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* GasLeakCoverUp: [[spoiler: All of the chaos that occurred because of The Supreme One's attack in the 14th and 15th chapters was covered up and blamed on an out-of-control fire spreading through Crimson Beech. Parker's near-death was made to look like it had been the result of them inhaling too much smoke.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: In Chapter 15, Parker does this to defeat the BigBad [[spoiler:by injecting themself with vampire blood, which is lethal to him, before giving themself up to him to be fed on.]] They get better in the next chapter... [[spoiler:as a vampire, thanks to Gabe and Cas.]]
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* ForbiddenLove: It was revealed in chapter 6 that romance between humans and vampires is forbidden when it is revealed that Louis, a vampire turned Esme into one to prevent her from dying and staying together, ending with one of them being exiled.
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* BreakingOldTrends: This series is notable for doing something that Choices has ''never'' done before: announce a sequel to a book after previously declaring it to be a standalone. To say the fans were surprised is an understatement (even with the sneak peek, which some people thought was for the sequel to ''VisualNovel/CrimesOfPassion'', due to Pixelberry never having done this before).
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** This series is notable for doing something that Choices has ''never'' done before: announce a sequel to a book after previously declaring it to be a standalone. To say the fans were surprised is an understatement (even with the sneak peek, which some people thought was for the sequel to ''VisualNovel/CrimesOfPassion'', due to Pixelberry never having done thisbefore).before).
** Pixelberry have confirmed that when Book 2 is released in 2024, it will be the first sequel to be released to VIP players first and all players later, something that didn't apply to sequels before.
** This series is notable for doing something that Choices has ''never'' done before: announce a sequel to a book after previously declaring it to be a standalone. To say the fans were surprised is an understatement (even with the sneak peek, which some people thought was for the sequel to ''VisualNovel/CrimesOfPassion'', due to Pixelberry never having done this
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2022. It initially ended in October 2022 with the general release of Chapter 16, but in December 2022 it was announced that the series would be getting a second book.
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: '''Subverted'''. [[spoiler: When Parker becomes a vampire at the end of Chapter 16, they set out to explore their newfound self with their love interests Gabe and Cas]]. At the time, this was the canonical end to the series, but with Book 2 in the works, the audience will get to see it happen.
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* UnCanceled: On December 19, 2022, PB reversed the decision to end the series and announced a sequel to be released in 2024.
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* DeanBitterman: Astoria Yao is the leader of the more militant Venandi Coven and serves as the principal of Crimson Beech High, which she uses to keep an eye on Parker. She even [[DisproportionateRetribution suspended a student for two days for chewing gum]]. Parker is able to stop a huge brawl in one chapter by simply saying "Principal Yao's coming this way!"
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* {{Hypocrite}}: On the outside, Lewyn cares about humans as well as his fellow vampires, but in Chapter 14, [[spoiler:when the BigBad and his forces attack Crimson Beech, he brings the humans to the hospital, not to save them, but as bait for the Big Bad's minions.]]
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* {{Hypocrite}}: On the outside, Lewyn cares about humans as well as his fellow vampires, but in Chapter 14, [[spoiler:when the BigBad and his forces attack Crimson Beech, he brings the humans to the hospital, not to save them, but as bait for the Big Bad's minions. He also sets off a bomb with silver, potentially killing several of his coven members.]]
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* In Chapter 5, [[spoiler:Gabe is revealed to be a vampire too, which means both love interests are vampires.]]
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* TheReveal: In Chapter 5, [[spoiler:Gabe is revealed to be a vampire too, which means both love interests are vampires.]]
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* ColourCodedForYourConvenience: Romantic choices related to Gabe are marked with a red heart, while romantic choices related to Cas are marked with a purple heart.
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* LoveTriangle: Both Gabe and Cas are attracted to Parker and battle it out for their affections. Parker can show interest in both of them, resulting in jealousy on both sides. Doubles as a BisexualLoveTriangle if Gabe is male and Cas is female, or vice versa.
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* YouAreGrounded: Parker's mother grounds them at the end of Chapter 8 for both repeatedly sneaking out at night to see Gabe and Cas and their back-sass.
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* CharacterCustomization: This is another book that allows you to decide your character's gender and pronouns. Gabe and Cas's genders can be decided on their first meeting.
