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** What does Kylie see when Lord Haslett uses his YourWorstNightmare powers on her? Her family dying in horrific ways.
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** What does Kylie see when Lord Haslett uses his YourWorstNightmare IKnowWhatYouFear powers on her? Her family dying in horrific ways.
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* Chapter 60:
** On a more Meta note, the chapter begins with an author's note about the then recent Ryan Haywood scandal. The author admits this...hit them hard.
--> ''My writing abilities were somewhat halted by the news- with this current generation of 'throwing out the trash', I thought it'd be easy to throw Bastard out of my life. But...no. The situation at hand weighed heavy on my heart- hell, I broke down crying when I read some statements. How could a man break the trust of THOUSANDS like this? How could he let his ego get to him? Was it all an act?''
--> ''It just...hurts.''
** Ben's tiny postpartum depression...and realization that [[spoiler:Max won't be here for the normal version of this either.]]
** On a more Meta note, the chapter begins with an author's note about the then recent Ryan Haywood scandal. The author admits this...hit them hard.
--> ''My writing abilities were somewhat halted by the news- with this current generation of 'throwing out the trash', I thought it'd be easy to throw Bastard out of my life. But...no. The situation at hand weighed heavy on my heart- hell, I broke down crying when I read some statements. How could a man break the trust of THOUSANDS like this? How could he let his ego get to him? Was it all an act?''
--> ''It just...hurts.''
** Ben's tiny postpartum depression...and realization that [[spoiler:Max won't be here for the normal version of this either.]]
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* Chapter 60:
** On a more Meta note, the chapter begins with an author's note about the then recent Ryan Haywood scandal. The author admits this...hit them hard.
--> ''My writing abilities were somewhat halted by the news- with this current generation of 'throwing out the trash', I thought it'd be easy to throw Bastard out of my life. But...no. The situation at hand weighed heavy on my heart- hell, I broke down crying when I read some statements. How could a man break the trust of THOUSANDS like this? How could he let his ego get to him? Was it all an act?''
--> ''It just...hurts.''
**60: Ben's tiny postpartum depression...and realization that [[spoiler:Max won't be here for the normal version of this either.]]
** On a more Meta note, the chapter begins with an author's note about the then recent Ryan Haywood scandal. The author admits this...hit them hard.
--> ''My writing abilities were somewhat halted by the news- with this current generation of 'throwing out the trash', I thought it'd be easy to throw Bastard out of my life. But...no. The situation at hand weighed heavy on my heart- hell, I broke down crying when I read some statements. How could a man break the trust of THOUSANDS like this? How could he let his ego get to him? Was it all an act?''
--> ''It just...hurts.''
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* Chapter 75:
** Rex venting his frustrations to the Ace Ops group about how aloof they are.
** Rex venting his frustrations to the Ace Ops group about how aloof they are.
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** Kylie and Rook have had their fair share of failures and belittlement. Rook recounts how his own mentor made him feel awful. Kylie touches upon an unprofessional review of her work that shut her down. It’s actually part of the reason she switched from the Huntress program to the Plumber one and stopped using her Huntress Weapon.
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** Kylie and Rook have had their fair share of failures and belittlement. Rook recounts how his own mentor made him feel awful. Kylie touches upon an unprofessional review of her work that shut her down. It’s It's actually part of the reason she switched from the Huntress program to the Plumber one and stopped using her Huntress Weapon.
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--> '''Blonko:''' I apologize, Shar. I did not leave to get away from you, or mother or father. I wanted to prove to myself that...I could make a difference. That I could stand alone without our father’s reputation hanging over me, creating a standard in which I should lead with. I wanted to have a greater impact on people. And not just...a leader of a harvest...
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--> '''Blonko:''' I apologize, Shar. I did not leave to get away from you, or mother or father. I wanted to prove to myself that...I could make a difference. That I could stand alone without our father’s father's reputation hanging over me, creating a standard in which I should lead with. I wanted to have a greater impact on people. And not just...a leader of a harvest...
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* Chapter 69:
** Ozpin dying, horrified at what Salem might do now.
** Ozpin dying, horrified at what Salem might do now.
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* Min is forced to stop using her powers to help Kevin to focus on fighting Charmcaster.
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* Chapter 68:
** Min is forced to stop using her powers to help Kevin to focus on fighting Charmcaster.
** Min is forced to stop using her powers to help Kevin to focus on fighting Charmcaster.
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* Min is forced to stop using her powers to help Kevin to focus on fighting Charmcaster.
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* Cardin's {{ThrowTheDogABone}} moment; for once, he realizes how serious this situation is, and he puts aside his hate for "Ben" to help him take out some Atlesian drones.
