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Created by Dreamgazer, ''War: 13th Day'' uses every aspect of the UsefulNotes/RenPy VisualNovel engine to [[SlidingScaleOfGameplayAndStoryIntegration engage you]] in an interactive mystery full of {{plot twist}}s, {{mind screw}}s, and unconventional {{romance arc}}s. Serving as the opening act to ''[[https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=36651 War (X Playing Pieces)]]'', it's available for free on [[https://dreamgazer.itch.io/war-13th-day itch.io]] and [[https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=36365&sid=13945450f551b58c5707e50e5363ac51 Lemmasoft]]. If the JigsawPuzzlePlot boggles you, don't be ashamed of using the [[https://askdreamgazer.wordpress.com/2016/02/15/official-walkthrough-for-war-13th-day/ official walkthrough]].
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Created by Dreamgazer, ''War: 13th Day'' uses every aspect of the UsefulNotes/RenPy MediaNotes/RenPy VisualNovel engine to [[SlidingScaleOfGameplayAndStoryIntegration engage you]] in an interactive mystery full of {{plot twist}}s, {{mind screw}}s, and unconventional {{romance arc}}s. Serving as the opening act to ''[[https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=36651 War (X Playing Pieces)]]'', it's available for free on [[https://dreamgazer.itch.io/war-13th-day itch.io]] and [[https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=36365&sid=13945450f551b58c5707e50e5363ac51 Lemmasoft]]. If the JigsawPuzzlePlot boggles you, don't be ashamed of using the [[https://askdreamgazer.wordpress.com/2016/02/15/official-walkthrough-for-war-13th-day/ official walkthrough]].
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* TheEndingChangesEverything: The True End reveals that the entire story is through Wildfire's biased perception, as well as her wishes, hopes, and dreams, fantasy and reality mixed together, and that is essentially her [[DyingDream life flashing beforehand her eyes]], as she was [[DeadAllAlong Dying All Along]]- and the ''PlayerCharacter'', [[TheDogWasTheMastermind of all people]], is [[TheKillerInMe her killer]]. In the post-credits scene, Ambrosia even makes this clear.
-->'''Ambrosia:''' Her perspective is biased and, to tell you the truth, terribly inaccurate. Do we seem unrealistic? Over-the-top? Annoying, even? That is simply how Lady Wildfire sees us. You could say she sees a satire of us in her mind.
-->'''Ambrosia:''' Her perspective is biased and, to tell you the truth, terribly inaccurate. Do we seem unrealistic? Over-the-top? Annoying, even? That is simply how Lady Wildfire sees us. You could say she sees a satire of us in her mind.
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* TheEndingChangesEverything: The [[spoiler:The True End reveals that the entire story is through Wildfire's biased perception, as well as her wishes, hopes, and dreams, fantasy and reality mixed together, and that is essentially her [[DyingDream life flashing beforehand her eyes]], as she was [[DeadAllAlong Dying All Along]]- and the ''PlayerCharacter'', [[TheDogWasTheMastermind of all people]], is [[TheKillerInMe her killer]]. In the post-credits scene, Ambrosia even makes this clear.
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-->'''Ambrosia:'''Her [[spoiler:Her perspective is biased and, to tell you the truth, terribly inaccurate. Do we seem unrealistic? Over-the-top? Annoying, even? That is simply how Lady Wildfire sees us. You could say she sees a satire of us in her mind.]]
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* BareYourMidriff: Ambrosia's outfit.
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** [[“The sun”, which Wildfire wants to return, is a metaphor for her life.]]
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** [[“The [[spoiler:“The sun”, which Wildfire wants to return, is a metaphor for her life.]]
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: What Ambrosia makes you believe halfway through the beginning.]]
* AmazonBrigade: The clan of the Valkyrie.
* AmazonBrigade: The clan of the Valkyrie.
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: What [[spoiler:What Ambrosia makes you and Wildfire believe halfway through the beginning.beginning. It sort of is, but it’s more like Wildfire’s DyingDream, and Ambrosia explícito denies it being a dream- more akin to someone’s life flashing before their eyes.]]
* AmazonBrigade: The clan of theValkyrie.Valkyrie are pretty much all women, in contrast to the all-male Vi.
* AmazonBrigade: The clan of the
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* ArtEvolution: Compare the look of ''War: 13th Day'' to the Valentine and April Fools' specials. You'll notice a huge difference. However, this might also be a case of FridgeBrilliance. [[spoiler:Since the entire game takes place in a dying vision where symbolism runs rampant, it makes sense for everything to look a look a little loopy and rough around the edges. Not to mention, this is ''Wildfire''. She's more likely to see the world as a rough-cut {{shonen|Demographic}} than a sparkly {{shoujo|Demographic}}.]]
