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* TheBait: Jared's plan for getting his family
* BigDamnHeroes: The rescue mission from the apartments
* BigDamnHeroes: The rescue mission from the apartments
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%% * TheBait: Jared's plan for getting his family
family.
%% * BigDamnHeroes: The rescue mission from theapartmentsapartments.
%% * BigDamnHeroes: The rescue mission from the
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* BulletCatch: One caper does this in the prologue.
* ByTheLightsOfTheirEyes: [[http://www.blueyondercomic.net/comics/1510611/blue-yonder-chapter-2-page-7/ Jared's eyes are still bright when his face is shadowed.]]
* ByTheLightsOfTheirEyes: [[http://www.blueyondercomic.net/comics/1510611/blue-yonder-chapter-2-page-7/ Jared's eyes are still bright when his face is shadowed.]]
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%% * BulletCatch: One caper does this in the prologue.
* ByTheLightsOfTheirEyes:[[http://www.blueyondercomic.net/comics/1510611/blue-yonder-chapter-2-page-7/ Jared's eyes are still bright when his face is shadowed.]]
* ByTheLightsOfTheirEyes:
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* {{Chiaroscuro}}: Many of the apartment scenes.
* CloseKnitCommunity: Claremont Apartments
* CloseKnitCommunity: Claremont Apartments
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%% * {{Chiaroscuro}}: Many of the apartment scenes.
%% * CloseKnitCommunity: Claremont Apartments
%% * CloseKnitCommunity: Claremont Apartments
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* DangerousSixteenthBirthday: Jared is 16 when the CapeBusters come.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: a former cop, thrown off the force
* DarkAndTroubledPast: a former cop, thrown off the force
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%% * DangerousSixteenthBirthday: Jared is 16 when the CapeBusters come.
%% * DarkAndTroubledPast: a former cop, thrown off the force
%% * DarkAndTroubledPast: a former cop, thrown off the force
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* DisturbedDoves: In a flashback to Jared's babyhood.
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%% * DisturbedDoves: In a flashback to Jared's babyhood.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Yuri -- after losing his wife, he works himself into the ground all day and drinks himself into a stupor at night.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Yuri -- after losing his wife, he wife. He works himself into the ground all day and drinks himself into a stupor at night.
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* FlashbackCut: Many, mostly Jared having actual Flashbacks
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%% * FlashbackCut: Many, mostly Jared having actual Flashbacks
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* GoodIsOldFashioned: "outmoded concepts of morality."
* GoodParents: His parents, made clear in {{Flashback}}s.
* GoofyPrintUnderwear: Worn by a caper in the prologue.
* GoodParents: His parents, made clear in {{Flashback}}s.
* GoofyPrintUnderwear: Worn by a caper in the prologue.
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%% * GoodIsOldFashioned: "outmoded concepts of morality."
%% * GoodParents: His parents, made clear in {{Flashback}}s.
%% * GoofyPrintUnderwear: Worn by a caper in the prologue.
%% * GoodParents: His parents, made clear in {{Flashback}}s.
%% * GoofyPrintUnderwear: Worn by a caper in the prologue.
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* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Boyfriend]]: Lena faces Kevin down over his claim.
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%% * [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Boyfriend]]: HeIsNotMyBoyfriend: Lena faces Kevin down over his claim.
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* IWorkAlone: A villain described the Davenports as (collectively) like this.
* JurisdictionFriction: Two sets of capes are annoyed that the other came to help Jared.
* JurisdictionFriction: Two sets of capes are annoyed that the other came to help Jared.
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%% * IWorkAlone: A villain described the Davenports as (collectively) like this.
%% * JurisdictionFriction: Two sets of capes are annoyed that the other came to help Jared.
%% * JurisdictionFriction: Two sets of capes are annoyed that the other came to help Jared.
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* MagneticHero: A villain describes Jared as this.
* TheMedic: Someone in the apartments looks after the seriously injured Jared
* TheMedic: Someone in the apartments looks after the seriously injured Jared
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%% * MagneticHero: A villain describes Jared as this.
%% * TheMedic: Someone in the apartments looks after the seriously injuredJaredJared.
%% * TheMedic: Someone in the apartments looks after the seriously injured
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* MotherGoose: One villain derides Jared as "Little Boy Blue"
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%% * MotherGoose: One villain derides Jared as "Little Boy Blue"Blue".
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* MuggingTheMonster: Implied in the {{Backstory}}: thugs flee a little old lady who lives there.
* OddShapedPanel: Superimposed mostly
* OddShapedPanel: Superimposed mostly
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%% * MuggingTheMonster: Implied in the {{Backstory}}: thugs flee a little old lady who lives there.
%% * OddShapedPanel: Superimposed mostly
%% * OddShapedPanel: Superimposed mostly
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* ParentalAbandonment: Both his parents have vanished in the backstory.
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%% * ParentalAbandonment: Both his parents have vanished in the backstory.
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* SingleTear: Jared over his family
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* SingleTear: Jared over his familyfamily.
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* TheSpartanWay: Black Dog's training.
* SpeechBubbles: One [[CapeBusters Cape Buster]] talks in odd colors
* SpeechBubbles: One [[CapeBusters Cape Buster]] talks in odd colors
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%% * TheSpartanWay: Black Dog's training.
* SpeechBubbles: One [[CapeBusters Cape Buster]] talks in oddcolorscolors.
* SpeechBubbles: One [[CapeBusters Cape Buster]] talks in odd
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* SuperHumanTrafficking: The CapeBusters' purpose
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%% * SuperHumanTrafficking: The CapeBusters' purposepurpose.
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* TakingTheBullet: Accidental effect of trying to knock him out of the way.
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%% * TakingTheBullet: Accidental effect of trying to knock him out of the way.
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* WretchedHive: Jared is convinced it must be this.
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%% * WretchedHive: Jared is convinced it must be this.
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* YouAreNotAlone: Actually delivered to the villain about Jared
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%% * YouAreNotAlone: Actually delivered to the villain about Jared
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''[[https://www.blueyondercomic.net/ Blue Yonder]]'' is a {{Superhero}} WebComic about Jared Davenport, Blue Yonder. In the prologue, he and his sister, Maiden Flight, are fleeing their enemies; in {{flashback}}s, it is revealed that their parents, the rest of their superhero team, were taken out by the CapeBusters following them.
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''[[http://blueyonder.smackjeeves.com/ Blue Yonder]]'' is a {{Superhero}} WebComic about Jared Davenport, Blue Yonder. In the prologue, he and his sister, Maiden Flight, are fleeing their enemies; in {{flashback}}s, it is revealed that their parents, the rest of their superhero team, were taken out by the CapeBusters following them.
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Starts [[http://blueyonder.smackjeeves.com/comics/1025805/blue-yonder-prologue-page-1/ here]].
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* BadDreams: Jared has them. Apparently Yuri, too.
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Then the sister sacrifices herself to allow Jared's escape, and he ends up at Claremont Apartments, a place on the WrongSideOfTheTracks and filled with washed-up "capes". Yuri, their leader, tries to talk some sense into him, but Jared, suffering from unusually realistic post-traumatic stress, is bent on finding his family.
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Then the his sister sacrifices herself to allow Jared's escape, and he ends up at Claremont Apartments, a place on the WrongSideOfTheTracks and filled with washed-up "capes". Yuri, their leader, tries to talk some sense into him, but Jared, suffering from unusually realistic post-traumatic stress, is bent on finding his family.
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