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The number of things wrong with that edit. Elvanna is permanently dead, and the party was trying to fight in ASMODEUS soul. Not bring her back to life.
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* Sure, she was a bloody monster, but it's still a little heartbreaking to see Elvanna die as the rot eats her heart.
** [[HopeSpot Though there is some chance of saving her,]] problem is it requires a soul.
* Simula gives her soul to bring Elvanna back to life.
** [[HopeSpot Though there is some chance of saving her,]] problem is it requires a soul.
* Simula gives her soul to bring Elvanna back to life.
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* [[spoiler: Sure, she was a bloody monster, but it's still a little heartbreaking to see Elvanna die [[CruelAndUnusualDeath as the rot eats her heart.
** [[HopeSpot Though there is somealive]]]].
* [[spoiler: Simula sacrifices herself to cast the "soul dive" spell. Finally giving the party a chanceof saving her,]] problem is it requires a soul.
* Simula gives her soulto bring Elvanna back to life.defeat Asmodeus.]]
** [[HopeSpot Though there is some
* [[spoiler: Simula sacrifices herself to cast the "soul dive" spell. Finally giving the party a chance
* Simula gives her soul
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** [[HopeSpot Though there is some chance of saving her,]] problem is it requires a soul.
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** [[HopeSpot Though there is some chance of saving her,]] problem is it requires a soul.soul.
* Simula gives her soul to bring Elvanna back to life.
* Simula gives her soul to bring Elvanna back to life.
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* The surviving drow in the arena are still reeling from Ravvas's attack. Complete with Valil recognizing the monster that Ravvas truly is and denouncing their friendship.
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* The surviving drow in the arena are still reeling from Ravvas's attack. Complete with Valil recognizing the monster that Ravvas truly is and denouncing their friendship.friendship.
* Sure, she was a bloody monster, but it's still a little heartbreaking to see Elvanna die as the rot eats her heart.
** [[HopeSpot Though there is some chance of saving her,]] problem is it requires a soul.
* Sure, she was a bloody monster, but it's still a little heartbreaking to see Elvanna die as the rot eats her heart.
** [[HopeSpot Though there is some chance of saving her,]] problem is it requires a soul.
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** He also gives a reason why he never answered any of Fae's scrys: He was being groomed to become the next Solonor.
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** He also gives a reason why he never answered any of Fae's scrys: He was being groomed to become the next Solonor.Solonor.
* The surviving drow in the arena are still reeling from Ravvas's attack. Complete with Valil recognizing the monster that Ravvas truly is and denouncing their friendship.
* The surviving drow in the arena are still reeling from Ravvas's attack. Complete with Valil recognizing the monster that Ravvas truly is and denouncing their friendship.
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* After [[spoiler:Ravvas casts Karsus Avatar]] at the end of the previous session, the finale session opens up with Ivan trying to console Valil, who is so shaken up that he doesn't know how to respond. Doubles as heartwarming.
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* After [[spoiler:Ravvas casts Karsus Avatar]] at the end of the previous session, the finale session opens up with Ivan trying to console Valil, who is so shaken up that he doesn't know how to respond. Doubles as heartwarming.heartwarming.
* When [[spoiler:Reyin]] returns, everyone is crying tears of joy.
* [[spoiler:Reyin]] mentions that his dad (Kross) died at some point between him leaving the party and now.
** He also gives a reason why he never answered any of Fae's scrys: He was being groomed to become the next Solonor.
* When [[spoiler:Reyin]] returns, everyone is crying tears of joy.
* [[spoiler:Reyin]] mentions that his dad (Kross) died at some point between him leaving the party and now.
** He also gives a reason why he never answered any of Fae's scrys: He was being groomed to become the next Solonor.
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* After noticing that she smells of cookies, Jalerom asks Faleris about Reyin. Her response? [[spoiler:"He's not around anymore. I can't talk about it."]]
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* After noticing that she smells of cookies, Jalerom asks Faleris about Reyin. Her response? [[spoiler:"He's not around anymore. I can't talk about it."]]"]]
* After [[spoiler:Ravvas casts Karsus Avatar]] at the end of the previous session, the finale session opens up with Ivan trying to console Valil, who is so shaken up that he doesn't know how to respond. Doubles as heartwarming.
* After [[spoiler:Ravvas casts Karsus Avatar]] at the end of the previous session, the finale session opens up with Ivan trying to console Valil, who is so shaken up that he doesn't know how to respond. Doubles as heartwarming.
