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* YouAreWhatYouHate: Gabe hates vampires, [[spoiler:yet in Chapter 5, they are revealed to be a vampire themself]].
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* YouAreWhatYouHate: Gabe hates vampires, [[spoiler:yet in Chapter 5, they are revealed to be a vampire themself]].themself]].
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* InterfaceSpoiler: The description for Book 2, Chapter 10 spoils that [[spoiler: the Forest Bureau is a cover for Vampire Hunters]]. While this was something players had suspected, it still ruins the plot twist for Chapter 9.
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* InterfaceSpoiler: The description for Book 2, Chapter 10 spoils that [[spoiler: the Forest Bureau is a cover for Vampire Hunters]].VampireHunters]]. While this was something players had suspected, it still ruins the plot twist for Chapter 9.
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* InterfaceSpoiler: The description for Book 2, Chapter 10 spoils that [[spoiler: the Forest Bureau is a cover for Vampire Hunters]]. While this was something players had suspected, it still ruins the plot twist for Chapter 9.
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* InternalReveal: Book 2, Chapter 8 ends with Parker revealing [[spoiler: their vampiric nature to the forest rangers and their own mother]]. Needless to say, [[spoiler: Lewyn and Astoria are not happy]].
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* FromBadToWorse: The end of Book 2, Chapter 8 doesn't go well for Parker. [[spoiler:Parker, who is very stressed and emotional over their feelings for Gabe and Cas, uses their vampire powers in the woods to blow off steam only to be witnessed by Lennox, the Forest Bureau ranger who's encountered them numerous times. Panicking because he saw their vampire traits, Parker speeds home only to startle and be confronted by Terri, who's mad at them for sneaking out again. While Terri starts ranting about Parker's change in behavior she accidentally cuts herself with a knife, and Parker can't prevent themselves from revealing their vampire nature to her, possibly attacking her if their willpower isn't high enough. Gabe comes in and subdues them, followed by a furious Lewyn and Astoria.]]
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General release date confirmed
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''Immortal Desires'' is one of the many stories of the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It's released for VIP subscribers on May 25, 2022 and for everyone on July 6, 2022. It initially ended on October 12, 2022 with the general release of Chapter 16, but on December 19, 2022 it was announced that the series would be getting a second book, which was released on February 28, 2024 on VIP early-access and will be released in April 2024 for everyone.
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''Immortal Desires'' is one of the many stories of the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It's released for VIP subscribers on May 25, 2022 and for everyone on July 6, 2022. It initially ended on October 12, 2022 with the general release of Chapter 16, but on December 19, 2022 it was announced that the series would be getting a second book, which was released on February 28, 2024 on VIP early-access and will be released in on April 19, 2024 for everyone.
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** In Book 2, Chapter 6, [[spoiler:it is revealed that Libby has memories of Parker saving her from The Creator's minions, but thinks she is having a recurring nightmare.]]
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* GasLeakCoverUp: [[spoiler: All of the chaos that occurred because of The Supreme One's attack in the 14th and 15th chapters was covered up and blamed on an out-of-control fire spreading through Crimson Beech. Parker's near-death was made to look like it had been the result of them inhaling too much smoke.]]
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* GasLeakCoverUp: [[spoiler: All of the chaos that occurred because of The Supreme One's the Creator's attack in the 14th and 15th chapters was covered up and blamed on an out-of-control fire spreading through Crimson Beech. Parker's near-death was made to look like it had been the result of them inhaling too much smoke.]]
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* Jerkass: Lewyn and Astoria. While they were far from pleasant in Book 1, they take it to another level in Book 2. Now that Parker is a Vampire, they are free to physically torment them instead of only being able to threaten them like they did throughout most of Book 1.
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* Jerkass: JerkAss: Lewyn and Astoria. While they were far from pleasant in Book 1, they take it to another level in Book 2. Now that Parker is a Vampire, they are free to physically torment them instead of only being able to threaten them like they did throughout most of Book 1.
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* ContentWarnings: From the moment both books is opened, it warns players it contains realistic depictions of violence and gore.
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* ContentWarnings: From the moment both books is are opened, it warns players it contains realistic depictions of violence and gore.
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* ContentWarnings: From the moment the book is opened, it warns players it contains realistic depictions of violence and gore.
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* ContentWarnings: From the moment the book both books is opened, it warns players it contains realistic depictions of violence and gore.
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* Jerkass: Lewyn and Astoria. While they were far from pleasant in Book 1, they take it to another level in Book 2. Now that Parker is a Vampire, they are free to physically torment them instead of only being able to threaten them like they did throughout most of Book 1.
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* SadistTeacher: In Book 2, Chapter 4, Lewyn picks Parker as a volunteer to exhibit the dangers of sun poisoning to the younger vampires, with the narrative making it clear he's getting malicious satisfaction from watching them suffer.
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''Immortal Desires'' is one of the many stories of the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It's released for VIP subscribers on May 25, 2022 and for everyone on July 6, 2022. It initially ended on October 12, 2022 with the general release of Chapter 16, but on December 19, 2022 it was announced that the series would be getting a second book, which was released on February 28, 2024 on VIP early-access and will be released in Spring April 2024 for everyone.
