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** Cathy and the black cat slow dance in one of their homes to Bing Crosy's Let Me Call You Sweetheart. Before he pulls her into a hug and kisses the top of her head.
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** Cathy and the black cat slow dance in one of their homes to Bing Crosy's Let Crosby's "Let Me Call You Sweetheart.Sweetheart". Before he pulls her into a hug and kisses the top of her head.
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** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears onto her map. After a bit she gets out her phone and leaves the car. She walks to the gas station as she dials 911, not answering the call afterward.
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** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears onto her map. After a bit she gets out her phone and leaves the car. She walks to the gas station as she dials 911, not answering the call afterward.afterward.
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** She walks through the cold and up to the gas station before grabbing a jerry can to fill with fuel. She begins to fill it up, but as she finishes the cashier comes out to collect pay. She attemots to run for it but is caught, and the two enter a struggle for the gas. (Second flashback of her and the black cat roller skating)
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** She walks through the cold and up to the gas station before grabbing a jerry can to fill with fuel. She begins to fill it up, but as she finishes the cashier comes out to collect pay. She attemots attempts to run for it but is caught, and the two enter a struggle for the gas. (Second flashback of her and the black cat roller skating)
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** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks around, she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it for the jerry can. Having acquired the jerry can, she runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. However, she finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it. She comes to the realization that her had become a murderer as well, same as the one who ruined her life. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fifth flashback showing her PointOfView of the black cat's face as they walked, skated and danced. And while he's reading in bed. The last when the black cat died)
** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears ont her map. After a bit she gets out her phone and leaves the car. She walks to the gas station as she dials 911, not answering the call afterward.
** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears ont her map. After a bit she gets out her phone and leaves the car. She walks to the gas station as she dials 911, not answering the call afterward.
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** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks around, she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it for the jerry can. Having acquired the jerry can, she runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. However, she finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it. She comes to the realization that her she had become a murderer as well, same as just like the one who ruined her life.person she lived to get revenge on. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fifth flashback showing her PointOfView of the black cat's face as they walked, skated and danced. And while he's reading in bed. The last when the black cat died)
** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tearsont onto her map. After a bit she gets out her phone and leaves the car. She walks to the gas station as she dials 911, not answering the call afterward.
** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears
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** The black cat is murdered by a Doberman Pinscher who intended to rob the place. It is left unsaid if the robber killed him because he wanted to, because the black cat retaliated, or if he defended Cathy. But since Cathy doesn't show much guilt for his deaht, she most likely didn't have to be defended.
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** The black cat is murdered by a Doberman Pinscher who intended to rob the place. It is left unsaid if the robber killed him because he wanted to, because the black cat retaliated, or if he defended Cathy. But since Cathy doesn't show much guilt for his deaht, death, she most likely didn't have to be defended.
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** The black cat is murdered by a Doberman Pinscher who intended to rob the place. It is left unsaid if the robber killed him because he wanted to, because the black cat retaliated, or if he defended Cathy.
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** The black cat is murdered by a Doberman Pinscher who intended to rob the place. It is left unsaid if the robber killed him because he wanted to, because the black cat retaliated, or if he defended Cathy. But since Cathy doesn't show much guilt for his deaht, she most likely didn't have to be defended.
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** Cathy and the black cat go on a date at Stardust Skating. But her inner CuteClumsyGirl is demonstrated again as she struggles for balance, grabbing onto her PrinceCharming for stability. He laughs at her as he better grabs bother of her hands.
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** Cathy and the black cat go on a date at Stardust Skating. But her inner CuteClumsyGirl is demonstrated again as she struggles for balance, grabbing onto her PrinceCharming for stability. He laughs at her as he better grabs bother both of her hands.
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** The black cat is murdered by a Boberman Pinscher who intended to rob the place. It is left unsaid if the robber killed him because he wanted to, because the black cat retaliated, or if he defended Cathy.
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** The black cat is murdered by a Boberman Doberman Pinscher who intended to rob the place. It is left unsaid if the robber killed him because he wanted to, because the black cat retaliated, or if he defended Cathy.
