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[[WMG: The [[TheTransformers Matrix of Leadership]] in [[BigGood Optimus Prime's]] chest WILL be used during United We Stand.]]
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[[WMG: The [[TheTransformers Matrix of Leadership]] in [[BigGood Optimus Prime's]] chest WILL be used during United ''United We Stand.Stand''.]]
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[[WMG: Same for ''WesternAnimation/{{COPS}}'']]
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[[WMG: Same for ''WesternAnimation/{{COPS}}'']]''[[WesternAnimation/{{COPS}} C.O.P.S.]]'']]
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[[WMG: The [[SacredScripture Covenant of Primus]] foretold the events in ''United We Stand''.]]
Hence the Autobots' involvement.
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In "Giggle at the Ghosties" Pinkie states that her Granny Pie sang her that song ("But Granny Pie said that wasn't the way/To deal with fears at all…She said: 'Pinkie, you gotta stand up tall/Learn to face your fears/You'll see that they can't hurt you/Just laugh to make them disappear.' Ha! Ha! Ha!") In one of the flashbacks Meghan and Celestia sing a different version of the song and credit it to Surprise ("It's like that song Surprise likes to sing. You gotta stand up and face your fears..." "Laugh and they'll just disappear! Hah, hah, hah!").
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In "Giggle at the Ghosties" Pinkie states that her Granny Pie sang her that song ("But Granny Pie said that wasn't the way/To deal with fears at all…She said: 'Pinkie, you gotta stand up tall/Learn to face your fears/You'll see that they can't hurt you/Just laugh to make them disappear.' Ha! Ha! Ha!") In one of the flashbacks Meghan Megan and Celestia sing a different version of the song and credit it to Surprise ("It's like that song Surprise likes to sing. You gotta stand up and face your fears..." "Laugh and they'll just disappear! Hah, hah, hah!").
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** WordOfGod states that ''United We Stand'' ''''is'''' in fact an official sequel, meaning that Inhumanoids is in fact part of the Hasbroverse.
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** WordOfGod states that ''United We Stand'' ''''is'''' '''''is''''' in fact an official sequel, meaning that Inhumanoids is in fact part of the Hasbroverse.
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** WordOfGod states that ''United We Stand'' ''''is'''' in fact an official sequel, meaning that Inhumanoids is in fact part of the Hasbroverse.
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[[WMG: Discord was another reason (if not THE reason) the humans fled.]]
Knowing what [[HumansAreBastards humans are like]], they are easily vulnerable to Discord's powers.
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* Does that mean she's the [[MonsterProgenitor Progenitor of the Changelings]]?
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* Does that mean she's the [[MonsterProgenitor Progenitor mother of the Changelings]]?
entire Changeling race]]?
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* Does that mean she's the [[MonsterProgenitor Progenitor of the Changelings]]?
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**Author here. The story starts in 2011, actually.
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*C.O.P.S. definitely hasn't happened in the continuity, its set in 2020 and the story starts out in 2013.
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** [[Confirmed on the first part in Chapter 28.]]
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** [[Confirmed [[spoiler:Confirmed on the first part in Chapter 28.]]
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Upon his [[spoiler: Resurrection]], his body seems to be composed of a smooze like material. He gained power
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Upon his [[spoiler: Resurrection]], his body seems to be composed of a smooze like material. He gained power by creating Nightmare Moon. For all we know, he might have been the one to push Discord into his reign of terror. Thus, the first was also the mastermind, and all the great villains of MLP owe him for pushing them to their schemes.
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** [[spoiler:And he indeed drew the Ursas.]]
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** [[Confirmed on the first part in Chapter 28.]]
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*** [[spoiler:Minerva makes an appearance in Chapter 28.]]
* "The Rebirth" also happened, since the Nebulons arementioned.
mentioned. Unless the Autobots met them earlier like in Marvel Comics' ''[[ComicBook/TheTransformers Headmasters]]''.
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Upon his [[spoiler: Resurrection, his body seems to be composed of a smooze like material. He gained power
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Upon his [[spoiler: Resurrection, Resurrection]], his body seems to be composed of a smooze like material. He gained power
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* Confirmed! It turns out that the castle and surrounding area was destroyed in Nightmare Moon's war, and then abandoned by Celestia.
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[[WMG: Tirac is responsible for the greatest threats to ever face My Little Pony]]
Upon his [[spoiler: Resurrection, his body seems to be composed of a smooze like material. He gained power
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** [[spoiler: Well, Tirac's back (mostly), so we're halfway there.]]
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* As of chapter 28, [[spoiler: it seems it really was referring to Tirac.]]
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* "The Rebirth" also happen, since the Nebulons are mentioned.
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* "The Rebirth" also happen, happened, since the Nebulons are mentioned.
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** Think of it. The Targetmasters. The Pretenders. The Godmasters. Star Saber all helping in the final battle of United We Stand.
* "The Rebirth" did happen ([[BroadStrokes for the most part]]) since the Nebulons are mentioned.
* "The Rebirth" did happen ([[BroadStrokes for the most part]]) since the Nebulons are mentioned.
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** Think of it. The Targetmasters. The Pretenders. The Godmasters. Star Saber all helping in the final battle of United ''United We Stand.
Stand''.
* "The Rebirth"did happen ([[BroadStrokes for the most part]]) also happen, since the Nebulons are mentioned.
* "The Rebirth"
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* OP here, [[spoiler: [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39177/6/side-stories-of-first-contact/family-reunion-part-two-memories I CALLED IT!]]]]
