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** mentions Venus Fire Traps from SuperMarioBrothers 3
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** mentions Venus Fire Traps from SuperMarioBrothers 3''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros3''
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** "[[ChroniclesOfTheKencyrath That which can be destroyed by the Rowling should be.]]"
** We learn that [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mindflayers]] were exterminated by HaroldShea. This matches with the original making allusions with historical wizards.
** We learn that [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mindflayers]] were exterminated by HaroldShea. This matches with the original making allusions with historical wizards.
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** "[[ChroniclesOfTheKencyrath "[[Literature/ChroniclesOfTheKencyrath That which can be destroyed by the Rowling should be.]]"
** We learn that [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mindflayers]] were exterminated byHaroldShea.Literature/HaroldShea. This matches with the original making allusions with historical wizards.
** We learn that [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons mindflayers]] were exterminated by
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** Lunch in the Great Hall of Hogwarts on April 16, 1992 consists of [[BabylonFive breen and Roopo balls]], the latter of which were also served at Mary's Place in chapter 26. ''Both'' items, in Babylon 5, were noted as being indistinguishable from Swedish meatballs, of which every culture with whose cuisine G'Kar was familiar had a version.
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** Lunch in the Great Hall of Hogwarts on April 16, 1992 consists of [[BabylonFive [[Series/BabylonFive breen and Roopo balls]], the latter of which were also served at Mary's Place in chapter 26. ''Both'' items, in Babylon 5, were noted as being indistinguishable from Swedish meatballs, of which every culture with whose cuisine G'Kar was familiar had a version.
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** ''Occlumency: The Hidden Arte'' is not a text that appears in the HP canon, but it was featured in [[HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast this fanfic]] before it turned up here.
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** ''Occlumency: The Hidden Arte'' is not a text that appears in the HP canon, but it was featured in [[HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast [[Fanfic/HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast this fanfic]] before it turned up here.
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** [=McGonagall=] discusses the recent disastrous employments of two Defense professors, [[AnitaBlake Professor Blake]] (who was caught with THREE fifteen-year-olds in a broom closet) and [[Series/BuffyTheVampireSlayer Professor Summers]] (who failed to teach material correct in the ''Harry Potter'' universe).
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** [=McGonagall=] discusses the recent disastrous employments of two Defense professors, [[AnitaBlake [[Literature/AnitaBlake Professor Blake]] (who was caught with THREE fifteen-year-olds in a broom closet) and [[Series/BuffyTheVampireSlayer Professor Summers]] (who failed to teach material correct in the ''Harry Potter'' universe).
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** There is also a mention of the possibility of [[EternalSunshineOfTheSpotlessMind losing every single life memory involving the colour blue]]…
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** There is also a mention of the possibility of [[EternalSunshineOfTheSpotlessMind [[Film/EternalSunshineOfTheSpotlessMind losing every single life memory involving the colour blue]]…
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** Harry quotes WinstonChurchill.
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** Harry quotes WinstonChurchill.UsefulNotes/WinstonChurchill.
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** In reference to [[http://www.obscurusbooks.org/html/Hayseed/Thursdays/index.html this fanfic]], Harry says "And if someone bumps into me the Time-Turner will not break and will not trap the whole castle of Hogwarts in an endlessly repeating loop of Thursdays."
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** In reference to [[http://www.obscurusbooks.org/html/Hayseed/Thursdays/index.html [[https://hayseed42.wordpress.com/2014/06/27/getting-the-hang-of-thursdays-0122/ this fanfic]], Harry says "And if someone bumps into me the Time-Turner will not break and will not trap the whole castle of Hogwarts in an endlessly repeating loop of Thursdays."
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* Chapter 108: The Defense Professor is [[AVeryPotterMusical a particularly good finder]].
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* Chapter 108: The Defense Professor is [[AVeryPotterMusical [[Theatre/AVeryPotterMusical a particularly good finder]].
