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** Thistle doesn not like Draths. [[spoiler: And apparently they aren't too fond of her either...]]
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** Thistle doesn not does ''not'' like Draths. [[spoiler: And apparently they aren't too fond of her either...]]
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** Not much has been said about Bren't parents, but he has stated that they're dead, and is very touch about it. And if the bonus comics are canon, his relationship with the rest of his family is strained, to say the least.
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** Not much has been said about Bren't Brent's parents, but he has stated that they're dead, and is very touch about it. And if the bonus comics are canon, his relationship with the rest of his family is strained, to say the least.
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** Thistle doesn not like Draths. [[spoiler: And apparently they aren't too fond of her either...]]
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** Not much has been said about Bren't parents, but he has stated that they're dead, and is very touch about it. And if the bonus comics are canon, his relationship with the rest of his family is strained, to say the least.
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* Scissors cuts rock: Cave elves are resistant to fire. [[NoKillLikeOverkill Doesn't stop Thistle form frying one's face off.]]
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Orrig's speech pattern.
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* UnevenHybrid: Brent is one-quarter orc.
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* UnevenHybrid: Brent is one-quarter orc.orc.
* WalkingShirtlessScene: Orrig has a distinct aversion to upper body clothing. One Reader Question strip even lampshades it, showing that he browbeats anyone who points this out to him as an impropriety into leaving him be.
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* WalkingShirtlessScene: Orrig has a distinct aversion to upper body clothing. One Reader Question strip even lampshades it, showing that he browbeats anyone who points this out to him as an impropriety into leaving him be.
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Whatever Thistle's face looks like, it's enough to send a night elf running away in panic.
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* LineOfSightName: After hearing his new mage introduce herself hesitantly as Thistle, Orrig casts a glance at the thistle-plant at his feet at his feet. Confirmed when "Thistle" writes down her new name under a long list of crossed out flower names and noting that she's running out of flowers.
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* AllThereInTheManual: Without visiting the cast page (which has links to their character sheets), you'd probably never realize that the comic is actually based on a modified version of [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons 3rd edition D&D]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: That's poor Thistle.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: That's poor Thistle. Even her race on her character sheet is listed as "???".
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**Hard to tell if Lyra is this or simply a {{Jerkass}}.
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* ThemeNaming: When she needs to change names, Thistle always chooses some form of flower.
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* ThemeNaming: When she needs to change names, Thistle always chooses some form of flower.flower.
* UnevenHybrid: Brent is one-quarter orc.
* UnevenHybrid: Brent is one-quarter orc.
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A fantasy webcomic created by Webcomic/OneQuestion author/artist Meg Syverud, ''Daughter of the Lillies'' follows the adventures of a hooded combat mage named Thistle, on the run from her past as she's hired on by an orc mercenary named Orrig to work with him and his rather fractious employees.
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A fantasy webcomic created by Webcomic/OneQuestion author/artist Meg Syverud, ''Daughter of the Lillies'' follows the adventures of a hooded combat mage named Thistle, on the run from her past as she's hired on by an orc Orc mercenary named Orrig to work with him and his rather fractious employees.
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* FantasticRacism: ''Nobody'' likes night elves.
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* FantasticRacism: ''Nobody'' likes night elves. Considering their "[[ImAHumanitarian diets]]", it's not hard to see why.
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A fantasy webcomic created by Webcomic/OneQuestion author/artist Meg Sveryud, ''Daughter of the Lillies'' follows the adventures of a hooded combat mage named Thistle, on the run from her past as she's hired on by an orc mercenary named Orrig to work with him and his rather fractious employees.
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A fantasy webcomic created by Webcomic/OneQuestion author/artist Meg Sveryud, Syverud, ''Daughter of the Lillies'' follows the adventures of a hooded combat mage named Thistle, on the run from her past as she's hired on by an orc mercenary named Orrig to work with him and his rather fractious employees.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Thistle exhibits this in some of Sveryud's gag comics.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Thistle exhibits this in some of Sveryud's Syverud's gag comics.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: If you began reading without looking at Sveryud's pre-production sketches, you might be surprised to find out that [[spoiler:Thistle is a night elf]].
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* BerserkButton: Don't call Brent a "co'dafekka". Even if he is one.
* [[BlackEyesOfEvil Black Eyes of Anger]]: What happens to Brent when he gets ''really'' pissed.
* [[BlackEyesOfEvil Black Eyes of Anger]]: What happens to Brent when he gets ''really'' pissed.
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* LittleBitBeastly: Brent has some [[http://megsyv.deviantart.com/art/3-7-500425391 pretty impressive fangs]] for someone who appears mostly human.
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* LittleBitBeastly: Brent has some [[http://megsyv.deviantart.com/art/3-7-500425391 pretty impressive fangs]] for someone who appears mostly human.
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* MundaneFantastic: Orrig and his crew are a typical fantasy RPG party. Except that Orrig consistently refers to Thistle, Lyra and Brent as his "employees", and the mercenary's guild has a printed news circular.
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* MundaneFantastic: Orrig and his crew are a typical fantasy RPG party. Except that Orrig consistently refers to Thistle, Lyra and Brent as his "employees", Thistle calls Brent and Lyra her "co-workers" and the mercenary's guild has a printed news circular.