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* If they'll do team-up, they'll eventually double-cross each other.
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* If they'll they do team-up, they'll eventually double-cross each other.
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* At one point, DJ Pon-3 will play a song by The Rockin' Beats. Melody once said to the pony press that the band is "[[BiggerThanJesus more popular than the Mag'ne]]".
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* At one point, DJ Pon-3 will play a song by The Rockin' Beats. According to history, The Rockin' Beats were a very popular band (like Music/TheBeatles). Melody once said to the pony press that the band is "[[BiggerThanJesus more popular than the Mag'ne]]".
Mag'ne]]" (which Celestia and Luna are likely unhappy about).
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Perhaps a century (more or less) after Megan, Danny, and Molly leave Ponyland for good. The Ponyville in ''Tales'' may or may not be the same one in ''[=FiM=]'', which was founded 999 years after Megan's last visit in the fanfic's timeline. Somehow and some reason, no Pegasus ponies or Unicorns are living there, and magic may have been forbidden for a brief period of time.
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Perhaps a century (more or less) after Megan, Danny, and Molly leave Ponyland for good. The Ponyville in ''Tales'' may or may not be the same one in ''[=FiM=]'', which was founded 999 years after Megan's last visit in the fanfic's timeline. Somehow and some reason, no Pegasus only Earth ponies or Unicorns are living there, and [[BanOnMagic magic may have been forbidden forbidden]] for a brief period of time.
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Perhaps a century (more or less) after Megan, Danny, and Molly leave Ponyland for good. Somehow and some reason, no Pegasus ponies or Unicorns are living there, and magic may have been forbidden for a brief time.
* Original troper - The Ponyville in the series may be the same one in ''[=FiM=]'', which was founded 999 years after Megan's last visit in the fanfic's timeline.
* G4 Bon Bon/Sweetie Drops is related to the G1 Bon Bon.
* Original troper - The Ponyville in the series may be the same one in ''[=FiM=]'', which was founded 999 years after Megan's last visit in the fanfic's timeline.
* G4 Bon Bon/Sweetie Drops is related to the G1 Bon Bon.
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Perhaps a century (more or less) after Megan, Danny, and Molly leave Ponyland for good. Somehow and some reason, no Pegasus ponies or Unicorns are living there, and magic may have been forbidden for a brief time.
* Original troper -The Ponyville in the series ''Tales'' may or may not be the same one in ''[=FiM=]'', which was founded 999 years after Megan's last visit in the fanfic's timeline.
timeline. Somehow and some reason, no Pegasus ponies or Unicorns are living there, and magic may have been forbidden for a brief period of time.
* G4 Bon Bon/Sweetie Drops is relatedto to/descended from the G1 Bon Bon.
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* G4 Bon Bon/Sweetie Drops is related
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** The Grundles are not extinct, they live outside of Equestria in the middle of the desert far beyond Appleloosa as a ProudWarriorRace.
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** The Grundles are not extinct, they live outside of Equestria in the middle of the desert far beyond Appleloosa as a ProudWarriorRace.
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** The Grundles are not extinct, they live outside of Equestria in the middle of the desert far beyond Appleloosa as a ProudWarriorRace.
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[[WMG: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle is the true heir of Queen Majesty.]]]]
[[spoiler:In addition to being a descendant of the original Twilight and maybe Princess Sparkle, Twilight Sparkle must be descendent of Queen Majesty from her father's side. Or the original Twilight herself must be Queen Majesty's daughter. Majesty was "killed" by Tirek 20 years before the G1 cartoon, and original Twilight must have been sent hiding for protection. Her royal blood must have been kept secret from her and her pony friends in Dream Valley. Princess Sparkle must be referring to Majesty when she told Twilight Sparkle that she'd make her proud. This may contribute to her [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure coronation]].]]
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[[WMG: Princess Platinum, Commander Hurricane, and Chancellor Puddinghead will be thawed out at some point.]]
It's been mentioned a couple of times that while frozen, [[AndIMustScream they're still alive]], and in a recent blog post, the author did suggest that they might still have a role to play.
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In chapter 12, Applejack said "wears a hat like the one I got on now", meaning Megan was wearing a cowboy hat on her first two visits. She may have often wears a cowboy hat on her days in Dream Valley and Paradise Estate. She probably gave one to the original Applejack as a token of friendship, and has been passed down from mother to daughter all named Applejack.
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In chapter 12, Applejack said "wears a hat like the one I got on now", meaning Megan was wearing a cowboy hat on her first two visits. She may have often wears a cowboy hat on her days in Dream Valley and Paradise Estate. She probably gave one to the original Applejack as a token of friendship, and has been passed down from mother to daughter all named Applejack.Applejack.
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* If you're willing to accept "The Conversion Bureau: United We Stand" as an official sequel, then it confirms that this is the case; the president mentions "self-proclaimed gods" (with the sentence linking to the article on Inhumanoids on the Transformers wiki) as one of the threats humanity has faced and overcome in chapter 7.
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* At one point, DJ Pon-3 will play a song by The Rockin' Beats. Melody once said to the pony press that the band is "[[BiggerThanJesus more popular than the Mag'ne]]".
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* Also the Grundle may have abandoned it during [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve the great blizzard]] to find a new home.
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* Also the Grundle Grundles may have abandoned it during [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve the great blizzard]] to find a new home.
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* Clever Clover could be a descendant of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E13HearthsWarmingEve Clover the Clever]].
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* G4 Bon Bon/Sweetie Drops is related to the G1 Bon Bon.