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* The end of Nova and Ben's quest wherein Nova utterly massacres Kravos and both are left nervous wrecks by the whole incident.
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* The end of Nova and Ben's quest wherein Nova utterly massacres Kravos and both are left nervous wrecks by the whole incident.incident.
* Weirdly enough, [[AlasPoorVillain both Luca and Asha's]] deaths are utterly depressing, although Asha's is somewhat lessened by the fact she [[FaceDeathWithDignity died with dignity and acceptance]].
* Weirdly enough, [[AlasPoorVillain both Luca and Asha's]] deaths are utterly depressing, although Asha's is somewhat lessened by the fact she [[FaceDeathWithDignity died with dignity and acceptance]].
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* In the wake of the above battle, Eliziya offers herself up as Asha's new body when Asha's magic fails after healing Luca. Luca takes her up on it. To say that Asha is [[WouldNotHurtAChild displeased]] would be putting it mildly and it's obvious she really liked the kid and did not want this deal to go down.
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* In the wake of the above battle, Eliziya offers herself up as Asha's new body when Asha's magic fails after healing Luca. Luca takes her up on it. To say that Asha is [[WouldNotHurtAChild displeased]] would be putting it mildly and it's obvious she really liked the kid and did not want this deal to go down.down.
* The end of Nova and Ben's quest wherein Nova utterly massacres Kravos and both are left nervous wrecks by the whole incident.
* The end of Nova and Ben's quest wherein Nova utterly massacres Kravos and both are left nervous wrecks by the whole incident.
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* " ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].
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* " ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].
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* In the wake of the above battle, Eliziya offers herself up as Asha's new body when Asha's magic fails after healing Luca. Luca takes her up on it. To say that Asha is [[WouldNotHurtAChild displeased]] would be putting it mildly and it's obvious she really liked the kid and did not want this deal to go down.
* " ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].
* " ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].
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* " ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].
* In the wake of the above battle, Eliziya offers herself up as Asha's new body when Asha's magic fails after healing Luca. Luca takes her up on it. To say that Asha is [[WouldNotHurtAChild displeased]] would be putting it mildly and it's obvious she really liked the kid and did not want this deal to godown.
* " ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].down.
* In the wake of the above battle, Eliziya offers herself up as Asha's new body when Asha's magic fails after healing Luca. Luca takes her up on it. To say that Asha is [[WouldNotHurtAChild displeased]] would be putting it mildly and it's obvious she really liked the kid and did not want this deal to go
* " ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].
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" ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].
* In the wake of the above battle, Eliziya offers herself up as Asha's new body when Asha's magic fails after healing Luca. Luca takes her up on it. To say that Asha is [[WouldNotHurtAChild displeased]] would be putting it mildly and it's obvious she really liked the kid and did not want this deal to go down.
* In the wake of the above battle, Eliziya offers herself up as Asha's new body when Asha's magic fails after healing Luca. Luca takes her up on it. To say that Asha is [[WouldNotHurtAChild displeased]] would be putting it mildly and it's obvious she really liked the kid and did not want this deal to go down.
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* " ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].
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* Hector's [[BookDumb lack of cerebral intelligence]] is usually PlayedForLaughs. Except when Tamar, [[HeroicBSOD who has just learned that Anjali and Julius are apparently dead]], asks him whether he knew about the whole thing being reported on the town notice board ''days'' ago. Turns out Hector did see the notice board and ergo potentially could have ''warned'' Tamar before Luca dropped it on him mid battle. Except he couldn't [[NeverLearnedToRead read]] it.
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* Hector's [[BookDumb lack of cerebral intelligence]] is usually PlayedForLaughs. Except when Tamar, [[HeroicBSOD who has just learned that Anjali and Julius are apparently dead]], asks him whether he knew about the whole thing being reported on the town notice board ''days'' ago. Turns out Hector did see the notice board and ergo potentially could have ''warned'' Tamar before Luca dropped it on him mid battle. Except he couldn't [[NeverLearnedToRead read]] it.it.
" ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].
* In the wake of the above battle, Eliziya offers herself up as Asha's new body when Asha's magic fails after healing Luca. Luca takes her up on it. To say that Asha is [[WouldNotHurtAChild displeased]] would be putting it mildly and it's obvious she really liked the kid and did not want this deal to go down.
" ''"[[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&start=75#p50694 It's okay]]."'' Except it [[BlatantLies really isn't]].
* In the wake of the above battle, Eliziya offers herself up as Asha's new body when Asha's magic fails after healing Luca. Luca takes her up on it. To say that Asha is [[WouldNotHurtAChild displeased]] would be putting it mildly and it's obvious she really liked the kid and did not want this deal to go down.
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* Hector's [[BookDumb lack of cerebral intelligence]] is usually PlayedForLaughs. Except when Tamar, [[HeroicBSOD who has just learned that Anjali and Julius are apparently dead]], asks him whether he knew about the whole thing being reported on the town notice board ''days'' ago. Turns out Hector did see the notice board. He just couldn't [[NeverLearnedToRead read]] it.
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* Hector's [[BookDumb lack of cerebral intelligence]] is usually PlayedForLaughs. Except when Tamar, [[HeroicBSOD who has just learned that Anjali and Julius are apparently dead]], asks him whether he knew about the whole thing being reported on the town notice board ''days'' ago. Turns out Hector did see the notice board. He just board and ergo potentially could have ''warned'' Tamar before Luca dropped it on him mid battle. Except he couldn't [[NeverLearnedToRead read]] it.
