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* TrailersAlwaysLie: The OneTheNext preview at the end of episode one features a montage of scenes where the girls yell at each other, a shot of the monsters of the week, Grand Master standing in the city streets, and the girls all quietly reading books (except Jessica, who laughs hysterically). Jessica's narration also laments that none of the others think she's taking her duties seriously and are being harsh with her because of it. In the actual episode, only the girls arguing and the monsters of the week are shown; Grand Master only appears in a dark castle far from Earth, and the book scene doesn't appear at all. The conflict of the episode is also not that Jessica is being criticized for nonchalance, but is simply the girls arguing that Jessica is arrogant with a B-plot about finding "chatterboxes" annoying.
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* TrailersAlwaysLie: The OneTheNext OnTheNext preview at the end of episode one features a montage of scenes where the girls yell at each other, a shot of the monsters of the week, Grand Master standing in the city streets, and the girls all quietly reading books (except Jessica, who laughs hysterically). Jessica's narration also laments that none of the others think she's taking her duties seriously and are being harsh with her because of it. In the actual episode, only the girls arguing and the monsters of the week are shown; Grand Master only appears in a dark castle far from Earth, and the book scene doesn't appear at all. The conflict of the episode is also not that Jessica is being criticized for nonchalance, but is simply the girls arguing that Jessica is arrogant with a B-plot about finding "chatterboxes" annoying.
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* TheFundamentalist: There's a VerySpecialEpisode about the evils of religious fundamentalism, personified by a trio consisting of a Jewish fundamentalist, a Christian fundamentalist, and a Muslim fundamentalist.
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* TheFundamentalist: TheFundamentalist:
** The second half of the second episode, which focuses on a young Mandana, features her family coping with a new regime in their country, apparently led by Islamic fundamentalists if Mandana's memetic line is to be taken at face value.
** There's a VerySpecialEpisode about the evils of religious fundamentalism, personified by a trio consisting of a Jewish fundamentalist, a Christian fundamentalist, and a Muslimfundamentalist.fundamentalist.
** The second half of the second episode, which focuses on a young Mandana, features her family coping with a new regime in their country, apparently led by Islamic fundamentalists if Mandana's memetic line is to be taken at face value.
** There's a VerySpecialEpisode about the evils of religious fundamentalism, personified by a trio consisting of a Jewish fundamentalist, a Christian fundamentalist, and a Muslim
* InformedAtribute: In the second episode, Mandana comes across a neighbor of hers, Mrs Acrid, and panics because she's "a chatterbox." When Mrs Acrid approaches Mandana to speak with her, she doesn't talk excessively at all, simply asking how the girls are doing and inviting Mandana to a party. There's even an awkward pause where she doesn't seem to know what to say.
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** Gypsy was [[MagicalGirlWarrior an Elemental Goddess]] herself on her planet. But when Dark Shadow and the Demonic Five attacked her planet, she was unable to stand against them. In order to survive, she agreed to work with them.
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%% ** Gypsy was [[MagicalGirlWarrior an Elemental Goddess]] herself on her planet. But when Dark Shadow and the Demonic Five attacked her planet, she was unable to stand against them. In order to survive, she agreed to work with them.
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* HairFlip: Gypsy does this. In the now-lost video "Gypsy's Revelation," it's this that clues Stephanie and Susan as to who the random girl approaching them is.
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%% * HairFlip: Gypsy does this. In the now-lost video "Gypsy's Revelation," it's this that clues Stephanie and Susan as to who the random girl approaching them is.
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** The "animator" has said that future episodes ([[DeadFic yeah, right]]) will use still shots. ''Still shots.''
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** The "animator" has said creator stated that future episodes ([[DeadFic yeah, right]]) will would use still shots. ''Still shots.''
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* MentorOccupationalHazard: Mandana's mentor from her OriginStory gets killed at the start of episode 3.
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%% * MentorOccupationalHazard: Mandana's mentor from her OriginStory gets killed at the start of episode 3.
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* SecretKeeper: Episode three revealed Shirin is this for Jessica.
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%% * SecretKeeper: Episode three revealed Shirin is this for Jessica.