* AttackAttackAttack: [[spoiler: In one of Brooks's endings, Wildfire and her decide to go down fighting against the Vi.]]
* AttackAttackAttack: [[spoiler: In one of Brooks's endings, Wildfire and her decide to go down fighting against the Vi.]]
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* ArtEvolution: Compare the look of ''War: 13th Day'' to the Valentine and April Fools' specials. You'll notice a huge difference. However, this might also be a case of FridgeBrilliance. [[spoiler:Since [[spoiler:Of course, since the entire game takes place in a dying vision where symbolism runs rampant, it makes sense for everything to look a look a little loopy and rough around the edges. Not to mention, this is ''Wildfire''. She's more likely to see the world as a rough-cut {{shonen|Demographic}} than a sparkly {{shoujo|Demographic}}.]]
* AttackAttackAttack:[[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In one of Brooks's endings, Wildfire and her decide to go down fighting against the Vi.]]
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: [[spoiler:When Wildfire chooses Chase over her best friend.]]
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: [[spoiler:When [[spoiler:If Wildfire chooses Chase over her best friend.friend, they have a bonding moment that proves that she does care about him, even though she kept insisting he was just a boy-toy.]]
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* BigBad: The King Barium is the leader of the clan of the Vi.Vi, a mysterious clan who appeared and has essentially taken over Virgo Island. Wildfire, one of the main heroines, plots to overthrow the Vi, putting her in conflict with him. [[spoiler:Of course, the Barium seen here is a part of Wildfire’s DyingDream, putting into question how malevolent he really is. The true villain for the immediate story could be considered Wildfire’s murderer, aka ''[[TheKillerInMe the player]]''.]]
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* TheEndingChangesEverything: [[spoiler:You learn that not everything is true. The story is through Wildfire's biased perception, as well her wishes, dreams, and hopes. Her fantasy and her reality mixed together.]]
* TheEvilPrince: At least, we think Alexandrite is one. [[spoiler:Why else do his brides keep dying?]]
* TheEvilPrince: At least, we think Alexandrite is one. [[spoiler:Why else do his brides keep dying?]]
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* TheEndingChangesEverything: [[spoiler:You learn The True End reveals that not everything is true. The the entire story is through Wildfire's biased perception, as well as her wishes, hopes, and dreams, and hopes. Her fantasy and her reality mixed together.]]
* TheEvilPrince: At least,together, and that is essentially her [[DyingDream life flashing beforehand her eyes]], as she was [[DeadAllAlong Dying All Along]]- and the ''PlayerCharacter'', [[TheDogWasTheMastermind of all people]], is [[TheKillerInMe her killer]]. In the post-credits scene, Ambrosia even makes this clear.
-->'''Ambrosia:''' Her perspective is biased and, to tell you the truth, terribly inaccurate. Do wethink Alexandrite seem unrealistic? Over-the-top? Annoying, even? That is one. [[spoiler:Why else do his brides keep dying?]]simply how Lady Wildfire sees us. You could say she sees a satire of us in her mind.
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler:When Ambrosia leads you to believe you're in a dream...and then ruthlessly shatters that notion.]]
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler:When Ambrosia leads you to believe you're in a dream...and then ruthlessly shatters that notion.notion in both the ending and post-credits scene. In order]]:
** [[“The sun”, which Wildfire wants to return, is a metaphor for her life.]]
** [[spoiler:Onyx, the Vi war chief, symbolizes death, which always follows the Phoenix Ambrosia.]]
** [[spoiler:[[TheKillerInMe YOU]] are Wilfire’s killer.]]
** [[“The sun”, which Wildfire wants to return, is a metaphor for her life.]]
** [[spoiler:Onyx, the Vi war chief, symbolizes death, which always follows the Phoenix Ambrosia.]]
** [[spoiler:[[TheKillerInMe YOU]] are Wilfire’s killer.]]
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* DamselInDistress: Ambrosia runs into trouble with Wildfire, Night, and Brooks. Am I missing anyone?
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* DamselInDistress: Ambrosia runs into trouble with Wildfire, Night, and Brooks. Am I missing anyone?
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* [[spoiler:DreamLand]]: [[spoiler:To be exact, this is Wildfire's Dream Land.]]
* [[spoiler:DyingDream]]: [[spoiler:This visual novel in a nutshell.]]
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* [[spoiler:DreamLand]]: DreamLand: [[spoiler:To be exact, this is Wildfire's Dream Land.]]
*[[spoiler:DyingDream]]: DyingDream: [[spoiler:This visual novel in a nutshell.]]
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* [[spoiler:RapidAging]]: [[spoiler:All of Alexandrite's brides become elderly women and die.]]
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