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* The hybrids, in ''Unda Vosari: Chronicles'', are told to "Transform and roll out" which is a often-used line in ''{{Transformers}}''.
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* The hybrids, in ''Unda Vosari: Chronicles'', are told to "Transform and roll out" which is a often-used line in ''{{Transformers}}''.‘’Franchise/{{Transformers}}''.
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* The hybrids, in Unda Vosari: Chronicles, are told to "Transform and roll out" which is a often-used line in ''{{Transformers}}''.
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* The ''entire'' plot involving the Eternity Gauntlets and Eternity Gems is an homage to both TabletopGame/{{Mage The Ascension}} and ComicBook/TheInfinityGauntlet storyline Marvel did.
** Mana seems to resemble [[StarWars the Force]] an awful lot, although it has been adapted a bit for use in the main plot involving the Eternity Gems and Eternity Gauntlets.
* Originally, Ezra was based off of Urza from TabletopGame/{{Magic The Gathering}} (and even given a brother to fight, Ratava).
** Mana seems to resemble [[StarWars the Force]] an awful lot, although it has been adapted a bit for use in the main plot involving the Eternity Gems and Eternity Gauntlets.
* Originally, Ezra was based off of Urza from TabletopGame/{{Magic The Gathering}} (and even given a brother to fight, Ratava).
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* The ''entire'' plot involving the Eternity Gauntlets and Eternity Gems is an homage to both TabletopGame/{{Mage ''TabletopGame/{{Mage The Ascension}} Ascension}}'' and ComicBook/TheInfinityGauntlet ''ComicBook/TheInfinityGauntlet'' storyline Marvel did.
** Mana seems to resemble[[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars the Force]] an awful lot, although it has been adapted a bit for use in the main plot involving the Eternity Gems and Eternity Gauntlets.
* Originally, Ezra was based off of Urza fromTabletopGame/{{Magic ''TabletopGame/{{Magic The Gathering}} Gathering}}'' (and even given a brother to fight, Ratava).
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* The tagline from the VideoGame/{{FallOut}} series ("War. War never changes.") is used in issues one and two of Unda Vosari: Chronicles.
* The opening speech in issue 26 of Unda Vosari: Chronicles is based off of a scene from ''Film/OceansEleven''.
* The opening speech in issue 26 of Unda Vosari: Chronicles is based off of a scene from ''Film/OceansEleven''.
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* The tagline from the VideoGame/{{FallOut}} ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'' series ("War. War never changes.") is used in issues one and two of Unda ''Unda Vosari: Chronicles.
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* Dash tells Vincent, "See you in another life, brother." Fans of LOST may recognize that.
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* Ezra, when chasing Coulton and Natalia, tells them "You’re all going to die down here." Anyone who's seen the first Film/ResidentEvil movie would recognize this as a line from the Red Queen.
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* Ezra, when chasing Coulton and Natalia, tells them "You’re all going to die down here." Anyone who's seen the first Film/ResidentEvil movie ''Film/ResidentEvil2002'' would recognize this as a line from the Red Queen.
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* Originally, Ezra was based off of Urza from {{Magic The Gathering}} (and even given a brother to fight, Ratava).
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* Bane is based off of HK-47 (albeit in a fantasy construct sort of way) from ''StarWars: KnightsOfTheOldRepublic''.
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* Bane is based off of HK-47 (albeit in a fantasy construct sort of way) from ''StarWars: KnightsOfTheOldRepublic''.''Franchise/StarWars: VideoGame/KnightsOfTheOldRepublic''.
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* The opening speech in issue 26 of Unda Vosari: Chronicles is based off of a scene from [[OceansEleven Ocean's 11]].
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* The opening speech in issue 26 of Unda Vosari: Chronicles is based off of a scene from [[OceansEleven Ocean's 11]].''Film/OceansEleven''.
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* Coulton was given the name in homage to {{Jonathan Coulton}}.
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* Coulton was given the name in homage to {{Jonathan Music/{{Jonathan Coulton}}.
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* Vincent uses the term "Savvy" much like Captain Jack Sparrow from ''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''.
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* Vincent uses the term "Savvy" much like Captain Jack Sparrow from PiratesOfTheCaribbean.
* Bane is based off of HK-47 (albeit in a fantasy construct sort of way) from StarWars: KnightsOfTheOldRepublic.
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* Vincent uses the term "Savvy" much like Captain Jack Sparrow from PiratesOfTheCaribbean.
''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''.
* Bane is based off of HK-47 (albeit in a fantasy construct sort of way) fromStarWars: KnightsOfTheOldRepublic.''StarWars: KnightsOfTheOldRepublic''.
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* Alucard is based off of the lead character from {{Castlevania}}: [[CastlevaniaSymphonyOfTheNight Symphony of the Night]].
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* Alucard is based off of the lead character from {{Castlevania}}: [[CastlevaniaSymphonyOfTheNight Symphony of the Night]].''VideoGame/CastlevaniaSymphonyOfTheNight''.
