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The ''[[https://mspfa.com/?s=32611&p=1 Homestuck Extra-Terrestrial Alternate Universe]]'' (Labeled as HSETAU for short) is an AlternateUniverseFic of ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' and ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth''. It is created by Consuelo Higdon (a.k.a. Tropers/CalamityJane), the creator of ''Webcomic/DontNameIt''. It is set in an alternate universe where the trolls are humans and live on Earth, but the carapaces are extra-terrestrials.\\\
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The ''[[https://mspfa.com/?s=32611&p=1 Homestuck Extra-Terrestrial Alternate Universe]]'' (Labeled as HSETAU (HSETAU for short) is an AlternateUniverseFic of ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' and ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth''. It is created by Consuelo Higdon (a.k.a. Tropers/CalamityJane), the creator of ''Webcomic/DontNameIt''. It is set in an alternate universe where the trolls are humans and live on Earth, but the carapaces are extra-terrestrials.\\\
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** The White King is the White Queen's son instead of her husband.
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: ZigZagged. While some carapaces have a better understanding of the English language than others, they're not exactly fluent and their biology makes it so that they can't pronounce certain sounds. In the dreambubbles however, humans and carapaces can understand each other perfectly due to dream logic.
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: ZigZagged. While some carapaces have a better understanding of the English language than others, they're not exactly fluent and their biology makes it so that they can't pronounce certain sounds. In the dreambubbles however, humans and carapaces can understand each other perfectly due to dream logic.
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** The Midnight Crew are ik'ladi-- in other words, they're in a polyamorous relationship. The five heroes of ''Problem Sleuth'' are ik'ladi as well.
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** The Midnight Crew are ik'ladi-- in other words, they're in a polyamorous relationship. marriage. The five heroes of ''Problem Sleuth'' are ik'ladi as well. well, and PM, AR and WV desire to be in one together.
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* AdaptationSpeciesChange:
** The characters of ''Problem Sleuth'' are now carapaces in this fic. Team Sleuth and friends were heavily implied to just be normal humans in canon.
** The trolls have become humans in this.
** The characters of ''Problem Sleuth'' are now carapaces in this fic. Team Sleuth and friends were heavily implied to just be normal humans in canon.
** The trolls have become humans in this.
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* AdaptationSpeciesChange:
** TheAdaptationSpeciesChange: Not only have the trolls swapped around to become humans, the characters of ''Problem Sleuth'' are now carapaces in this fic. Team Sleuth and friends were heavily implied to just be normal humans in canon.
** The trolls have become humans in this.canon.
** The
** The trolls have become humans in this.
* AliensSpeakingEnglish: ZigZagged. While some carapaces have a better understanding of the English language than others, they're not exactly fluent and their biology makes it so that they can't pronounce certain sounds. In the dreambubbles however, humans and carapaces can understand each other perfectly due to dream logic.
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* AscendedExtra: In a sense. Mobius Trip and Hadron Kaleido were two extracanonical characters invented for a ''Homestuck'' music album about two agents of Prospit and Derse who were once enemies until receiving the truth behind the Ultimate Riddle. In ''HSETAU'' they are not only physically shown, they aided in the jailbreak of the Midnight Crew.
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* AscendedExtra: In a sense. Mobius Trip and Hadron Kaleido were two extracanonical characters invented for a ''Homestuck'' music album about two agents of Prospit and Derse who were once enemies until receiving the truth behind the Ultimate Riddle.album. In ''HSETAU'' they are not only physically shown, they aided in the jailbreak of the Midnight Crew.
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* DysfunctionJunction: Many of the Alternian Trailer Park residents have negative pasts they left behind or mental illnesses. Vriska even refers to their friend group as such.
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* DysfunctionJunction: Many of the Alternian Trailer Park residents have negative dark pasts they left behind or and/or mental illnesses. Vriska even refers to their friend group as such.
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The plot starts when Speid Spriveska (Spades Slick), an alien from the planet Derse, crash-lands onto planet Earth. From there, he is found by siblings Karkat Vantas-Maryam and Kanaya Vantas-Maryam, who take him in. Upon waking up, he finds out he has been taken to the fictional Alternia Trailer Park, the home of Karkat, Kanaya and most of the other trolls. From there, Speid tries to figure out a way to return to Derse and find the remaining members of the Midnight Crew. But first, he has to deal with the residents of the Alternian Trailer Park, and make his way through that human emotion called friendship.\\\
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The plot starts when Speid Spriveska (Spades (later known as Spades Slick), an alien from the planet Derse, crash-lands onto planet Earth. From there, he is found by siblings Karkat Vantas-Maryam and Kanaya Vantas-Maryam, who take him in. Upon waking up, he finds out he has been taken to the fictional Alternia Trailer Park, the home of Karkat, Kanaya and most of the other trolls. From there, Speid tries to figure out a way to return to Derse and find the remaining members of the Midnight Crew. But first, he has to deal with the residents of the Alternian Trailer Park, and make his way through that human emotion called friendship.\\\
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* BizarreAlienBiology: Carapaces apparently breathe through their knees.
