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* Palamedes' genuine horror that Harrow consumed Gideon to ascend to Lyctorhood:
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* The fact that, after the heartwarming FireForgedFriendship that the four heirs of the Ninth and Sixth formed with each other in the previous book, it's now all fallen apart. Gideon is dead and Palamedes is mostly so, and Camilla is wracked with uncertainty that she might not have managed to rescue what remains of her adept. Thanks to her LaserGuidedAmnesia and FakeMemories, Harrow has completely erased Gideon and believes she doesn't know Palamedes and Camilla (who, in her DreamLand recreation of Canaan House, died early on), treats them like strangers, and somewhat standoffishly rebuffs Sextus's attempts at familiarity when they meet again in the River. And though Cam is grateful to Harrow for finding Pal there, she ruefully tells her that things are different between them now, and they're on opposite sides (since Harrow is a Lyctor serving the Emperor while Cam is with the Blood of Eden).
* Palamedes' genuine horror that Harrow consumed Gideon to ascend toLyctorhood:Lyctorhood, especially since she doesn't remember it this way and believes she consumed Ortus Nigenad instead, and thus comes across as rather coldly indifferent when talking to him about it:
* Palamedes' genuine horror that Harrow consumed Gideon to ascend to
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* The entire beginning of the chapter, which discusses Gideon's childhood love of her mother, a woman who planned to murder her to pursue her revenge, and her lashing out at Harrow prompting her [[DrivenToSuicide suicide attempt]]:
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* The entire beginning of the chapter, which discusses Gideon's childhood love of her mother, a mother--a woman who whom she has just discovered not only always hated her in return, but in fact outright planned to murder her ''murder her'' shortly after Gideon was born to pursue her revenge, and revenge--and her lashing out at Harrow prompting her [[DrivenToSuicide suicide attempt]]:
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* All of Palamedes' interactions with "Dulcinea" become HarsherInHindsight once the ending of ''Gideon the Ninth'' reveals that he's been in love with the real Dulcinea for years, and doesn't understand why she's treating him like a stranger. Despite their tangled history, he never even tries to push as far as friendship, respecting the space that she apparently wants, while making it clear that he's there to help if she wants him to be. [[spoiler: Learning that the real Dulcinea is dead and the woman he's been interacting with at Canaan House is her murderer sets him on his RoaringRampageOfRevenge in the novel's climax.]]
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* All of Palamedes' interactions with "Dulcinea" become HarsherInHindsight once the ending of ''Gideon the Ninth'' reveals that he's been in love with the real Dulcinea for years, and doesn't understand why she's treating him like a stranger. Despite their tangled history, he never even tries to push as far as friendship, respecting the space that she apparently wants, while making it clear that he's there to help if she wants him to be. [[spoiler: Learning that the real Dulcinea is dead and the woman he's been interacting with at Canaan House is her murderer sets him on his RoaringRampageOfRevenge in the novel's climax.]]