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''Immortal Desires'' is one of the many stories of the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It's released for VIP subscribers on May 25, 2022 and for everyone on July 6, 2022. It initially ended on October 12, 2022 with the general release of Chapter 16, but on December 19, 2022 it was announced that the series would be getting a second book, which released on February 28, 2024 on VIP early-access and will be released in Spring 2024 for everyone.
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''Immortal Desires'' is one of the many stories of the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It's released for VIP subscribers on May 25, 2022 and for everyone on July 6, 2022. It initially ended on October 12, 2022 with the general release of Chapter 16, but on December 19, 2022 it was announced that the series would be getting a second book, which was released on February 28, 2024 on VIP early-access and will be released in Spring 2024 for everyone.
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''Immortal Desires'' is one of the many stories of the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It's released for VIP subscribers on May 25, 2022 and for everyone on July 6, 2022. It initially ended on October 12, 2022 with the general release of Chapter 16, but on December 19, 2022 it was announced that the series would be getting a second book, which will be released on February 28, 2024 on VIP early-access and will be released in Spring 2024 for everyone.
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* BagOfSpilling: Justified. At the start of Book 2, Parker learns that all of the talismans they collected over the course of Book 1 are now useless because [[spoiler: they've become a vampire]], so they are discarded.
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''Immortal Desires'' is one of the many stories of the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It's released for VIP subscribers on May 25, 2022 and for everyone on July 6, 2022. It initially ended on October 12, 2022 with the general release of Chapter 16, but on December 19, 2022 it was announced that the series would be getting a second book, which will be released in on February 28, 2024 on VIP early-access.
early-access and in Spring 2024 for everyone.
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''Immortal Desires'' is one of the many stories of the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It's released for VIP subscribers on May 25, 2022 and for everyone on July 6, 2022. It initially ended in on October 12, 2022 with the general release of Chapter 16, but in on December 19, 2022 it was announced that the series would be getting a second book, which will be released in February 2024 on VIP early-access.
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* BreakingOldTrends:
** This series is notable for doing something that Choices has ''never'' done before: announce a sequel to a book after previously declaring it to be a standalone. To say the fans were surprised is an understatement (even with the sneak peek, which some people thought was for the sequel to ''VisualNovel/CrimesOfPassion'', due to Pixelberry never having done this before).
** Pixelberry have confirmed that when Book 2 is released in 2024, it will be the first sequel to be released to VIP players first and all players later, something that didn't apply to sequels before.
** This series is notable for doing something that Choices has ''never'' done before: announce a sequel to a book after previously declaring it to be a standalone. To say the fans were surprised is an understatement (even with the sneak peek, which some people thought was for the sequel to ''VisualNovel/CrimesOfPassion'', due to Pixelberry never having done this before).
** Pixelberry have confirmed that when Book 2 is released in 2024, it will be the first sequel to be released to VIP players first and all players later, something that didn't apply to sequels before.
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* BreakingOldTrends:
**BreakingOldTrends: This series is notable for doing something that Choices has ''never'' done before: announce a sequel to a book after previously declaring it to be a standalone. To say the fans were surprised is an understatement (even with the sneak peek, which some people thought was for the sequel to ''VisualNovel/CrimesOfPassion'', due to Pixelberry never having done this before).
** Pixelberry have confirmed that when Book 2 is released in 2024, it will be the first sequel to be released to VIP players first and all players later, something that didn't apply to sequels before.before).
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** Pixelberry have confirmed that when Book 2 is released in 2024, it will be the first sequel to be released to VIP players first and all players later, something that didn't apply to sequels before.
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If it was vampire blood, wouldn't MC and the covens have died?
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** During the celebration, if Parker [[spoiler: drinks what's heavily implied to be vampire blood out of the goblet]], they will note that [[spoiler: it's the tastiest thing they've drank, even though they've tasted vampire blood before and it didn't taste nice to them]].
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** During the celebration, if Parker [[spoiler: drinks what's heavily implied to be vampire human blood out of the goblet]], they will note that [[spoiler: it's the tastiest thing they've drank, even though they've tasted vampire blood before and it didn't taste nice to them]].
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''Immortal Desires'' is one of the many stories of the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It's released for VIP subscribers on May 25, 2022 and for everyone on July 6, 2022. It initially ended in October 2022 with the general release of Chapter 16, but in December 2022 it was announced that the series would be getting a second book.
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: Downplayed in Chapter 16. The reveal that [[spoiler: Parker was turned into a vampire]] happens at the end of the chapter, but the hints are dropped throughout the rest of the chapter, as opposed to just before the reveal.
** Parker is surprisingly hungry when they wake up at the start of the chapter, even after having breakfast.
** During the celebration, if Parker [[spoiler: drinks what's heavily implied to be vampire blood out of the goblet]], they will note that [[spoiler: it's the tastiest thing they've drank, even though they've tasted vampire blood before and it didn't taste nice to them]].
** [[spoiler: All of the humans' memories were erased, but Parker still remembers everything that happened]].
** Parker is surprisingly hungry when they wake up at the start of the chapter, even after having breakfast.
** During the celebration, if Parker [[spoiler: drinks what's heavily implied to be vampire blood out of the goblet]], they will note that [[spoiler: it's the tastiest thing they've drank, even though they've tasted vampire blood before and it didn't taste nice to them]].
** [[spoiler: All of the humans' memories were erased, but Parker still remembers everything that happened]].
