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* Seeing Alyssa's mother die right in front of her. It becomes a case of AngstWhatAngst with how Alyssa and Dennis downplay it in the ending, though.
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother die right in front of her. It becomes a case of AngstWhatAngst with her, which is made worse by how much [[AngstWhatAngst Alyssa and Dennis downplay it in the ending, though.ending]].
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother die right in front of her. Though it becomes a case of AngstWhatAngst with how Alyssa and Dennis downplay it in the ending.
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother die right in front of her. Though it It becomes a case of AngstWhatAngst with how Alyssa and Dennis downplay it in the ending.ending, though.
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother die right in front of her. Becomes a bit of MoodWhiplash with how Alyssa and Dennis downplay it in the ending though.
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother die right in front of her. Becomes Though it becomes a bit case of MoodWhiplash AngstWhatAngst with how Alyssa and Dennis downplay it in the ending though. ending.
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother die right in front of her. Alyssa and Dennis totally downplaying it in the ending [[MoodWhiplash struck a lot of players as odd]], to say the least.
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother die right in front of her. Becomes a bit of MoodWhiplash with how Alyssa and Dennis totally downplaying downplay it in the ending [[MoodWhiplash struck a lot of players as odd]], to say the least.though.
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother die right in front of her. The worst part was Alyssa and Dennis totally downplaying it in the ending.
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother die right in front of her. The worst part was Alyssa and Dennis totally downplaying it in the ending.ending [[MoodWhiplash struck a lot of players as odd]], to say the least.
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* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wound.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
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* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wound.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome Unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother dying right in front of her. The worst part was Alyssa and Dennis totally downplaying it in the ending.
* The scene leading up to the final level. Alyssa has soothed the spirits of the ancient rooders who were slain in previous Rituals of Engagement and after maybe or maybe not being dead, [[HopeSpot Nancy finally reunites with Alyssa]]....[[YankTheDogsChain Only to be ripped away by the Dark Gentleman who then teleports Alyssa back to the clock tower.]] Hearing Alyssa crying out for her mother once she realizes that she's been taken again is just heartbreaking.
* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wounds.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
* It was possible Sledgehammer/Robert Morris was just a innocent good man who has a misfortune to be possessed by a Entity and twisted into a murderer as it is commented that even the specialists were baffled by his sudden violent behavior as he didn't display any signs in the past. While it is possible that he had some underlying issues that nobody caught, it is also saddening to see a possibly innocent man basically becoming a puppet and twisted by a being to murders against his will. Let's hope Alyssa defeating him permanently will give some peace.
* The scene leading up to the final level. Alyssa has soothed the spirits of the ancient rooders who were slain in previous Rituals of Engagement and after maybe or maybe not being dead, [[HopeSpot Nancy finally reunites with Alyssa]]....[[YankTheDogsChain Only to be ripped away by the Dark Gentleman who then teleports Alyssa back to the clock tower.]] Hearing Alyssa crying out for her mother once she realizes that she's been taken again is just heartbreaking.
* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wounds.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
* It was possible Sledgehammer/Robert Morris was just a innocent good man who has a misfortune to be possessed by a Entity and twisted into a murderer as it is commented that even the specialists were baffled by his sudden violent behavior as he didn't display any signs in the past. While it is possible that he had some underlying issues that nobody caught, it is also saddening to see a possibly innocent man basically becoming a puppet and twisted by a being to murders against his will. Let's hope Alyssa defeating him permanently will give some peace.
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* Seeing Alyssa's mother dying die right in front of her. The worst part was Alyssa and Dennis totally downplaying it in the ending.
* The scene leading up to the final level. Alyssa has soothed the spirits of the ancientrooders Rooders who were slain in previous Rituals of Engagement and after maybe or maybe not being dead, [[HopeSpot Nancy finally reunites with Alyssa]]....Alyssa]]... [[YankTheDogsChain Only to be ripped away by the Dark Gentleman Gentleman, who then teleports Alyssa back to the clock tower.]] Hearing Alyssa crying out for her mother once she realizes that she's been taken again is just heartbreaking.
* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into thewounds.wound.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
*It was possible Sledgehammer/Robert Unlike the other Subordinates, it's stated outright that Robert Morris had no history of violence before the sudden murder spree that resulted in his execution and subsequent rebirth as Sledgehammer. [[FridgeHorror In all likelihood, he was just a innocent good an ordinary man who has a misfortune to be with relatively few issues before he was possessed by a an Entity and twisted into a murderer as it is commented that even the specialists were baffled by his sudden violent behavior as he didn't display any signs in the past. While it is possible that he had some underlying issues that nobody caught, it is also saddening driven to see a possibly innocent man basically becoming a puppet and twisted by a being to murders against his will. Let's hope Alyssa defeating him permanently will give some peace.kill.]]