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** Cathy exits the bus and almost falls victim to a stair StaircaseTumble, showing that she's a CuteClumsyGirl. But a PrettyBoy black cat catches her by the hand, sparing her quite the GrandStaircaseEntrance before giving her a smile.
** Cathy and the black go on a date at Stardust Skating. But her inner CuteClumsyGirl is demonstrated again as she struggles for balance, grabbing onto her PrinceCharming for stability. He laughs at her as he better stabilizes her.
** Cathy and the black go on a date at Stardust Skating. But her inner CuteClumsyGirl is demonstrated again as she struggles for balance, grabbing onto her PrinceCharming for stability. He laughs at her as he better stabilizes her.
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** Cathy exits the bus and almost falls victim to a stair StaircaseTumble, showing that she's a CuteClumsyGirl. But a PrettyBoy black cat catches her by the hand, sparing her quite the GrandStaircaseEntrance before giving her a smile.
** Cathy and the black cat go on a date at Stardust Skating. But her inner CuteClumsyGirl is demonstrated again as she struggles for balance, grabbing onto her PrinceCharming for stability. He laughs at her as he betterstabilizes her.grabs bother of her hands.
** Cathy and the black cat go on a date at Stardust Skating. But her inner CuteClumsyGirl is demonstrated again as she struggles for balance, grabbing onto her PrinceCharming for stability. He laughs at her as he better
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PAGE IS A WORK IN PROGRESS
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** The black cat stays up reading while Cathy sleeps soundly in their bed. He looks at her before he turns out the light, puts the book away, and goes to bed as well.
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** The black cat stays up reading while Cathy sleeps soundly in their bed. He looks at her before he gives her another kiss on the head, turns out the light, puts the book away, and goes to bed as well.
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** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks around, she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it for the jerry can. Having acquired the jerry can, she runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. However, she finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it. She comes to the realization that her had become a murdere as well, the same as the one who ruined her life. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fifth flashback showing her PointOfView of the black cat's face as they walked, skated and danced. And while he's reading in bed. The last when the black cat died)
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** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks around, she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it for the jerry can. Having acquired the jerry can, she runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. However, she finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it. She comes to the realization that her had become a murdere murderer as well, the same as the one who ruined her life. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fifth flashback showing her PointOfView of the black cat's face as they walked, skated and danced. And while he's reading in bed. The last when the black cat died)
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** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks around, she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it for the jerry can. Having acquired the jerry can, she runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. However, she finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it. She comes to the realization that her had become a murdere as well, the same as the one who ruined her life. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fifth flashback showing her PoV of the black cat's face as they walked, skated and danced. And while he's reading in bed. The last is her PoV of when the black cat died)
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** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks around, she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it for the jerry can. Having acquired the jerry can, she runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. However, she finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it. She comes to the realization that her had become a murdere as well, the same as the one who ruined her life. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fifth flashback showing her PoV PointOfView of the black cat's face as they walked, skated and danced. And while he's reading in bed. The last is her PoV of when the black cat died)
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** Cathy is cauight by the black cat from falling down the steps of the bus.
** Cathy and the black go on a date at a roller skating rink.
** Cathy and the black cat slow dance in one of their homes to Bing Crosy's Let Me Call You Sweetheart.
** The black cat stays up reading while Cathy sleeps soundly. He looks at her and turns out the light, puts the book away and goes to bed as well.
** The black cat is murdered by a Boberman Pinscher who intended to rob the place
** Cathy and the black go on a date at a roller skating rink.
** Cathy and the black cat slow dance in one of their homes to Bing Crosy's Let Me Call You Sweetheart.
** The black cat stays up reading while Cathy sleeps soundly. He looks at her and turns out the light, puts the book away and goes to bed as well.
** The black cat is murdered by a Boberman Pinscher who intended to rob the place
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** Cathy is cauight by exits the bus and almost falls victim to a stair StaircaseTumble, showing that she's a CuteClumsyGirl. But a PrettyBoy black cat from falling down catches her by the steps of hand, sparing her quite the bus.