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* CouncilOfVampires: Crimson Beech has vampire covens that govern the city from the shadows. Principal Yao is revealed to be Astoria, the head of the Venadi family, the most ferocious vampire coven in the town. The Clement family are looked down on as lovers of humans.
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-->[[spoiler:'''Parker:''' Holy plot twist. Where'd that come from?]]
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* WildTeenParty: In Chapter 1, Parker is invited by Gabe to a party in the woods.
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* YouAreWhatYouHate: Gabe hates vampires, [[spoiler:yet in Chapter 5, they are revealed to be a vampire themself]].
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Gabe hates vampires, [[spoiler:yet in Chapter 5, they are revealed to be a vampire themself]].
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* TheReveal: In Chapter 5, [[spoiler:Gabe is revealed to be a vampire too, which means both love interests are vampires.]]
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A new teenage girl in the town of Crimson Beech finds out her new home has a dark and bloody secret.
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* BettyAndVeronica: The friendly star student Gabe and the rebellious Cas are the Betty and Veronica to Parker’s Archie, respectively.
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* IResembleThatRemark: In Chapter 1, Cas' reaction to finding that someone wrote "Psycho" on their locker is to threaten the person who did it and get into a fistfight with them, followed by them being dragged away by the school principal.
--> "Spoken like a true nutjob"
--> "Spoken like a true nutjob"
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''Immortal Desires'' is one of the many stories of the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection, only accessible by VIP subscribers.
A new teenage girl in the town of Crimson Beech finds out her new home has a dark and bloody secret.
* CharacterCustomization: This is another book that allows you to decide your character's gender and pronouns. Gabe and Cas's genders can be decided on their first meeting.
* ContentWarnings: From the moment the book is opened, it warns players it contains realistic depictions of violence and gore.
* CouncilOfVampires: Crimson Beech has vampire covens that govern the city from the shadows. Principal Yao is revealed to be Astoria, the head of the Venadi family, the most ferocious vampire coven in the town. The Clement family are looked down on as lovers of humans.
* GenderBlenderName: Gabe's full first name is Gabriel if male and Gabriella if female. Cas's full first name is Cassius if male and Cassie if female.
* HelloInsertNameHere: As with all Choices books, you can choose your character's name. The default name is Parker Reese.
* HollywoodNewEngland: Crimson Beech is established as being in New England.
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Body 2 for Gabriel gives him hair long enough to be tied into a bun.
* OhCrap: Chapter 2 ends with Parker finding out their mother's boss is Lewyn, one of the two heads of the city's vampire council.
* ShoutOut:
** In Chapter 1, during Parker's first day at school, a student is talking about ''[[Series/TheBachelor The Bachelorette]]''.
-->'''Student:''' ...And then she gave the rose to the cattle rancher, not the ex-quarterback! I was stunned!\\
'''Parker:''' (You and half of America, I'm sure.)
* WildTeenParty: In Chapter 1, Parker is invited by Gabe to a party in the woods.
A new teenage girl in the town of Crimson Beech finds out her new home has a dark and bloody secret.
* CharacterCustomization: This is another book that allows you to decide your character's gender and pronouns. Gabe and Cas's genders can be decided on their first meeting.
* ContentWarnings: From the moment the book is opened, it warns players it contains realistic depictions of violence and gore.
* CouncilOfVampires: Crimson Beech has vampire covens that govern the city from the shadows. Principal Yao is revealed to be Astoria, the head of the Venadi family, the most ferocious vampire coven in the town. The Clement family are looked down on as lovers of humans.
* GenderBlenderName: Gabe's full first name is Gabriel if male and Gabriella if female. Cas's full first name is Cassius if male and Cassie if female.
* HelloInsertNameHere: As with all Choices books, you can choose your character's name. The default name is Parker Reese.
* HollywoodNewEngland: Crimson Beech is established as being in New England.
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Body 2 for Gabriel gives him hair long enough to be tied into a bun.
* OhCrap: Chapter 2 ends with Parker finding out their mother's boss is Lewyn, one of the two heads of the city's vampire council.
* ShoutOut:
** In Chapter 1, during Parker's first day at school, a student is talking about ''[[Series/TheBachelor The Bachelorette]]''.
-->'''Student:''' ...And then she gave the rose to the cattle rancher, not the ex-quarterback! I was stunned!\\
'''Parker:''' (You and half of America, I'm sure.)
* WildTeenParty: In Chapter 1, Parker is invited by Gabe to a party in the woods.