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* Okay, so they're little psychopaths, but it's easy to feel kind of sorry for Comedy and Tragedy after the latter gets injured by Tamar and Comedy is utterly convinced he's going to die.
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* Okay, so they're little psychopaths, but it's easy to feel kind of sorry for Comedy and Tragedy after the latter gets injured by Tamar and Comedy is utterly convinced he's going to die.die.
* Hector's [[BookDumb lack of cerebral intelligence]] is usually PlayedForLaughs. Except when Tamar, [[HeroicBSOD who has just learned that Anjali and Julius are apparently dead]], asks him whether he knew about the whole thing being reported on the town notice board ''days'' ago. Turns out Hector did see the notice board. He just couldn't [[NeverLearnedToRead read]] it.
* Hector's [[BookDumb lack of cerebral intelligence]] is usually PlayedForLaughs. Except when Tamar, [[HeroicBSOD who has just learned that Anjali and Julius are apparently dead]], asks him whether he knew about the whole thing being reported on the town notice board ''days'' ago. Turns out Hector did see the notice board. He just couldn't [[NeverLearnedToRead read]] it.
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** And then even when they heal her we're treated to an Anjali who no longer remembers anyone she used to know, including Julius.
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* The end of Anji's and Julius' fight with Soren Kavros.
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* Okay, so they're little psychopaths, but it's easy to feel kind of sorry for Comedy and Tragedy after the latter gets injured by Tamar and Comedy is utterly convinced he's going to die.
* Okay, so they're little psychopaths, but it's easy to feel kind of sorry for Comedy and Tragedy after the latter gets injured by Tamar and Comedy is utterly convinced he's going to die.
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-->“I am someone… I am someone…” ([[YankTheDogsChain No.]] You are NOT.)
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-->“I am someone… I am someone…” ([[YankTheDogsChain No.]] You are NOT.))
* The end of Anji's and Julius' fight with Soren Kavros.
* The end of Anji's and Julius' fight with Soren Kavros.
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* Jenny's [[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1211#p48029 entire reaction]] to the civil war. And who can blame her, given the formerly accepting townsfolk having such a violent anti-guild reaction thanks to [[spoiler: Luca]]. It's a stunningly painful example of how mod mentality can turn even perfectly reasonable people into monsters, and how this applies [[RealLifeWritesThePlot in real life]] as much as in any story.
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* Jenny's [[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1211#p48029 entire reaction]] to the civil war. And who can blame her, given the formerly accepting townsfolk having such a violent anti-guild reaction these days thanks to [[spoiler: Luca]]. It's a stunningly painful example of how mod mob mentality can turn even perfectly reasonable people into monsters, and how this applies [[RealLifeWritesThePlot in real life]] as much as in any story.
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* [[spoiler:Shadow!Anji]]'s SurvivalMantra gives you a serious case of AlasPoorVillain.
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* [[spoiler:Shadow!Anji]]'s SurvivalMantra after Anji defeats her gives you a serious case of AlasPoorVillain.
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* [[spoiler:Shadow!]]Anji's SurvivalMantra gives you a serious case of AlasPoorVillain.
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* [[spoiler:Shadow!]]Anji's [[spoiler:Shadow!Anji]]'s SurvivalMantra gives you a serious case of AlasPoorVillain.
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-->'''Ben''': Hector Erastus, I am hereby [[spoiler: relieving you of your command of the guild the Severed Claws, on grounds of being totally inappropriate to lead it]].
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-->'''Ben''': Hector Erastus, I am hereby [[spoiler: relieving you of your command of the guild the Severed Claws, on grounds of being totally inappropriate to lead it]].it]].
* [[spoiler:Shadow!]]Anji's SurvivalMantra gives you a serious case of AlasPoorVillain.
-->“I am someone… I am someone…” ([[YankTheDogsChain No.]] You are NOT.)
* [[spoiler:Shadow!]]Anji's SurvivalMantra gives you a serious case of AlasPoorVillain.
-->“I am someone… I am someone…” ([[YankTheDogsChain No.]] You are NOT.)
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* This [[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1211#p48003 entire chapter. For just about ''everyone'' in it]].
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* This [[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1211#p48003 entire chapter. ]] For just about ''everyone'' in it]].it.
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* This [[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1211#p48003 entire chapter. For just about ''everyone'' in it]].
-->'''Ben''': Hector Erastus, I am hereby [[spoiler: relieving you of your command of the guild the Severed Claws, on grounds of being totally inappropriate to lead it]].
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* How Anjali defeats her Shadow Self is kind of depressing because it's clear that she believes ''everything'' it said about her.
* Hector finally explains exactly where Ivory came from, [[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1211#p48009 and the story of the last person he ever killed.]]
* The story of [[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1125&p=48085#p48085 what happened to Ben's brother]] before she arrived at the castle.
* Jenny's [[http://forum.watchthefootage.com/viewtopic.php?f=49&t=1211#p48029 entire reaction]] to the civil war. And who can blame her, given the formerly accepting townsfolk having such a violent anti-guild reaction thanks to [[spoiler: Luca]]. It's a stunningly painful example of how mod mentality can turn even perfectly reasonable people into monsters, and how this applies [[RealLifeWritesThePlot in real life]] as much as in any story.
-->'''Jenny''':