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* Episode 66 and Kross has left the group, with only a note left behind in Jalerom's pocket to tell the group. The entire party express sadness and frustration at his leaving, as well as some obvious disappointment. The wording of the note especially is sad, given [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment why Kross had to be written out]].
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* Episode 66 and Kross has left the group, with only a note left behind in Jalerom's pocket to tell the group. The entire party express sadness and frustration at his leaving, as well as some obvious disappointment. The wording of the note especially is sad, given [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment why Kross had to be written out]].out.
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** According to WordOfThePlayer, this is why she was so horrified to learn that the war against Sabaton had been orchestrated by Ravvas. Because it meant that Walt's father had been murdered for nothing.
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** According to WordOfThePlayer, this is why she was so horrified to learn that the war against Sabaton had been orchestrated by Ravvas. Because it meant that Walt's father had been murdered for nothing.nothing.
* After noticing that she smells of cookies, Jalerom asks Faleris about Reyin. Her response? [[spoiler:"He's not around anymore. I can't talk about it."]]
* After noticing that she smells of cookies, Jalerom asks Faleris about Reyin. Her response? [[spoiler:"He's not around anymore. I can't talk about it."]]
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* Though Rime recounts the story with such a casual tone, she tells Jalerom about her first kill -- a Sabaton supporter in Gatless who hired her on as a maid. Rime goes on to recount how she became fast friends with the man's young son Walt, who loved to hear the stories about the Heroes of Directian, Amber in particular. So when Rime has to poison the boy's father, that just makes the friendship she made with Walt sting so much more than her just leaving would have. And despite promising to come back and play with Walt in the future, Rime never saw him again.
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* Though Rime recounts the story with such a casual tone, she tells Jalerom about her first kill -- a Sabaton supporter in Gatless who hired her on as a maid. Rime goes on to recount how she became fast friends with the man's young son Walt, who loved to hear the stories about the Heroes of Directian, Amber in particular. So when Rime has to poison the boy's father, that just makes the friendship she made with Walt sting so much more than her just leaving would have. And despite promising to come back and play with Walt in the future, Rime never saw him again.again.
** According to WordOfThePlayer, this is why she was so horrified to learn that the war against Sabaton had been orchestrated by Ravvas. Because it meant that Walt's father had been murdered for nothing.
** According to WordOfThePlayer, this is why she was so horrified to learn that the war against Sabaton had been orchestrated by Ravvas. Because it meant that Walt's father had been murdered for nothing.
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* Asmodeus forces Amber to kill her own father. Varaugh is okay with this, but Amber is understandably not.
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* Asmodeus forces Amber to kill her own father. Varaugh is okay with this, but Amber is understandably not.not.
* Though Rime recounts the story with such a casual tone, she tells Jalerom about her first kill -- a Sabaton supporter in Gatless who hired her on as a maid. Rime goes on to recount how she became fast friends with the man's young son Walt, who loved to hear the stories about the Heroes of Directian, Amber in particular. So when Rime has to poison the boy's father, that just makes the friendship she made with Walt sting so much more than her just leaving would have. And despite promising to come back and play with Walt in the future, Rime never saw him again.
* Though Rime recounts the story with such a casual tone, she tells Jalerom about her first kill -- a Sabaton supporter in Gatless who hired her on as a maid. Rime goes on to recount how she became fast friends with the man's young son Walt, who loved to hear the stories about the Heroes of Directian, Amber in particular. So when Rime has to poison the boy's father, that just makes the friendship she made with Walt sting so much more than her just leaving would have. And despite promising to come back and play with Walt in the future, Rime never saw him again.
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* Josh’s descriptions of the slave pens can evoke imagery of Nazi concentration camps. It’s both horrifying and heartbreaking.
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* Josh’s descriptions of the slave pens can evoke imagery of Nazi concentration camps. It’s both horrifying and heartbreaking.heartbreaking.
* Asmodeus forces Amber to kill her own father. Varaugh is okay with this, but Amber is understandably not.
* Asmodeus forces Amber to kill her own father. Varaugh is okay with this, but Amber is understandably not.
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* When in the drow hall of records to look at the research that gave Ravvas the idea to interbreed the drow with the surface races, Rime sees her father’s name, showing that Rime is [[HalfHunanHybrid half-drow]]. She doesn’t dwell on it much due to the mission, but it’s clear she’s shaken.
