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* When the Straw Hats raid a secret base in the desert responsible for developing five children into the Royal Flush Gang, they travel there in an oversized blue and red semi-truck. When they arrive, said semi transforms into a giant robot. That's right: Franky took inspiration from the Franchise/{{Transformers}} series and built Super Optimus Prime. this giant robot is programmed to spout out plenty of cool one liners (lifted straight from the movies) while its preforming its assigned task, and works on voice recognition, so it might seem like its sentient at first glance. nevertheless, WordOfGod says that the robot becoming sentient isn't in the plans.
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* When the Straw Hats raid a secret base in the desert responsible for developing five children into the Royal Flush Gang, they travel there in an oversized blue and red semi-truck. When they arrive, said semi transforms into a giant robot. That's right: Franky took inspiration from the Franchise/{{Transformers}} series and built Super Optimus Prime. this giant robot is programmed to spout out plenty of cool one liners (lifted straight from the movies) while its preforming performing its assigned task, and works on voice recognition, so it might seem only seems like its it's sentient at first glance. nevertheless, Nevertheless, WordOfGod says that the robot becoming sentient isn't in the plans.
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* The prototype Royal Flush Gang in Chapter 18 is four different expies:
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* The prototype Royal Flush Gang in Chapter 18 is consist of four different expies:
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* When the Straw Hats raid a secret base in the desert responsible for developing five children into the Royal Flush Gang, they travel there in an oversized blue and red semi-truck. When they arrive, said semi transforms into a giant robot. That's right: Franky took inspiration from the Franchise/{{Transformers}} series and built Super Optimus Prime it's also programmed to spout out plenty of cool one liners while its preforming its assigned task, and works on voice recognition, so it might seem like its sentient. nevertheless, WordOfGod says that the robot becoming sentient isn't in the plans.
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* When the Straw Hats raid a secret base in the desert responsible for developing five children into the Royal Flush Gang, they travel there in an oversized blue and red semi-truck. When they arrive, said semi transforms into a giant robot. That's right: Franky took inspiration from the Franchise/{{Transformers}} series and built Super Optimus Prime it's also Prime. this giant robot is programmed to spout out plenty of cool one liners (lifted straight from the movies) while its preforming its assigned task, and works on voice recognition, so it might seem like its sentient.sentient at first glance. nevertheless, WordOfGod says that the robot becoming sentient isn't in the plans.
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* When the Straw Hats raid a secret base in the desert responsible for developing five children into the Royal Flush Gang, they travel there in an oversized blue and red semi-truck. When they arrive, said semi transforms into a giant robot. That's right: Franky took inspiration from the Franchise/{{Transformers}} series and built Super Optimus Prime...though WordOfGod says that the robot becoming sentient isn't in the plans.
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* When the Straw Hats raid a secret base in the desert responsible for developing five children into the Royal Flush Gang, they travel there in an oversized blue and red semi-truck. When they arrive, said semi transforms into a giant robot. That's right: Franky took inspiration from the Franchise/{{Transformers}} series and built Super Optimus Prime...though Prime it's also programmed to spout out plenty of cool one liners while its preforming its assigned task, and works on voice recognition, so it might seem like its sentient. nevertheless, WordOfGod says that the robot becoming sentient isn't in the plans.
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* In the omake "Luffy's Day Out," the author (rose7anne101, Black Victor's beta reader) references ten food challenges from real-life restaurants. Of those...
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* In the omake "Luffy's Day Out," the author (rose7anne101, Black Victor's beta reader) references ten food challenges from real-life restaurants. Of those...restaurants:
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** The "Almighty Burger" is the "8th Wonder" from the Clinton Station Diner in Clinton, NJ. The real version does ''not'' have thirty sides as part of the challenge; the burger is designed for nine people on its own.
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** The "Pound the Pounder" is the "Carnivore Challenge" from Big Pie in the Sky Pizzeria in Kennesaw, GA. The real version has five meats as toppings.
*** The chosen name is likely a reference to another pizzeria, Pizza By the Pound in Paducah, KY, and its own eating challenge: the Pounder, an 8-pound, 16-inch pizza with an extra thick crust and eight toppings.
*** The chosen name is likely a reference to another pizzeria, Pizza By the Pound in Paducah, KY, and its own eating challenge: the Pounder, an 8-pound, 16-inch pizza with an extra thick crust and eight toppings.
