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** Mr Zoat explains [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6420818 how Shade, the Changing Man and Shivering Jemmy can be on Earth]] when there's already a Lord of Chaos there.
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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: When critiquing Nabu's showings against Klarion, Paul wants Nabu to feel insulted, but does so [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6418710 in a way that sounds like he isn't intentionally doing so]].
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* StealthInsult: Played with. When critiquing Nabu's showings against Klarion, Paul wants Nabu to feel insulted, but does so [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6418710 in a way that sounds like he isn't intentionally doing so]].
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** Nabu hands over minor criminal magic users [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6418710 after impairing their ability to use magic]].
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* CantTakeCriticism: Nabu's response to OL critiquing his less than stellar record against Klarion is to teleport away and sulk like a child.
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** Paul thinks the League needs bigger and better weapons to properly defend the Earth against alien invasion and that it [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6412352 shouldn't be restricted by previous treaties preventing such weapons]].
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** Paul backed off after Nabu said he won't be taking the golem body because [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6407139 he knows he will have other opportunities to undermine Nabu]].
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*** Mr Zoat later explains that Red Lanterns are driven to [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6406402 unmake their targets, with no regard of anyone else's opinion]].
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** The red light is powered by an emotion that doesn't have an exact word in English. There is a word for it in Qwardian, which translates as something like [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6404800 'the certain need to unmake']].
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* HopeSpot: Paul broaches the subject of a golem body to Nabu with the hope of this allowing Zatara his freedom again. Nabu refuses the offer without even giving his reasoning for doing so.
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** Part of why the Renegade didn't leave Earth after quitting the Team is to [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6400785 show Alan]] that he didn't ''really'' become a supervillain.
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** Part of why the Renegade didn't leave Earth after quitting the Team is to [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6400785 show Alan]] that he didn't ''really'' become a supervillain. Also, the Renegade won't allow the Controllers to control his OLC.
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** Paul suspects that Atlanteans [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6400290 can't be Dannered or Garricked]].
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** Paul briefly [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6390608 references]] Literature/CarpeJugulum when talking to Guy about Lia Briggs.
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** Paul briefly [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6390608 references]] Literature/CarpeJugulum ''Literature/CarpeJugulum'' when talking to Guy about Lia Briggs.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: While briefing the Justice League on how they can better defend Earth from alien threats, he brings up the Thanagarian Empire as one possible threat. This gets Hawkwoman to briefly deny this can happen. This is only the beginning of what would become a one-sided grudge on Hawkwoman's part.
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** Queen Clea's choices, and the reason Venturia is suspected of working with Ocean Master, [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6385074 are explained]].
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** The Renegade won't just Awaken Queen Clea because [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6384160 it would make his involvement obvious]].
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** Paul is evaluating the members of the Justice League because Batman [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6378374 wants the news to come from someone other than himself]], as well as a sort of interview for OL.
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** The fact that Paul is evaluating members of the Justice League was mentioned by Guy in ''Date Night''.
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*** When allowed inside her house, Robin asks if she'll say "[[Film/BramStokersDracula Welcome to my house!]]".
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--> ---> "Grayven, are you doing that thing where you [[TheGadfly annoy people for fun]] again?"again?"
** Lia Briggs knows Paul is referencing something stupid by calling her '[[Literature/{{Carmilla}} Miss]] [[SdrawkcabName Allimrac]]' but is too hungry at the moment to care.
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* ForWantOfANail: Due to the Renegade being more discreet when getting data, scry wards [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-6366888 aren't as common in the Renegade timeline]] as they are in the Paragon timeline.
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* ThoughtTheyKnewAlready: The Brain assumed that the other members of the Light already knew his real name and simply used his nom de guerre out of professional courtesy.
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