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* AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler:The game ends with aliens coming out of nowhere to invade the planet, with Loaf and a newly-reformed Ember readying themselves to protect their how.]]
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Dude at least TRY to use Alfie’s name. Nobody here can tell who the heck you’re talking about. And tbh you need to work on your Grammar skills because this is a LOT of cleanup that I have to do now for you.
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* AbusiveParents: Jester's father never really cared for him, if anything all he ever saw from him was a stain on the Ember Empire.
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* AbusiveParents: Jester's father never really cared for him, if anything all he and only ever saw from him was as a stain on the Ember Empire.
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* CharacterDevelopment: All Loaf's friends go through their own problems.
** Lint finds is reunited with his family and has confidence in himself and his skills as a writer.
** Yagi, who had been rivals with Kakoi, now is mature, and less impulsive and will work with Kakoi to make their own dojo.
** Chloe was never really taken seriously by her own parents, finally proves her potential to the family.
** Lint finds is reunited with his family and has confidence in himself and his skills as a writer.
** Yagi, who had been rivals with Kakoi, now is mature, and less impulsive and will work with Kakoi to make their own dojo.
** Chloe was never really taken seriously by her own parents, finally proves her potential to the family.
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* CharacterDevelopment: All Loaf's friends go through their own problems.
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**Lint finds is Lint, during his quest to be reunited with his family and has family, learns to find confidence in himself and his skills as a writer.
** Yagi, who had been fierce rivals with Kakoi,now is mature, learns to be more mature and less impulsive and will work with Kakoi to make their own dojo.
**Chloe was Chloe, who never really taken seriously by her own parents, finally proves her potential to the her family.
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** Yagi, who had been fierce rivals with Kakoi,
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* EnlightenmentSuperpowers: Not only is Yagi a master in kung fu, but he is also a great mediator, being able to materialize an Ethereal Lotus by meditating.
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* EnlightenmentSuperpowers: Not only is Yagi a master in kung fu, but he is also a great mediator, meditator, being able to materialize an Ethereal Lotus by meditating.
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** In more ways than one, Loaf and Jester aren’t so different. They both care about their own, the differences are that Loaf has Papa Baker as a loving father; [[spoiler:Jester's, on the other hand, was a jerk of a father who never cared for anyone but himself, and he never intended his son to survive the spell]].
** Yagi and Klein aren’t different as well. While both are the BloodKnight of their teams, Yagi is an honorable fighter, if a little touchy, while Klein prefers to just punch them.
** Yagi and Klein aren’t different as well. While both are the BloodKnight of their teams, Yagi is an honorable fighter, if a little touchy, while Klein prefers to just punch them.
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** In more ways than one, Loaf and Jester aren’t so different. They are this to each other. While both care about their own, the differences friends and both are that severly devoted to their fathers, Loaf has Papa Baker as a loving father; [[spoiler:Jester's, on the other hand, was a jerk of a father who never cared for anyone but himself, and he never intended for his son to survive the spell]].spell to revive the Ember Kingdom]].
** Yagi andKlein aren’t different as well.Klein. While both are the BloodKnight of their teams, Yagi is an honorable fighter, if a little touchy, while Klein prefers to just punch them.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: After realizing what would happen if they brought back the Ember kingdom, it may destroy the entire world. So she sided with Loaf and the others. Some time sooner, Sid, Io, and Klein join in to stop Jester. And soon Jester realizes the error of his ways]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: After realizing learning of what would happen if they brought back the Ember kingdom, it may Kingdom, Alfie realizes that Jester’s plan could destroy the entire world. So she sided world, and this causes her to side with Loaf and the others. others to stop him. Some time sooner, later, Sid, Io, and Klein also join in to stop Jester. And soon Jester, and eventually even Jester realizes the error of his ways]].
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* SacrificialRevivalSpell: [[spoiler:The spell to revive the lost civilization of Jester's people comes at a price. Said price is his own life. His father rewrote the book, as he never intended for his own son to survive]].
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* SacrificialRevivalSpell: [[spoiler:The spell to revive the lost civilization of Jester's people comes at a price. Said price is his price—his own life. His father rewrote the book, as he never intended for his own son to survive]].
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* SweetBaker: Papa Baker is the sweetest, and kindest chef you’ll ever meet. Plus he was kind enough to adopt his own creation, Loaf.
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* SweetBaker: Papa Baker is the sweetest, and kindest chef you’ll ever meet. Plus he meet and was kind enough more than happy to to adopt his own creation, Loaf.Loaf, as his son.
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* TwoGirlsToATeam: Eventually, [[spoiler: Alfie would join Loaf and his friends, so her]], and counting Chloe makes two.
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* TwoGirlsToATeam: Eventually, [[spoiler: Alfie would join Loaf and his friends, joins Loaf's team late into the game, making so her]], and counting the Chloe makes two.is no longer the only female in the group.]]