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** Quotes the first two lines of TomLehrer's song "Be Prepared," a callback to Harry quoting the song to explain why he needs to be CrazyPrepared to [=McGonagall=] in Chapter 6 (see also SecondVerseCurse below).
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** Quotes the first two lines of TomLehrer's Music/TomLehrer's song "Be Prepared," a callback to Harry quoting the song to explain why he needs to be CrazyPrepared to [=McGonagall=] in Chapter 6 (see also SecondVerseCurse below).
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** Harry's phrasing when talking to Hermione about [[spoiler:whether or not they'll ultimately fall in love]] evokes [[Creator/BazLuhrmann]]'s song "[[http://www.metrolyrics.com/everybodys-free-to-wear-sunscreen-lyrics-baz-luhrmann.html Everybody's Free (To Wear Sunscreen)]]," and he manages to mention that he isn't wearing sunscreen himself.
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** Harry's phrasing when talking to Hermione about [[spoiler:whether or not they'll ultimately fall in love]] evokes [[Creator/BazLuhrmann]]'s Creator/BazLuhrmann's song "[[http://www.metrolyrics.com/everybodys-free-to-wear-sunscreen-lyrics-baz-luhrmann.html Everybody's Free (To Wear Sunscreen)]]," and he manages to mention that he isn't wearing sunscreen himself.
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** Harry's phrasing when talking to Hermione about [[spoiler:whether or not they'll ultimately fall in love]] evokes [[Creator/BazLuhrman]]'s song "[[http://www.metrolyrics.com/everybodys-free-to-wear-sunscreen-lyrics-baz-luhrmann.html Everybody's Free (To Wear Sunscreen)]]," and he manages to mention that he isn't wearing sunscreen himself.
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** Harry's phrasing when talking to Hermione about [[spoiler:whether or not they'll ultimately fall in love]] evokes [[Creator/BazLuhrman]]'s [[Creator/BazLuhrmann]]'s song "[[http://www.metrolyrics.com/everybodys-free-to-wear-sunscreen-lyrics-baz-luhrmann.html Everybody's Free (To Wear Sunscreen)]]," and he manages to mention that he isn't wearing sunscreen himself.
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** Harry's phrasing when talking to Hermione about [[spoiler:whether or not they'll ultimately fall in love]] evokes Wear Sunscreen, and he manages to mention that he isn't wearing sunscreen himself.
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** Harry's phrasing when talking to Hermione about [[spoiler:whether or not they'll ultimately fall in love]] evokes [[Creator/BazLuhrman]]'s song "[[http://www.metrolyrics.com/everybodys-free-to-wear-sunscreen-lyrics-baz-luhrmann.html Everybody's Free (To Wear Sunscreen, Sunscreen)]]," and he manages to mention that he isn't wearing sunscreen himself.
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** Alastor mentions the name of Bellatrix Black's mother as Walpurga, suspiciously similar to the witch Walpurgisnacht from [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Madoka Magicka]]. As Walpurgisnacht is the name of the annual meeting of witches in german folklore it might also be in regards to that.
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** Alastor mentions the name of Bellatrix Sirius Black's mother as Walpurga, suspiciously similar to the witch Walpurgisnacht from [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Madoka Magicka]]. As Walpurgisnacht is the name of the annual meeting of witches in german folklore it might also be in regards to that.that.
*** Oddly enough, her canonical name was Walburga, according to Rowling's [[https://www.hp-lexicon.org/source/other-canon/bft/ Black Family Tree]], but her husband's name was Orion, not Pollux, as HPMOR has it. It's possible that Yudkowsky didn't look at the BFT, and got the name indirectly (possibly including the misspelling) from some other fan-fic written by someone who had, which only mentioned her by name and not Orion.
*** Oddly enough, her canonical name was Walburga, according to Rowling's [[https://www.hp-lexicon.org/source/other-canon/bft/ Black Family Tree]], but her husband's name was Orion, not Pollux, as HPMOR has it. It's possible that Yudkowsky didn't look at the BFT, and got the name indirectly (possibly including the misspelling) from some other fan-fic written by someone who had, which only mentioned her by name and not Orion.
