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* The last 2 minutes of 22 vs Earth, starting in the scene when 22's last minion comforts her and gets it's pass.
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* The last 2 minutes of 22 vs Earth, starting in the scene when 22's last minion comforts her and gets it's its pass.
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-->'''22''' (Lying on the ground): Argh, we failed, I failed, (sighs, [[BeneathTheMask letting down her defenses]]) None of my friends, they all leave me, (Smiles and looks at Macarooni) [[HopeSpot except for you Macarooni]]. (They hug and the soul gets their pass, 22 looks down, [[BrokenSmile her smile becoming a broken one]] and instantly goes into TranquilFury) You've won this round you damn planet, [[BeneathTheMask you can take everyone]] [[BrokenBird that ever meant anything to me]], but you'll never take ''this'' soul...
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** Even worse, that same pie-eating was one of the scenes witnessed by Joe and 22 in his "hall of accomplishments", but because it's such a mundane moment surrounded by what he perceives as his failures (being dismissed from auditions, trapped in a teaching position), it was similarly colored by his perception as a negative, even though in the context of the moment, he was enjoying himself.
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[[caption-width-right:350: '''22''': [[DespairEventHorizon Not good enough…]]\\
'''Joe''': [[SayMyName 22!]]]]
'''Joe''': [[SayMyName 22!]]]]
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'''Joe''': [[SayMyName 22!]]]]
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-->'''22''' (Lying on the ground): Argh, we failed, I failed, (sighs, [[BeneathTheMask letting down her defenses]]) None of my friends, they all leave me, (Smiles and looks at Macarooni)[[HopeSpot except for you Macarooni]]. (They hug and the soul gets their pass, 22 looks down, [[BrokenSmile her smile becoming a broken one]] and instantly goes into TranquilFury) You've won this round you damn planet, [[BeneathTheMask you can take everyone]] [[BrokenBird that ever meant anything to me]], but you'll never take ''this'' soul...
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-->'''22''' (Lying on the ground): Argh, we failed, I failed, (sighs, [[BeneathTheMask letting down her defenses]]) None of my friends, they all leave me, (Smiles and looks at Macarooni)[[HopeSpot Macarooni) [[HopeSpot except for you Macarooni]]. (They hug and the soul gets their pass, 22 looks down, [[BrokenSmile her smile becoming a broken one]] and instantly goes into TranquilFury) You've won this round you damn planet, [[BeneathTheMask you can take everyone]] [[BrokenBird that ever meant anything to me]], but you'll never take ''this'' soul...
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* The last 2 minutes of 22 vs Earth, starting in the scene when 22's last minion comforts her and gets it's pass.
-->'''22''' (Lying on the ground): Argh, we failed, I failed, (sighs, [[BeneathTheMask letting down her defenses]]) None of my friends, they all leave me, (Smiles and looks at Macarooni)[[HopeSpot except for you Macarooni]]. (They hug and the soul gets their pass, 22 looks down, [[BrokenSmile her smile becoming a broken one]] and instantly goes into TranquilFury) You've won this round you damn planet, [[BeneathTheMask you can take everyone]] [[BrokenBird that ever meant anything to me]], but you'll never take ''this'' soul...
-->'''22''' (Lying on the ground): Argh, we failed, I failed, (sighs, [[BeneathTheMask letting down her defenses]]) None of my friends, they all leave me, (Smiles and looks at Macarooni)[[HopeSpot except for you Macarooni]]. (They hug and the soul gets their pass, 22 looks down, [[BrokenSmile her smile becoming a broken one]] and instantly goes into TranquilFury) You've won this round you damn planet, [[BeneathTheMask you can take everyone]] [[BrokenBird that ever meant anything to me]], but you'll never take ''this'' soul...
