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* CreatorsFavorite: Mephisto is Taxerfoxx' favourite villain.
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* SeriesHiatus: The Archive of our own version went on a small hiatus after the ''Restless'' arc, as the author wanted to catch up on side-stories and spinoffs.
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* CreatorsFavoriteEpisode: The Monsterlands arc is Takerfoxx' second favourite arc.
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* GeorgeLucasAlteredVersion: The Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn version has numerous changes, ranging from removing {{Old Shame}}s to adding to or changing scenes that he found unsatisfactory in the original.
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* DiagnosisOfGod: [[https://takerfoxx.tumblr.com/post/670588759578935296/you-know-all-those-your-fave-is-x According to a post on his tumblr]], [=TakerFoxx=] writes Charlotte as autistic. [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/723234337974337536/is-charlotte-tomoe-diagnosed-as-autistic-in?source=share She is not diagnosed as such in-universe in Resonance Days, but is so in Walpurgis Nights.]]
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* DiagnosisOfGod: [[https://takerfoxx.tumblr.com/post/670588759578935296/you-know-all-those-your-fave-is-x According to a post on his tumblr]], [=TakerFoxx=] writes Charlotte as autistic. This is partially shown [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/724398465858338816/if-you-were-to-go-back-and-change-a-resonance-days via her interest in learning about things, in particular that of alien worlds]]. [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/723234337974337536/is-charlotte-tomoe-diagnosed-as-autistic-in?source=share She is not diagnosed as such in-universe in Resonance Days, but is so in Walpurgis Nights.]]
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* CreatorBacklash : In the [=AO3=] version of chapter 3, [=TakerFoxx=] admits that the constant incest jokes with Nie and Arzt are "pretty off-putting", and clarifies that they are not actual siblings, but incest jokes were very popular in the community they frequented, so it seemed funny at the time. Occasional lines from the ffn version are entirely absent from the [=ao3=] version for this reason.
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** In the [=AO3=] version of chapter 3, [=TakerFoxx=] admits that the constant incest jokes with Nie and Arzt are "pretty off-putting", and clarifies that they are not actual siblings, but incest jokes were very popular in the community they frequented, so it seemed funny at the time.
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** In the [=AO3=] version of chapter 3, [=TakerFoxx=] admits that the constant incest jokes with Nie and Arzt are "pretty off-putting", and clarifies that they are not actual siblings, but incest jokes were very popular in the community they frequented, so it seemed funny at the time.
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* CreatorsFavoriteEpisode: The Monsterlands arc is Takerfoxx' second favourite arc.
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** In the [=AO3=] version of chapter 3, [=TakerFoxx=] admits that the constant incest jokes with Nie and Arzt are "pretty off-putting", and clarifies that they are not actual siblings, but incest jokes were very popular in the community they frequented, so it seemed funny at thetime.time.
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** Mundy the vaskergoros was originally going to be a TokenHeroicOrc dockengaut.
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* DiagnosisOfGod: [[https://takerfoxx.tumblr.com/post/670588759578935296/you-know-all-those-your-fave-is-x According to a post on his tumblr]], [=TakerFoxx=] writes Charlotte as autistic. [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/723234337974337536/is-charlotte-tomoe-diagnosed-as-autistic-in?source=share She is not diagnosed as such in Resonance Days, but is so in Walpurgis Nights.]]
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* DiagnosisOfGod: [[https://takerfoxx.tumblr.com/post/670588759578935296/you-know-all-those-your-fave-is-x According to a post on his tumblr]], [=TakerFoxx=] writes Charlotte as autistic. [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/723234337974337536/is-charlotte-tomoe-diagnosed-as-autistic-in?source=share She is not diagnosed as such in-universe in Resonance Days, but is so in Walpurgis Nights.]]
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* DiagnosisOfGod: [[https://takerfoxx.tumblr.com/post/670588759578935296/you-know-all-those-your-fave-is-x According to a post on his tumblr]], [=TakerFoxx=] writes Charlotte as autistic.
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* DiagnosisOfGod: [[https://takerfoxx.tumblr.com/post/670588759578935296/you-know-all-those-your-fave-is-x According to a post on his tumblr]], [=TakerFoxx=] writes Charlotte as autistic. [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/723234337974337536/is-charlotte-tomoe-diagnosed-as-autistic-in?source=share She is not diagnosed as such in Resonance Days, but is so in Walpurgis Nights.]]
