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** Part of the reason why Julius fell in LoveAtFirstPunch was because the only other woman who'd ever slapped him… was his mother. Olivia/Marie's lines during that game-based encounter… are also scolding him just like his mother does.
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** Part of the reason why Julius fell in LoveAtFirstPunch was because the only other woman who'd ever slapped him… him was his mother. Olivia/Marie's lines during that game-based encounter… encounter are also scolding him just like his mother does.
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* OffTheRails: {{Justified|Trope}}. All told, a total of three people from modern-day Japan [[ReincarnateInAnotherWorld reincarnated as background characters in the setting]] of a ScienceFantasy otome game series, and used their [[PastLifeMemories out-of-game knowledge]] to their advantage: Leon hijacked the spawn point for the first game's {{microtransaction}} store to get a noble title in his own right and avoid the ArrangedMarriage from Hell, Marie usurped the role of the first game's protagonist Olivia to pursue the ReverseHarem route in hopes of an easy life, and Lelia did similar things in the Alzer Republic of the second game. The problem is, [[InUniverseFactoidFailure none of these characters actually have complete knowledge of the game world]] (Leon is the only one of the three to actually beat one of the games himself; the other two just watched the cutscenes online), and [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome real people react differently than video game characters following a script]]. This means that [[ButterflyOfDoom their interference]] and [[GambitPileup competing gambits]] gradually tie the storylines of the games in knots: they end up having to beat the final boss of the third game in the first game's timeframe, and by the time the third StoryArc comes around, none of them have any idea what's going on anymore.
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* OffTheRails: {{Justified|Trope}}. All told, a total of three people from modern-day Japan [[ReincarnateInAnotherWorld reincarnated as background characters in the setting]] of a ScienceFantasy otome game series, and used their [[PastLifeMemories out-of-game knowledge]] to their advantage: Leon hijacked the spawn point for the first game's {{microtransaction}} store to get a noble title in his own right and avoid the ArrangedMarriage from Hell, Marie usurped the role of the first game's protagonist Olivia to pursue the ReverseHarem route in hopes of an easy life, and Lelia did similar things in the Alzer Republic of the second game. The problem is, [[InUniverseFactoidFailure none of these characters actually have complete knowledge of the game world]] (Leon is the only one of the three to actually beat one of the games himself; himself and died before the other two came out, while Marie and Lelia just watched the cutscenes online), and read online walkthroughs), and [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome real people react differently than video game characters following a script]]. This means that [[ButterflyOfDoom their interference]] and [[GambitPileup competing gambits]] gradually tie the storylines of the games in knots: they end up having to beat the final boss of the third game in the first game's timeframe, and by the time the third StoryArc comes around, none of them have any idea what's going on anymore.
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* OffTheRails: {{Justified|Trope}}. All told, a total of three people from modern-day Japan [[ReincarnateInAnotherWorld reincarnated as background characters in the setting]] of a ScienceFantasy otome game series, and used their [[PastLifeMemories out-of-game knowledge]] to their advantage: Leon hijacked the spawn point for the first game's {{microtransaction}} store to get a noble title in his own right and avoid the ArrangedMarriage from Hell, Marie usurped the role of the first game's protagonist Olivia to pursue the ReverseHarem route in hopes of an easy life, and Lelia did similar things in the Alzer Republic of the second game. The problem is, [[InUniverseFactoidFailure none of these characters actually have complete knowledge of the game world]] (Leon is the only one of the three to actually beat one of the games himself; the other two just watched the cutscenes online), and [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome real people react differently than video game characters following a script]]. This means that [[ButterflyOfDoom their interference]] and [[GambitPileup competing gambits]] gradually tie the storylines of the games in knots: they end up having to beat the final boss of the third game in the first game's timeframe, and by the time the third StoryArc comes around, none of them have any idea what's going on anymore.
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* LikeParentLikeSpouse: Angelica's father is a greatly accomplished adventurer, with a blunt manner, who isn't afraid to get in the thick of battle, and is ruthless to those who cross him. So it makes sense that she already has a strong admiration [[spoiler:for Leon before getting involved with him.]]
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** Angelica's father is a greatly accomplished adventurer, with a blunt manner, who isn't afraid to get in the thick of battle, and is ruthless to those who cross him. So it makes sense that she already has a strong admiration [[spoiler:for Leon before getting involved with him.]]]]
** Part of the reason why Julius fell in LoveAtFirstPunch was because the only other woman who'd ever slapped him… was his mother. Olivia/Marie's lines during that game-based encounter… are also scolding him just like his mother does.
** Angelica's father is a greatly accomplished adventurer, with a blunt manner, who isn't afraid to get in the thick of battle, and is ruthless to those who cross him. So it makes sense that she already has a strong admiration [[spoiler:for Leon before getting involved with him.
** Part of the reason why Julius fell in LoveAtFirstPunch was because the only other woman who'd ever slapped him… was his mother. Olivia/Marie's lines during that game-based encounter… are also scolding him just like his mother does.
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* OedipusComplex: Part of the reason why Julius fell in LoveAtFirstPunch was because the only other woman who'd ever slapped him… was his mother. Olivia/Marie's lines during that game-based encounter… are also scolding him just like his mother does.
