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Serafine mentioned spending some time as a pirate, and because this story focuses on pirates, it suits the adventures she experienced.
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Serafine mentioned spending some time as a pirate, and because this story focuses on pirates, it suits the adventures she experienced.experienced.
* Jossed. She never appears.
* Jossed. She never appears.
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* In Chapter 15, when you [[LetsSplitUpGang split up]] with either Charlie, Edward or Oliver, they ask if Peyton will stay in the past or go back home. You can TakeAThirdOption and be conflicted about it.
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** Confirmed. Kendrick can be recruited back in Chapter 12.
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At the end of the book, Peyton will have the choice to [[IChooseToStay stay with their love interest in the 17th Century]] or return to the present day.
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At the end of the book, Peyton will have the choice to [[IChooseToStay stay with their love interest in the 17th 18th Century]] or return to the present day.
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Their presence in the past is not only disrupting the future, but eventually all timelines just by their existence.
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Their presence in the past is not only disrupting the future, but eventually all timelines just by their existence.existence.
[[WMG: Serafine Dupont from VisualNovel/{{Bloodbound}} will appear]]
Serafine mentioned spending some time as a pirate, and because this story focuses on pirates, it suits the adventures she experienced.
[[WMG: Serafine Dupont from VisualNovel/{{Bloodbound}} will appear]]
Serafine mentioned spending some time as a pirate, and because this story focuses on pirates, it suits the adventures she experienced.
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* Seems likely. During Chapter 6, Peyton notices that they didn't once think of going home at all, meaning they could be getting quite comfortable being in the current era.
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* The Captain's Cabin has a portrait of Kendrick's silhouette, so he is a possible recruit.
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* The Captain's Cabin has a portrait of Kendrick's silhouette, so he is a possible recruit.recruit.
[[WMG: Peyton's presence in the pirate age will cause a TimeCrash]]
Their presence in the past is not only disrupting the future, but eventually all timelines just by their existence.
[[WMG: Peyton's presence in the pirate age will cause a TimeCrash]]
Their presence in the past is not only disrupting the future, but eventually all timelines just by their existence.
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Chapter 4 ends with Robert and his mutinous side of the crew leaving the Poseidon's Revenge. Over the course of the book, Peyton can recruit them back.
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Chapter 4 ends with Robert and his mutinous side of the crew leaving the Poseidon's Revenge. Over the course of the book, Peyton can recruit them back.back.
* The Captain's Cabin has a portrait of Kendrick's silhouette, so he is a possible recruit.
* The Captain's Cabin has a portrait of Kendrick's silhouette, so he is a possible recruit.
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At the end of the book, Peyton will have the choice to [[IChooseToStay stay with their love interest in the 17th Century]] or return to the present day.
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At the end of the book, Peyton will have the choice to [[IChooseToStay stay with their love interest in the 17th Century]] or return to the present day.day.
[[WMG: The rest of the mutineers can be re-recruited back onto the ship]]
Chapter 4 ends with Robert and his mutinous side of the crew leaving the Poseidon's Revenge. Over the course of the book, Peyton can recruit them back.
[[WMG: The rest of the mutineers can be re-recruited back onto the ship]]
Chapter 4 ends with Robert and his mutinous side of the crew leaving the Poseidon's Revenge. Over the course of the book, Peyton can recruit them back.
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The crew that mentions that the pirate disappeared out of thin air, similar to how Peyton did as well. It's possible that thinking about rebelling against their agent or director caused the artifact to act up and send Peyton back in time.
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The crew that mentions that the pirate disappeared out of thin air, similar to how Peyton did as well. It's possible that thinking about rebelling against their agent or director caused the artifact to act up and send Peyton back in time.time.
[[WMG: Players can determine how the story will end]]
At the end of the book, Peyton will have the choice to [[IChooseToStay stay with their love interest in the 17th Century]] or return to the present day.
[[WMG: Players can determine how the story will end]]
At the end of the book, Peyton will have the choice to [[IChooseToStay stay with their love interest in the 17th Century]] or return to the present day.
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The crew that mentions that the pirate disappeared out of thin air, similar to how the MC did as well. It's possible that thinking about rebelling against your agent or director caused the artifact to act up and send the MC back in time.
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The crew that mentions that the pirate disappeared out of thin air, similar to how the MC Peyton did as well. It's possible that thinking about rebelling against your their agent or director caused the artifact to act up and send the MC Peyton back in time.
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[[WMG: The pirate that vanished out of thin air that the crew mentioned in Chapter 2 at the tavern ends up being your agent or the director that seems to have a vendetta against you for some reason.]
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[[WMG: The pirate that vanished out of thin air that the crew mentioned in Chapter 2 at the tavern ends up being your agent or the director that seems to have a vendetta against you for some reason.]]]
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[[WMG: The pirate that vanished out of thin air that the crew mentioned in Chapter 2 at the tavern ends up being your agent or the director that seems to have a vendetta against you for some reason.]
The crew that mentions that the pirate disappeared out of thin air, similar to how the MC did as well. It's possible that thinking about rebelling against your agent or director caused the artifact to act up and send the MC back in time.
The crew that mentions that the pirate disappeared out of thin air, similar to how the MC did as well. It's possible that thinking about rebelling against your agent or director caused the artifact to act up and send the MC back in time.
