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* CountryMouse: Juro and Masako at court.



* FantasyGunControl: Averted, as the Satake clan have discovered Chinese gunpowder, but can't figure out how to use it without blowing themselves up. They decide to offer it to the Emperor in exchange for support against their rivals, the Kiyohara.
* FollowThatCar: A variant in Chapter Eight:
-->Follow that palanquin!



* HolierThanThou: The ikiryp accuses Genza of being a "hypocritical priest".



* KillItWithFire: Masako attempts to kill an ikiryo with a lamp stand. It doesn't work.



* OverprotectiveDad: Genza rebuffs Juro's attempts to court Masako, even though Juro saved their lives, and Genza admits that he's a good man.

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* NaginatasAreFeminine: Juro teaches Masako to use a naginata because "if they can't get close to you, they can't hit you." She puts the training to good use against the ikiryo.
* NoodleIncident: Whatever Genza did to get exiled, it's never mentioned.
* OverprotectiveDad: Genza rebuffs Juro's attempts to court Masako, Masako because Genza wants his daughter to have a comfortable life in the city, even though Juro saved their lives, and Genza admits that he's a good man.To be fair, Juro's province is at war.



* RedemptionQuest: Genza was a rich courtier in his youth before he was exiled to the province. He is offered the chance to redeem himself by curing the sick Emperor.

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* RedemptionQuest: Genza was a rich courtier in his youth before he was exiled to the province.exiled. He is offered the chance to redeem himself by curing the sick Emperor.



* RichBitch: The Heian courtiers, who entertain themselves by baiting provincial visitors and comment that a house fire doesn't matter because the property was probably owned by a peasant.



* ShirtlessScene: Juro's topless sword practice.
* Shoutout: One of the court ladies remarks [[Bioshock "Is there someone new?" ]] and various characters from Studio Ghibli films appear in the backgrouds of city scenes,



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Nobutaka gives Juro one when he tries to get an appointment with the Emperor :
-->'''Nobutaka:'''Let me guess, the Hitachi clan's losing the latest turf war?[...]Ladies and gentleman- another rustic begging for an audience with the Emperor! You haven't figured it out yet? If the warrior clans unite you're a threat1 The emperor wants you to fight each other! It's what you do! It weeds out the feeble! We'll employ whoever wins! Give up and go home!

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Nobutaka gives Juro one when he tries to get an appointment with the Emperor :
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:k-->'''Nobutaka:'''Let me guess, the Hitachi clan's losing the latest turf war?[...]Ladies and gentleman- another rustic begging for an audience with the Emperor! You haven't figured it out yet? If the warrior clans unite you're a threat1 threat! The emperor wants you to fight each other! It's what you do! It weeds out the feeble! We'll employ whoever wins! Give up and go home!

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* AnAstralProjectionNotAGhost: The evil spirit possessing the Emperor is an ikiryo, the spirit of a living person.



* CatchPhrase:
** "Shut up, Eiji"
** "Tenth son!"



* EverythingsBetterWithSamurai: Proto-samurai Satake no Juro features prominently in artwork. He doesn't appear until several chapters in, and the two main characters are a teenage girl and an elderly monk.

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* EverythingsBetterWithSamurai: Proto-samurai Satake no Juro features prominently in artwork. He doesn't appear until several chapters in, late in Chapter Three, and the two main characters are a teenage girl and an elderly monk.monk.
* ForYourOwnGood: Genza wants his daughter to have a comfortable life in the capital, not a dangerous life in the provinces.



* ImpoverishedPatrician: The Satake clan.



* PowersViaPossession: When Masako is possessed by a spirit, her eyes glow and she is capable of inhumanly fast reactions. As the ghosts are often angry, bitter and disorientated, it's more of a liability than a help, and the effect only lasts for a short time anyway.

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* OverprotectiveDad: Genza rebuffs Juro's attempts to court Masako, even though Juro saved their lives, and Genza admits that he's a good man.
* PowersViaPossession: When Masako is possessed by a spirit, her eyes glow and she is capable of inhumanly fast reactions. As the ghosts are often angry, bitter and disorientated, it's more of a liability than a help, and the effect only lasts for a short time anyway.time.
* RedemptionQuest: Genza was a rich courtier in his youth before he was exiled to the province. He is offered the chance to redeem himself by curing the sick Emperor.


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* SwordPointing: Masako does this at the end of the bandit attack. It impresses Juro and Eiji, even though she doesn't know how to use it.


