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A-rank superhero Maroon has to defeat and capture supervillain Umbra. Everything happens as expected... except that first impressions are never what they seem.
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* TheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Despite all the snark and the exchanges of blows, [[spoiler:Maroon and Umbra have both went gone out of their way to make sure ensure that the other is okay when the other one gets hurt]].
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* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy:
* MeaningfulLook: The comic has reveals very little internal dialogue, but the character’s expressions often shows the readers how the characters are feeling. For example, in her conversation with Phara, a Hero Aid Unit volunteer, Maroon’s facial expressions show [[spoiler:guilt]]. guilt]].
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** Maroon tries her best to maintain a pokerface, but
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* NotSoStotic: TheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Despite all the snark and the exchanges of blows, [[spoiler:Maroon and Umbra have both went out of their way to make sure that the other is okay when the other one gets hurt]].
* {{NotSoStotic}}: Maroonwas TheStotictries her best to be {{TheStotic}} but is pushed to her limits often enough that her mask figuratively crumbles throughout the comic.
* {{NotSoStotic}}: Maroon
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* {{ Deuteragonist}}: Both Umbra and Maroon get scenes from their own perspective.
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* Aw,Look!TheyReallyDoLoveEachOther:
Aw,Look!TheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: [[spoiler:Maroon and Umbra have both went out of their way to make sure that the other is okay]].
*{{ Deuteragonist}}: DeadpanSnarker: Maroon is quick to make snarky retorts against Umbra.
* DeterminedExpression: Maroon often has
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* DeterminedExpression: Maroon often has
* {{Deuteragonist}}: Both Umbra and Maroon get scenes from their own
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* WillTheyorWon'tThey?:MeaningfulLook: The comic has reveals very little internal dialogue, but the character’s expressions often shows the readers how the characters are feeling. For example, in her conversation with Phara, a Hero Aid Unit volunteer, Maroon’s facial expressions show [[spoiler: guilt]].
* TheStotic:
** Maroon tries her best to maintain a pokerface, but is pushed enough to show her true emotions.
** The Director wears a permanent smile on her face.
* NotSoStotic: Maroon was TheStotic
* WillTheyorWontThey?:
* TheStotic:
** Maroon tries her best to maintain a pokerface, but is pushed enough to show her true emotions.
** The Director wears a permanent smile on her face.
* NotSoStotic: Maroon was TheStotic
* WillTheyorWontThey?:
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''Kill Your Darlings'' is a superhero webcomic created by demure-serenity.
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''Kill Your Darlings'' is a superhero superhero-action-romance webcomic created by demure-serenity.
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* {{ Deuteragonist}}: Both Umbra and Maroon get scenes from their ownperspective.perspective.
* HiddenHeartofGold:
* HomemadeInventions: Umbra uses his own gadgets and weapons in his fights.
* WillTheyorWon'tThey?:
* VillainsOutShopping: In one of the later episodes, Umbra goes out in The City in civilian clothing, only to get chased by Maroon
* Aw,Look!TheyReallyDoLoveEachOther:
* {{ Deuteragonist}}: Both Umbra and Maroon get scenes from their own
* HiddenHeartofGold:
* HomemadeInventions: Umbra uses his own gadgets and weapons in his fights.
* WillTheyorWon'tThey?:
* VillainsOutShopping: In one of the later episodes, Umbra goes out in The City in civilian clothing, only to get chased by Maroon
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''Kill Your Darlings'' is a superhero webcomic created by demure-serenity.
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!! Kill Your Darlings provides examples of:
* ActionGirl: As an A-rank superhero, Maroon is capable of fighting, [[spoiler:though she hasn’t yet managed to defeat her rival, Umbra]].
* Deuteragonist: Both Umbra and Maroon get scenes from their own perspective.
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!! Kill Your Darlings provides examples of:
* ActionGirl: As an A-rank superhero, Maroon is capable of fighting, [[spoiler:though she hasn’t yet managed to defeat her rival, Umbra]].
* Deuteragonist: Both Umbra and Maroon get scenes from their own perspective.