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* WordOfGay: In ''First Time'', Taker states that Natsuru's gender was a result of being stuck like this upon arriving in the afterlife and rolling with it. Later comments establishes that she is definitely a transgender woman.
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** [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/717510817241792512/so-if-homura-and-by-that-i-mean-the-homura-of If Homura in the current timeline witched out]], the resulting Homulilly would come out differently than the one seen in 'Walpurgis Nights'. Instead of being a ShrinkingViolet, she would be calm and reserved and a borderline wet blanket with a low tolerance for foolishness, but she'd also have a lot fewer of the hang-ups she has as Homura at the current timeline. The presence of either Madoka or Gretchen would also greatly affect how she comes out and develops.
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** Any timeline [[spoiler:where Madoka dies or becomes a witch is shortly after reset by Homura, and since Homura's wish was to protect Madoka, her shades from those previous timelines are pulled back to life and added to the "current" Madoka. As such, Reibey has no shades of Madoka in his ziggurat]].
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** Any timeline [[spoiler:where Madoka dies or becomes a witch is shortly after reset by Homura, and since Homura's wish was to protect Madoka, her shades from those previous timelines are pulled back to life and added to the "current" Madoka. As such, Reibey has no shades of Madoka in his ziggurat]].ziggurat]].
** [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/719528080999432192/was-the-whole-magical-girl-and-witch-who-arrive The connection that forms between Magical Girls and Witches who die together is a]][[GoodBadBugs bug that became a staple feature of the afterlife.]]
** [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/719528080999432192/was-the-whole-magical-girl-and-witch-who-arrive The connection that forms between Magical Girls and Witches who die together is a]][[GoodBadBugs bug that became a staple feature of the afterlife.]]
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Why? Old Shame is about the author being ashamed of something they did in the past, Why
* OldShame: In the [=AO3=] version of chapter 3, [=TakerFoxx=] admits that the constant incest jokes with Nie and Arzt are "pretty off-putting", and clarifies that they are not actual siblings, but incest jokes were very popular in the community they frequented, so it seemed funny at the time.
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* WhyTheFandomCantHaveNiceThings: In the [=AO3=] version of chapter 3, [=TakerFoxx=] admits that the constant incest jokes with Nie and Arzt are "pretty off-putting", and clarifies that they are not actual siblings, but incest jokes were very popular in the community they frequented, so it seemed funny at the time.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: There had been some ideas of having the Walpurgisnacht quartet of Walpurgis Nights: Oktavia, Ophelia, Charlotte, and Candeloro, be a polycule, but the idea was ultimate not followed through on, though the idea apparently was considered ''in-universe''.
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** The first friendly witch Kyoko and Oktavia encountered was originally going to be Patricia, the class representative witch, who would be running an orphanage on a ship wreck. This was deemed too big of a concept to introduce that early on, so she was replaced with Elsa Maria. Patricia and her orphanage would return later on in the Etherdale arc.
** There had been some ideas of having the Walpurgisnacht quartet of Walpurgis Nights: Oktavia, Ophelia, Charlotte, and Candeloro, be a polycule, but the idea was ultimate not followed through on, though the idea apparently was considered ''in-universe''.
** The first friendly witch Kyoko and Oktavia encountered was originally going to be Patricia, the class representative witch, who would be running an orphanage on a ship wreck. This was deemed too big of a concept to introduce that early on, so she was replaced with Elsa Maria. Patricia and her orphanage would return later on in the Etherdale arc.
** There had been some ideas of having the Walpurgisnacht quartet of Walpurgis Nights: Oktavia, Ophelia, Charlotte, and Candeloro, be a polycule, but the idea was ultimate not followed through on, though the idea apparently was considered ''in-universe''.
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* WordOfGod: [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/715517959802617856/is-it-a-spoiler-to-ask-how-long-have-the-afterlife Taker]] has confirmed that the CreationMyth recounted by Elsa Maria in chapter 3 is more or less accurate, and that the girl who wished the afterlife into existence lived in the Mesolithic era.
