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[[WMG: The main character is either the same species as the main character in '' The Foot Book'' or him as a child.]]
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* They're carrying "bikes, dishes, ladders, beds, bottles and fishes"--miscellaneous pieces of their lives, the kind of things refuges might carry.
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* They're carrying "bikes, dishes, ladders, beds, bottles and fishes"--miscellaneous pieces of their lives, the kind of things refuges refugees might carry.
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[[WMG: The main character is either the same species as the main character in ''Literature/TheFootBook'' or him as a child.]]
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[[WMG: The main character is either the same species as the main character in ''Literature/TheFootBook'' '' The Foot Book'' or him as a child.]]
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[[WMG: The main character is either the same species as the main character in ''Literature/TheFootBook'' or him as a child.]]]
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I think the tunnel of birds comes from underneath Solla Sollew. The birds are refugees from Solla Sollew, tunneling out of the city.
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* They're carrying "bikes, dishes, ladders, beds, bottles and fishes"--miscellaneous pieces of their lives, the kind of things refuges might carry.
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* They're carrying "bikes, dishes, ladders, beds, bottles and fishes"--miscellaneous pieces of their lives, the kind of things refuges might carry.carry.
[[WMG: The main character is either the same species as the main character in The Foot Book or him as a child.]]
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* The lad says the birds are "going all the wrong way." He goes ''against'' the flow of tragic, and comes out on the banks of River Wah-Hoo. If you reverse that, it means the birds are coming from somewhere around the city, and heading away from it.
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* The lad says the birds are "going all the wrong way." way"--which of course means ''he'' is the one going the wrong way. He goes ''against'' the flow of tragic, traffic, and comes out on the banks of River Wah-Hoo. If you reverse that, it means the birds are coming from somewhere around the city, and heading away ''away'' from it.
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I think the tunnel of birds going "all the wrong way," that leads the lad to the banks of River Wah-Hoo, comes from underneath Solla Sollew. The birds are refugees from Solla Sollew, tunneling out of the city.
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I think the tunnel of birds going "all the wrong way," that leads the lad to the banks of River Wah-Hoo, comes from underneath Solla Sollew. The birds are refugees from Solla Sollew, tunneling out of the city.city.
*The lad says the birds are "going all the wrong way." He goes ''against'' the flow of tragic, and comes out on the banks of River Wah-Hoo. If you reverse that, it means the birds are coming from somewhere around the city, and heading away from it.
*They're carrying "bikes, dishes, ladders, beds, bottles and fishes"--miscellaneous pieces of their lives, the kind of things refuges might carry.
*The lad says the birds are "going all the wrong way." He goes ''against'' the flow of tragic, and comes out on the banks of River Wah-Hoo. If you reverse that, it means the birds are coming from somewhere around the city, and heading away from it.
*They're carrying "bikes, dishes, ladders, beds, bottles and fishes"--miscellaneous pieces of their lives, the kind of things refuges might carry.
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* I think the tunnel of birds going "all the wrong way" are actually refugees from Solla Sollew tunneling out of the city.
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I think the tunnel of birds going "all the wrong
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*I think the tunnel of birds going "all the wrong way" are actually refugees from Solla Sollew tunneling out of the city.