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* Both Tir Na Eternity and Tir Na Incorrigible are based (in shape) off of a series of servers run by roleplaying groups in {{Second Life}}.
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** The Sands (and some of the occupants) are based off of or named after characters that once played in the Sands of Persia simulation in Second Life.
*** [[IThoughtItMeant Not to be confused with]] the PrinceOfPersia game.''Second Life''.
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* Ezra, when chasing Coulton and Natalia, tells them "You’re all going to die down here." Anyone who's seen the first ResidentEvil movie would recognize this as a line from the Red Queen.
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* Ezra, when chasing Coulton and Natalia, tells them "You’re all going to die down here." Anyone who's seen the first ResidentEvil Film/ResidentEvil movie would recognize this as a line from the Red Queen.
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** Ratava is simply "{{Avatar}}" spelled backwards.
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* The ''entire'' plot involving the Eternity Gauntlets and Eternity Gems is an homage to both TabletopGame/{{Mage The Ascension}} and TheInfinityGauntlet storyline Marvel did.
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* The ''entire'' plot involving the Eternity Gauntlets and Eternity Gems is an homage to both TabletopGame/{{Mage The Ascension}} and TheInfinityGauntlet ComicBook/TheInfinityGauntlet storyline Marvel did.
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* {{Leeroy Jenkins}} (only mentioned as "Leroy" in the novel) was possibly a former crewmate.
* Vincent uses the term "Savvy" much like Captain Jack Sparrow from {{Pirates of the Caribbean}}.
* Bane is based off of HK-47 (albeit in a fantasy construct sort of way) from {{Star Wars}}:{{Knights of the Old Republic}}.
* Vincent uses the term "Savvy" much like Captain Jack Sparrow from {{Pirates of the Caribbean}}.
* Bane is based off of HK-47 (albeit in a fantasy construct sort of way) from {{Star Wars}}:{{Knights of the Old Republic}}.
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* {{Leeroy Jenkins}} LeeroyJenkins (only mentioned as "Leroy" in the novel) was possibly a former crewmate.
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PiratesOfTheCaribbean.
* Bane is based off of HK-47 (albeit in a fantasy construct sort of way) from{{Star Wars}}:{{Knights of the Old Republic}}.
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*** The supporting cast, being (for the most part) completely [[InnocentBystanders useless]], [[IdiotBall stupid]] or [[AxCrazy insane]], might be one giant {{Take That}} from the author.
* The ''entire'' plot involving the Eternity Gauntlets and Eternity Gems is an homage to both TabletopGame/{{Mage The Ascension}} and {{The Infinity Gauntlet}} storyline Marvel did.
*** The supporting cast, being (for the most part) completely [[InnocentBystanders useless]], [[IdiotBall stupid]] or [[AxCrazy insane]], might be one giant {{Take That}} from the author.
* The ''entire'' plot involving the Eternity Gauntlets and Eternity Gems is an homage to both TabletopGame/{{Mage The Ascension}} and {{The Infinity Gauntlet}} storyline Marvel did.
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*** [[IThoughtItMeant Not to be confused with]] the {{Prince of Persia}} PrinceOfPersia game.
*** The supporting cast, being (for the most part) completely [[InnocentBystanders useless]], [[IdiotBall stupid]] or [[AxCrazy insane]], might be one giant{{Take That}} TakeThat from the author.
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* The ''entire'' plot involving the Eternity Gauntlets and Eternity Gems is an homage to both TabletopGame/{{Mage The Ascension}} and{{The Infinity Gauntlet}} TheInfinityGauntlet storyline Marvel did.
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* The tagline from the {{FallOut}} series ("War. War never changes.") is used in issues one and two of Unda Vosari: Chronicles.
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* The tagline from the {{FallOut}} VideoGame/{{FallOut}} series ("War. War never changes.") is used in issues one and two of Unda Vosari: Chronicles.
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* The opening speech in issue 26 of Unda Vosari: Chronicles is based off of a scene from [[{{ptitle2tyh4gpfa5lj}} Ocean's 11]].
** "I did. It felt a little rushed. Was that good?"
* The opening speech in issue 26 of Unda Vosari: Chronicles is based off of a scene from [[{{ptitle2tyh4gpfa5lj}} Ocean's 11]].
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* Coulton was given the name in homage to {{Jonathan Coulton}}
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* The tagline from the {{FallOut}} series ("War. War never changes.") is used in issues one and two of Unda Vosari: Chronicles.
* The tagline from the {{FallOut}} series ("War. War never changes.") is used in issues one and two of Unda Vosari: Chronicles.
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*** [[IThoughtItMeant Not to be confused with]] the {{Prince of Persia}} game.
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** The Sands (and some of the occupants) are based off of or named after characters that once played in the [[IThoughtItMeant Sands of Persia Persia]] simulation in Second Life.