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* RedOniBlueOni: Yagi and Kakoi are this. Yagi is the hotheaded and impulsive red to Kakoi's calm and wise blue.
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* AbusiveParents: Jester's father never really cared for him, if anything all he ever saw from him was a stain on the Ember Empire.
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* TheShangriLa: Mount Lamasery is home not only to the llamas, but it’s also home to the monks who hold a tournament every year.
* TheThreeTrials: Before anyone fights in the arena, first they have to pass three trials that represent a different virtue, Sunny's challenge tests your agility, Zuzu's challenge tests your wit, and Shale's challenge tests your observation.
* TheThreeTrials: Before anyone fights in the arena, first they have to pass three trials that represent a different virtue, Sunny's challenge tests your agility, Zuzu's challenge tests your wit, and Shale's challenge tests your observation.
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* ElementalPowers: The elemental system includes [[PlayingWithFire Blaze]], [[AnIcePerson Snow]], [[GreenThumb Leaf]], [[SuperSmoke Ash]], [[BizarroElements Tasty]], [[PsychicPowers Mind]], [[{{Technopath}} Mech]], [[InfinityPlusOneElement Ember]], and [[NonElemental Normal]]
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* SkillScoresAndPerks: The guardian of the shrine needs Loaf's help to get her children (who have turned into salamanders) back. She only accepts them in two, but once you have them, she’ll return the favor by giving him skill points. They are used to unlock an attack for his friends.
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* SkillScoresAndPerks: The guardian of the shrine needs Loaf's help to get her children (who have turned into salamanders) back. She only accepts them in two, pairs, but once you have them, she’ll return the favor by giving him skill points. They are used to unlock an attack for his friends.
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* PlotTunnel: Once they embark on a ship for the final Sunstone shard, the party is trapped inside the Primordial Whale until the endgame. Subverted for Coldstock Manor; despite its curse being intended to cause this, the player can still leave at their leisure.
* PointOfNoReturn: Interacting with the airship engine locks the player in the final dungeon. There are no save points afterwards, but defeating the final boss marks a seal on your save file as proof of your victory.
* PointOfNoReturn: Interacting with the airship engine locks the player in the final dungeon. There are no save points afterwards, but defeating the final boss marks a seal on your save file as proof of your victory.
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* WombLevel: The latter half of chapter 4 takes place inside the Primordial Whale, an oddly biomechanical example.
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* TwoGirlsToATeam: Eventually, [[spoiler: Alfie would join Loaf and his friends, so her]], and counting Chloe makes two.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Number One. She spends the game hunting down and trying to [[DisproportionateRetribution kill]] Jester and his friends, constantly berates Loaf's party, and forcibly holds Royal Town's heroes' guild to her own standards. [[spoiler:She ends up falling out of grace with the public when Dub provides video evidence of her assaulting noncombatants and other heroes. During the ending sequence, the other heroes of the guild note how peaceful everything is now that she's gone.]]
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* PeopleJars: Before the explosion wiped out the whole Ember Empire, Jester and his friends were put in a stasis pod. They wouldn’t be released till it was opened up by three curious professors.
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* SkillScoresAndPerks: The guardian of the shrine needs Loaf's help to get her children (who have turned into salamanders) back. She only accepts them in two, but once you have them, she’ll return the favor by giving him skill points. They are used to unlock an attack for his friends.
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* CharacterDevelopment: All Loaf's friends go through their own problems.
** Lint finds is reunited with his family and has confidence in himself and his skills as a writer.
** Yagi, who had been rivals with Kakoi, now is mature, and less impulsive and will work with Kakoi to make their own dojo.
** Chloe was never really taken seriously by her own parents, finally proves her potential to the family.
** Lint finds is reunited with his family and has confidence in himself and his skills as a writer.
** Yagi, who had been rivals with Kakoi, now is mature, and less impulsive and will work with Kakoi to make their own dojo.
** Chloe was never really taken seriously by her own parents, finally proves her potential to the family.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: After realizing what would happen if they brought back the Ember kingdom, it may destroy the entire world. So she sided with Loaf and the others. Some time sooner, Sid, Io, and Klein join in to stop Jester. And soon Jester realizes the error of his ways]].
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Loaf is Sanguine, Lint is
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* BrokenBridge: PlayedForLaughs when a bridge breaks behind a tour bus the party is chasing.
-->'''Yagi:''' The bridge!
-->'''Loaf:''' That felt intentional...
-->'''Yagi:''' Yeah! [[LampshadeHanging What were the odds the bridge would collapse just now?]]
-->'''Yagi:''' The bridge!
-->'''Loaf:''' That felt intentional...
-->'''Yagi:''' Yeah! [[LampshadeHanging What were the odds the bridge would collapse just now?]]
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* FiveTemperamentEnsemble: Loaf is Sanguine, Lint is Phlegmatic, Yagi is Choleric, Chloe is Melancholic, and Dub is Eclectic.
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* {{Cyclops}}: Alfie, one of Jester's friends, has one red eye.