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* In the omake "Luffy's Day Out," the author references ten food challenges from real-life restaurants. Of those...
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* In the omake "Luffy's Day Out," the author references ten food challenges from real-life restaurants. Of those...
** The "Circle of Doom" is the "Drunken Fireman" from Giuseppe's Pizzeria in Covington, KY (now defunct).
** The "Big T Toast" is the "Louisville Lip" from 502 Café in Louisville, KY (now a food truck).
** The "Hop on Whopping Burger" is the "Quadruple Bypass Burger" from Heart Attack Grill in Las Vegas, NV. And that's ''half'' of the maximum size.
** The "BS Combo" is the "One Tall Order" from Windy City Beefs-N-Dogs in Las Vegas, NV. Real-life version is 7.2 pounds instead of 9.
** The "Combo of Big Fat" is the "Big Fat Ugly Sandwich" from Fat Sandwich Company in Champaign, IL.
** The "Steak Meteor" is the 72 oz. steak challenge from The Big Texan Steak Ranch & Brewery in Amarillo, TX.
** The "Prisoner's Pardon" (actual name) is from Jailhouse Pizza in Brandenburg, KY.
** The "United Meat" is "The Bomb" from Paddy Long's Beer & Bacon Pub in Chicago, IL.
** The "Circle of Doom" is the "Drunken Fireman" from Giuseppe's Pizzeria in Covington, KY (now defunct).
** The "Big T Toast" is the "Louisville Lip" from 502 Café in Louisville, KY (now a food truck).
** The "Hop on Whopping Burger" is the "Quadruple Bypass Burger" from Heart Attack Grill in Las Vegas, NV. And that's ''half'' of the maximum size.
** The "BS Combo" is the "One Tall Order" from Windy City Beefs-N-Dogs in Las Vegas, NV. Real-life version is 7.2 pounds instead of 9.
** The "Combo of Big Fat" is the "Big Fat Ugly Sandwich" from Fat Sandwich Company in Champaign, IL.
** The "Steak Meteor" is the 72 oz. steak challenge from The Big Texan Steak Ranch & Brewery in Amarillo, TX.
** The "Prisoner's Pardon" (actual name) is from Jailhouse Pizza in Brandenburg, KY.
** The "United Meat" is "The Bomb" from Paddy Long's Beer & Bacon Pub in Chicago, IL.
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* When the Straw Hats raid a secret base in the desert responsible for developing five children into the Royal Flush Gang, they travel there in an oversized blue and red semi-truck. When they arrive, said semi transforms into a giant robot. That's right: Franky took inspiration from the Franchise/{{Transformers}} series and built Super Optimus Prime...though WordOfGod says that the robot becoming sentient isn't in the plans.
* The prototype Royal Flush Gang in Chapter 18 is four different expies:
** 10: [[Franchise/Ben10 Ben Tennyson]].
** Jack: [[Series/StargateSG1 Daniel Jackson]].
** Queen: ComicBook/EmmaFrost.
** King: [[Literature/HarryPotter Kingsley Shacklebolt]].
* The prototype Royal Flush Gang in Chapter 18 is four different expies:
** 10: [[Franchise/Ben10 Ben Tennyson]].
** Jack: [[Series/StargateSG1 Daniel Jackson]].
** Queen: ComicBook/EmmaFrost.
** King: [[Literature/HarryPotter Kingsley Shacklebolt]].
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* Superman's[[note]]actually Captain Marvel[[/note]] armor resembles [[Film/TheDayTheEarthStoodStill1951 Gort]].
* Aquaman's armor resembles the Film/CreatureFromTheBlackLagoon.
* Aquaman's armor resembles the Film/CreatureFromTheBlackLagoon.
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* To ''ComicBook/KingdomCome'', which also features Sivana`s mind control bugs.
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* To ''ComicBook/CrisisOnInfiniteEarths'' when ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} carries Poison Ivy in her arms after defeating her.
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* To ''ComicBook/KingdomCome'', which also features Sivana`s mind control bugs.
* These both are shout outs to Franchise/StarTrek.
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* To ''ComicBook/KingdomCome'', which also features Sivana`s mind control bugs.
* These both are shout outs to Franchise/StarTrek.
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