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** Professor Quirrell refers to "ritual to summon Death itself" that uses two of the components of the Seething Death wizardry from Literature/TheLegendsOfEthshar, and also shares another unfortunate characteristic with that uncontrollable weapon of mass destruction:
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** Professor Quirrell refers to "ritual to summon Death itself" a ritual that uses two of the components of the Seething Death wizardry from Literature/TheLegendsOfEthshar, and also shares another unfortunate characteristic with that uncontrollable weapon of mass destruction:
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** [[Literature/TheLegendsOfEthshar A "ritual to summon Death itself"]]
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** [[Literature/TheLegendsOfEthshar A Professor Quirrell refers to "ritual to summon Death itself"]]itself" that uses two of the components of the Seething Death wizardry from Literature/TheLegendsOfEthshar, and also shares another unfortunate characteristic with that uncontrollable weapon of mass destruction:
--->"Even so, the most terrible ritual known to me demands only a rope which has hanged a man and a sword which has slain a woman; and that for a ritual which promised to summon Death itself - though what is truly meant by that I do not know and do not care to discover, since it was also said that the counterspell to dismiss Death had been lost."
--->"Even so, the most terrible ritual known to me demands only a rope which has hanged a man and a sword which has slain a woman; and that for a ritual which promised to summon Death itself - though what is truly meant by that I do not know and do not care to discover, since it was also said that the counterspell to dismiss Death had been lost."
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** Mary's Room, where Harry and Professor Quirrell have been having lunch, is in [[Literature/CallahansCrosstimeSaloon Mary's Place, owned by "Jake,"]] which suggests that the "huge genial Irishman" whose entrance allows Harry to slip out the door unnoticed is probably Mike Callahan. Also an [[http://www.reddit.com/r/HPMOR/comments/19w4am/today_i_discovered_that_marys_room_is_an_obscure/c8s9em7 unintentional]] reference to the thought experiment [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marys_room "Mary's room"]].
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** Mary's Room, where Harry and Professor Quirrell have been having lunch, is in [[Literature/CallahansCrosstimeSaloon Mary's Place, owned by "Jake,"]] which suggests that the "huge genial Irishman" whose entrance allows Harry to slip out the door unnoticed is probably Mike Callahan. Also an [[http://www.reddit.com/r/HPMOR/comments/19w4am/today_i_discovered_that_marys_room_is_an_obscure/c8s9em7 unintentional]] reference to the thought experiment [[http://en."[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marys_room "Mary's room"]].Mary's room]]."
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** The cube saying "blorple, blorple, blorple" in Dumbledore's office is a reference to the Infocom text-adventure game "Spellbreaker".
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** Harry makes an analogy involving an invisible dragon that is taken almost verbatim from "[[Creator/CarlSagan The Demon-Haunted World]]".
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** Dumbledore taps his fingers [[PocketDimension through]] a black plate inscribed with the word "Leliel", a reference to the 12th Angel from ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion''.
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** Dumbledore taps his fingers [[PocketDimension through]] a black plate inscribed with the word "Leliel", "Leliel," a reference to the 12th Angel from ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion''.
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** Quotes the first two lines of TomLehrer's song "Be Prepared", Prepared," a callback to Harry quoting the song to explain why he needs to be CrazyPrepared to [=McGonagall=] in Chapter 6 (see also SecondVerseCurse below).
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** Harry's password includes the Marx brothers' "[[ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish Swordfish]]", "[[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings friend]]" from the ''Lord of the Rings'', and "[[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings melon]]", the Elvish word for "friend".
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** Harry's password includes the Marx brothers' "[[ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish Swordfish]]", Swordfish]]," "[[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings friend]]" from the ''Lord of the Rings'', and "[[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings melon]]", melon]]," the Elvish word for "friend"."friend."