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** [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/715517959802617856/is-it-a-spoiler-to-ask-how-long-have-the-afterlife Taker]] has confirmed that the CreationMyth recounted by Elsa Maria in chapter 3 is more or less accurate, and that the girl who wished the afterlife into existence lived in the Mesolithicera.era.
** Any timeline [[spoiler:where Madoka dies or becomes a witch is shortly after reset by Homura, and since Homura's wish was to protect Madoka, her shades from those previous timelines are pulled back to life and added to the "current" Madoka. As such, Reibey has no shades of Madoka in his ziggurat]].
** [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/715517959802617856/is-it-a-spoiler-to-ask-how-long-have-the-afterlife Taker]] has confirmed that the CreationMyth recounted by Elsa Maria in chapter 3 is more or less accurate, and that the girl who wished the afterlife into existence lived in the Mesolithic
** Any timeline [[spoiler:where Madoka dies or becomes a witch is shortly after reset by Homura, and since Homura's wish was to protect Madoka, her shades from those previous timelines are pulled back to life and added to the "current" Madoka. As such, Reibey has no shades of Madoka in his ziggurat]].
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* DiagnosisOfGod: [[https://archiveofourown.org/comments/644552677 According to a comment response]], [=TakerFoxx=] writes Charlotte as autistic.
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* DiagnosisOfGod: [[https://archiveofourown.org/comments/644552677 [[https://takerfoxx.tumblr.com/post/670588759578935296/you-know-all-those-your-fave-is-x According to a comment response]], post on his tumblr]], [=TakerFoxx=] writes Charlotte as autistic.
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* DiagnosisOfGod: [[https://archiveofourown.org/comments/644552677 According to a comment response]], [=TakerFoxx=] writes Charlotte as autistic.
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** Charlotte the Sweets Witch in the story is assumed to have originally been a magical girl with hot pink hair of Mami's age, and the two are in a romantic relationship. ''Rebellion'' introduces Charlotte's canonical original self, Nagisa Momoe, who is a white-haired little girl who's relationship to Mami is much more like a little sister or daughter. In this case, it's probably for the best since including Nagisa would mean changing large parts of the story, not to mention Mami's character, entirely.
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** Charlotte the Sweets Witch in the story is assumed to have originally been a magical girl with hot pink hair of Mami's age, and the two are in a romantic relationship. ''Rebellion'' introduces Charlotte's canonical original self, Nagisa Momoe, who is a white-haired little girl who's relationship to Mami is much more like a little sister or daughter. In this case, it's probably for the best since including Nagisa would mean changing large parts of the story, not to mention Mami's character, entirely.entirely.
* WordOfGod: [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/715517959802617856/is-it-a-spoiler-to-ask-how-long-have-the-afterlife Taker]] has confirmed that the CreationMyth recounted by Elsa Maria in chapter 3 is more or less accurate, and that the girl who wished the afterlife into existence lived in the Mesolithic era.
* WordOfGod: [[https://www.tumblr.com/takerfoxx/715517959802617856/is-it-a-spoiler-to-ask-how-long-have-the-afterlife Taker]] has confirmed that the CreationMyth recounted by Elsa Maria in chapter 3 is more or less accurate, and that the girl who wished the afterlife into existence lived in the Mesolithic era.
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* OldShame: In the [=AO3=] version of chapter 3, [=TakerFoxx=] admits that the constant incest jokes with Nie and Arzt are "pretty off-putting", and clarifies that they are not actual siblings, but incest jokes were very popular in the community they frequented, so it seemed funny at the time.
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* OldShame: In the [=AO3=] version of chapter 3, [=TakerFoxx=] admits that the constant incest jokes with Nie and Arzt are "pretty off-putting", and clarifies that they are not actual siblings, but incest jokes were very popular in the community they frequented, so it seemed funny at the time.time.
* OutdatedByCanon: The original premise of the fic was set down at a time when the fandom only had the original anime and the ''Kazumi Magica'' manga to go on for source material, so it makes a fair bit of assumptions that would be disproven by later mangas, games, and the ''Rebellion'' movie. This is not necesarrily a bad thing, as the fic has since then taken on its own identity entirely sepparate from those sources, while incorprorating what is appropriate.