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* Cardin's {{ThrowTheDogABone}} ThrowTheDogABone moment; for once, he realizes how serious this situation is, and he puts aside his hate for "Ben" to help him take out some Atlesian drones.drones. Somewhat ruined by the real Ben showing up, but Cardin of all people breaking down into tears out of confusion still counts as this.
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* Cardin's [[ThrowTheDogABone]] moment; for once, he realizes how serious this situation is, and he puts aside his hate for "Ben" to help him take out some Atlesian drones.
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* Cardin's [[ThrowTheDogABone]] {{ThrowTheDogABone}} moment; for once, he realizes how serious this situation is, and he puts aside his hate for "Ben" to help him take out some Atlesian drones.
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* Cardin's [[ThrowTheDogABone]] moment; for once, he realizes how serious this situation is, and he puts aside his hate for "Ben" to help him take out some Atlesian drones.
* Qrow's drinking at a bar. Why? He found out what happened to Amber. Given how much he's drinking...it wasn't pretty.
* Qrow's drinking at a bar. Why? He found out what happened to Amber. Given how much he's drinking...it wasn't pretty.
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* Ceres' visions of destruction under Emerald and Hope's spell. She's back on her home planet, in the midst of the Incursian War. Her panic gets the better of her...[[spoiler: And she manages to take Penny down with a massive blast of fire.]]
** Ruby's reaction; one of her best friends has been killed one of her other close friends...
** Ruby's reaction; one of her best friends has been killed one of her other close friends...
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* Rook hides everything from his father.
* This exchange.
* This exchange.
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* At one point, Blonko sounds like he's on the verge of tears when he saw Shar's concerned look.
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* Ben's tiny postpartum depression...and realization that [[spoiler:Max won't be here for the normal version of this either.]]
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* Chapter 62:
** Rook's backstory is very, very heavy. Rook was put to high standards because he was the first born son, and with his father as chief, Rook's actions were a reflection of his father.
** Da forbade his children from supporting Rook's dream of being a Plumber.
* Rook hides everything from his father.
* This exchange.
--> '''Blonko:''' Father, I did not do this for reputation. I joined the Plumbers to make a difference.
--> '''Da:''' Or did you do it to get away from us?
--> ''Blonko said nothing as he stood up and walked away from the table.''
* At one point, Blonko sounds like he's on the verge of tears when he saw Shar's concerned look.
--> '''Blonko:''' I apologize, Shar. I did not leave to get away from you, or mother or father. I wanted to prove to myself that...I could make a difference. That I could stand alone without our father’s reputation hanging over me, creating a standard in which I should lead with. I wanted to have a greater impact on people. And not just...a leader of a harvest...
** Rook's backstory is very, very heavy. Rook was put to high standards because he was the first born son, and with his father as chief, Rook's actions were a reflection of his father.
** Da forbade his children from supporting Rook's dream of being a Plumber.
* Rook hides everything from his father.
* This exchange.
--> '''Blonko:''' Father, I did not do this for reputation. I joined the Plumbers to make a difference.
--> '''Da:''' Or did you do it to get away from us?
--> ''Blonko said nothing as he stood up and walked away from the table.''
* At one point, Blonko sounds like he's on the verge of tears when he saw Shar's concerned look.
--> '''Blonko:''' I apologize, Shar. I did not leave to get away from you, or mother or father. I wanted to prove to myself that...I could make a difference. That I could stand alone without our father’s reputation hanging over me, creating a standard in which I should lead with. I wanted to have a greater impact on people. And not just...a leader of a harvest...
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* Chapter 60:
* On a more Meta note, the chapter begins with an author's note about the then recent Ryan Haywood scandal. The author admits this...hit them hard.
--> ''My writing abilities were somewhat halted by the news- with this current generation of 'throwing out the trash', I thought it'd be easy to throw Bastard out of my life. But...no. The situation at hand weighed heavy on my heart- hell, I broke down crying when I read some statements. How could a man break the trust of THOUSANDS like this? How could he let his ego get to him? Was it all an act?''
--> ''It just...hurts.''
* Ben's tiny postpartum depression...and realization that [[spoiler:Max won't be here for the normal version of this either.]]
* On a more Meta note, the chapter begins with an author's note about the then recent Ryan Haywood scandal. The author admits this...hit them hard.
--> ''My writing abilities were somewhat halted by the news- with this current generation of 'throwing out the trash', I thought it'd be easy to throw Bastard out of my life. But...no. The situation at hand weighed heavy on my heart- hell, I broke down crying when I read some statements. How could a man break the trust of THOUSANDS like this? How could he let his ego get to him? Was it all an act?''
--> ''It just...hurts.''
* Ben's tiny postpartum depression...and realization that [[spoiler:Max won't be here for the normal version of this either.]]