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* ThatMakesMeFeelAngry: Jessica, after being mocked by Mandana, states "Jessica is very angry right now!"
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* ThatMakesMeFeelAngry: Jessica, after being mocked by Mandana, states declares "Jessica is very angry right now!"
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* BuryYourArt: The creator deleted all three episodes that were produced, plus the special. A rehost channel was able to save the first two episodes plus the special beforehand, but the third episode and bonus animations (such as a {{Crossover}} transformation with Sailor Moon) is gone forever.
%%* CallingYourAttacks
%%* CallingYourAttacks
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* BuryYourArt: The creator deleted all three episodes that were produced, plus the special. A rehost channel was able to save the first two episodes plus the special beforehand, but the third episode and bonus animations (such as a {{Crossover}} transformation CallingYourAttacks: In keeping with Sailor Moon) is gone forever.
%%* CallingYourAttacksthe genre, the girls shout their attacks in battle: "Divine Fire Ribbon Attack!" "Water Waves Attack!" "Flower Aroma Attack!" etc
%%* CallingYourAttacks
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* AnachronicOrder: Somewhat. The "[[VerySpecialEpisode Special Episode]]", which was uploaded smack-dab in the middle of the ''second'' episode, reportedly takes place between the fourth and fifth episodes. [[DeadFic Only two full episodes were ever finished.]]
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* AnachronicOrder: Somewhat. The "[[VerySpecialEpisode Special Episode]]", which was uploaded smack-dab in the middle of the ''second'' episode, reportedly takes place between the fourth and fifth episodes. [[DeadFic Only two three full episodes were ever finished.released, with the third being lost forever.]]
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The crossover video is gone,
* ArtisticLicenseReligion: In the special episode, apart from the obvious (being religious does not allow you to shoot lasers from your holy symbols), the Jewish girl declares "Send these infidels to Hell!" Judaism doesn't have a concept of Hell.
* BuryYourArt: The creator deleted all three episodes that were produced, plus the special. A rehost channel was able to save the first two episodes plus the special beforehand, but the third episode and bonus animations (such as a {{Crossover}} transformation with Sailor Moon) is gone forever.
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* {{Crossover}}: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_YHGppSUp0s Jessica and Sailor Moon]]
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* FrillsOfJustice
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%% * FrillsOfJustice
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* HairFlip: Gypsy does this. In the video "Gypsy's Revelation," it's this that clues Stephanie and Susan as to who the random girl approaching them is.
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* HairFlip: Gypsy does this. In the now-lost video "Gypsy's Revelation," it's this that clues Stephanie and Susan as to who the random girl approaching them is.
* InTheNameOfTheMoon: As featured in the special episode: "We are the Elemental Goddesses! Our duty is to destroy the evil that threatens our world, and in this case, it's you!"
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* SecretKeeper: Apparently Shirin is this for Jessica.
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* SecretKeeper: Apparently Episode three revealed Shirin is this for Jessica.
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* ThatMakesMeFeelAngry: Jessica after being mocked by Mandana.
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* ThatMakesMeFeelAngry: Jessica Jessica, after being mocked by Mandana.Mandana, states "Jessica is very angry right now!"
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* VerySpecialEpisode: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h1dojPWoRXM This short]], which is about religious fundamentalists. Yes.
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* VerySpecialEpisode: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h1dojPWoRXM com/watch?v=dgWm4StUIcg This short]], which is about religious fundamentalists. Yes.
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** Gyspy was [[MagicalGirlWarrior an Elemental Goddess]] herself on her planet. But when Dark Shadow and the Demonic Five attacked her planet, she was unable to stand against them. In order to survive, she agreed to work with them.
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** Gyspy Gypsy was [[MagicalGirlWarrior an Elemental Goddess]] herself on her planet. But when Dark Shadow and the Demonic Five attacked her planet, she was unable to stand against them. In order to survive, she agreed to work with them.
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--> '''Mandana:''' It’s practically coal!
--> '''Jessica:''' Mandana, will you try a piece of it? Please?
--> '''Mandana:''' Me? Oh, uh, I’d rather not.
--> '''Jessica:''' But you won’t even notice the black! Just pick it off.
