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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: An indirect one. When Barley lets his brothers back into his life, Ravenpaw starts to believe that he favors them over him since they're blood and he's not. And it doesn't help matters when the brothers boss Ravenpaw around. But then Ravenpaw overhears Barley give his brothers an earful for essentially treating his best friend like a slave. In response to his brothers' arguement, Barley declares that Ravenpaw is not only [[FamilyOfChoice family to him]], but also more loyal than the two brothers could ever be in a thousand lifetimes. This raises up Ravenpaws morale about what his friend truly thinks of him.
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* NoHonorAmongThieves: At the heart of it, Barley can't help but pity that this is the worst of his brothers' vices. Thus far, Hoot and Jumper have thrown every ally they've ever had under the bus, especially when it was convenient. Be it Barley, Violet, their followers or [=BloodClan=], it always ends with them burning bridges somehow. Barley even wonders how long it will take before Hoot and Jumper turn on each other.
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* NoHonorAmongThieves: At the heart of it, Barley can't help but pity that this is the worst of his brothers' vices. Thus far, Hoot and Jumper have thrown every ally they've ever had under the bus, especially when it was convenient. Be it Barley, Violet, their followers Neo [=BloodClan=] or Willie's brand of Neo [=BloodClan=], it always ends with them burning bridges somehow. Barley even wonders how long it will take before Hoot and Jumper turn on each other.
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* NoHonorAmongThieves: At the heart of it, Barley can't help but pity that this is the worst of his brothers' vices. Thus far, Hoot and Jumper have thrown every ally they've ever had under the bus, especially when it was convenient. Be it Barley, Violet, their followers or [=BloodClan=], it always ends with them burning bridges somehow. Barley even wonders how long it will take before Hoot and Jumper turn on each other.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Barley delivers one to his brothers after he overhears them ordering around Ravenpaw like a slave. He calls them out on their behavior. And when they try to pretend they didn't care to live on the farm anyway, Barley tells them that he pities them, since they have not a loyal bone in their bodies. As far as he's concerned, it's only a matter of time before their disloyalty extends to ''each other''.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Barley delivers one to his brothers after he overhears them ordering around Ravenpaw like a slave. He calls them out on their behavior.behavior towards Ravenpaw and himself and tells them to leave. And when they try to pretend they didn't care to live on the farm anyway, Barley tells them that he pities them, since they have not a loyal bone in their bodies. As far as he's concerned, it's only a matter of time before their disloyalty extends to ''each other''.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Barley delivers one to his brothers after he overhears them ordering around Ravenpaw like a slave. He calls them out on their behavior. And when they try to pretend they didn't care to live on the farm anyway, Barley tells them that he pities them, since they have not a loyal bone in their bodies.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Barley delivers one to his brothers after he overhears them ordering around Ravenpaw like a slave. He calls them out on their behavior. And when they try to pretend they didn't care to live on the farm anyway, Barley tells them that he pities them, since they have not a loyal bone in their bodies. As far as he's concerned, it's only a matter of time before their disloyalty extends to ''each other''.
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* WingdingEyes: A dead mouse that the [=BloodClan=] kits are playing with has an X for an eye.
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* CirclingBirdies: Pounce gets a circle of stars when Graystripe smacks him upside the head.
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* {{Colorization}}: ''Ravenpaw's Path'' was originally drawn and released in black-and-white, in three different volumes. James Barry later colorized it and it was re-released as a single volume.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Barley commends that Ravenpaw is more loyal than Hoot and Jumper ever could be in a thousand lifetimes.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Barley commends comments that Ravenpaw is more loyal than Hoot and Jumper ever could be in a thousand lifetimes.
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* EarnYouHappyEnding: The book ends with Barley and Ravenpaw happily savoring how they have reclaimed the farm for themselves.
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* EarnYouHappyEnding: EarnYourHappyEnding: The book ends with Barley and Ravenpaw happily savoring how they have reclaimed the farm for themselves.
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* LazyBum: Barley's brothers are freeloaders that insist they need Ravenpaw to "show" them how to hunt and prepare sleeping areas.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Barley commends that Ravenpaw is more loyal than Hoot and Jumper ever could be in a thousand lifetimes.
* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Under the assumption that Barley's asleep, his brothers boss Ravenpaw around and have him go catch a mice for them. Not long after, he confronts them on their atrocious behavior towards his friend.
* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Under the assumption that Barley's asleep, his brothers boss Ravenpaw around and have him go catch a mice for them. Not long after, he confronts them on their atrocious behavior towards his friend.
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*EarnYouHappyEnding: The book ends with Barley and Ravenpaw happily savoring how they have reclaimed the farm for themselves.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Barley delivers one to his brothers after he overhears them ordering around Ravenpaw like a slave. He calls them out on their behavior. And when they try to pretend they didn't care to live on the farm anyway, Barley tells them that he pities them, since they have not a loyal bone in their bodies.
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* PutTheirHeadsTogether: Bramblepaw smashes together the heads of two [=BloodClan=] cats as Ravenpaw, Barley, and [=ThunderClan=] fight to re-take the barn.
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* LazyBum: Barley's brothers are freeloaders that insist they need Ravenpaw to "show" them how to hunt and prepare sleeping areas.
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* HeroicRematch: Ravenpaw faced off against [[BigBad Willie]] in ''Shattered Peace'' and got completely crushed. They fight again in ''The Heart of a Warrior'', and this time it is Ravenpaw who is victorious.
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* SeriesContinuityError:
** Deadfoot was gone by the time of ''Firestar's Quest'' since he's nowhere in the Allegiances and Mudclaw's the deputy. This takes place after that book, so he should not be appearing on patrol.
** Brambleclaw was made a warrior close to the start of ''Firestar's Quest''. This takes place after that book, but he's still an apprentice here.
** Deadfoot was gone by the time of ''Firestar's Quest'' since he's nowhere in the Allegiances and Mudclaw's the deputy. This takes place after that book, so he should not be appearing on patrol.
** Brambleclaw was made a warrior close to the start of ''Firestar's Quest''. This takes place after that book, but he's still an apprentice here.
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* EasilyForgiven: An unintentional example. During ''Shattered Peace'', Ravenpaw and Barley are chased off the farm they live on by the farmer, because he is tricked into thinking they killed his chickens. The farmer says that if he sees them again, he'll shoot them. However, when they come back and defeat the rogues who took over their home in ''The Heart of a Warrior'', the farmer doesn't care, despite still thinking they killed his chickens.
