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* If anything, Kai, Min, and Sen's situations in general. Sen was abandoned by his mother and has to live with an abusive and mentally unhinged stepmother and Kai and Min's father is a corrupt politician who has done very little to protect them and, in the end, [[spoiler: Kai is sent away when his father becomes apart of a scandal, however, Min (who's terminally ill) has to stay behind and it is subtly implied that she'll succumb to her illness in the near future, probably before Kai may even return.]]
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* If anything, Kai, Min, and Sen's situations in general. Sen was abandoned by his mother and has to live with an abusive and mentally unhinged stepmother and Kai and Min's father is a corrupt politician who has done very little to protect them and, in the end, [[spoiler: Kai is sent away when his father becomes apart a part of a scandal, however, Min (who's terminally ill) has to stay behind and it is subtly implied that she'll succumb to her illness in the near future, probably before Kai may even return.]]
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* If anything, Kai, Min, and Sen's situations in general. Sen was abandoned by his mother and has to live with an abusive and mentally unhinged stepmother and Kai and Min's father is a corrupt politician who has done very little to protect them and, in the end, [[spoiler: Kai is sent away when his father becomes apart of a scandal, however, Min (who's terminally ill) has to stay behind and it is subtly implied that she'll succumb to her illness in the near future, probably before Kai may even return.]]
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* If anything, Kai, Min, and Sen's situations in general. Sen was abandoned by his mother and has to live with an abusive and mentally unhinged stepmother and Kai and Min's father is a corrupt politician who has done very little to protect them and, in the end, [[spoiler: Kai is sent away when his father becomes apart of a scandal, however, Min (who's terminally ill) has to stay behind and it is subtly implied that she'll succumb to her illness in the near future, probably before Kai may even return.]]]]
**The latter cases are even more heartbreaking, if you consider that Kai and Min seem to be serving as Yuumei's [[AuthorAvatar avatars]].
**The latter cases are even more heartbreaking, if you consider that Kai and Min seem to be serving as Yuumei's [[AuthorAvatar avatars]].
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* In the chapter 4 omake Kai [[spoiler: looking back on the friends he made ... and then swearing to return to make things right.]]
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* In the chapter 4 omake Kai [[spoiler: looking back on the friends he made ... and then swearing to return to make things right.]]
*If anything, Kai, Min, and Sen's situations in general. Sen was abandoned by his mother and has to live with an abusive and mentally unhinged stepmother and Kai and Min's father is a corrupt politician who has done very little to protect them and, in the end, [[spoiler: Kai is sent away when his father becomes apart of a scandal, however, Min (who's terminally ill) has to stay behind and it subtly implied that she'll pass away in the near future.]]
*If anything, Kai, Min, and Sen's situations in general. Sen was abandoned by his mother and has to live with an abusive and mentally unhinged stepmother and Kai and Min's father is a corrupt politician who has done very little to protect them and, in the end, [[spoiler: Kai is sent away when his father becomes apart of a scandal, however, Min (who's terminally ill) has to stay behind and it subtly implied that she'll pass away in the near future.]]
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* In the chapter 4 omake Kai [[spoiler: looking back on the friends he made but will likely never see again.]]
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* In the chapter 4 omake Kai [[spoiler: looking back on the friends he made but will likely never see again.]]
* In the chapter 4 omake Kai [[spoiler: looking back on the friends he made but will likely never see again.]]
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''Kai'': "...[[spoiler: I was hoping we could hang out one last time. Too bad that went horribly wrong.]]..."\\
''Kai'': "...[[spoiler: I was hoping we could hang out one last time. Too bad that went horribly wrong.]]..."\\
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*[[spoiler: The reason why Kai went to Sen's house in Chapter 3 and everyone knows how that ended...]]
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'''Kai:''' "No, Min-min. They are simply delusions of hope. Now don't move so much or you'll pull out your IV."
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'''Kai:''' "No, Min-min. They are simply delusions of hope. Now don't move so much or you'll pull out your IV.""\\
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* ->'''Min-Min:''' "Could they be the real stars?"\\
'''Kai:''' "No, Min-min. They are simply delusions of hope. Now don't move so much or you'll pull out your IV."
'''Min-Min:''' "What does "delusion" mean?"
'''Kai:''' "It's something that you should hold on to."
-->-- Chapter 3 bonus
* ->'''Min-Min:''' "Could they be the real stars?"\\
'''Kai:''' "No, Min-min. They are simply delusions of hope. Now don't move so much or you'll pull out your IV."
'''Min-Min:''' "What does "delusion" mean?"
'''Kai:''' "It's something that you should hold on to."
-->-- Chapter 3 bonus
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* Where too start: Kai has a sick [[spoiler: dying]] little sister. Sen has an abusive step-mother. The Sen's abusive step-mother who just wants to be an actual mother but has constant miscarriages [[spoiler: due to the poisoned water.]]Which is causing Kai's sister's sickness, and is the fault of [[spoiler: Kai's father's corrupt practices.]]]]
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* Where too start: Kai has a sick [[spoiler: dying]] little sister. Sen has an abusive step-mother. The abusive step-mother wants to be an actual mother but has constant miscarriages [[spoiler: due to the poisoned water.]]Which is causing Kai's sister's sickness, and is the fault of [[spoiler: Kai's father's corrupt practices.]]
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