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* TheMakeover: Masako gets one in Chapter Seven. It doesn't stick.
* TheNiceGuy: Juro

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As of July 2019 a {{VisualNovel Visual Novel}}' '[[https://carolinebtclouds.itch.io/the-long-rains The Long Rains ]]'' based in the same world, though featuring none of the comic characters, can be downloaded for free at itch.io


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As of July 2019 a {{VisualNovel [[VisualNovel Visual Novel}}' '[[https://carolinebtclouds.Novel]] ''[[https://carolinebtclouds.itch.io/the-long-rains The Long Rains ]]'' based in the same world, though featuring none of the comic characters, can be downloaded for free at itch.io



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* Miko: Masako dresses like one.


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* RichSuitorPoorSuitor: The wealthy courtier Nobutaka and the provincial warrior Juro are both interested in Masako. Subverted in that while Juro is poor by court standards, he's still a lord's son.


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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Nobutaka gives Juro one when he tries to get an appointment with the Emperor :
-->'''Nobutaka:'''Let me guess, the Hitachi clan's losing the latest turf war?[...]Ladies and gentleman- another rustic begging for an audience with the Emperor! You haven't figured it out yet? If the warrior clans unite you're a threat1 The emperor wants you to fight each other! It's what you do! It weeds out the feeble! We'll employ whoever wins! Give up and go home!
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As of July 2019 a {{VisualNovel}}''[[https://carolinebtclouds.itch.io/the-long-rains The Long Rains ]]'' based in the same world, though featuring none of the comic characters, can be downloaded for free at itch.io


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As of July 2019 a {{VisualNovel}}''[[https://carolinebtclouds.{{VisualNovel Visual Novel}}' '[[https://carolinebtclouds.itch.io/the-long-rains The Long Rains ]]'' based in the same world, though featuring none of the comic characters, can be downloaded for free at itch.io

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As of July 2019 a {{VisualNovel}} based in the same world, though featuring none of the comic characters, can be downloaded for free at itch.io ''[[https://carolinebtclouds.itch.io/the-long-rains The Long Rains ]]''


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As of July 2019 a {{VisualNovel}} based in the same world, though featuring none of the comic characters, can be downloaded for free at itch.io ''[[https://carolinebtclouds.{{VisualNovel}}''[[https://carolinebtclouds.itch.io/the-long-rains The Long Rains ]]''

]]'' based in the same world, though featuring none of the comic characters, can be downloaded for free at itch.io

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As of July 2019 a {{VisualNovel}} based in the same world, though featuring none of the comic characters, can be downloaded for free at itch.io ''[[https://carolinebtclouds.itch.io/the-long-rains The Long Rains ]]''

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* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Juro's name means "tenth son".





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\n*WellDoneSonGuy: Juro, apparently.

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* BanditClan: The party runs into a bandit ambush on the road.



* BanditClan: The party runs into a bandit ambush on the road.

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* BanditClan: The party runs into a bandit ambush on CombatPragmatist: Juro and Eiji kick and distract each other while sword training. Bushido wasn't invented until the road.1600s.



* EverythingsBetterWithSamurai: Samurai/samuru Satake no Juro features prominently in promotional art. He doesn't appear until several chapters in, and the two main characters are a teenage girl and an elderly monk.

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* EverythingsBetterWithSamurai: Samurai/samuru Proto-samurai Satake no Juro features prominently in promotional art.artwork. He doesn't appear until several chapters in, and the two main characters are a teenage girl and an elderly monk.



* HorseArcher: The Satake samurai.
* HonorBeforeReason: Played straight by Genza, who holds a funeral for murder victims even though this puts his companions, including his teenage daughter, at risk of bandit ambush. Subverted by Juro and Eiji, who ambush and shoot attackers from a distance rather than fighting them with swords.



* RedOniBlueOni: Juro is impulsive, enthusiastic, and unsubtle , Eiji is reserved, calm, and sarcastic, though they both have their moments.

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* RedOniBlueOni: Juro is impulsive, enthusiastic, and unsubtle blunt , Eiji is reserved, calm, and sarcastic, though they both have their moments.


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* SarcasticDevotee: Eiji
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''[[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com Beneath The Clouds ]]'' is a {{webcomic}} set in [[JidaiGeki Heian Japan]]. It is part of the {{SpiderForest}} webcomic collective

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''[[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com Beneath The Clouds ]]'' is a {{webcomic}} set in [[JidaiGeki Heian Japan]]. It is part of the {{SpiderForest}} Webcomic/SpiderForest webcomic collective
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* AnachronisticClue: The comic's tagline is "A story of ghosts and gunpowder".