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* When in the drow hall of records to look at the research that gave Ravvas the idea to interbreed the drow with the surface races, Rime sees her father’s name, showing that Rime is [[HalfHunanHybrid [[HalfHumanHybrid half-drow]]. She doesn’t dwell on it much due to the mission, but it’s clear she’s shaken.
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* While Rime is pinned down by Kruul, she tries to use every spell she can to get free. The problem is, the only spell she knows that has no somatic components is Power Word Petrify, and Kruul's HP isn't low enough for that to effect him. Aramau spends a good five minutes going through her spells only to find that none of them work. You just want to give the poor girl a hug.
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* While Rime is pinned down by Kruul, she tries to use every spell she can to get free. The problem is, the only spell she knows that has no somatic components is Power Word Petrify, and Kruul's HP isn't low enough for that to effect him. Aramau spends a good five minutes going through her spells only to find that none of them work. You just want to give the poor girl a hug.hug.
* When in the drow hall of records to look at the research that gave Ravvas the idea to interbreed the drow with the surface races, Rime sees her father’s name, showing that Rime is [[HalfHunanHybrid half-drow]]. She doesn’t dwell on it much due to the mission, but it’s clear she’s shaken.
* Rime finds the surviving children being treated like royalty (Ravvas’s orders), but despite this and Rime assuring them that she’s not hostile, the kids are understandably scared, considering Rime currently looks like a drow and it was a drow that killed their friend.
* Josh’s descriptions of the slave pens can evoke imagery of Nazi concentration camps. It’s both horrifying and heartbreaking.
* When in the drow hall of records to look at the research that gave Ravvas the idea to interbreed the drow with the surface races, Rime sees her father’s name, showing that Rime is [[HalfHunanHybrid half-drow]]. She doesn’t dwell on it much due to the mission, but it’s clear she’s shaken.
* Rime finds the surviving children being treated like royalty (Ravvas’s orders), but despite this and Rime assuring them that she’s not hostile, the kids are understandably scared, considering Rime currently looks like a drow and it was a drow that killed their friend.
* Josh’s descriptions of the slave pens can evoke imagery of Nazi concentration camps. It’s both horrifying and heartbreaking.
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* There are tears of joy all around when Jeminya returns.
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* There are tears of joy all around when Jeminya returns.returns.
* During the battle in Episode 145, Bayleen gets instantly taken down by a swarm of magically-summoned blades.
* While Rime is pinned down by Kruul, she tries to use every spell she can to get free. The problem is, the only spell she knows that has no somatic components is Power Word Petrify, and Kruul's HP isn't low enough for that to effect him. Aramau spends a good five minutes going through her spells only to find that none of them work. You just want to give the poor girl a hug.
* During the battle in Episode 145, Bayleen gets instantly taken down by a swarm of magically-summoned blades.
* While Rime is pinned down by Kruul, she tries to use every spell she can to get free. The problem is, the only spell she knows that has no somatic components is Power Word Petrify, and Kruul's HP isn't low enough for that to effect him. Aramau spends a good five minutes going through her spells only to find that none of them work. You just want to give the poor girl a hug.
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* After Jalerom is nearly killed by [[spoiler:his mother's assassin]] in sight of Nora, who idolized Jalerom, Jalerom feels as though [[BrokenPedestal he's let her down by letting her see him in a moment of weakness.]]
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* After Jalerom is nearly killed by [[spoiler:his mother's assassin]] in sight of Nora, who idolized Jalerom, Jalerom feels as though [[BrokenPedestal he's let her down by letting her see him in a moment of weakness.]]]]
* There are tears of joy all around when Jeminya returns.
* There are tears of joy all around when Jeminya returns.
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* [[spoiler:Aymer]] has taken another student under his tutelage, who is a depressing look at [[WhatCouldHaveBeen what Faerthurin could have turned into had she stayed under him.]]
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* [[spoiler:Aymer]] has taken another student under his tutelage, who is a depressing look at [[WhatCouldHaveBeen what Faerthurin could have turned into had she stayed under him.]]
* After Jalerom is nearly killed by [[spoiler:his mother's assassin]] in sight of Nora, who idolized Jalerom, Jalerom feels as though [[BrokenPedestal he's let her down by letting her see him in a moment of weakness.]]
* After Jalerom is nearly killed by [[spoiler:his mother's assassin]] in sight of Nora, who idolized Jalerom, Jalerom feels as though [[BrokenPedestal he's let her down by letting her see him in a moment of weakness.]]