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Baleful Polymorph is no longer a trope
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* SeenItAll: Nurse Redheart. She says outright that she's seen stranger things than [[BalefulPolymorph someone being turned into a pony]].
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* SeenItAll: Nurse Redheart. She says outright that she's seen stranger things than [[BalefulPolymorph [[ForcedTransformation someone being turned into a pony]].
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* TownWithADarkSecret: Maybe but Lyra suddenly notices one day that there are more then one set of a specific pony in town. ''Including her and Bon Bon''. She tries to chase a "Berry Punch" down only for it to warp away before she can question it.
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* TownWithADarkSecret: Maybe but Lyra suddenly notices one day that there are more then one set of a specific pony in town. ''Including her and Bon Bon''. She tries to chase a "Berry Punch" down only for it to warp away before she can question it. [[spoiler:They turn out to be secret agents sent on short notice to protect and monitor Twilight Sparkle.]]
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The first page of the series can be found [[http://tritebristle.deviantart.com/art/Heartstrings-ch1-p1-Mare-meets-mare-312522819 here]] and the rest can be accessed using links provided by the author. The series also has a [[http://heartstringscomic.tumblr.com/tagged/Heartstrings/chrono tumblr]].
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The first page of the series can be found [[http://tritebristle.deviantart.com/art/Heartstrings-ch1-p1-Mare-meets-mare-312522819 here]] and the rest can be accessed using links provided by the author. The series also has a [[http://heartstringscomic.tumblr.com/tagged/Heartstrings/chrono tumblr]].
tumblr]] (and [[https://heartstringsthecomic.tumblr.com/tagged/Heartstrings/chrono another tumblr]] because the creator lost access to the first due to "the last forced password change").
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Heartstrings is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic {{Webcomic}} that is made and posted on Website/DeviantArt by Tritebristle. It is a RomanticComedy starring [[EnsembleDarkhorse Ensemble Darkponies]] Lyra Heartstrings and Bon Bon with many other popular background ponies filling out the cast.
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* Cardiovascular Love: Bon Bon has {{Heart Symbol}}s them whenever she stares at Lyra for too long. They're visible to the other characters.
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* [[ElsewhereFic Elsewhere Comic]]: Comic follows the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon canon]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony storyline]] so far, but from the perspective of background ponies with their own stories happening simultaneously.
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* [[ElsewhereFic Elsewhere Comic]]: ElsewhereFic Well, Comic: Comic follows the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon canon]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony storyline]] so far, but from the perspective of background ponies with their own stories happening simultaneously.
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* HeartSymbol: Bon Bon has them whenever she stares at Lyra for too long. They're visible to the other characters.
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* [[MadScientist Mad Alchemist]]: The "Mad" part is [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]], but Bon Bon has a degree in alchemy, and uses her expertise to make a variety of medicines. Strictly speaking, this isn't entirely legal, but she doesn't let that stop her.
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* [[MadScientist Mad Alchemist]]: MadScientist Well, Alchemist: The "Mad" part is [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]], but Bon Bon has a degree in alchemy, and uses her expertise to make a variety of medicines. Strictly speaking, this isn't entirely legal, but she doesn't let that stop her.
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** [[WordOfGod According to the author]] the position Lyra projects arms to “levitate” with is meant to mimic Asura from AsurasWrath.
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** [[WordOfGod According to the author]] the position Lyra projects arms to “levitate” with is meant to mimic Asura from AsurasWrath.''VideoGame/AsurasWrath''.
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* UnsoundEffect: "Panicking Noises," "More Panicking Noises," "And Screams Too."
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* UnsoundEffect: "Panicking Noises," "More Panicking Noises," "And Screams Too."Too," "Doorbell Sound," "A Bit Less Scribbles"
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* CuteClumsyGirl: Derpy as usual, but deconstructed. Her clumsiness is the result of a rare disease, and it makes it hard for her to hold a steady job and raise a daughter by herself.
* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Bon Bon very nearly got thrown into prison... for experimenting on animals. Lyra (implied to be[[spoiler: from Earth]]) doesn't see what the big deal is.
* MuggleBornOfMages: Bon Bon is an Earth Pony born from a family of unicorns. [[spoiler:Her goal is to become a unicorn herself.]]
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* ValuesDissonance: Bon Bon very nearly got thrown into prison... for experimenting on animals. Lyra (implied to be[[spoiler: from Earth]]) doesn't see what the big deal is.
