat as an indirect continuation on Gekko and Meedee's previous ''Mother'' comics, ''{{Webcomic/Harmony}}'' and sister story ''[[https://starmen.net/comics/series/harmony/index3.php The White Ship]]'', which served to tie together ''VideoGame/{{EarthBound}}'' and its sequel by acting as an {{Interquel}} story involving many familiar faces and new ones alike. While reading these is not required to enjoy it, elements of them ''do'' appear in Memoria's story, so it is still recommended to read them first.
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The comic acts somewhat as an indirect continuation on Gekko and Meedee's previous ''Mother'' comics, ''{{Webcomic/Harmony}}'' and sister story ''[[https://starmen.net/comics/series/harmony/index3.php The White Ship]]'', which served to tie together ''VideoGame/{{EarthBound}}'' ''VideoGame/{{EarthBound|1994}}'' and its sequel by acting as an {{Interquel}} story involving many familiar faces and new ones alike. While reading these is not required to enjoy it, elements of them ''do'' appear in Memoria's story, so it is still recommended to read them first.
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* [[AnimalsHateHim Animals Hate Them]]: The current party is often attacked by various animals. This includes [[CreepyCrows ravens]], [[RhinoRampage a rhino]], [[CatsAreMean kitties]], [[MessyPig pigs]], [[WoodlandCreatures deer]], and an [[VideoGame/{{MOTHER1}} attack snail]].
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* [[AnimalsHateHim Animals Hate Them]]: The current party is often attacked by various animals. This includes [[CreepyCrows ravens]], [[RhinoRampage a rhino]], [[CatsAreMean kitties]], [[MessyPig pigs]], [[WoodlandCreatures deer]], and an [[VideoGame/{{MOTHER1}} [[VideoGame/EarthBoundBeginnings attack snail]].
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%%* BonusMaterial: Gekko and Meedee put bonus incentives up with each update.
** There are also informational cards on some of the characters, locations, items, and enemies, as well as newspaper clippings on each town replicating the effect of the VideoGame/EarthBound guide.
** There are also informational cards on some of the characters, locations, items, and enemies, as well as newspaper clippings on each town replicating the effect of the VideoGame/EarthBound guide.
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%%** Gekko and Meedee put bonus incentives up with each update.
** There are
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* EverythingTryingToKillYou: The wildlife, as mentioned. Now it also includes a [[VideoGame/{{MOTHER1}} lamp]] and Matty's ''sleeping bag''.
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* EverythingTryingToKillYou: The wildlife, as mentioned. Now it also includes a [[VideoGame/{{MOTHER1}} [[VideoGame/EarthBoundBeginnings lamp]] and Matty's ''sleeping bag''.
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* PsychicPowers: As an [[VideoGame/{{Earthbound}} Earthbound/Mother]] series based comic, this is more or less a given, with both new and old PSI techniques showing up plenty.
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* PsychicPowers: As an [[VideoGame/{{Earthbound}} Earthbound/Mother]] [[VideoGame/EarthBound1994 EarthBound/Mother]] series based comic, this is more or less a given, with both new and old PSI techniques showing up plenty.