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** When John hangs in the air trying to master his Breath powers, WV admonishes him for hanging there like [[WesternAnimation/WileECoyoteAndTheRoadrunner "Wily Kai-Yo-Tee".]]
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The creator's Website/{{Tumblr}}, which contains information on the AU, can be found [[https://consuelodoodles.tumblr.com/hsetau here]].
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The creator's Website/{{Tumblr}}, which contains information on the AU, can be found [[https://consuelodoodles.[[https://calamitycons.tumblr.com/hsetau here]].
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** In canon, while there was some ShipTease between John and Rose ([S] Seer: Descend comes to mind), it went nowhere and Rose got with Kanaya. In ''HSETAU'', John has a crush on Rose.
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** In canon, while While there was some ShipTease between John and Rose ([S] Seer: Descend comes to mind), in canon, it went nowhere and Rose got with Kanaya. In ''HSETAU'', John has a crush on Rose.
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** The trolls have become humans, and they are living on Earth.
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** The trolls have become humans, and they are living on Earth.humans in this.
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** The adult WK [[AdorablyPrecociousChild is a young child]] in this AU.
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** The adult WK [[AdorablyPrecociousChild is a young child]] in this AU.now an AdorablyPrecociousChild.
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* CoveredWithScars: Karkat has scars all over his arms and chest, no thanks to his parents' abuse.
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* CoveredWithScars: Karkat has scars all over his arms and chest, no thanks to his chest because of parents' abuse.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname:
** According to Calamity, "Vriska" is not Vriska's real name.
** Also according to Calamity, "Eridan" is a nickname (shortened from his middle name Eridanos) and his first name is Joseph.
** According to Calamity, "Vriska" is not Vriska's real name.
** Also according to Calamity, "Eridan" is a nickname (shortened from his middle name Eridanos) and his first name is Joseph.
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** Slick opens [[https://mspfa.com/?s=32611&p=211 one of Teresa's books]] and notices it's written in Braille. He doesn't understand what it says, but the letters are the first few lines of the entire ''WesternAnimation/BeeMovie'' script.
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** Slick opens [[https://mspfa.com/?s=32611&p=211 com/?s=32611&p=210 one of Teresa's books]] and notices it's written in Braille. He doesn't understand what it says, but the letters are the first few lines of the entire ''WesternAnimation/BeeMovie'' script.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: The Midnight Crew are {{Nominal Hero}}es at best in canon. ''HSETAU'' frames them in a much more sympathetic and friendly light due to the comic's nature as an AlternateUniverseFic.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: The Midnight Crew are murderous {{Nominal Hero}}es at best in canon. ''HSETAU'' frames them in a much more sympathetic and friendly light due to the comic's nature as an AlternateUniverseFic.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: The Midnight Crew are {{Nominal Hero}}es at best in canon. ''HSETAU'' frames them in a much more sympathetic and friendly light due to the comic's nature as an AlternateUniverseFic.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: The Midnight crew are {{Nominal Hero}}es at best in canon. ''HSETAU'' frames them in a much more sympathetic and friendly light due to the comic's nature as an AlternateUniverseFic.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: The Midnight crew Crew are {{Nominal Hero}}es at best in canon. ''HSETAU'' frames them in a much more sympathetic and friendly light due to the comic's nature as an AlternateUniverseFic.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: The Midnight crew are {{Nominal Hero}}es at best in canon. ''HSETAU'' frames them in a much more sympathetic and friendly light due to the comic's nature as an AlternateUniverseFic.
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* MarsNeedsWomen: When encountering him in a Dream Bubble, Eridan suspects that PS is out to kidnap human women for reproduction purposes. He is incorrect in this assumption.
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* DysfunctionJunction: Many of the Alternian Trailer Park residents have negative pasts they left behind or mental illnesses. Vriska even refers to their friend group as such.
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* AlbinosAreFreaks: Karkat has albinism and was treated badly by his parents because of it.
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* IntentionalEngrishForFunny: Some of WV's shirts have intentionally garbled English grammar on them. Like one that says [[https://mspfa.com/?s=32611&p=175 "Almost Philosophy of all the Star"]] and [[https://mspfa.com/?s=32611&p=178 "Who the FUCK is Jegus"]].