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* FantasticRacism: ''Nobody'' likes dark elves.
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* FantasticRacism: ''Nobody'' likes dark elves.night elves.
* ImAHumanitarian: Night elves are cannibalistic and can see in pitch darkness. Sweet dreams...
* ImAHumanitarian: Night elves are cannibalistic and can see in pitch darkness. Sweet dreams...
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: If you began reading without looking at Sveryud's pre-production sketches, you might be surprised to find out that [[spoiler:Thistle is a dark elf]].
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: If you began reading without looking at Sveryud's pre-production sketches, you might be surprised to find out that [[spoiler:Thistle is a dark night elf]].
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* InTheHood: Thistle uses a hood and face mask to conceal her features, leaving her eyes in deep shadow.
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-->'''Orrig:''' Hrr... Don't like vorking vit idiots. Need smart, dependable people who keep heads in fights. Can trust to vatch back. That some I like vorking vit. (pats Thistle's shoulder) And I like vorking vit you.
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-->'''Orrig:''' Hrr... Don't like vorking vit idiots. Need smart, dependable people who keep heads in fights. Can trust to vatch back. That some someone I like vorking vit. (pats Thistle's shoulder) And I like vorking vit you.
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* MundaneFantastic: Orrig and his crew are a typical fantasy RPG party. Except that Orrig consistently refers to Thirstle, Lyra and Brent as his "employees", and the mercenary's guild has a printed news circular.
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* MundaneFantastic: Orrig and his crew are a typical fantasy RPG party. Except that Orrig consistently refers to Thirstle, Thistle, Lyra and Brent as his "employees", and the mercenary's guild has a printed news circular.
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* MundaneFantastic: Orrig and his crew are a typical fantasy RPG party. Except that Orrig consistently refers to Thirstle, Lyra and Brent as his "employees", and the mercenary's guild has a printed news circular.
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-->'''THistle:''' Orrig, is true that you don't like working with mages?
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-->'''Orrig:''' Your job follow orders. My job take care of you.
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--> (after Orrig makes sure Thistle gets a separate room at the inn so she won't have to show her face)
-->'''Thistle:''' You didn't have to do that.
-->'''Orrig:''' You my employee. Your job follow orders. My job take care of you.
-->'''THistle:''' Orrig, is true that you don't like working with mages?
-->'''Orrig:''' Who tell you that? Brent?
-->'''Thistle:''' Um...
-->'''Orrig:''' Hrr... Don't like vorking vit idiots. Need smart, dependable people who keep heads in fights. Can trust to vatch back. That some I like vorking vit. (pats Thistle's shoulder) And I like vorking vit you.
-->'''Thistle:''' You didn't have to do that.
-->'''Orrig:''' You my employee. Your job follow orders. My job take care of you.
-->'''THistle:''' Orrig, is true that you don't like working with mages?
-->'''Orrig:''' Who tell you that? Brent?
-->'''Thistle:''' Um...
-->'''Orrig:''' Hrr... Don't like vorking vit idiots. Need smart, dependable people who keep heads in fights. Can trust to vatch back. That some I like vorking vit. (pats Thistle's shoulder) And I like vorking vit you.
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* ThemeNaming: When she needs to change name, Thistle always chooses some form of flower.
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* ThemeNaming: When she needs to change name, names, Thistle always chooses some form of flower.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: If you began reading without looking at Sveryud's pre-production sketches, you might be surprised to find out that [[spoiler:Thistle is a dark elf]].
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: How Brent and Lyra normallyoperate.operate.
* ThemeNaming: When she needs to change name, Thistle always chooses some form of flower.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: How Brent and Lyra normally
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--> '''Brent:''' We ''like'' you [Thistle]. Why can't you like yourself?
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A fantasy webcomic created by Webcomic/OneQuestion author/artist Meg Sveryud, ''Daughter of the Lillies'' follows the adventures of a hooded combat mage named Thistle, on the run from her past as she's hired on by an orc mercenary named Orrig to work with him and his rather fractious employees.
[[http://megsyv.deviantart.com/art/1-01-430569195 First page begins here.]]
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!!This comic provides examples of:
* AfterTheEnd: There are strong indications that the world is actually Earth, after some form of apocalypse wiped out modern technology, with magic taking its place.
* BenevolentBoss: Orrig is probably the ''nicest'' ax wielding orc you're ever going to see.
-->'''Orrig:''' Your job follow orders. My job take care of you.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: That's poor Thistle.
* FantasticRacism: ''Nobody'' likes dark elves.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Brent, who manages to shove his foot in his mouth even when he's giving a sincere compliment.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: How Brent and Lyra normally operate.
[[http://megsyv.deviantart.com/art/1-01-430569195 First page begins here.]]
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!!This comic provides examples of:
* AfterTheEnd: There are strong indications that the world is actually Earth, after some form of apocalypse wiped out modern technology, with magic taking its place.
* BenevolentBoss: Orrig is probably the ''nicest'' ax wielding orc you're ever going to see.
-->'''Orrig:''' Your job follow orders. My job take care of you.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: That's poor Thistle.
* FantasticRacism: ''Nobody'' likes dark elves.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Brent, who manages to shove his foot in his mouth even when he's giving a sincere compliment.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: How Brent and Lyra normally operate.