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** Former students named [[Literature/VorkosiganSaga Miles Naismith]] and [[Literature/EnchantedForestChronicles Cimorene Linderwall]] are mentioned, as is an evil "Professor [[Series/BarneyAndFriends Barney]]".[[note]]Yudkowsky confirms that it's a reference to the [[DarkFic demonic Jihad to Destroy Barney]] version.[[/note]]
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** Former students named [[Literature/VorkosiganSaga Miles Naismith]] and [[Literature/EnchantedForestChronicles Cimorene Linderwall]] are mentioned, as is an evil "Professor [[Series/BarneyAndFriends Barney]]".Barney]]." [[note]]Yudkowsky confirms that it's a reference to the [[DarkFic demonic Jihad to Destroy Barney]] version.[[/note]]
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--> '''Harry''': "Sir Gareth, owner of a transportation company that won the 19th-century [[invoked]][[ShipToShipCombat shipping wars]]... monopoly on [[OT3 oh-tee-threes]]... I see".
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--> '''Harry''': "Sir Gareth, owner of a transportation company that won the 19th-century [[invoked]][[ShipToShipCombat shipping wars]]... monopoly on [[OT3 oh-tee-threes]]... I see".see."
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** [[WesternAnimation/SouthPark Tenorman's family chili]] and [[Film/SoylentGreen green lentil soup]] (served with [[AGlassOfChianti a glass of]] ''[[TheSilenceOfTheLambs Chianti]]'', natch).
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** [[WesternAnimation/SouthPark [[Recap/SouthParkS5E4ScottTenormanMustDie Tenorman's family chili]] and [[Film/SoylentGreen green lentil soup]] (served with [[AGlassOfChianti a glass of]] ''[[TheSilenceOfTheLambs Chianti]]'', natch).
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-> So my version of the thought, Draco, is that when we go out into the stars, we might find other people there. And if so, they certainly won't look like we do. There might be things out there that are grown from crystal, or big pulsating blobs...
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** Dumbledore mentions to magical prodigy from Wizarding history named [[Literature/TheBlackCompany Dorotea Senjak]].
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** ''Literature/TheBlackCompany''.
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** [[Film/WillyWonkaAndTheChocolateFactory Mr. Avery]] -- maybe; Avery actually is the name of a Death Eater in canon.
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** [[Film/WillyWonkaAndTheChocolateFactory Mr. Avery]] -- maybe; Avery actually is the name of a Death Eater in canon.canon (which could be a shout-out by J. K. Rowling, or not -- it's a reasonably common English surname).
** The kinds of aliens Harry suggests to Draco that humanity might eventually encounter resemble two species that humans run into in EY's novella ThreeWorldsCollide.
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** The crystal creatures and blobs are the other two species that humans run into in EY's novella ThreeWorldsCollide.
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** "[[Literature/Quarantine I just recite to myself, over and over, until I can choose sleep: It all adds up to J. K. Rowling.]]"
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** [[RogerZelazny "Mabra, brahoring, mabra"]]
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** [[ReturnOfTheJedi "a furry creature like a small child, holding a peculiar flat spear"]]. (The small furry creature may be a [[Literature/LittleFuzzy Fuzzy]] and not an [[ReturnOfTheJedi Ewok]]; the "peculiar flat spear" is more distinctive of Fuzzies than Ewoks.)
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** Dumbledore apparently owns a [[Literature/{{Lensman}} Lens of Civilization]], the HolyGrail (specifically, the version of it featured in ''Film/IndianaJonesAndTheLastCrusade''), and ''Film/TheMalteseFalcon''.
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** Dumbledore apparently owns a [[Literature/{{Lensman}} Lens of Civilization]], the HolyGrail (specifically, the version of it featured in ''Film/IndianaJonesAndTheLastCrusade''), and ''Film/TheMalteseFalcon''.the [[Film/TheMalteseFalcon Maltese Falcon]].
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** Alastor mentions the name of Bellatrix Black's mother as Walpurga, suspiciously similar to the witch Walpurgisnacht from [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Madoka Magicka]], though that may be canon.
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