* The scene leading up to the final level. Alyssa has soothed the spirits of the ancient
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* The scene leading up to the final level. Alyssa has soothed the spirits of the ancient rooders who were slain in previous Rituals of Engagement and after maybe or maybe not being dead, Nancy finally reunites with Alyssa....[[YankTheDogsChain Only to be ripped away by the Dark Gentleman who then teleports Alyssa back to the clock tower.]] Hearing Alyssa crying out for her mother once she realizes that she's been taken again is just heartbreaking.
* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wounds.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wounds.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
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* The scene leading up to the final level. Alyssa has soothed the spirits of the ancient rooders who were slain in previous Rituals of Engagement and after maybe or maybe not being dead, [[HopeSpot Nancy finally reunites with Alyssa....Alyssa]]....[[YankTheDogsChain Only to be ripped away by the Dark Gentleman who then teleports Alyssa back to the clock tower.]] Hearing Alyssa crying out for her mother once she realizes that she's been taken again is just heartbreaking.
* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wounds.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesomeunfortunately Unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wounds.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome
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* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wounds.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
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* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wounds.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]]]
* It was possible Sledgehammer/Robert Morris was just a innocent good man who has a misfortune to be possessed by a Entity and twisted into a murderer as it is commented that even the specialists were baffled by his sudden violent behavior as he didn't display any signs in the past. While it is possible that he had some underlying issues that nobody caught, it is also saddening to see a possibly innocent man basically becoming a puppet and twisted by a being to murders against his will. Let's hope Alyssa defeating him permanently will give some peace.
* It was possible Sledgehammer/Robert Morris was just a innocent good man who has a misfortune to be possessed by a Entity and twisted into a murderer as it is commented that even the specialists were baffled by his sudden violent behavior as he didn't display any signs in the past. While it is possible that he had some underlying issues that nobody caught, it is also saddening to see a possibly innocent man basically becoming a puppet and twisted by a being to murders against his will. Let's hope Alyssa defeating him permanently will give some peace.
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* Same goes for Albert and his blind mother: he gives her a shawl, only to be violently murdered moments later by Corroder.
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* Same goes for Albert and his blind mother: he gives her a shawl, only for both of them to be violently murdered moments later by Corroder.
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* Poor little May and her horrible FamilyUnfriendlyDeath.
* Same goes for Albert and his blind mother: he gives her a shawl, only to be violently murdered moments later by Corroder.
* Phillip's death scene. Especially Nancy's line just before it, "Phillip darling! Father! Alyssa has laughed for the first time!"
* Seeing Alyssa's mother dying right in front of her. The worst part was Alyssa and Dennis totally downplaying it in the ending.
* The scene leading up to the final level. Alyssa has soothed the spirits of the ancient rooders who were slain in previous Rituals of Engagement and after maybe or maybe not being dead, Nancy finally reunites with Alyssa....[[YankTheDogsChain Only to be ripped away by the Dark Gentleman who then teleports Alyssa back to the clock tower.]] Hearing Alyssa crying out for her mother once she realizes that she's been taken again is just heartbreaking.
* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wounds.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
* Same goes for Albert and his blind mother: he gives her a shawl, only to be violently murdered moments later by Corroder.
* Phillip's death scene. Especially Nancy's line just before it, "Phillip darling! Father! Alyssa has laughed for the first time!"
* Seeing Alyssa's mother dying right in front of her. The worst part was Alyssa and Dennis totally downplaying it in the ending.
* The scene leading up to the final level. Alyssa has soothed the spirits of the ancient rooders who were slain in previous Rituals of Engagement and after maybe or maybe not being dead, Nancy finally reunites with Alyssa....[[YankTheDogsChain Only to be ripped away by the Dark Gentleman who then teleports Alyssa back to the clock tower.]] Hearing Alyssa crying out for her mother once she realizes that she's been taken again is just heartbreaking.
* Finding out that [[spoiler: in the intervening time between reuniting with Nancy after defeating Chopper and making it up to the top of the clock tower, Dick has [[TakenForGranite sealed Nancy's soul into a statue.]]]] As if that wasn't bad enough, he then [[LiterallyShatteredLives obliterates the statue]] just to [[KickTheDog rub salt into the wounds.]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome unfortunately for him, this pushes Alyssa to her breaking point and she fully embraces her role as a Rooder,]] And [[spoiler: Nancy]] is still able to give Alyssa the power she needs to finish off [[spoiler: Lord Burroughs and Dick]] for good and save her mother[[spoiler:'s soul.]]