** When the character of Reibey was created, the only known incubators were Kyubey and Jubey from ''Kazumi Magica''. Since these appear to act as sepparate individuals, it was assumed that Incubators were all individuals with the [[PlanetOfHats racial hat]] of being emotionless {{Manipulative Bastard}}s. As such, Reibey is noted to be unusual for his emotions, but not for his individuality, and other incubators than Kyubey are mentioned. ''Rebellion'' would firmly establish that Incubators are a HiveMind that ''all'' identify as Kyubey, with Jubey being a RogueDrone.
** Charlotte the Sweets Witch in the story is assumed to have originally been a magical girl with hot pink hair of Mami's age, and the two are in a romantic relationship. ''Rebellion'' introduces Charlotte's canonical original self, Nagisa Momoe, who is a white-haired little girl who's relationship to Mami is much more like a little sister or daughter. In this case, it's probably for the best since including Nagisa would mean changing large parts of the story, not to mention Mami's character, entirely.
* OutdatedByCanon: The original premise of the fic was set down at a time when the fandom only had the original anime and the ''Kazumi Magica'' manga to go on for source material, so it makes a fair bit of assumptions that would be disproven by later mangas, games, and the ''Rebellion'' movie. This is not necesarrily a bad thing, as the fic has since then taken on its own identity entirely sepparate from those sources, while incorprorating what is appropriate.
** When the character of Reibey was created, the only known incubators were Kyubey and Jubey from ''Kazumi Magica''. Since these appear to act as sepparate individuals, it was assumed that Incubators were all individuals with the [[PlanetOfHats racial hat]] of being emotionless {{Manipulative Bastard}}s. As such, Reibey is noted to be unusual for his emotions, but not for his individuality, and other incubators than Kyubey are mentioned. ''Rebellion'' would firmly establish that Incubators are a HiveMind that ''all'' identify as Kyubey, with Jubey being a RogueDrone.
** Charlotte the Sweets Witch in the story is assumed to have originally been a magical girl with hot pink hair of Mami's age, and the two are in a romantic relationship. ''Rebellion'' introduces Charlotte's canonical original self, Nagisa Momoe, who is a white-haired little girl who's relationship to Mami is much more like a little sister or daughter. In this case, it's probably for the best since including Nagisa would mean changing large parts of the story, not to mention Mami's character, entirely.
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* FandomNod: Some readers on the Spacebattles thread wanted to know how Oktavia, being a mermaid, pooped. They got their answer in chapter 6.
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* FandomNod: Some readers on the Spacebattles thread wanted to know how Oktavia, being a mermaid, pooped. They got their answer in chapter 6.6.
* OldShame: In the [=AO3=] version of chapter 3, [=TakerFoxx=] admits that the constant incest jokes with Nie and Arzt are "pretty off-putting", and clarifies that they are not actual siblings, but incest jokes were very popular in the community they frequented, so it seemed funny at the time.
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* AscendedFanon: ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion'' had Charlotte's original human self, Nagisa Momoe, introduced... as TrueCompanions with Mami Tomoe.
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** ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion'' had Charlotte's original human self, Nagisa Momoe, introduced... as TrueCompanions with MamiTomoe.Tomoe.
** A fan, [[{{Omake}} for fun]], offered a [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/resonance-days-puella-magi-madoka-magicka.219803/page-16#post-9537148 collection of flavor]] [[FictionalDocument texts]] for Afterlife articles and books. The author's response? "Holy freaking wow. Okay, yeah, a lot of this is now canon."
** ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion'' had Charlotte's original human self, Nagisa Momoe, introduced... as TrueCompanions with Mami
** A fan, [[{{Omake}} for fun]], offered a [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/resonance-days-puella-magi-madoka-magicka.219803/page-16#post-9537148 collection of flavor]] [[FictionalDocument texts]] for Afterlife articles and books. The author's response? "Holy freaking wow. Okay, yeah, a lot of this is now canon."
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* FandomNod: Some readers on the Spacebattles thread wanted to know how Oktavia, being a mermaid, pooped. They got their answer in chapter 6.
* FandomNod: Some readers on the Spacebattles thread wanted to know how Oktavia, being a mermaid, pooped. They got their answer in chapter 6.
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