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''[[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com Beneath The Clouds ]]'' is a {{webcomic}} set in [[JidaiGeki Heian Japan]].It is part of the {{SpiderForest}} webcomic collective

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''[[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com Beneath The Clouds ]]'' is a {{webcomic}} set in [[JidaiGeki Heian Japan]]. It is part of the {{SpiderForest}} webcomic collective




* AllMonksKnowKungFu: Subverted.



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* BanditClan: TThe party runs into a bandit ambush on the road.
* DeadlyDecadentCourt: The Heian Imperial Court.
* DeadpanSnarker: Eiji.



* DeadpanSnarker: Eiji


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* RedOniBlueOni: Juro is impulsive, enthusiastic, and unsubtle , Eiji is reserved, calm, and sarcastic, though they both have their moments.

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''[[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com Beneath The Clouds ]]'' is a {{webcomic}} set in [[JidaiGeki Heian Japan]].

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''[[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com Beneath The Clouds ]]'' is a {{webcomic}} set in [[JidaiGeki Heian Japan]]. \nIt is part of the {{SpiderForest}} webcomic collective



Beneath The Clouds updates Mondays and Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com/comics/2419142/cover-beneath-the-clouds/ here]] and the author's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].


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Beneath The Clouds updates Mondays and Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com/comics/2419142/cover-beneath-the-clouds/ [[http://www.beneaththecloudscomic.com/?comic_id=0 here]] and the author's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].




* BanditClan: T



* EverythingsBetterWithSamurai: Samurai/samuru character Satake no Juro features prominently in promotional art. He doesn't appear until a third of the way through the comic, and the two main characters are a teenage girl and an elderly monk.

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* DeadpanSnarker: Eiji
* EverythingsBetterWithSamurai: Samurai/samuru character Satake no Juro features prominently in promotional art. He doesn't appear until a third of the way through the comic, several chapters in, and the two main characters are a teenage girl and an elderly monk.


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* PowersViaPossession: When Masako is possessed by a spirit, her eyes glow and she is capable of inhumanly fast reactions. As the ghosts are often angry, bitter and disorientated, it's more of a liability than a help, and the effect only lasts for a short time anyway.
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* TheDreaded: Ikiryo, rare spirits caused by the bitterness and jealous of living people. Genza says that "a thousand armed men are no protection" against them.

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* TheDreaded: Ikiryo, rare spirits caused by the bitterness and jealous jealousy of living people. Genza says that "a thousand armed men are no protection" against them.
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* Missing Mom: Masako's mother died in a house fire when she was very young.

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* Missing Mom: MissingMom: Masako's mother died in a house fire when she was very young.
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* Missing Mom: Masako's mother died in a house fire when she was very young

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* Missing Mom: Masako's mother died in a house fire when she was very youngyoung.
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* Missing Mom: Masako's mother died in a house fire when she was very young
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* TheDreaded: Ikiryo, rare spirits caused by the bitterness and jealous of living people. Genza says that "a thousand armed men are no protection" against them
* TurnTheOtherCheek: Genza agrees to try to save the Emperor who sent him into exile. However he does admit to himself that he'd like to refuse "just to see the look in his eyes", before admitting the thought isn't worthy of a monk.


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* TheDreaded: Ikiryo, rare spirits caused by the bitterness and jealous of living people. Genza says that "a thousand armed men are no protection" against them
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* TurnTheOtherCheek: Genza agrees to try to save the Emperor who sent him into exile. However he does admit to himself that he'd like to refuse "just to see the look in his eyes", before admitting the thought isn't worthy of him as a monk.

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The colour scheme of the comic is based on the Hokusai Manga. It updates Mondays and Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com/comics/2419142/cover-beneath-the-clouds/ here]] and the author's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].


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Beneath The colour scheme of the comic is based on the Hokusai Manga. It Clouds updates Mondays and Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com/comics/2419142/cover-beneath-the-clouds/ here]] and the author's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].

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Genza has walked many paths in life: nobleman, outcast,father, exorcist, and monk. He's offered a chance to to redeem himself by undertaking a perilous journey to Heian Kyo. Will Genza be prepared to confront his own demons in order to save the life of the man who exiled him, will his daughter Masako make a new life for herself in the city, and does a stranger met on the road offer a chance for a new way forward?