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* IntentionalEngrishForFunny: Some of WV's shirts have intentionally garbled English grammar on them. Like one that says [[https://mspfa.com/?s=32611&p=175 "Almost Philosophy of all the Star"]] and [[https://mspfa.com/?s=32611&p=178 "Who the FUCK is Jegus"]]. John collects the shirts whenever his family goes to Seattle Chinatown because he finds them hilarious.
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* AscendedExtra: In a sense. Mobius Trip and Hadron Kaleido were two characters invented for a ''Homestuck'' music album about two agents of Prospit and Derse who were once enemies until receiving the truth behind the Ultimate Riddle. They didn't actually exist in ''Homestuck'' proper. In ''HSETAU'' they are not only physically shown, they aided in the jailbreak of the Midnight Crew.
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* AscendedExtra: In a sense. Mobius Trip and Hadron Kaleido were two extracanonical characters invented for a ''Homestuck'' music album about two agents of Prospit and Derse who were once enemies until receiving the truth behind the Ultimate Riddle. They didn't actually exist in ''Homestuck'' proper.Riddle. In ''HSETAU'' they are not only physically shown, they aided in the jailbreak of the Midnight Crew.
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* BadPeopleAbuseAnimals: Licorice the dog is scared of Vriska because she (accidentally) ran the former over while recklessly riding on her bike.
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* AscendedExtra: In a sense. Mobius Trip and Hadron Kaleido were two characters invented for a ''Homestuck'' music album about two agents of Prospit and Derse who were once enemies until receiving the truth behind the Ultimate Riddle. They didn't actually exist in ''Homestuck'' proper. In ''HSETAU'' they are not only physically shown, they aided in the jailbreak of the Midnight Crew.
* BadPeopleAbuseAnimals: Licorice the dog is scared of Vriska because she (accidentally) ran the former over while recklessly ridingon her bike.
* BadPeopleAbuseAnimals: Licorice the dog is scared of Vriska because she (accidentally) ran the former over while recklessly riding
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* AffectionateNickname: Aria calls DD "deedee".
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* MookFaceTurn: AR was an Authority Regulator at the prison where the rebels were kept. He rebelled against the government and helped to stage the jailbreak that broke the Midnight Crew out of prison. According to DD, his actions caused his crop of Authority Regulator clones to be [[DeadlyEuphemism "decommissioned"]] due to cloning defects.
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* BadPeopleAbuseAnimals: Licorice the dog is scared of Vriska because she (accidentally) ran the former over while recklessly riding on her bike.
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** Slick was jailed, beaten and forced into Derse's super soldier program.
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** Slick was jailed, beaten and forced into Derse's super soldier program. He does not think fondly of those times whatsoever.
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* DitzyGenius: Roxy, mostly due to AlcoholInducedIdiocy. She is a self-made billionaire who does advanced genetics research, but she doesn't want to buy an x-ray machine to examine WQ and WK because they're pricey, so she purchases an infrared sauna instead. Rose [[StatingTheSimpleSolution suggests that she should borrow the horse x-ray machine at the veterinarian clinic]], and Roxy realizes not only is that a more reasonable solution, she also realizes that assembling the sauna is probably a fast track to getting cancer.
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* DitzyGenius: Roxy, mostly due to AlcoholInducedIdiocy. She is a self-made billionaire who does advanced genetics research, but she doesn't want to buy an x-ray machine to examine WQ and WK because they're pricey, so she purchases an infrared sauna instead. Rose [[StatingTheSimpleSolution suggests that she should borrow the horse x-ray machine at the veterinarian clinic]], and Roxy realizes not only is that a more reasonable solution, she also realizes that assembling the sauna is probably would put them on a fast track to getting giving WK and WQ cancer.
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** Slick was jailed and forced to become a super soldier.
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** Slick was jailed jailed, beaten and forced to become a into Derse's super soldier.soldier program.
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* AccidentalMisnaming:
** Karkat calls Preabori "Peabody".
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** WV calls John "Yob", but this is mostly because Carapacians cannot produce certain sounds and thus WV sounds nasal as a result.
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** John has a crush on Rose.
** Nepeta and Equius are married.
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** In canon, while there was some ShipTease between John and Rose ([S] Seer: Descend comes to mind), it went nowhere and Rose got with Kanaya. In ''HSETAU'', John has a crush on Rose.
** PlatonicLifePartners Nepeta and Equius aremarried.married in ''HSETAU''.
** PlatonicLifePartners Nepeta and Equius are
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** Slick was jailed, put into prison and forced to become a super soldier.
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** Slick was jailed, put into prison jailed and forced to become a super soldier.