GrandStaircaseEntrance before giving her a smile.
** Cathy and the black go on a date ata roller skating rink.
Stardust Skating. But her inner CuteClumsyGirl is demonstrated again as she struggles for balance, grabbing onto her PrinceCharming for stability. He laughs at her as he better stabilizes her.
** Cathy and the black cat slow dance in one of their homes to Bing Crosy's Let Me Call YouSweetheart.
Sweetheart. Before he pulls her into a hug and kisses the top of her head.
** The black cat stays up reading while Cathy sleepssoundly. soundly in their bed. He looks at her and before he turns out the light, puts the book away away, and goes to bed as well.
** The black cat is murdered by a Boberman Pinscher who intended to rob theplaceplace. It is left unsaid if the robber killed him because he wanted to, because the black cat retaliated, or if he defended Cathy.
** Cathy and the black go on a date at
** Cathy and the black cat slow dance in one of their homes to Bing Crosy's Let Me Call You
** The black cat stays up reading while Cathy sleeps
** The black cat is murdered by a Boberman Pinscher who intended to rob the
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** She walks through the cold and up to the gas station before grabbing a jerry can to fill with fuel. She begins to fill it up, but as she finishes the cashier comes out to collect pay. Cathy tries to run for it but is caught, and the enter a struggle for the gas. (Second flashback of her and the black cat roller skating)
** She's kicked back onto a metal shelf. She relates the image of the cashier calling 911 to the image of the Doberman murderer leaving her husband's body. She picks up a motor oil bottle and smashes it before charging at the cashier, attempting to stabing him with the glass. The cashier, out of shock, drops his burning cigarette into the spilled gasoline. Causing the gas pumps to explode and sending it all into inferno. (Third flashback when the black cat stayed up reading in their bed)
** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks over she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it and goes for the jerry can. She runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. She finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fourth flashback showing when the black cat died)
** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears ont her map. After a bit she bits out her phone and leaves the car. As she walks to the gas station calling 911
** She's kicked back onto a metal shelf. She relates the image of the cashier calling 911 to the image of the Doberman murderer leaving her husband's body. She picks up a motor oil bottle and smashes it before charging at the cashier, attempting to stabing him with the glass. The cashier, out of shock, drops his burning cigarette into the spilled gasoline. Causing the gas pumps to explode and sending it all into inferno. (Third flashback when the black cat stayed up reading in their bed)
** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks over she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it and goes for the jerry can. She runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. She finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fourth flashback showing when the black cat died)
** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears ont her map. After a bit she bits out her phone and leaves the car. As she walks to the gas station calling 911
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** She walks through the cold and up to the gas station before grabbing a jerry can to fill with fuel. She begins to fill it up, but as she finishes the cashier comes out to collect pay. Cathy tries She attemots to run for it but is caught, and the two enter a struggle for the gas. (Second flashback of her and the black cat roller skating)
** She's kicked back onto a metal shelf.She (Third flashback of her and the black cat dancing)
** Cathy relates the image of the cashier calling 911 to the image of the Doberman murderer leaving her husband's body. She picks up a motor oil bottle and smashes it before charging at the cashier, attempting to stabing him with the glass. The cashier, out of shock, drops his burning cigarette into the spilled gasoline. Causing the gas pumps to explode and sending it all into inferno.(Third (Fourth flashback when the black cat stayed up reading in their bed)
** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looksover around, she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it and goes for the jerry can. She Having acquired the jerry can, she runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. She However, she finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it.it. She comes to the realization that her had become a murdere as well, the same as the one who ruined her life. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fourth (Fifth flashback showing her PoV of the black cat's face as they walked, skated and danced. And while he's reading in bed. The last is her PoV of when the black cat died)
** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears ont her map. After a bit shebits gets out her phone and leaves the car. As she She walks to the gas station calling 911as she dials 911, not answering the call afterward.
** She's kicked back onto a metal shelf.
** Cathy relates the image of the cashier calling 911 to the image of the Doberman murderer leaving her husband's body. She picks up a motor oil bottle and smashes it before charging at the cashier, attempting to stabing him with the glass. The cashier, out of shock, drops his burning cigarette into the spilled gasoline. Causing the gas pumps to explode and sending it all into inferno.
** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks
** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears ont her map. After a bit she
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PAGE IS A WORK IN PROGRESSPROGRESS
This work has flashbacks that take place before the murder, these events will be called 'pre-murder' and 'post-murder'respectively.
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!!Events in chonological order:
*Pre-Murder Events
** Cathy is cauight by the black cat from falling down the steps of the bus.
** Cathy and the black go on a date at a roller skating rink.
** Cathy and the black cat slow dance in one of their homes to Bing Crosy's Let Me Call You Sweetheart.
** The black cat stays up reading while Cathy sleeps soundly. He looks at her and turns out the light, puts the book away and goes to bed as well.
** The black cat is murdered by a Boberman Pinscher who intended to rob the place
*Post-Murder Events
** Cathy drives through the forest, but is stranded when she runs out of gas. She checks the map and finds a nearby gas station. However, she finds she has no money to pay with, nevertheless, she exits her car.(First flashback to when she exits the bus)
** She walks through the cold and up to the gas station before grabbing a jerry can to fill with fuel. She begins to fill it up, but as she finishes the cashier comes out to collect pay. Cathy tries to run for it but is caught, and the enter a struggle for the gas. (Second flashback of her and the black cat roller skating)
** She's kicked back onto a metal shelf. She relates the image of the cashier calling 911 to the image of the Doberman murderer leaving her husband's body. She picks up a motor oil bottle and smashes it before charging at the cashier, attempting to stabing him with the glass. The cashier, out of shock, drops his burning cigarette into the spilled gasoline. Causing the gas pumps to explode and sending it all into inferno. (Third flashback when the black cat stayed up reading in their bed)
** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks over she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it and goes for the jerry can. She runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. She finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fourth flashback showing when the black cat died)
** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears ont her map. After a bit she bits out her phone and leaves the car. As she walks to the gas station calling 911
This work has flashbacks that take place before the murder, these events will be called 'pre-murder' and 'post-murder'respectively.
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!!Events in chonological order:
*Pre-Murder Events
** Cathy is cauight by the black cat from falling down the steps of the bus.
** Cathy and the black go on a date at a roller skating rink.
** Cathy and the black cat slow dance in one of their homes to Bing Crosy's Let Me Call You Sweetheart.
** The black cat stays up reading while Cathy sleeps soundly. He looks at her and turns out the light, puts the book away and goes to bed as well.
** The black cat is murdered by a Boberman Pinscher who intended to rob the place
*Post-Murder Events
** Cathy drives through the forest, but is stranded when she runs out of gas. She checks the map and finds a nearby gas station. However, she finds she has no money to pay with, nevertheless, she exits her car.(First flashback to when she exits the bus)
** She walks through the cold and up to the gas station before grabbing a jerry can to fill with fuel. She begins to fill it up, but as she finishes the cashier comes out to collect pay. Cathy tries to run for it but is caught, and the enter a struggle for the gas. (Second flashback of her and the black cat roller skating)
** She's kicked back onto a metal shelf. She relates the image of the cashier calling 911 to the image of the Doberman murderer leaving her husband's body. She picks up a motor oil bottle and smashes it before charging at the cashier, attempting to stabing him with the glass. The cashier, out of shock, drops his burning cigarette into the spilled gasoline. Causing the gas pumps to explode and sending it all into inferno. (Third flashback when the black cat stayed up reading in their bed)
** She wakes and finds the entire place in flames. Her ears ring as she bleeds from her head. When she looks over she sees the cashier's body, but she ignores it and goes for the jerry can. She runs to her car and pours the fuel in before entering the car and turning it on. She gathers the map and takes a look at the WantedPoster. She finds it had ripped and only sees her eyes in the rear-view mirror behind it. She looks down at the wedding photo of her and the black cat. (Fourth flashback showing when the black cat died)
** She begins to cry in her car, dripping tears ont her map. After a bit she bits out her phone and leaves the car. As she walks to the gas station calling 911