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Genza has walked many paths in life: nobleman, outcast,father, outcast, father, exorcist, and monk. He's offered a chance to to redeem himself by undertaking a perilous journey to Heian Kyo. Will Genza be prepared to confront his own demons in order to save the life of the man who exiled him, will his daughter Masako make a new life for herself in the city, and does a stranger met on the road offer a chance for a new way forward?
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Genza has walked many paths in life nobleman, outcast,father, exorcist, and monk. He's offered a chance to to redeem himself by undertaking a perilous journey to Heian Kyo. Will Genza be prepared to confront his own demons in order to save the life of the man who exiled him, will his daughter Masako make a new life for herself in the city, and does a stranger met on the road offer a chance for a new way forward?

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Genza has walked many paths in life life: nobleman, outcast,father, exorcist, and monk. He's offered a chance to to redeem himself by undertaking a perilous journey to Heian Kyo. Will Genza be prepared to confront his own demons in order to save the life of the man who exiled him, will his daughter Masako make a new life for herself in the city, and does a stranger met on the road offer a chance for a new way forward?

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* AsYouKnow: A character on an ExpositionDiagram page remarks:
-->Don't you know that illness is caused by wandering spirits of the dead?



* GoodParents: Masako and Genza work together happily and they've travelled together since she could walk.





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\n* TurnTheOtherCheek: Genza agrees to try to save the Emperor who sent him into exile. However he does admit to himself that he'd like to refuse "just to see the look in his eyes", before admitting the thought isn't worthy of a monk.

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* DueToTheDead: Genza's duties as a Buddhist exorcist include performing cremations.

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* ComingOfAge: Masako starts out as a rather naive teenager unsure of her place in the world but discovers several surprising things about herself over the course of her journey.

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* ComingOfAge: Masako starts out as a rather naive teenager unsure of her place in the world but discovers several surprising things about herself over world.
* EverythingsBetterWithSamurai: Samurai/samuru character Satake no Juro features prominently in promotional art. He doesn't appear until a third of
the course of her journey.way through the comic, and the two main characters are a teenage girl and an elderly monk.



* ISeeDeadPeople: The two main characters can see ghosts, but only during their exorcism rituals. However the ghosts can possess Masako for a limited time, giving them the ability to interact with others.
* JidaiGeki: Of the Heian Period (794-1185).
* Miko: Masako is an assistant to a Buddhist priest who performs exorcisms. She dresses like a miko, as it's similar to Heian period casual clothing.

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* ISeeDeadPeople: The two main characters can see ghosts, but only during their exorcism rituals. However the ghosts can possess Masako for a limited time, during the ceremony, giving them the ability to interact with others.
* JidaiGeki: Of the Heian Period (794-1185).
* Miko: Masako MilkingTheGiantCow: The court messenger Masahiro is an assistant to a Buddhist priest who performs exorcisms. She dresses like a miko, as it's similar to Heian period casual clothing.quite fond of this. It ends badly for him.
* SceneryPorn: Parts of the journey along the Tokaido Road, especially Mount Fuji.


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* JidaiGeki: Of the Heian Period (794-1185.

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* JidaiGeki: Of the Heian Period (794-1185.(794-1185).





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\n* TheDreaded: Ikiryo, rare spirits caused by the bitterness and jealous of living people. Genza says that "a thousand armed men are no protection" against them
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[[caption-width-right:350:A story of ghosts and gunpowder]]


''[[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com BeneathTheClouds ]]'' is a {{webcomic}} set in [[JidaiGeki Heian Japan]].

Genza has walked many paths in life nobleman, outcast,father, exorcist, and monk. He's offered a chance to to redeem himself by undertaking a perilous journey to Heian Kyo. Will Genza be prepared to confront his own demons in order to save the life of the man who exiled him, will his daughter Masako make a new life for herself in the city, and does a stranger met on the road offer a chance for a new way forward?

The colour scheme of the comic is based on the Hokusai Manga. It updates Mondays and Wednesdays. The first page can be found [[http://beneaththecloudscomic.smackjeeves.com/comics/2419142/cover-beneath-the-clouds/ here]] and the author's website [[http://carolineparkinson.co.uk here]].


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* ComingOfAge: Masako starts out as a rather naive teenager unsure of her place in the world but discovers several surprising things about herself over the course of her journey.
* ISeeDeadPeople: The two main characters can see ghosts, but only during their exorcism rituals. However the ghosts can possess Masako for a limited time, giving them the ability to interact with others.
* JidaiGeki: Of the Heian Period (794-1185.
* Miko: Masako is an assistant to a Buddhist priest who performs exorcisms. She dresses like a miko, as it's similar to Heian period casual clothing.


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