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* {{Ambiguously Gay}}: Given their names and the fact that it’s a Garden of Eden retelling, Eve and Ada will probably get together eventually. For now they just blush at each other.
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* {{Ambiguously Gay}}: Given their names and {{Art Evolution}}: Mostly in the fact that it’s a Garden form of Eden retelling, Eve and Ada will probably get together eventually. For now they just blush at each other.
shading styles.
* {{By The Lights Of Their Eyes}}: Logical, since Eve’s eyes are screens.
* {{By The Lights Of Their Eyes}}: Logical, since Eve’s eyes are screens.
* {{Cypher Language}}: When a Speaker character talks to something inanimate, the object’s responses are generally in a cypher.
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* {{Fembot}}: Eve. Why she happens to be female has not been explained.
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* {{Eye on a Stalk}}: Some of the background creatures have this.
* {{Faceless Eye}}: The “pigeons.”
* {{Fembot}}: Eve. Why she happens to be female has not been explained.\n
* {{Faceless Eye}}: The “pigeons.”
* {{Fembot}}: Eve.
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* {{Made of Magic}}: Eve insists she isn’t magic, but it sure seems like she is.
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* {{Glowing Mechanical Eyes}}: Eve. [[spoiler: Later, Ada.]]
* {{Made of Magic}}: Eve insists she isn’t magic, butit sure seems like she is.
she’s definitely not normal.
* {{Made of Magic}}: Eve insists she isn’t magic, but
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* {{Puppy Dog Eyes}}: Eve attempts this in the first chapter.
* {{Significant Green Eyed Redhead}}: Dana.
* {{Significant Green Eyed Redhead}}: Dana.
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*{{Call A Smeerp A Rabbit}}: Ada’s names for the different creatures the storm has created include Gila monster, dog, and pigeon.
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Garden of Iron is a {{Science Fantasy}} webcomic by Dragon Harris. It can be read [[https://gardenofironcomic.tumblr.com/ here.]]
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Garden of Iron is a {{Science Fantasy}} webcomic {{webcomic}} by Dragon Harris. It can be read [[https://gardenofironcomic.tumblr.com/ here.]]
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Queer robotic Garden of Eden. A lonely robot searches through a magical storm for the people who created her, running across monsters and sometimes making friends along the way.
Garden of Iron is a {{Science Fantasy}} webcomic by Dragon Harris. It can be read [[https://gardenofironcomic.tumblr.com/ here.]]
!Garden of Iron provides examples of:
*{{Ambiguously Gay}}: Given their names and the fact that it’s a Garden of Eden retelling, Eve and Ada will probably get together eventually. For now they just blush at each other.
*{{Deadpan Snarker}}: Ada.
->Ada: [flatly] Oh good. Then we’ll both fall.
*{{Fembot}}: Eve. Why she happens to be female has not been explained.
*{{Garden of Eden}}: A robot named Eve made by Eden Robotics who’s recently befriended an Ada.
*{{Made of Magic}}: Eve insists she isn’t magic, but it sure seems like she is.
*{{Perpetual Storm}}: The “reality storm” that started the story off.
*{{Twice Told Tale}}: A very different take on the original Garden of Eden story.
[[caption-width-right:350:The floating things are probably fine.]]
Queer robotic Garden of Eden. A lonely robot searches through a magical storm for the people who created her, running across monsters and sometimes making friends along the way.
Garden of Iron is a {{Science Fantasy}} webcomic by Dragon Harris. It can be read [[https://gardenofironcomic.tumblr.com/ here.]]
!Garden of Iron provides examples of:
*{{Ambiguously Gay}}: Given their names and the fact that it’s a Garden of Eden retelling, Eve and Ada will probably get together eventually. For now they just blush at each other.
*{{Deadpan Snarker}}: Ada.
->Ada: [flatly] Oh good. Then we’ll both fall.
*{{Fembot}}: Eve. Why she happens to be female has not been explained.
*{{Garden of Eden}}: A robot named Eve made by Eden Robotics who’s recently befriended an Ada.
*{{Made of Magic}}: Eve insists she isn’t magic, but it sure seems like she is.
*{{Perpetual Storm}}: The “reality storm” that started the story off.
*{{Twice Told Tale}}: A very different take on the original Garden of Eden story.
