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''[[http://mariobro64.deviantart.com/gallery/4233352 Mario Adventures]]'' is a Franchise/SuperMarioBros-oriented {{Fan Webcomic|s}} authored by Brandt "Mariobro64" White and hosted on Website/DeviantArt, characterized by its [[WordSaladHumor word salad dialogue]], [[OffModel abstract, cartoonish artwork]], and [[DadaComics noticeable lack of]] [[WidgetSeries mental stability.]]
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''[[http://mariobro64.deviantart.com/gallery/4233352 Mario Adventures]]'' is a Franchise/SuperMarioBros-oriented {{Fan Webcomic|s}} authored by Brandt "Mariobro64" "[=Mariobro64=]" White and hosted on Website/DeviantArt, characterized by its [[WordSaladHumor word salad dialogue]], [[OffModel abstract, cartoonish artwork]], and [[DadaComics noticeable lack of]] [[WidgetSeries of mental stability.]]
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** 2015: "The End Is Near". [[spoiler: A {{Noodle Incident}} by Mario results in the the appearance of [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt The]] [[VideoGame/SuperPaperMario Void]] and Luigi looks for a one-up mushroom to survive. He finds one, but... Also doubles as foreshadowing.]]
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** 2015: "The End Is Near". [[spoiler: A {{Noodle Incident}} by Mario results in the the appearance of [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt The]] [[VideoGame/SuperPaperMario The Void]] and Luigi looks for a one-up mushroom to survive. He finds one, but... Also doubles as foreshadowing.]]
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* BrokenAesop: "Today kids, we learned that you should forgive your friends and family, no matter what. [[AxCrazy And only chase them over hell's half acre with a knife over something really important, or in my case, stupid.]] [[InsaneTrollLogic All in all, the moral is: A penny shaved is a penny earned...]] Good night kids!"
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* BrokenAesop: "Today kids, we learned that you should forgive your friends and family, no matter what. And only [[AxCrazy And only chase them over hell's half acre with a knife knife]] over something really important, or in my case, stupid.]] stupid. [[InsaneTrollLogic All in all, the moral is: A penny shaved is a penny earned...]] Good night kids!"
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** 2015: "The End Is Near". [[spoiler: A {{Noodle Incident}} by Mario results in the the appearance of [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt The]] [[VideoGame/SuperPaperMario Void]] and Luigi looks for a one-up mushroom to survive. He finds one [[UncannyValley but...]] Also doubles as foreshadowing.]]
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** 2015: "The End Is Near". [[spoiler: A {{Noodle Incident}} by Mario results in the the appearance of [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt The]] [[VideoGame/SuperPaperMario Void]] and Luigi looks for a one-up mushroom to survive. He finds one [[UncannyValley but...]] one, but... Also doubles as foreshadowing.]]
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* DramaBombFinale: The final comic "Playtime is Over" has a larger emphasis on actual story and genuine ''stakes''. One that brings up on how much Mario is a DestructiveSavior ''but'' also a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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''[[http://mariobro64.deviantart.com/gallery/4233352 Mario Adventures]]'' is a Franchise/SuperMarioBros-oriented FanWebcomic authored by Brandt "Mariobro64" White and hosted on Website/DeviantArt, characterized by its [[WordSaladHumor word salad dialogue]], [[OffModel abstract, cartoonish artwork]], and [[DadaComics noticeable lack of]] [[WidgetSeries mental stability.]]
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''[[http://mariobro64.deviantart.com/gallery/4233352 Mario Adventures]]'' is a Franchise/SuperMarioBros-oriented FanWebcomic {{Fan Webcomic|s}} authored by Brandt "Mariobro64" White and hosted on Website/DeviantArt, characterized by its [[WordSaladHumor word salad dialogue]], [[OffModel abstract, cartoonish artwork]], and [[DadaComics noticeable lack of]] [[WidgetSeries mental stability.]]
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dewicking Frickin Laser Beams
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* FusionDance: [[spoiler: At the end of "Mario vs Machine", Bowser not only turns into [[DemBones Dry Bowser]] but is also fused with his Koopa Klown Kar and Metal Mario, turning his right arm into a "Koopa Klown Arm" [[FrickinLaserBeams complete with laser.]]]]
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* FusionDance: [[spoiler: At the end of "Mario vs Machine", Bowser not only turns into [[DemBones Dry Bowser]] but is also fused with his Koopa Klown Kar and Metal Mario, turning his right arm into a "Koopa Klown Arm" [[FrickinLaserBeams complete with laser.]]]]]]
